As Ever Like the Sun & Moon a...

By readwithjeremy

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A troubled Pilgrim sets upon a road in search by sun and storm of paradise; a vain Pariah's banish'd from his... More

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By readwithjeremy

The wagon's rattling wheels cease their noise

as Spouse and Saunterer now come upon

the cave wherein the Pilgrim yesterday

did fall when she and he were arguing—

the final proper conversation had

betwixt the two before his taking ill.

From here they turn around and take the bend,

observing side of th'road for opening

in th'woods, which comes about so subtle that

they almost miss the gap between the trees                10

despite the lantern light she holds to them.

So here they stop, dismounting from the bench

to enter th'woods in search of th'alternate

approach into the cavern they've been told

exists along this path; and as was said,

through bush and scuffing stone they find the mouth—

a hole within the ground with nat'ral steps

that lead their way toward its darken'd depths.

So hypnotiz'd by what she sees, the Spouse—

upon a hand now brushing on her arm—                20

doth jump at Saunterer's attempt to grasp

attention. "Whoa, apologies from me

for startling thee. I only wish suggest

perhaps it best I stay behind to watch

the road to make for sure the horses there

be undisturb'd for this duration thou

mayst search the cave for th'herb the Doctor needs."


She nods to this and sits upon the first

of steps to swing her legs upon the next

whilst bids he her to carefully proceed,                30

for this terrain is treacherous for men

in trousers, let alone a lass in dress.

She heeds his words as deeper she descends

within the darkness, lantern's pooling light

an ever shrinking presence in this dark

which seems to swallow what her flame can throw.

But still she sees the ground beneath her feet,

so crack'd and rugged ankles threaten twist,

and also doth she know direction she's

suppos'd to travel by the roaring boom                40

of th'waterfall that echoes off the walls,

so when there's cooling mist upon her skin

and liquid crystal spout she sees ahead,

she knows she's found the spot her Pilgrim fell

and crouches o'er the rock so to caress

the place he lay whilst she set out for help

in total darkness, save the single light

above, from which he came to land herein.

But as she hath these thoughts upon this spot

she notices a glint which proves her wrong                50

in thinking that above's the only source

of light, for to the side at th'water's edge

there sprawls a bed of ferns that glow a faint

smaragdine hue that disappears upon

her lighting them with lantern, for it's weak.

She crouches to examine what she sees

and plucks a single fern out from the dirt.

A single tear within her eye now forms

at knowing what she holds will save the lives

of those in town, but not her dearest love,                60

who fell alone to sickness, absent her.


However, reverie is broken short

by whispers all around of anger'd sorts:

"She's pick'd the herb. A human must she be

to come upon this place and not be stopp'd

by barrier we set upon the mouths

to hold at bay the demons seeking out

the magic we've withheld to stunt their growth.

Come, fairies, for we can't let one escape

or else a greatest peril will befall                70

the land as pestilence will sweep across

and spill out from the mountains over Earth."


With this a swarm of fireflies attacks,

attempting to consume the fern in hand.

She drops the lantern, covering her face,

concealing th'herb within her blouse to keep

it safe from them. However, though this works

the lantern shatters, splashing flame across

the bed of ferns, and as th'inferno eats

the leaves and stems, the fireflies emit                80

a horrifying screech in unison

and by the dozen drop toward the ground

and water, bursting on collision with

the solid or the liquid that they touch

to coat the ground and dye the water red

and cry this melody of dying fay:

"Our home is ruin'd by this human lass,

and with its burning comes our time to pass;

we've watch'd these ferns since rising from the depths

when war betwixt our kinds was th'only truth               90

and devils scorch'd the land to take our fruit,

but O, how sick our Mother Earth's become,

ejecting us from Nether Realm to come

toward the surface on her coughing breath

where now we lack our former strength to keep

attackers out, yet demons still are weak

and made to wear the mortal flesh of man

in order to survive these surface lands,

yet still it's one of these who's brought our death,

so trick'd by them despite their crippled form,                 100

for humankind's naive to th'world's lore

which brought us here, with not the time t'address."


When all is done and fire fades away

to embers, Spouse begins to think she's deaf

until the water's roar returns to her

and next a scuffing coming from behind.

"What happen'd here?" the Saunterer now asks.

"I heard commotion, and it now doth seem

a flame hath burn'd the ground along this pool.

But didst thou find the herb we came t'retrieve?"                110


She turns toward his voice, but can not see,

which prompts her to inquire: "How did you

without a lantern navigate the cave?"

for at this point suspicions started growth.


"I ask'd thee first," he pointedly replies—

th'affection in his voice hath slipp'd away—

to which she nods without another word

to test if truly he can see through dark,

and which he clearly spots by what he does

upon this confirmation given out.                120


He lunges forth out from the darkness with

his fingers spread to grip around her throat.

He closes them and squeezes trachea

to close the flow of air toward her lungs

and shakes her to disorient her mind

so that her struggle's less effective now.

"I'll take the herb and carve out from thy form

the womb that holds my seed to raise myself,

and once my parents get as well their wants—

this is no trick—then I shall kill thy love,                130

who yet still lives, for th'illness that he hath

is not the kind that's made to kill a man,

but rather suck him dry like parasites,

which keep alive a host to benefit

themselves upon the sustenance therein.

And don't thou think there's anyone to see

and warn him of thy death, for I have kill'd

the witnesses who follow'd us tonight."


The Spouse is panicking and kicking out

for passage whereby she may find escape                140

from th'wrapping fingers crushing shut her throat,

and when she kicks his shin there intervenes

a twist of fate as on the water-slick'd

and bloody rock his poise gives way and slips

to twist his ankle, causing her to fall

to back and he to front on top of her

within the pool so icy-quiet cold,

which muffles th'roar of th'waterfall above

as well as howls as flesh of Saunterer

now peels from his bones; and with a burst                150

of bubbles tracing lines across her skin

and fill'd with smoke instead of viscera,

the Saunterer explodes before her eyes.

She surfaces, now thrashing for a breath

and takes a gulp of acrid sulphur's air

which chokes her almost same as hands and pool

to cough and vomit on the water's face,

yet still is air to breathe, so she survives.

She clambers out and reaches twixt her breasts

to see—by light that pours into the cave                160

from mouth above by moon—the herb is whole.

She places back the herb and looks toward

the darkness she travers'd t'arrive upon

this place, and with the knowledge she cannot

return without a light, begins to climb

beside the waterfall whilst almost blind

to purchase which she's forc'd to grope around

to find. But with resolve unwavering

for knowledge that her love is yet alive,

she climbs the wall, emerging to the night                 170

and jogs toward the wagon down the road.                171

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