broken shells (fixing some serious grammar errors)

Authors note

Just wanted to thank you all for almost 500 reads :) :) :) :):):):):):):):);););):):):):):):):) :):):):):):):):):):):)
I never thought that I would make it this far but I need ur help comment what u think I'm running out of steam on writing this :( I'm trying just hard to type all the words. So let me know what u think.