Emblems

By dustythoughts

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((Originally, Phoenix)) “Leave me alone!” Her form flickered in the dim light. The brothers shared a look. “... More

Chapter 1: Take the Bait
Chapter 2: Scarlet Dawn
Chapter 3: Safe Haven
Chapter 4: Special Friend
Chapter 5: Mukashi Mukashi
Chapter 6: A Whole New World
Chapter 7: Conjecture
Chapter 8: Awareness
Chapter 9: Falter
Chapter 10: Stop and Stare
Chapter 11: Reverberations
Chapter 12: Healing Fire
Chapter 13: Formality
Chapter 14: Walking on eggshells
Chapter 15: Two Ends of a Spectrum
Chapter 16: Traumatized
Chapter 17: Filter
Chapter 18: Teenage Angst
Chapter 19: How it Made you Feel
Chapter 20: No Difference
Chapter 21: Isolation
Chapter 22: Rigged
Chapter 23: Warped
Chapter 24: Incentive
Chapter 25: Normally, Normally
Chapter 26: Reversal
Chapter 27: Burden
Chapter 28: Change
Chapter 29: Weak
Chapter 30: Blind
Chapter 31: Rage
Chapter 32: Doubt
Chapter 33: Purpose
Chapter 34: Shake and Tremble
Chapter 35: Compromise
Chapter 36: Void
Chapter 37: Clarity
Chapter 38: Trust

.fin.

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By dustythoughts

So, uh, yeah, that's it, I guess.

I had a lot of fun writing this, and since it started out as a kind of brainchild between me and a friend I'm glad to see it completed (for the second time haha).

This was a rewrite of Phoenix, which you can find on my profile though I highly suggest you don't read it, and for those readers who have read the original and now this, please give me feedback! Constructive criticism, about characters, plotlines, concepts, themes discussed, pacing of events, writing style, anything really. Or if you really don't have anything to say, you can click on that little button that says "vote"...?

Haha, so this was Emblems and it's finished, but don't worry I'll still be writing (if I find the time, maybe in between classes). And my writing style is, like, always under construction and heavy development, so I might come back and edit a little, no promises. 

Again, feedback please, comment down below, vote if you have nothing to say, and thank you all so much for reading! Thanks for sticking with this and thanks for any constructive criticism in advance! :D

.fin.

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