Frozen Solitude

By Shell-Shell4

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Jackson Overland Pitchiner, popularly called Jack Frost, is the son of The Nightmare King. He was born on t... More

Prologue: The Nightmare Prince
VK Day
Tragedy of The Nightmare King
Twinetender
Say I Can Stay...Please
Jack Frost Is NOT Amused
Bibbity-Bobbity-Boo-Hoo!
Roommates with Royalty
Remedial Goodness 101
Tourney Trouble
Hey, Wind! Put Me Down!
Carlos, My BFF Once More!
Welcome To The Family Part 1
Welcome To The Family Part 2
Two Losses in One Night
I'M NEVER COMING BACK!
The North Mountain
A Castle Made of Ice
A Heart-to-Heart Over Cocoa
The Wait Is Over
Unexplainable Instinct
The Invasion In Auradon
The Truth Hurts
The Enchantress: Mother Nature
Arendelle Withdraws
My Winter Prince
I Will Be Ready
Corona Makes a Choice
Can't Afford To Lose
New Recruits
Mission Assignment
Son of the Enchantress
Cold Fury
Crossing the Line
Into The Unknown
Frozen Heart
What Do I Know About Love?
The Tables are Turned Twice
To Be A Royal
Allies Outside Auradon
Peace Is Over, Prepare For War
First Battle
One Must Become Two
A Wedding, a Coronation, and a Quest
A Message for Auradon
The Enchanted Forest
All is Found
The Dragon Chief Meets the Beast King
Where the North Wind meets the Sea
We are Northuldra
Tragic Truth
What was Stolen, will be Returned
It's NOT Your Fault
Crossing into Atohallan
Show Yourself
Going Too Far
Nothing Left to Lose
Nightlight
Soulmates
The Dark Fae Rise
Do You Hear the People Sing?
The Next Right Thing
List of Songs
Reborn
This Changes Everything
Standing Divided as One
The End Becomes the Beginning

No Good Deed

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By Shell-Shell4

(Jack's POV)

I wake up in a bed. I jolt in shock! 

"Elsa!" I scream! Then I remember...she died, saving me...

Where am I?

A familiar whinney sounds in the doorway. Onyx. I had returned to Nightmare Castle, my father's true home...

I slip out of my bed, stumbling. I brush off the fearling servants attempts to help me.

Nothing can help me now.


I wander blindly out of the castle. The winter wind swirling like my mood, unstable and grieved.

I pace out into the woods. The trees seem darker, not ominously; but in a gloomy, resigned way.


Tears stream softly down my cheeks. 

What do I have left to live for?

The fearlings and nightmares trail about me. Concern in their amber eyes.

Then I wondered at what to do. I knew the truth about the Isle. I knew what I had to do...but HOW, how can I find such strength when the cost is everything I love!?

Jack:

What good is this crying?

I don't even know what I'm doing.

I don't even know what I ought to try!

Elsa, where are you?

Already dead, or bleeding?

One more disaster I can add to my,

Generous supply?

[I failed Elsa. How can I tell Anna she's dead? What about Olaf? Elsa made him...if she died...did he die too? I should've saved us both! Elsa should not have sacrificed all for me!]


No good deed goes unpunished.

No act of charity goes unresented.

No good deed goes unpunished,

That's my new creed!

[Aurradon claimed they are good. All about good deeds, mercy, peace, unity! Well, their good deeds did this. Their 'good deed' to create the Isle led to so much loss! And like a fool. I tried to adjust to their ways. Tried to work with King Ben to find a "peaceful solution!" Well, lesson learned. Now they're gonna learn a hard lesson too!]


My road of good intentions, led where such roads always lead.

No good deed goes unpunished!

Mother

[My mommy. My father's one true love. She only wished to bring harmony and life into the world. She loved purely and fiercely. And they punished her for that! That will not go unpunished.]

Emily

[Emily the sister I was never allowed to know. Her life stolen by the magical barrier. The barrier Auradon erected! That will not go unpunished.]


Elsa, EELLSSSAAAA!

[I learned true love from her. My soulmate and wife. Elsa. My Snow Queen. Brave, selfless, noble, and loving. Chose to freeze to death to learn the truth...about Auradon! That will NOT go unpunished.]


One question haunts and hurts,

Too much, too much to mention:

Was I really seeking good,

Or just seeking attention?
[I ask the universe in general. Why did this keep happening to me. Finding people to care about, only to have them torn from you in the most painful way? The Nightmares and fearlings edge closer. They have a strange gleem in their eyes.]


Is that all good deeds are when looked at with an ice-cold eye?

If that's all good deeds are,

Maybe that's the reason why!

[Onyx reveals to me, something I never knew...I have the ability to use Nightmare sand or in my case Nightmare Ice, Black Ice. Embracing my darker side will give me an advantage over Auradon!]

No good deed goes unpunished,

All helpful urges should be circumvented!

No good deed goes unpunished!

Sure, I meant well, well, look at what well-meant did!

[What do I have left to lose? Who CARES if my father's fear powers are dangerous!? That's Auradon's problem!]

All right, enough, so be it, so be it, then

Let all Auradon be agreed:

I'm wicked through and through! Since I can not succeed,

[I let my nightmare powers link with my ice powers. I inhale the bitter cold I now generate.]


My Family, saving you,

I promise no good deed will I attempt to do again,


Ever again!


No good deed will I do again!


Auradon was scared of me before? Well, now they SHOULD be!

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Author's Note: The next chapter has arrived. I'm sorry for any who cried while reading this chapter. Jack now controls both cold and dark. And he's seriously mad at Auradon. Don't worry this transformation IS temporary. The song I used is from Wicked the Broadway Musical. Called No Good Deed. Please vote, comment, and share this chapter. Thank you! 🤗

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