Can I Get His Love?

By prapanchika

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Meet swetha.. Simple girl who only wanted onething in her life. A loving husband. She is well known in her lo... More

1. Marriage Is It Bliss?
2. Meeting Of Souls..??
3. Revenge??
4. Flaw In Inlaws!
5. Bangle!
6. Painful Past!
7. Red Roses?
8. Avika's Hatred
9. Party!!
10. Drunken!!
11. Goa
12. Hug
13. Jealousy
14. Slap!!!
15. Sorry..!!??
16. Departure
17. My Ram!!
18. Family!!
19. College!!
Request
20. Love ->break up
21. Guilty!!
22. Refusal !!
23. Suppressed Feelings!!
24. Avoidance
25. Mistake!!!
26. Resemblance!?
27. Truth!!
28. Realisation
29. His Things!!
30. Acting!!
31. Friends!!
32. His Sweetness!!
33. Helping!
34. His Care!!
35. Sympathy!!!
36. Fresh Start
37. Affair!!??
38. Fear!!
39. Best Friend!!
40. Rakesh Special!!!
41. One Sided!!
42. Appa!!
43. Surprize Call!!
44. Password!!
45. Sweet Moments!!
46. He Loves Me??
47. Dance Practice
48. Bad Omen!!!
49. Sangeet!?
50. Nervous!!
52. Ang Laga De Re!!
53. Bad Days!!
54. Remorse
55. Cruel World!!!
56. Living In Dark!!
57. Stupidity!!!
58. Positivity!
Announcement!!!
59. Naming
60. Marriage Anniversary!
61. Repay!
62. Truth And Dare!!
63. Divorce
64. Alone!
65. Proposal!!
66. Bonding!!
67. Confession!
68. Punishment!
69. Dream Come True!
Epilogue!
Heartful Smile!!!

51. Treasure Hunt

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By prapanchika

Hellooo dear busy busy yet lovely readers..

Happy makar sankranthi,
Happy lohre,
Happy uttarayan,
Happy pongal,
Happy boghali bihu..

If the festival is called with some other name in ur state.. Please comment what it is called..

What ever it is.. Enjoy the festival with family and u know lots of food and clothes😁😁😁..

Anyways lets go back to our story first. .

Rakesh pov

"Okay guys.. Bye see you.." i said.

"Vaishu.. What about you..?" i asked vaishali

"She will stay at our home.." priya said

"Why unnecessary journey.. U can stay here tonight and can go to ur home tomorrow.. As already.. Abhi and ur parents are on their way to home right.." i said.

"Yeah.. They will be in bangalore by tomorrow early morning.. But all my things are in priya's home.. Even medicines too.. So it will be better if i stay there.." vaishali smiled at me and looked at swetha.

"Ohh okay.. Take care.." i said.

"Priya u too take care and congrats once again.." i said looking at vikranth and priya.

"Yah sure thank u.. " priya said while vikranth placed his arm over priya's shoulder with a heartful smile on his face.

"Okay bye bye.."

They all went saying bye to us..

After they went.. I closed the door and turned..

Swetha went inside the room and locked the door..

What happened to her??

May be she wants to change her dress.. I shrugged my shoulders and sat on sofa then switched on tv..

She came back in the same dress and sat beside me.

"rakesh.." she murmured nervously.

"yeah swetha.. Tell me" i said giving my attention to swetha.

"Hmm.. Your gift from me" saying that.. She gave a small gift.. I smiled and said "do u know you dont have to give any special gift to me"

She smiled and said "happy birth day rakesh"

"thank you swetha" i said and hugged her...

"wait .. wait.. First open it" she said pushing my chest..

"okay.. Okay.." i said smiling..

I slowly started opening the gift wrapper...

"What can it be? " i murmered..

Finally after opening the box.. I saw a chocolate and a jewellery box..

I looked at her.. "U too bought a ring for me?? " i asked her.

She looked at me smiling..

I opened the box.. But no ring is there.. Instead a small paper is there..

I opened the paper and read what is written in the paper..

'Dear husband.. You need to search for your gift on your own basing on the hints..'

I looked at her.. She laughed..

"Seriously.. Treasure hunt at this time?? " I asked her..

"Dont you want to take my gift..?? "She asked with a disappointed look..

" No no.. I love to.. And i will hunt my treasure" i said and looked down at the paper.

'First hint.. Iam always cold inside and very hot out side.. I am helpful to many but i need support.'

"What is this??" i murmered and Then looked at her with confusion but she smiled saying "think.. Think.. You will get the answer"

I reread again and again..

Cold inside.. Hot outside.. Helpful nut nerd support..

Hmm..

Is it refrigerator??

Yess..

Its cold inside.. Hot outside.. It needs power supply as support.

I went to check in refrigerator..

I opened the door and started checking every rack by moving the utensils to a side..

I found a slip at the deeper part..

"Yess i found it.. " i took it and opened to read my second hint..

'Woww.. Well done.. So next hint is...
Second hint.. I always help you where ever you go.. Still i will be treated with disrespect..you dont even allow me to come inside your home.. '

Ufff.. What is this..??

I turned to look at swetha.. She is not there.. I went to hall.. She is watching.. T. V..??

Seriously.. Why cant she help me??

"enjoying well??" i asked her raising my eye brow.

"yeah the movie is good.. Its funny.." she said laughing.

"Pyaar ka punch naama?? " i asked looking at the scene.

"Ohh.. I dont know the name.. But its good" she said not even turning her gaze from movie.

"dont you want to help me??"  i asked hoping she will help me.

"Why should i?? Its your gift.. You have to work hard.." she is not even helping me.

"Atleast be with me.." i said

"No.. U will get answers by watching my expressions.." she said with that my lips turned down.

I heaved a deep sigh.. "Okay.. Dont come.. Enjoy your movie.. I will search myself.."

"Wait.. I think.. I will go to bed room.. So u wont even look at me.. Because i might help u seeing ur pathetic state.." she being mean said.

"Go.. Go.. I dont even look at you or ask you" i said tightening my lips.

"Haha.. All the best.." Saying that she switched off the telivision and went inside our bedroom closing the door.

Hmm.. I have to search it on my own..

Okay rakesh.. Come on u can do it..

I looked at the hint once again.. 'You dont even allow me to come inside your home..'

Is that a cat or dog?? But we dont have it right... Saying that i went out side.. I looked out side of house..

Does it mean plants..??

Hmm may be.. Because it gives oxygen in thatway it helps where ever i go..

Yess.. Thats it.. I went to search in and around pots of plants.. But i didnt find anything..

Ahh.. I kept fingers in my hair and pulled it with frustration..

Better read the hint again..

Treated with disrespect..

Fool.. Do u disrespect plants.. No right??

With fail i looked around and my gaze fell on shoes..

Are they??

Lets see..

I went and lifted my shoes and reversed them..

A slip fell from them..

Woww.. Come on rakesh.. Good going.. I patted my shoulder for encouragement..

I opened the slip and read

"superb.. So u came half way.. Next hint is..

Third hint- i have four legs.. I wont eat but always drink.. I play music but ofcourse no one listens.. I too cant enter into your home

Its seems easier yet confusing..

Four legs??

Always drink??

Play music??

Outside house??

I looked around..

"What can it be yaar" i mumbled.

No animal is there..

Can it be my car??

It satisfies all except play music.. May be about songs that we play inside.. But what is this.. about no one listens?? Everyone listens to songs right??

May be its not car..

I cant find anything out side our house.. Other than car..

May be i should check it once..

I went inside the house and took car keys from the tray of keys near T. V. Then came out and opened the car by clicking the unlock button..

'Clingclong'

Wait..

I locked my car key button and then again pressed to unlock it..

'Clingclong.. Clingclong'

Yess.. The answer sure is.. Car..

I opened with confidence and started searching inside.. I found a slip near the gear rod.

Yahoo.. Got It..

I opened it and read..

Thank you so much rakesh for the patience in searching..

I smiled reading that..

Now the last hint- you know the place where the gift is.. Its waiting for you

What is this..?

I know the place where the gift is? Seriously.. Do i have any special powers??

I continued reading the next line..

The gift is.. The treasure which only you have the right to touch..

Only i have the right to touch..?? Not even my swetha has the right??

What can it be??

Is that laptop?? Mobile??

But i allow anyone to touch it right..

Is it any food made by her?? But i will share it with her for sure.. I mean that.. I will share it with anyone too like it will be mannerless if someone comes home and i wont share it with anyone right..

What can it be..??

Thinking that.. I entered inside home..

I looked around the hall..

Anyone can touch anything right..??

Suddenly.. My mind strike it..

Does it mean??

The gift??

I was surprised with my thoughts..

I really wish that was my gift which my mind is thinking..

I went to our bedroom..

I tried to open the door.. But its locked..

So my gift is inside for sure..

I knocked the door.. Door opened a little.. But swetha didnt allow me to enter inside.. Instead she kept her head out..

"do you find your gift??" she asked..

"yess.." i said with confidence..

"really?" she asked me raising her eye brows..

"yess.. Indeed.. The treasure which only i have the right to touch" i said looking into her eyes with a smirk..

She blushed and looked down with shyness..

I pushed the door.. She didnt oppose.. Upon opening the door.. I was surprised to look inside..

The whole room is decorated with flowers..

I looked at swetha.. She wore tomato red saree covering herself completely with pallu..

I went near her..

She moved back wards step by step..

I chuckled moving my head horizontally and turned back to leave..

But she held by wrist.. I turned to look at her.. She looked at me in eyes.. "dont you want your gift??"

"but i think my gift is not ready yet" i said looking straightly deep into her eyes smirking..

She moved silently to the bed side..

I know swetha.. My gift is not ready yet..

I went towards the shelf to take my night wear..

'Ang laga de re

Mohe rang laga de re..'

I stopped taking my dress midway and turned back..

She is looking down nervously holding her mobile from which the song is playing..

I moved near her and lifted her chin to look at me..

"i can wait till my gift is ready.." i said..

She pushed my hands and thrown her mobile on bed..

I was looking at the mobile..

She held my my wrist.. I looked at the contact of her left hand with my right hand then into her eyes..

She removed pallu which is covering her right shoulder..

I was shocked to see her bare right shoulder..

I gulped looking at her..

"make love to me rakesh" she said looking directly in to my eyes with boldness.

Finally.. Rakesh found his treasure.. 🙈🙈🙈

Hmm.. Dedication goes to

Daniechan

PravallikaRani2

ArinShaik

BusiMusi

Finally total chapter count i can finalise.. I need to write probably 3 more chapters to complete the story.. But i dont know when i can complete that.. So will go with regular tuesday updates..ofcourse some occassional surprises too.. Note occassional..

About last week random question, most answers were hill stations next to that is nature filled places

I love to travel to archaeological sites.. Imagining how  people used to live in those places at that time and the finest stone carvings. I cant stop appreciating the minds of engineers those times and the ability workers when the technology is not there..

After that any place as far as the people there dont know me..  Note- only day time.. Iam afraid of dark..

Random question:

Do u believe in ghosts??

Have u ever experienced strange incidents in your life??

Haha.. U might be thinking what happened to me.. The chapter is in romantic mood and iam asking about horror stories.. See iam crazy.. Anyways.. Comment ur answer..

Thanks for the love u are showering to the story. U know it crossed 100k reads.. 😊

Hmm.. Then

Meet u in next update..

Till then bye bye.. ️❤️❤️

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