Why Your Story SUCKS | Writer...

By Xaprith

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A rant book of things that Wattpad writers do that I find annoying and pointless. Plus topics that need to be... More

DISCLAIMER
Chapter one, part 1
Alpha Daddy's Virgin
Pack houses don't make any logical sense
Stolen Ideas and Copyright
Rape is just a sob story
Umm you're a new student so I have to bully you for no reason
Self voting
(Unedited)
Pls read and vote on my story, thanks.
i'M BlAcK aNd tHaT's aLl ThAt mAtTeRs
Comas are not a long sleep
"Well, it's just a story" - Wattpad's biggest issue
No, you will not be the next Anna Todd
Earn coins they said
Fanfiction is gross and cringy
Wattpad's hacking + words from ex employees
"I smiled" isn't a dialogue tag
Sociopaths are hot uwu
The Grossest Wattpad Community
why your book cover sucks
Stop describing the ocean's smell
Wattpad's weird BHM art and pushing political messages
Skin tones are not desserts
Wattpad Petitions Are Dumb
Eating Disorders Don't Work Like This + Thinspo Content
Autistic People Are Babies
The actual reason Wattpad shut down its forums
Boys Can't Be Sexually Assaulted Apparently
why your smut sucks
why your hook sucks
Please Read Books Are Dumb
Trigger warnings are getting excessive
Reversing gender roles and "strong" female characters
Wattpad Is Censoring Other Platforms
why your mafia story sucks
Wattpad's 10 dollar scam
Wattpad Is Broken
Mutism is quirky I guess
Let authors doubt themselves
Silent readers
Gaining reads and R4Rs/F4Fs
Why your cast/descriptions sucks
The misconceptions of NovelHD & Teenfic.net (stop acting like Karens)
Barbie Bitches
An Update
Why your badass character sucks
Why your blurb sucks
Writing contract offers aka scams
Should Authors Use The N-Word In Their Stories?
The Worst, Most Harmful Book I've Ever Read - An extensive break-down
Editing books after completion
Trolls/Haters
Authors aren't AI
The breakup
Book titles
Author's Notes
Why Your Review Shop Sucks
Why your prologue sucks
Wattpad Underpays Their Designers
Why your AI cover sucks

Fat characters? YAS QUEEN SLAY

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By Xaprith

I'm tired of seeing stories with some random plus size bint on the cover and it getting praised because she's not a twig or isn't an hourglass. Sure, most stories don't have fat main characters but when they do, they make sure everyone knows they aren't skinny.

Alright, so she's a bigger girl, and this makes the story just so much different because?

Who cares if your MC is fat, being fat isn't a personality trait so why does it matter so much to the point you need to base your story's title around it, put a fat girl on the cover, and add tags about it? 

Just YIKES. What type of body your character has doesn't just automatically make your story different.

But isn't that the opposite of what we want? Having a fat MC is supposed to make the MC feel more relatable, more realistic yes? Since in today's world being fat is normal. 

But when an author glorifies their MC being fat, it turns being fat into this big deal and makes it seem like being fat is something important (and important for the wrong reasons, it's important when it comes to your health but that's not what these books talk about) when the whole point of having a fat character is supposed to make the reader feel as if they can connect with the character and relate to them having a common body type. Most aren't shouting from the rooftops that they're overweight/fat.

Would the story be given the same praise if the author did the same thing except with a skinny girl? No, they'd be reported for glorifying being skinny and people would say they're pro-ana. It's the same with being fat, being fat isn't healthy so I wish authors would stop treating it like it's a healthy body type.

No, I'm not saying you shouldn't be proud of your body because you should, you should embrace your physical. What I'm saying is if you have an unhealthy body type—doesn't matter if it's unhealthy as in too skinny or overweight—it shouldn't be glorified like it's healthy. So many personal factors play into what YOUR healthy body type is, but being overweight has it's health risks and life long effects just as equally as being emaciated.

I'm not saying you can't have fat people in your book, having fat characters technically is diverse since it's not every day you see a book with a fat character. I'm talking about when authors glorify being fat simply for those diversity points and no one thinks twice about it because we're all blinded by the fact its diversity. Not all diversity is done for the right reasons or done the right way, you have to look past the fact it's diverse because diversity can be toxic too.

But by all means, have fat people in your books; but don't turn it into a huge deal and base your story around it unless it has a message against being bullied for being fat or something along those lines.

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