OK so, I asked my friend of what she thinks about the plot line thing I'm doing.
She didn't like it and told me what I should do that relates more to the books.
So, in the part in my chapter 'The Dream' the part where Darkstalkers all like 'BECAUSE I WAS BETRAYED AND NO ONE CAME LOOKING FOR ME' thing, pretend that never happened K?
OK then, thanks!