Chpater 24 THE BARLE [Wtf?]
StrGleam was dooo upset she was anrgy and confusd. Starcaln WHYYYYYYYYYY?11/1/1/11/1!1" [Why what? Why are you purple? Why are you a Mary-Sue? Why do you have impossible kits? Starclan can't answer any of that, because you defy every rule of logic ever.] She elld angrly.
"Syarcaln can;t hlep you know!" [Well maybe they could help if you actually SPELLED SOMETHING CORRECTLY]
said an evli vocie. "Theres nothin gthey can do for you!"
"WHAT WHO SAID THAT" SHE ASEKD IN FAER. [Paranoid much?]
It is I, HolyLeaf!" [It is I, Kendall, ready to destroy you all, because you're FUCKING RETARDED]
said the voice again. Then HolyLefa bust out. The hole of ShadowCaln was with her and...THE DRARK FOFRST [*smashes head against wall*]
OH NOOOOOO YELLED STARGLEAME STARCALN HELP ME"
And then...the Warriorsof Starcaln came down the sky1 [Seriously? Do they come save her EVERY TIME something goes wrong? I thought she was an 'amaxing' kit and didn't need any help]
They joined StarGlaem and told her "We wil fihth with you StarPaw because you saved us ocne." [Saved them from WHAT?!]
"Kawaii" said SrarGleam [*hangs self*]
and they stared figthging the cats.[Please no, let's just let them murderStaridiot. That would do us all a favor]
StarStar ahd HolyLeaf pined down when suddenly... SHE FELT A MOVIE INSIDE HER! [Which movie?]
"MY KITS ARE COMIGN!1!1111!1!11!1" She owled. [Maybe they'll all be born dead *crosses fingers and prays*]
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why are all these chapters so short t