Try Me! [Undergoing Heavy Edi...

By ChocolateCaptain

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[Phantom Blood Reader Insert] People challenge others to do things an individual would be too intimated to do... More

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Jonathan's Route
Dio's Route
Battle Tendency!!!

Story Notes

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By ChocolateCaptain

-As I mentioned before in the story, I was originally going to make this a OC insert rather than a reader insert. Her name is Clada Rocha and originally she was supposed to pickpocket from George Joestar and Jonathan as their first meeting

-Another original meeting was between Clada (The Reader) and Dio, they were actually acquainted with each other before Clada ever met Jonathan (I feel like I should've stuck with this though)

-Originally I was thinking about making the title Spanish because of Clada's(The reader's) origins

-As stated before the majority of my characters in JoJo's Bizarre Adventure stories die during the story line; in this story Clada died at Dio's hands, remember  when Dio used that energy from his eyes? Yeah, she pulled Jonathan back and had her neck punctured to the point where you could likely see the neck bone.

-Earlier I played around with the ideas of the "What If"s, and my "what if" was surrounding the Pillar people and hamon, what I though to myself was "What if pillar people had a chance to use hamon?" I know that it wouldn't make sense, so I had to adjust a lot of things to make it at least a little bit possible. So I came up with a family tree for my characters, and made them distantly related to an ancestor that is a Pillar woman who had a human lover, basically what I tried doing was a sort of form of evolution with my character. What I'm basically saying is that my characters in the single family tree I made have Pillar people blood in them but can use hamon due to natural evolution and adapting to the sun, unless the mask is put on them, then they become a full blood pillar person with a few minor differences

-The song that I found fitting for this story was Our Solemn Hour by Within Temptation


- I might make a story for Battle Tendency

BTW I found one of the old/recent drawings I had of Clada;

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