Remnant's Graceful Assassin

By Comethazel

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Young Lauriam Rose, the son of Summer Rose but not the son of Taiyang Xiao Long. He is the son of a white hai... More

Bio: Lauriam
Bio: Marluxia
Prologue
Shoutout
Chapter 1: A New Dawn, A New Day, A New Life
The Results Are In
Chapter 3: Red/Pink Like Roses
Vol 7

Chapter 2: A Treasure Stolen?

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By Comethazel

[Unnamed POV]
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What is going on...first thing I know is that everything was dark...then it got darker...and yet more darker...then a light cut through the darkness, blinding me...then nothing

I then hear a voice...her voice was rather soothing and dare I say seductive.

???: Do you want to know?

I open my eyes and see a woman in a black cloak infront of me

???: You feel nothing...

I continues to stare at her

???: You can feel nothing

I remain the same, no change in facial expression, no shifting of position, and no breaking of eye contact

???: Do you want a meaning?

I felt something well up inside of me. A feeling that's familiar yet at the same time the feeling of something I lost what feels like a long time ago. Could...Could this be...hope?

I then nod my head.

She then makes a hand gesture and letters begin to circle around me at a fast rate, causing the letters to go out of order only to come to a complete stop as a big golden X enters the letters.

This was something that feels like I was missing...I still feel incomplete but I now feel less...empty...this word infront of me is one of the things I was looking for...

A name

Me: Marluxia

A smile grew on her face as I stared into her beautiful golden eyes with my own blue ones.

???: A new you.

She then hands me a black coat and opens a portal of sorts behind her

???: Gather anything that you need and only when you're ready will you step through the corridor.

I put the cloak on with my hood up as I give her a nod of acknowledgment.

She nods back and walks through the "corridor" as she called it.

I soon begin to walk to the "door" but right when I was about to enter I stopped...I don't know why I stopped but...There is this feeling that is preventing me from entering but what?

I turn around and see a stone slab with a pink star shaped charm in the center of it...That charm...it's...calling out to me...

I walk up to the slab and begin to take the charm out. Once I did that I stared at the star thats in my hand...A sense of familiarity hits me before I turn back around and walk into the "corridor"

But when I entered it I thought I heard someone yelling behind me.

I thought nothing of it...

[Ruby's POV]

I was currently sitting on a fallen tree trunk that is around Lauriam's grave allowing my emotions to flow freely. Lauriam didn't like seeing me cry and crying at his grave is like crying in front of him.

I couldn't do that to him after I caused his death (AN: she blames herself for Lauriam's demise)

Once I was done drying my tears I began to make my way back to big brother's grave.

But I soon stopped at what I heard.

A voice?

???: (off in the distance)...when you're ready will you step through the corridor.

I then go over to see what's going on at Lauriam's grave and that's when I saw that person.

They were garbed in a black coat with the hood up preventing me from seeing their face and they were walking into what looked to be a black portal of sorts.

I would've let them continue on but I saw something in their hand.

A pink wayfinder charm...no...Lauriam's charm.

Me: HEY GET BACK HERE WITH THAT!

The hooded person either didn't hear me or just ignored me.

I brought my sword out and rushed after them but as soon as I was about to strike them they entered the portal and it soon disappeared causing me to fall on my knees.

I then turned back to Lauriam's grave and saw the empty star shaped slot on where his wayfinder should be.

Me: I promise Lauriam...I promise to find that person, beat them to a pulp, and return your wayfinder...that is a promise of a lifetime.

[Maluxia's POV]

Once I followed the woman through the corridor I was amazed at what I saw.

(Pretend each seat has a roman numeral on it ranking from I to XIII)


I seem to be in so sort of throne room. A meeting probably? I put my hood down to see better.

I looked up at the tallest seat and saw the woman from before

???: Before we begin introductions we must wait for the others.

Others?

Then two corridors appear on the second tallest seat and the seventh tallest seat revealing two more hooded people

Then the one in the second tallest chair spoke

??? II (each unknown member will be marked with their rank): Wow boss who do we got here? Seems you got a real cutie this time.

I blushed at the woman's remark, her voice held a lot of seduction and a small tone for teasing (AN: think of Midnight's voice (Voice actor: Elizabeth Maxwell) from BNHA).

??? VII: Yes leader please tell us who this new comer is

I sweat dropped at her cute yet monotone voice (AN: Think of Milk's voice (Food Fantasy))

??? I: Well before we have him introduce himself he should at least know our names and appearance.

I'm actually a little nervous on their looks since they all sound attractive so I hope I can keep my blush down when I see their faces

??? VII: Very well...I shall go first.

She takes off her hood and I'm stunned at her frayed blue hair that fits her face and the rest being slicked back to make wild spikes, her cute pointed ears, her golden eyes that just make your heart melt, but her most defining feature is he X shaped scar that starts between her eyes and ends at her forehead and just under her eyes. She looks cute yet deadly


Saix: My name is Saix and I am the third member of Organization XIII but my rank is VII (7)

I close my eyes and smile at her but doing so caused me to miss the blush that was on her face

??? II: I guess I'm next

She takes off her hood and all I can think of is 'OUM WHY ARE THESE WOMEN SO HOT'. Anyway her black and gray hair is pulled back into a ponytail of sorts. She has a scar on her left cheek that reaches to her left jawbone, she also has those cute pointed ears (Rimuru: ELVES!), her most profound feature is her eye patch that covers her right eye but my attention is more focused on her one golden eye


Xigbar: The name's Xigbar cutie and I'm the second member of Organization XIII while my rank is II (2) I'm also boss's right hand woman. It is nice to meet you, I hope we get more acquainted~ with each other

I must be blushing like a tomato at this point because she starts to giggle a little bit as well as throwing me a teasing smile with her tongue slightly sticking out

I think it's time for Xigbar and Saix to know my name before their, and probably my, boss has to introduce herself

Me: My name is Marluxia it is nice to meet you and I hope we grow to become good friends

I then look at their boss and even though I can't see her face I can tell she is giving me a smile of approval

??? I: Before I introduce myself I must ask you this Marluxia.

I gave her a look that said "Ask away"

??? I: Would you like to join us and be part of our quest to become somebodies again

I thought it over and gave her a nod of acception

??? I: Then welcome Marluxia our fourth member of Organization XIII, by looking at your body's build we agreed that you would be the Organization's assassin thus making you rank XI (11).

I smile at the warm welcome I'm receiving. I don't know what this feeling is but it feels good. Is this...happiness?

??? I: Also you probably should know the name and face of your new boss.

She puts her hood down and she looks beautiful wither her somewhat tan skin, golden eyes, and silvery white hair.


(She's in her normal black coat)

Xelmas: My name is Xelmas and welcome to Organization XIII


MERRY CHRISTMAS YOU FILTHY ANIMALS

It is I everyones loveable author Comet and I must say that I am so very sorry for the long ass wait but it is finally here YAY.

So you're all probably wondering what that poll above this chapter is about well I'll keep that as a surprise for now but all I can say is that it doesn't involve this story.

Anyway while I have you guys here may I suggest you check out the poll for one of my new stories called: The Cursed Spirit Keys

Also if you're thinking that I misspelled Xemnas' name then you are wrong for there is a reason why in this story she is named Xelmas and whoever figures out why she's named that way PM (Pivate Message) me and whoever gets the resson first correctly will get a shout out next chapter but until then

This has been your host Comet and I will see you all in the next chapter but not until I show a rather cryptic teaser

Buh-Bye

"Poor poor boy"

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"You've been hurt by those you called friends"

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"And your weapon has been driven through your heart"

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"You have potential"

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"I can teach you on how to use the potential"

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"To become the ultimate warrior"

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"To create something far more powerful than any weapon on Remnant"

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"To be more powerful than the two brother gods"

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"To forge..."

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"The χ-blade"

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"What do you say"

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I'll do it

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*The symbol is soon consumed by darkness and a new symbol takes it's place*
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January 6th 2019

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