Black Hearts

By mishhtalkative

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Moving on is about accepting and learning, not ignoring and forgetting. Because, there is love after 'love f... More

Shadi
Presence...
Nai...na...
Yeh he Yaarana
Navupadesham
A lie
Tangled Silence
Confusion
New Resolution?
Nandu Note
RaJveer?
Hidden Treasures
Halloween
Baatein
The End ???
Tera Ehsaan
A New Nest
Naina ka Sasural
Anu - A No More Secret
Nayi Tazveerien
We too had a love story ?
Is that you?
Naam toh suna hoga!
It's the time to Cook!!!
Chapter!
Ata Mahji Satakli
Darna Zaroori He
Scared Games
Surprises and Miracles
New Update
Kuch Naye Kadam
Chimes Before The Storms
Walk Down Memory Lane
Raina Or Ranya
Ranya Or Raina - 2
Pavizha Mazha
Chapter 37
Back To ❤️ Center
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Sandwiched
Gharwali - Baharwali
Halka Halka Suroor
Mausam Beiman He
Mumma Hen
Fake - Real
Love Quadrilaterals
Trapped.
Maybe I'm Amazed
Collision of Past - Present
Unkahi Baatein
Roll Camera Action
Final Destination
Kuch Sawal Yun Hi
Phir le aaya dil
Colorful Hearts

Baggages????

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Rajveer's Flat....

Mohan - " Raj beta,
Tumne shadi ki aur Hume bataya bhi nii..." he said faking his anger....

Raj - " woh uncle...." he paused not knowing what to say now...

Gunny - "ladki itni....achchi thi ki...
isne jatt se shaadi karliya..." he tried to handle the situation... fumbling in middle....

Mohan went near Naina, placing his hand on her head,
" Bete, main Mohan Mehta hu,
is hatte katte Captain ka padosi....
Pichle saal hi retirement liya he Maine Bank se...
Noida mein maine...."

" Aap apna kundali leke bait Gaye....
Bechare bachche thake honge, aap hatiye..." a middle aged lady shouted holding a kalash in hand and Sherry was hopping behind her....

Lady - " Dekho, beta....is kalash ko tum....." she continued describing about the ritual, but Naina's ear were behaving to be dumb and mind pre occupied some thoughts....

Gunny - " aunty, aap aarti thali toh leke aavo..." he diverted the topic...as he saw Naina lost...

Naina touched the kalash...
The chawal shattered on the floor like her broken pieces of heart...

Raina stepped inside the house holding hands as per Aunty's instruction.... to hold on each other's soul as per God's decision...

A tear dropped from Naina's eyes on her red foot print thinking about the toofan which vanished each trace of her pearl like dreams....

Where as Rajveer's eyes stuck on the pic hanging on the hall.... along with his life.... unaware of the his angle's dua's standing beside him...

****************

Rajveer's room....

Rajveer stepped out of the bathroom wiping his hairs along with the thoughts disturbing him,
only to find Naina looking outside the window...at the plain sky without stars...

The plate was still untouched....

Raj took out his phone and dialled Naveen's number....
He picked up in one ring...

Naveen - " Raj, woh theekh he na..
Roo rahi he Kya??
Usne khana khaya??.." he was continuously questioning Raj....
and his eyes searching behind to have a glimpse of his chuhiyaa....

Hearing Naveen's voice, Naina turned around and stood near Raj to see him, forgetting everything for a moment, with a small smile....

Naveen - " Gudiyaa..." he cried seeing her...and Naina noticed her teddy in his hands...

Leaving both of them alone, Raj walked out...

4am.....

Raj entered the room...hairs messed up, his t shirt was torn out from one side, eyes puffed, a bleeding hand... in which glass pieces are still stuck... And a invisible burning heart....

He saw Naina sleeping on the floor, in wedding lehenga...
He slowly covered her with a blanket, without any hint of his blood soaking it...

He was about to turn, his button got stuck with her Mangalsutra....and his eyes on her face, which was like moon hidden behind dark black clouds...
He noticed some tears which was fresh on her cheek...not taking any chance to leave her....

A lone tear escaped his eyes while rescuing his button....and his soul shivered with a simple touch of the chain which was howling about their relationship....

He rushed inside the bathroom, controlling his sobs...
At last, sitting under the shower, holding his knees, he let out his pain to flow freely, along with her name...

******************

Naina - " Abhi, yeh payal theekh rahenge na...." she asked showing him payal sitting beside with shiny eyes...

Abhi - " baby, yeh payal Kon dekhega...
Hmm..." he answered moving back her hairs, aiming her neck...

Naina - " mere shadi ka joda kab aayega???
Mujhe aur ek baar try karnatha..." she asked pushing him a bit... feeling awkward with this closeness...

Abhi - " baby, woh sab chodo...
Yeh batavo, ki raath ko kyaa phehne waali ho???...
Ek baar use bhi try karke dikhavo...abhi..." he whispered... damping her earlobe...

She shivered with his touch...but still remained unmoved not able to come out of this sensual shock he gave to her...

Taking advantage of her state, he bent slowly towards her lips...with lusty eyes...
He was about to touch her lips with his she kept a finger in between....

Getting irritated he roughly holded her waist,
" Naina, next week humari shadi he...
Aur tum mujhe ......"

Naina - " Awww... Bura laga..." she asked pulling his cheeks without letting him to speak further...

He moved his face to left ignoring her words....

Naina - " Abhi, suno na..." she asked moving towards his eyes direction... to seek his attention....

Abhi - " kyaa he ab??..." asked making a irritated face...

Naina - " Meri na dream he ki, main apna first kiss...." she was trying to explain her hidden hearty things to him in a chirpy tone....

Abhi - " shut up Naina...
Yeh sub na sirf films mein hota he...
And please grow up..." he left the room without hearing her words....

And she saw him with a confused offended face not knowing what was her mistake....

" Abhi...." woke up taking his name, sweating with past memories....
But came to the reality surrounded her, feeling herself wrapped in a warm blanket and a little weight on her neck....

She tried to get off from that weight,but it was adamant to leave her... telling her that she is now caged with this weight, throughout her life...

She touched that making herself believe her dreams are really broken.... leaving her with this unwanted swampy situations....

Suddenly her eyes fell on the beautifully written ugly name on her palms inside a heart shaped flower...
She rubbed her palms to erase it...

Erase that brutal fate written on her hands, which killed her soul, just with one stroke....

She broke her Bangles, and took out a piece to scratch it....to remove it from her palm as well as from her life....
She was about to touch that filthy thing.....a voice dragged her attention, bringing a smile on her face...

She got up and rushed outside...and saw a fascinating sight...

Alekh - " woh palak he..."

Naveen - " nii pudeena he..."

Gunny - " are, kuch bhi ho...
Chalo use dhoke boil karo phehle..." said looking at his mobile...

Shalini - " mujhe koyi baath karne dega???..." shouted from the hall...

Naina - " bhaiyya..." ran towards him and hugged him tightly....with a broad smile...

Alekh - " apun bhi he line mein..." said poking her a bit on head...

Nodding her head, she gave a side hug to him...

Naina - " aap sab yaha..." asked Naveen, lowering her eyes realising the trap destiny made her fall in...

Alekh was about to open his mouth,

Gunny - " aap yeh punarmilan program baadmein karlijiye...
Phehle yeh batavo ki yeh lighter kaise on karte he???..." asked holding a electric lighter and a confused face...

Ignoring his words, Naveen cupped Naina's face,
" Tujhe miss kar rahe the hum sub...
Isiliye hum yaha..."

Alekh - " Ghar saale banke aaye..." said showing his typical Colgate smile...

Listening this Naina broke into a laughter which reached her eyes and Heart....

While in hall....

Shalini - " Raj yeh chot tumhe kaise lagi???..." asked again not convinced with previous answer she got...

Rajveer - " woh onions chop karte wakth lag gaya..." said looking at the empty wall, which was shouting out it's emptiness through the black trace of earlier thing it had....

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Hey guys,

Here is the second chap of Black Hearts....

I've done my job and now it's your turn to????

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