Woman by tejalgoyal
Reading all 6 pieces of the book I'd have to say each concept was really good. After all six parts I wish there was more and I hope you continue to write in it because I added it to my library, yes I loved it that much. At the beginning the first two pieces were longer and it was great cause you spread out the message of the whole thing. As you went on from those they got shorter which isn't a bad thing because you still got your point through but I fell in love with the long parts. I'm not saying how you write needs improvement, I'm saying I see more detail and more soul in the longer pieces. With that being said you have great potential and I can't wait to see what else you come up with
3.5 out of 5
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