Book Name: Destination 12
Genre: Short Story
Author Name: gad12345000
Judge: SaachiDudani
Cover: I liked how you used the upside down thing. But the story name, the quote and your name, they are not readable because they are too light. Give them some dark colour and it would be perfect. Score: 0.7/1
Title: It's the 12th destination, I guess? Confusing. I understand it's relatable to the storyline but you could have got something more relatable and better. Score: 0.5/1
Description: I feel the pain. It gave me a big reason to read the entire one shot. I would have given it a complete one if you could have added some emotional statement, something that would highlight the entire description. Score: 0.7/1
Beginning: And that's when I opened my eyes for the first time so wide. Uhmmm...I actually am in short of words. From where do you writers get so much of emotions in just one shot? I felt connected. Grammatical errors, none. Spacing could have been better. Score: 1.6/2
Total: 3.5/5