Author: The Sword of Stone
Book: CCRoyal
The Flow + Characters:
Ok basically you have amazing grammatical skills. But I stopped after the first chapter because it was too complex. Wordy! I didn't give it a shot because I'm the type of reader that likes simplicity and to understand the reader from the first chapter. I was extremely confused on who the protagonist was only because I didn't surpass the first chapter. You have potential, BUT if you want to reach a wider audience then you must keep your wording simple and your storyline clear. Your BIO didn't give me a gist of the story either.. only the fact that the girl was swallowed by her darkness and that within itself entices her to some extent. I'm reallly sorry but I guess this book isn't for me.
Rating - I'm not going to rate it because the way you write is amazing and detailed. Many readers love that complexity (not me, I apologize once again) and thank you for applying! :)