TU MERI MANNAT (slow editing...

By Bhanumitra

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TU MERI MANNAT~ prologue
silence ~episode-1
tit for tat ~ Part 2
TU MERI MANNAT Part 3
TU MERI MANNAT Part 4
confession - Part 5
PARTY FUN ~ Part 6
hangover- Part 7
a prank Part 8
First failure- Part 9
Resignation ~ Part 10
Should I Trust him ? ~ Part 11
what a person ?...Part 12
OUR B'DAY NIGHT~ Part 13
JEALOUS WAR ~ Part 14
My kingdom my rules ~ Part 15
jealous war ~ Part 16
plan back fire ~ Part 17
pay back game... Part 18
Naughty fight's ~Part 19
Hidden love ~ Part 20
A long Drive ~Part 21
kerala trip PART -22
who is jealous ? Part 23
jealous war Part 24
struck b/w two Part 25
poor sanskar Part 26
FIRST KISS ~Part 27
Bachelor party ~ Part 28
A walk in a jungle part-29
Shock 1- Part 30
Shock-2--part-31
shock-3 Part 32
Misunderstandings(shock-4) - Part 33
sudden decision - Part 34
Manipulation nd break down - Part 35
An change over ~Part 36
A New start over Part 37
Tom & jerry war Part 38
A slap Part 39
confession and romance in rain~ Part 40
Silly Bet ~ Part 41
sanskar's prank Part 42
A Perfect Date Part 43
a romantic date ~Part 44
realization ~ Part 45
best plan with fun ~ Part 46
prank on vamp ~ Part 47
a silly mistake ~ Part 48
Sathvik bhaiyya Part 49
twist to change Part 50
funny confession ~ Part 51
a kiss changed everything ~Part 52
pain nd understanding Part 53
caring nd changing ~ Part 54
TRUST ~ Part 55
public confession Part 56
confessions ~ Part 57
Teaser
real vamp ~ 58
Trapped~Part 59
endless love ~ Part 60
saved ~Part 61
Fear ~Part 62
romantic prank ~Part 63
a thrilling day ~ Part 64
a romantic drive ~ Part 65
a romantic night ~ Part 67
horror prank ~ Part 68
engagement ~ Part 69
sangeet +mehandi = street run Part 70
a thrilling day ~ Part 71
grand wedding ~ Part 72
funny first night ~Part 73
vamp is back ~Part 74
suhgrat in prison 🙈🙈🙈 ~ 75
poison ~ Part 76
life or death ~ Part 77
Is it a true realization ? ~ Part 78
a romantic night on a boat 😉😉 ~ Part 79
Author note
New cover

a grand proposal ~ Part 66

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By Bhanumitra

********episode starts ********

Mitra mansion, 7

Sumi is in kitchen sanskar went to her

sanskar; aunty wt ur cooking

Sumi; ha sanskar badam halwa for swara

sanskar; wah wt a smell its yummy only for swara ah not for me

Sumi;(smiled) ha for you too

sanskar; aunty I need ur help

Sumi; wt sanskar

sanskar; I need keys of the poolside door

Sumi; ha they are in swara room only in her cupboard go and take

sanskar; swara room ahh hh hh

Sumi; kya hua

sanskar; ntg anuty I am leaving I will take the keys from swara

sumi; ok but once taste it and go na

sanskar; took a spoon of it

Sumi; how is it

sanskar; maa haath padi toh acha hogi na maa its amazing

ok I am going fast

sumi smiled at sanskar "go slow sanskar swara will be there only she won't run "

sanskar blushed "ha maa

Swara room she is doing some work on her laptop

Sanskar entered in and just scanned entire room to get keys

Swara: Sanskar come and sit wt ur watching

Sanskar: Nothing swara

Swara: Tomorrow are u coming to office

Sanskar: No I had some work so leave

Swara: Wt work you had

Sanskar: Woh Saturday weekend hai na so party

Swara: Ho gud enjoy

Sanskar :( coughing aloud acting so) ahem ah ahh

Swara Plz get me some water fast

Swara; Ha ok I will get now

She left towards her bed and took the jug nd gave him water

Sanskar is struck as his plan to sent her out I failed

Sanskar : Swara I need ice water plz get na

Swara: Ok I will come in 2mins ( she left asap sanskar opened her cupboards and started searching the keys he found the keys nd dragged them but swara saw him near cupboard)

Swara: Wt ur searching sanskar

Sanskar: NTG I was just watching

I need to leave now cu tomorrow

Swara' confused by his behavior " but u asked ice water "

Sanskar: Oh I forgot this give me ( he drunk it completely and left swara in confusion)

swara; sanskar are u ok

sanskar ya I am ok I need to go bye

swara; wait y u came first nd now where ur going

Sanskar; (thought for while to get answer) woh swara are u ready tomorrow I will plan the horror prank for raglak ok I came to say this only

Swara:( excited ) wowwww ur amazing I am always ready she kissed him on cheeks ;-)

Sanskar: Great darling I love you kiddo

Swara: I love you more prankster ;-)

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On that night sanskar planned his surprise and rags prank too he drawn a draft of his surprise also

It's a Saturday all left on there works sanskar left to shopping and shopping all the things he needed for that

He came back and locked both mansions poolside doors nd he removed the water in pool nd emptied the pool

He got a glass huge jar globe shaped with a lid and a huge ladder

He fixed a fountain inside the jar and he used his engineering techniques nd continued it too remote

while testing it the lit of it opened in force nd hitted to his forehead lightly it got hurt but he did not care it

When they click the remote the lid on the globe will open and the fountain showers water with force to the top even by avoiding water inside pool also

After fixing the fountain he added a water gun with huge force on the lit of globe and he filled water inside pool in meanwhile he started arranging lights around and he added lights inside the globe also under water

He got lot of roses pink and red color and decorated then and he filled roses and rose petals inside the pool completely with the help of ladder by this his day completed its 5in evg he had not even had lunch so he left outside nd got lot of chocolates

Evg 6.40pm

Swara reached mm from office got fresh up she is in causal jumpsuit with hoodies t-shirt pink sanskar too got ready in swara fav pink shirt and blue jeans

Raglak are in hospital only they will come late ngt due to a surgery so no disturbance ;-)

Sanskar rushed to swara room

swara; sanskar you said ur going to party still ur in the home

Sanskar: Swara come with me I had a surprise for u

Swara: Hooo wats really

Sanskar' I will show you come fast

Sanskar took her to hall from her room where Shekhar Is present

Shekhar: Oh love birds where ur going in soo hurry

Swara: Woh surprise dad

Sanskar:(whispered) Chup Karo idoit

Shekhar: Wt surprise

Sanskar: Woh its just a normal thing uncle

Shekhar: Oh really then say me na (swara got a ph call she left aside)

Sanskar: Its secret uncle so Plz I will say tomorrow now only swara

Shekhar: Oh ok

Sanskar: Thanks, uncle now bye they are about to run

Shekhar: Sanskar I won't stop you but kya ha nah ur not yet married so conditions applied

Sanskar blushed " I know nd our marriage is on card

Shekhar: Oh really then can I start my arrangement then

Sanskar: Tomorrow mrg we will confirm this ok

Swara still speaking in pH sanskar he left to poolside swara seen this she thought he is angry

so she rushed by throwing ph a side

Swara left too poolside sanskar silently came from back and locked pool door

Swara is surprised to see the decoration she is fully surprised " oh my love "

full of color full lighting around the area and sanskar created a rose path from the poolside door towards the pool

Swara seen the pool which is full of roses nd roses petals are completely spread in pool nd in middle of pink rose petals there is sentence wrote with combination of yellow rose petals ND roses to that

" I ❤ u

"Are you ready to marry me?

Swara closed her mouthwith her hands in surprise 

Sanskar by holding a small box wrapped in color paper

" Are you ready to enter into new relation

"are you ready to be swara sanskar Maheshwari "

"Are u ready to change or love into marriage"

Swara nodded in happy tears " yes yessss I am always ready sanskar

she jumped in excitement ND hugged him

Sanskar: Take this then u will get ur surprise gift

swara is over excited could nine by seeing his arrangement

sanskar; gud swara have something you had not had anything na from afternoon

swara; ho but I think you had not had anything from mrg na

sanskar nodded in yes nd noo

swara; oh my sweetheart how can u be so ha come we will have something first

After some cute talks, sanskar asked swara to have dinner

sanskar spreaded lot of chocolates on the table nd all her fav dishes

swara; oh my god this many chocolates wow wow wowwwwwwwwwww

Sanskar; first dinner later this ok (both fed each other

they both had dinner nd after some time

sanskar; I forgot don't you want ur surprise open the box

Swara: Took the box nd opened it ) wts this sanskar remote wt remote is this

Sanskar: U will know but go to that side of pool nd once click it

Swara left to the other side of pool and clicked the green button on remote nd the lid of globe got opened with a  force nd splashed out a heart shaped glass box it falls on swara arms directly before swara see the box the water gun splashed out water on her ND the blusters' he added on either side sprayed out rose petals like a shower

She is shocked in surprise she is speechless to see his arrangement nd left the box nd it's flooring on pool in rose petals

Swara: Sanskarrrrr wts this omg how many more surprises u planned

Sanskar: Hm not fixed yet where is ur box

Swara: Wt box

Sanskar: A glass box is there na

Swara; she checked everywhere in show him the box which Is flooding in b/w roses in water

Sanskar go ND open it

Swara wt me ah I don't know swimming na

Sanskar I know kiddo so the water level is on ur height only

Swara hugged him in excitement;[

Swasan falls on pool by losing balance

Swara got up from water: Arey sanskar come let's go

They slowly took baby steps nd went towards box

Swara took the box ND both got nd sat on edge of pool by placing there leg inside pool

Swara opened the box ND found mangalsutra

Swara: Sanskar mangalsutra?

Sanskar: Yes it the one which represents me or loves our relation

U need to carry this life long na so it's precious for me so I specifically ordered in nd got It for you it's all my earnings swara ND my everything belong to you swara

ND after our marriage u will be half of mine

Swara:( hugged him ND kissed him on cheeks ) I am really lucky to get a husband like you

Ur so supporting, understanding really I was the most luckiest girl in this world �

Sanskar: Even I am

Sanskar: I had a surprise for you swara come

Swara: Ha once again ah

Sanskar got down inside pool nd he lived swara inside pool they walked towards the globe ;-)

Sanskar pulled swara inside water

Swara felt amazing by seeing the photos floating inside the globe in water with color lights

Swara got up due to lack of breath inside water

Swara:(held him ) Sa-- sanskar

Sanskar: How is this last surprise swara

Swara: ( hugged him in happiness) sanskar I am speechless sanskar I can't say anything now

Ur making everyone moment special

Sanskar: Ur special for me swaraaa

Swasan had a cute eye lock

Swara face is fully drenched in rose petals

swara saw the plaster on his forehead which is under his hair

swara; sanskar wt happened

sanskar; nthg swara while arranging this globe silhly hitted its not at all paining

swara; (placed her finger on his lips she stood up on her foot toes nd pulled him by his collar nd kissed him on the forehead

ahem ahem

to be continued...........................

precap; romance hai yar love in floating na ;-)

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