TU MERI MANNAT (slow editing...

By Bhanumitra

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TU MERI MANNAT~ prologue
silence ~episode-1
tit for tat ~ Part 2
TU MERI MANNAT Part 3
TU MERI MANNAT Part 4
confession - Part 5
PARTY FUN ~ Part 6
hangover- Part 7
a prank Part 8
First failure- Part 9
Resignation ~ Part 10
Should I Trust him ? ~ Part 11
what a person ?...Part 12
OUR B'DAY NIGHT~ Part 13
JEALOUS WAR ~ Part 14
My kingdom my rules ~ Part 15
jealous war ~ Part 16
plan back fire ~ Part 17
pay back game... Part 18
Naughty fight's ~Part 19
Hidden love ~ Part 20
A long Drive ~Part 21
kerala trip PART -22
who is jealous ? Part 23
jealous war Part 24
struck b/w two Part 25
poor sanskar Part 26
FIRST KISS ~Part 27
Bachelor party ~ Part 28
A walk in a jungle part-29
Shock 1- Part 30
Shock-2--part-31
shock-3 Part 32
Misunderstandings(shock-4) - Part 33
sudden decision - Part 34
Manipulation nd break down - Part 35
An change over ~Part 36
A New start over Part 37
Tom & jerry war Part 38
A slap Part 39
confession and romance in rain~ Part 40
Silly Bet ~ Part 41
sanskar's prank Part 42
A Perfect Date Part 43
a romantic date ~Part 44
realization ~ Part 45
best plan with fun ~ Part 46
prank on vamp ~ Part 47
a silly mistake ~ Part 48
Sathvik bhaiyya Part 49
twist to change Part 50
funny confession ~ Part 51
a kiss changed everything ~Part 52
pain nd understanding Part 53
TRUST ~ Part 55
public confession Part 56
confessions ~ Part 57
Teaser
real vamp ~ 58
Trapped~Part 59
endless love ~ Part 60
saved ~Part 61
Fear ~Part 62
romantic prank ~Part 63
a thrilling day ~ Part 64
a romantic drive ~ Part 65
a grand proposal ~ Part 66
a romantic night ~ Part 67
horror prank ~ Part 68
engagement ~ Part 69
sangeet +mehandi = street run Part 70
a thrilling day ~ Part 71
grand wedding ~ Part 72
funny first night ~Part 73
vamp is back ~Part 74
suhgrat in prison 🙈🙈🙈 ~ 75
poison ~ Part 76
life or death ~ Part 77
Is it a true realization ? ~ Part 78
a romantic night on a boat 😉😉 ~ Part 79
Author note
New cover

caring nd changing ~ Part 54

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By Bhanumitra

scene1,

Its ngt 11 pm swara is still dialing for sanskar .she is waiting for him by watching his room from her balcony

Swara: "Sanskar, where you are, I wanna talk to you, plz come naaa "

She called some of his frnds to know about sanskar but no use noone knows where he is

Sanskar on terrace he had completely broken

Sanskar shouted out loud I hate you sanskar Maheshwari " bcoz of u today swara got hurted she loving you more than herself but in return, u always gifted her ur arrogant behavior

Ur useless

I hate you hate you hate you"

He has broken the scotch bottle with a force by which the glass pics got spread on the whole terrace around him

He fell on knees and cried out louddddd

Swara is restless in that time she remembered her childhood incident

Flashback

Swara is 8yrs nd sanskar 10

Sanskar had a fight with swara on a silly stuff so he even bet her swara with a stick

Swara cried out loud by that and both the families came and seen this nd noone scolded either swara or sanskar they just made swara stop crying nd left

Sanskar left shocked for this he felt everyone may shout on him but no

Sanskar left towards swara" y u cried so loud see everyone came "

swara; ( gave an angry look) Oh really I cried loud wait she bit him on his shoulder nd

sanskar cried louder then swara " aahhhhhh "

Swara ;arey y ur crying loud reduce volume mom may comeback

both the families saw this and laughed out aloud

flashback ends

but swasan remember same incident and they laughed out aloud with teary eyes

scene2, 12.30am

swara remembered that sanskar may be on the terrace as its their common place to visit when they are happy or sad

after sometime swara got up ND left towards terrace but for her shock, she has seen sanskar on a corner of the terrace by hugging his legs

Swara saw the glass pics full on floor she cleared them with a broom in process her leg got hurted by a glass pic

Sanskar raised his head to see who it is

Sanskar" swara kya Hua ho no again I hurted you I am so sorry ( crying badly)

I am sorry I should not do this

Swara : ( sat on her knees by cupping his face) sanskar I was not hurt who said this

Sanskar: I am sorry swara dad is right I was worth less and useless but trust me swara I had not signed that contract Plz trust me swara you trust me nah ( he mumbled in tears )

Swara:( crying badly she hugged him) no sanskar listen to me dp uncle just misunderstood you we all trust you more than anything

sanskar; no swara I was wrong so bcoz of me ur facing problem but I did not sign that contract I don't know anything about it

swara; (hugged him ) yes sanskar I know you don't know anything about this contract

(swara got clear idea that someone intentionally trapped sanskar in this )

'swara ;( teary eyes by cupping his face ) sanskar plz relax u did ntg, I know it whatever others say I don't mind, I just want what you feel

Swasan cried out loudly for some time by hugging each other

swara; (whispered ) Sanskar listen to me once

Sanskar he saw towards her

Swara:( by cupping his face) ur really talented sanskar but problem is

u never realized wt are your strength is

If you try you can achieve a lot

Ur great sanskar I know this but they are fools so they may say like that

Sanskar:(innocently whispered) is it true

Swara: Ha true I won't lie you know na

Sanskar: Saachi

Swara:( by holding her throat ) ah muchii

Swasan laughed out

Swara: Clear your tears u know crying boys look so bad

Sanskar : Ho really I won't cry hereafter

Swara: Ha that like my prince love you

Sanskar: I love you more

Wtever happen I don't wanna lose you, swara ur my life

Swara: Whatever sanskar we will be together still the end of our life it's my promise

the only mannat I have is you"hum donoo ke mannat ek hai hamesha ek saath ,ek hoka rahnaaa "

sanskar ; you know something '

swara; ha bolo

sanskar ;"YOU ARE THE ONE I WANTED TO FIND, TO TELL THAT I NEED YOU ALL IN MY LIFE"

swara; mee to sanskar ur my life

They both spent some time na after a while swara took sanskar to his room nd made him sleep

(sanskar placed his head on her lap )

Sanskar sleeping on her laps swara is caressing his hair to make him sleep lovely

Sanskar slept after a while by holding her one hand like a kid

Swara smiled nd grabbed bed sheet ND placed it on sanskar properly

While caressing his hair on forehead she has seen stitch marks on his head

Swara" wt are this huge mark on his head as far I remember sanskar never got such huge injury on head na

wts this then I need to ask lucky once may be he know

She kissed his forehead and whispered a gud ngt nd left to her room secretly

after thinking a lot swara too slept

Scene 3,mrg10am

Ministry of roads and transport office

Swara started her inquiry on the tender to know who filed it on behalf of sanskar

Swara: Hello may i get some information on this tender no: 5346

Clerk: Yah sure but the tender had been issued to s& s group

Swara: Ha I know I was the auditor of that company" actually I wanna know who filed this tender

Clerk: Ha it's on behalf of sanskar maheswari

Swara: He himself filed this or else who submitted it

Clerk: We don't know mam if u want more u better meet our superintend

Swara: Oh sure I wanna meet him

In meanwhile a man entered in blue jeans nd white shirt

Man: Welcome miss.swara Mitra after a long time how are you

Swara: ( turned back to see ) oh you Mr.Amar

( Amar is the same person whom sathvik used to defame sanskar )

Amar: Yah Amar is here

Swara: I was thinking that how such a big loss happened to my company

Is this your hand

Amar: Ha ha don't show ur talent on mee you can get ntg from me miss.swara

Swara: I thought you may be changed after our clz incident

Amar: Ha I changed so I was doing everything in perfect plan

Swara: Soo for whom ur helping now

Amar: I cant say that it is a professional secret

Swara: I will pay more than him but I wanna know it

Amar: He paid more then anything mainly he said I shouldn't say to you so no

Swara: It means there is a hand of person so close to me

Amar: Not bad dragging information from mee too

Go stop wasting time and prepare well to pay penalty for government

Swara: No never I will find the real culprit behind this and trust me, Amar, you will get ur share of punishment too ( she left with a professional smile )

As soon as swara left Amar did call to sathvik

Sathvik: I said na don't call me always

Amar: Ha I had called you to inform that swara Mitra started her investigation

Sathvik:( shocked) wt did she got any information

Amar: No I managed somehow you better take care

Sathvik: Ha I know but you shut your mouth or else I will shut it permanently

Amar gulped in fear and ended the call

Sathvik:( himself ) Ho my darling ur sharp but I am more than you

Scene4,s nd s office

Swara went to her cabin nd both Kavitha ND swara where thinking this contract issue

Swara: Sanskar said he had not signed contract then how this tender got filed

Kavitha: I don't know

Swara: We both not did it nd even dad nd uncle also no other partners never then who did it

Swara: Sathvikkkk

Kavitha( shocked) noo sathvik won't do such cheap things

Swara ' its just doubt

Kavitha: Wt sathvik get by defaming sanskar ND this company

While they are discussing Priya entered the cabin

Priya: I need to Say you something important

Swara: Ha say me Priya

Priya: Mam woh I am sorry to say but on that day you gave some files to sanskar sir na to read he had not read them he just blindly signed them

Swara ND Kavitha are shocked

Swara: Wt he just signed ah

Then where is 5th file I need to read it

Priya: The 5th file is missing

Swara: (shocked ) Wt try to remember Priya try

Priya: Mam on that day sathvik sir took that file

Swara:( shocked) wt sathvik

Priya: Ha sathvik sir only, one the day you went to raglak hospital na then he came and gave a file ND said me " this file is given by swara get sign from sanskar by evg"

So I gave the file to sanskar sir he signed and sathvik sir took it away

Now swara understood everything clear it is all sathvik plan

Swara ND Kavitha are shocked to know this thing by thinking how cheap sathvik turned

Swara is fused in angry she came out of her cabin

She saw sathvik talking in pH without wasting a second she dragged him by holding his collar and gave a tight slap which made everyone shock

Sathvik left his pH and holder his red burning cheek

Swara:( clutched his collar) how cheap u are sathvik how cheap ur

Sathvik:wt I did

Swara: "Y ur tried to defame sanskar

"Y u made him sign on that contract

"Y ur hurting him

Say me ( shouted in tears)

Sathvik: ( innocently) no swara ur mistaken I did nothing

Swara:( she again slapped sathvik on another cheek) don't u again dare to lie I know everything about you now

Sathvik: How can you blame me without proof

Swara:( angry) Ho proof its Priya who observed ur whole cheap trick

Sathvik is speechless everyone is shocked to know sathvik blind game

Screen freezes

**** to be continued ***** 

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