TU MERI MANNAT (slow editing...

By Bhanumitra

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TU MERI MANNAT~ prologue
silence ~episode-1
tit for tat ~ Part 2
TU MERI MANNAT Part 3
TU MERI MANNAT Part 4
confession - Part 5
PARTY FUN ~ Part 6
hangover- Part 7
a prank Part 8
First failure- Part 9
Resignation ~ Part 10
Should I Trust him ? ~ Part 11
what a person ?...Part 12
OUR B'DAY NIGHT~ Part 13
JEALOUS WAR ~ Part 14
My kingdom my rules ~ Part 15
jealous war ~ Part 16
plan back fire ~ Part 17
pay back game... Part 18
Naughty fight's ~Part 19
Hidden love ~ Part 20
A long Drive ~Part 21
kerala trip PART -22
who is jealous ? Part 23
jealous war Part 24
struck b/w two Part 25
poor sanskar Part 26
FIRST KISS ~Part 27
Bachelor party ~ Part 28
A walk in a jungle part-29
Shock 1- Part 30
Shock-2--part-31
shock-3 Part 32
Misunderstandings(shock-4) - Part 33
sudden decision - Part 34
Manipulation nd break down - Part 35
An change over ~Part 36
A New start over Part 37
Tom & jerry war Part 38
A slap Part 39
confession and romance in rain~ Part 40
Silly Bet ~ Part 41
sanskar's prank Part 42
A Perfect Date Part 43
a romantic date ~Part 44
realization ~ Part 45
best plan with fun ~ Part 46
prank on vamp ~ Part 47
Sathvik bhaiyya Part 49
twist to change Part 50
funny confession ~ Part 51
a kiss changed everything ~Part 52
pain nd understanding Part 53
caring nd changing ~ Part 54
TRUST ~ Part 55
public confession Part 56
confessions ~ Part 57
Teaser
real vamp ~ 58
Trapped~Part 59
endless love ~ Part 60
saved ~Part 61
Fear ~Part 62
romantic prank ~Part 63
a thrilling day ~ Part 64
a romantic drive ~ Part 65
a grand proposal ~ Part 66
a romantic night ~ Part 67
horror prank ~ Part 68
engagement ~ Part 69
sangeet +mehandi = street run Part 70
a thrilling day ~ Part 71
grand wedding ~ Part 72
funny first night ~Part 73
vamp is back ~Part 74
suhgrat in prison 🙈🙈🙈 ~ 75
poison ~ Part 76
life or death ~ Part 77
Is it a true realization ? ~ Part 78
a romantic night on a boat 😉😉 ~ Part 79
Author note
New cover

a silly mistake ~ Part 48

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By Bhanumitra


SCENE1, SWASAN OFFICE

she gave an angry look nd stood in front of them by folding her hands upward

by seeing swara everyone kept quite

sanskar gave a winking smile towards swara

swara; Mr.sanskar you had some important files too sign soo plz leave to ur cabin

sanskar; ok ms.swara guys cu later ur mam gave me work too how sadddd (sanskar left)

swara; (angry towards other staff) listen it's an office, not canteen you're making this much fun and ur wasting office time in this way

staff; sorry mam woh sanskar sir

swara; (shouted ) whoever it is have some ethics in the workplace
did you all got it na never repeat it again nd get back to work now

swara left to sanskar cabin to see wt he is doing swara saw him from glass door sanskar is playing with a pen by rotating it in b/w his fingers

swara; sanskar wt ur doing

sanskar; ntg just playing

swara;(angry) are you a kid to play with pens and pencils

sanskar;(smiles ) to play we do not need to be kids if we know playing we can

Priya ; (got files ) mam here are files to be seen by sanskar sir

swara; only three ah

Priya; no there are much more but in one day sir hardly see one or two so I got only three

swara; (angry look ) u cant say it na

swara placed the files in front of sanskar and said " read thoroughly and sign them "

sanskar; will you help me then

swara; ur not a kid in a kinder garden to take help of teacher always ur director of this company so its ur responsibility

sanskar; (took the files and placed them on the table with disinterest )ok I will

swara; Priya get mee two more files (Priya left )

sanskar; (shocked ) wt are you crazy I was human not a robot to read this many

swara moved towards sanskar and made him sit in his chair by caressing his hair swara whispered "sanskarrrr I know ur human nd I know this too that ur highly talented , efficient so plz concentrate na plzzz (by cupping his face )

sanskar; (her pleasing face effected him ) ok I will as you say

swara; oh that's like gud boy do it I will talk to you evg

sanskar; wt evg where your going noww

swara; woh raglak hospital its been long visited it nd even Kavitha is out of station so I need to audit it

so u complete ur work we will talk the night

sanskar; (nodded his head in yes and nooo swara seen his expression she gave a peck on his cheeks "now its ok ah "\\

sanskar; ha ha ok

Swara; gud not do it (she about to leave but sanskar stopped her )

sanskar; (naughty smile) u gave 5files to do and only payment for one too badddd

swara; (acha sir u want payment ahhh (she kissed his other cheek nd forehead nd ran out towards door nd whispered in blushing tone " yeh advance hai full payment work ka baad"

sanskar; wahhhhh wat a deal come fast will be waitingggg

priya gave other two files and left

sanskr tried to read and concentrate but his laziness is not letting he tried more than 2hrs he just completed one file its too boring for him

he lost his interest so took the other files nd signed them blindly without reading nd all he threw them aside on the table nd started playing games in the phone

Priya and sathvik observed this

sathvik; wahh sanskar you gave a chance to meee unknowingly so ur digging ur pith

Raglak hospital

Swara left to ragini cabin were ragini is full on dull

Swara; hii diii y ur face is like this today

Ragini; ntg chodo yar get me two cups of coffee (she said to nurse she left )

Swara; say me where is lucky y ur sad di bolna plz

Rags; who... dad said. he want mee to get married soon

Swara; (shocked) y all of the sudden wt happened

Ragini; its all bcoz of you only

swara; wt I did for this ah say clearly

Ragini; woh last night dad asked me where is swara

flashback

Ragini; " swara went to attend her frnds wedding its late ngt so she will stay there only "

Shekar; y can't you go with her

Ragini; (nervous ) wohh she is her collage mate I don't know her

Shekhar; I did a huge mistake

Rags; wt dad wt happened

Shekhar; see the girl below ur age is getting married but I never thought of ur marriage

Ragini; (shocked ) wttttt

Shekhar; we are thinking to do ur marriage soon

Rags; y all of sudden

Shekhar; wt sudden ur 25yrs its right age to marry even ur getting best matches

Ragini; nodded her head

Flashback ends

Swara; (excited ) wow gud y can't you say about lucky nd you can marry him wts problem

Rags; (crying ) stop it stupid I can't dare

Swara; ohh ok don't cry say lucky to talk to dp uncle

Rags; he is more scared then mee

Swara; chili cant you dare this much but say you both love each other

rags;(angry) acha we can't dare so we are sleeping at night but you both are romancing the whole ngt

swara;,(spitted out coffee) we just went for a long drive that's it ntg more than that

Ragini; (teasingly) ho really anyways ur messed hair nd blushing face is saying me how much you did today nd yesterday

swara; (blushing) stop it rags y ur puling me in the middle now

rags; its fact naa

swara; stop teasing me or else I won't help you

rags; ok ok plz help me now

swara; that's much better ok first we will motivate lucky to talk to dp uncle

rags; ok are you sure

swara; we will try naaa

rags; ok but don't handle this to sanskar plz he will hang this matter by his madness

swara; achaaa but he is intelligent in love matter

rags; may be but he will give heart attack soo its better to stay away from him

swara; ok now I had work cu later (she left the cabin )

swara, lucky, rags had there dinner in meanwhile swara convinced lucky nd they three left to mm

swara got fresh up nd took her ph to call sanskar but its low battery so she placed it on charging nd fallen on the bed for a short nap but it turned into a deep sleep

sanskar tried a lot of times for swara but no response as ph in silent

sanskar is restless

Maheshwari mansion ngt 12.30 am

sanskar finally decided to meet swara so by hiding like the thief he moved towards poolside door nd tried to open it but its not opening

sanskar placed his leggs hitting the door to pull it hard to open but till it is not opening

dp; (stood beside sanskar ) shall I help you

sanskar; (unknown of DP ) ya plz

DP; here are the keys (sanskar turned to see the person nd got shocked to see DP )

sanskar; (shocked) da da dadddd

dp; dad only where ur going at this time

sanskar; (thinking to manage ) woh wohh to have some fresh air

dp; where is fresh air on poolside or somewhere else

sanskar;(panic) pool side only pakka

dp; you know sanskar I did a mistake by joining you in engineering bcoz ur much better for army or navy as ur highly specialize in jumping walls and night works are high for you then day time

sanskar; no dad I was not jumping walls now

dp "come with me " dp dragged sanskar to sanskar room and made him sit on couch and placed a scotch bottle in front of him

sanskar; (shocked) wt this dad

dp; I know you had spoiled so better you spoil urself in ur room only

sanskar; no dad I stopped drinking

DP; not needed to lie for me..... ur life ur wish (sanskar gave a blank expression)

dp; ok sanskar you know ur mom cried last night as you did not come home so, I arranged everything for you in ur home onlyy

"wt ever you want you can get here ramu kaka will take care of it so plz be in home properly "
and don't spoil others with your company "

dp left sanskar room

sanskar tried to understand wt dp said but as usual, he heard dp words and left them from another ear

After sometime he peeped out of room ND checked the mm nd left towards terrace nd entered into Mitra mansion nd moved towards swara too its not locked do he peeped into room nd silently looked door nd moved towards swara who is sleeping by hugging her teddy firmly

Sanskar:( himself) wah swara I was waiting for you there here ur sleeping like princess wahh

That's ok I will take my revenge tomorrow now you sleep, my sweetheart

Sanskar kissed her forehead nd placed the bed sheet on her whereas swara smiling in sleep as she felt it dream

Sanskar: Wah how lucky the teddy anyway after our marriage I will gain that place sry teddy enjoy now only

He stated at her for hr nd left to his room ND sleep peacefully

Next day

Swara has seen his missed calls nd msgs " Ho no Ho I forgot this nd slept chi swara ur stupid how you slept by forgetting sanskar ha ur selfish swara "

Swara mesgged sanskar " I am sry "

She send more than 100 msgs but no response from sanskar

swara left to office to meet sanskar

office mrg10am

Sanskar : Is having fun in office with office staff that to lady staff

Swara entered office ND she is shocked to see sanskar rounded with lot of girls they are talking laughing with sanskar

By seeing swara all the ppl about to move towards their seats but sanskar stopped them

Saskar: Hey y ur scared I was director of this company, so u can do wt I say

Swara gave an angry look and signed sanskar to come to cabin but sanskar did not react

Swara after a while came back again for sanskar but sanskar is still doing it

Swara burst out in angry " may be he is director but company is giving salaries so get back to work if u want ur job or else get out "

Everyone left in shock

Swara left to her cabin nd sanskar seen her angry so he went towards her cabin to see her expression but to his shock swara dragged him into cabin by holding his tie

Sanskar: Hey wt ur doing leave the tie I will die

Swara: (angry she pinned him to cabin door ) Acha u stupid idiot how dare you to avoid me ahh

Sanskar: Acha wt about you u too did same last ngt na

Swara: Woh I am sorry I slept, unfortunately, soo

Sanskar: Ho really I won't forgive you now

Swara:( puppy face) I am so sorry maph Karo Mujhe plz

Sanskar: Acha then say me sorry in my way

Swara:( confused) wt way ahh

Sanskar( teasingly) I want kiss ok

Swara: Moved back wt no way I won't

Sanskar: Acha you won't give ah ok

Sanskar shouted " arey Priya, Riya, kriya,

surove,purvi,manvi,navi

swara; (shocked) who are they

sanskar; (smirking smile ) ur staff only but my fans

Swara:( shocked) oh my god in my office these many girls are thereeee

screen freezes

******to be continued *********

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