TU MERI MANNAT (slow editing...

By Bhanumitra

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TU MERI MANNAT~ prologue
silence ~episode-1
tit for tat ~ Part 2
TU MERI MANNAT Part 3
TU MERI MANNAT Part 4
confession - Part 5
PARTY FUN ~ Part 6
hangover- Part 7
a prank Part 8
First failure- Part 9
Resignation ~ Part 10
Should I Trust him ? ~ Part 11
what a person ?...Part 12
OUR B'DAY NIGHT~ Part 13
JEALOUS WAR ~ Part 14
My kingdom my rules ~ Part 15
jealous war ~ Part 16
plan back fire ~ Part 17
pay back game... Part 18
Naughty fight's ~Part 19
Hidden love ~ Part 20
A long Drive ~Part 21
kerala trip PART -22
who is jealous ? Part 23
jealous war Part 24
struck b/w two Part 25
poor sanskar Part 26
FIRST KISS ~Part 27
Bachelor party ~ Part 28
A walk in a jungle part-29
Shock 1- Part 30
Shock-2--part-31
shock-3 Part 32
Misunderstandings(shock-4) - Part 33
sudden decision - Part 34
Manipulation nd break down - Part 35
An change over ~Part 36
A New start over Part 37
Tom & jerry war Part 38
A slap Part 39
Silly Bet ~ Part 41
sanskar's prank Part 42
A Perfect Date Part 43
a romantic date ~Part 44
realization ~ Part 45
best plan with fun ~ Part 46
prank on vamp ~ Part 47
a silly mistake ~ Part 48
Sathvik bhaiyya Part 49
twist to change Part 50
funny confession ~ Part 51
a kiss changed everything ~Part 52
pain nd understanding Part 53
caring nd changing ~ Part 54
TRUST ~ Part 55
public confession Part 56
confessions ~ Part 57
Teaser
real vamp ~ 58
Trapped~Part 59
endless love ~ Part 60
saved ~Part 61
Fear ~Part 62
romantic prank ~Part 63
a thrilling day ~ Part 64
a romantic drive ~ Part 65
a grand proposal ~ Part 66
a romantic night ~ Part 67
horror prank ~ Part 68
engagement ~ Part 69
sangeet +mehandi = street run Part 70
a thrilling day ~ Part 71
grand wedding ~ Part 72
funny first night ~Part 73
vamp is back ~Part 74
suhgrat in prison 🙈🙈🙈 ~ 75
poison ~ Part 76
life or death ~ Part 77
Is it a true realization ? ~ Part 78
a romantic night on a boat 😉😉 ~ Part 79
Author note
New cover

confession and romance in rain~ Part 40

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By Bhanumitra

SCENE1,

 10.30PM ,ROAD

Sanskar held her shoulders and shouted "what the hell wrong with you swara why you came her I said you go away but why you stood her You hate me right ..and it would be best if I leave you can I at least live in peace .. y the hell are you following me dammit

why swara why you are here I was useless na why your wasting your time on mee why swara why

Swara; ( she clutched his shirt collar and said) shouted out in tears bcoz I love you sanskar " I LOVE YOU SANSKAR "

(BG SONG -Mujhe Ishq Se song from yaariyan movie)

Mujhe ishq se rehna tha door

Gham iske bade jo hain mash'hoor

Par ye dil hai ki bilkul mana nahi

Mujhe kheench kar dekho le aaya wahin

Jahaan ishq hai, bas ishq hai

Haan ishq hai, bas ishq hai

Yaariyan ve. Yaariyan ve.

(sanskar hugged her both are in happy tears, there tears covered by rain drops )

SANSKAR; but on our bday ngt you said we won't love each other we just feel so, nd you said you hate me

swara; raised her head and answered ) no sanskar i misunderstood you i felt that you won't trust me ur over possessive but I realised it when I saw you close to Kavitha or Priya I felt like losing my life .i know I can't live without you but still I tried but could not bear it, your the reason for my comeback, not raglak .i know we both have same feelings same jealous, same pain I am sorry for misunderstanding you (she hugged him in tears )

sanskar; (broken the hug )oh you really feeling jealous for mee so your caring me this much so you came back to save me from other girls ah , that it ah

swara; ( got angry she clutched his shirt collar and shouted ) no u stupid you know why I bothered bcoz pyar karti hoon mein apse suna apne .... ( do you heard ) I love you .. I love you sanskar .. I love you ... I truly truly love you ..... I can't live without you sanskar

I cant I cant .... live without you .. plz don't avoid me.

I was trying to tell you from a long time but you not even trying to listen) .. plzz don't avoid me ..sanskar I love YOU ...

( sanskar just kept on staring at swara. he was shocked nd happy to hear these words from her it was not expected from her he was shocked to react ..

sanskar hugged her I love you swara

sanskar leave his grip from her waist and cupped her cheeks and lend towards her he kissed her forehead and then he look in her eyes and said in a low tone

sanskar :(pulled back from the hug and cupped her cheeks) swara .... You don't know how much happy I am today swara....( (he nuzzled her nose by his)

swara: really ????

sanskar: ( pressing her over him) really .. really .. you have no idea .... How much I was dying for this day ...)

swara: awwee .. so you want me to confess my love toward you haan?

sanskar ;(teasingly ) ho swara you did so late to come back in this gap I love some other girl

swara; (winking smile placed her hands around his neck) acha who is the unlucky girl to bear you, only I can bear you

sanskar; she is so lucky she said to me "she is my company old auditor swara Mitra "

swara; ho I too loved a person my company director sanskar he is not the attitude wala sanskar Maheshwari .i loved the one who used to do naughty things to irritate me .who fights with me for silly reasons but kya karu my sanskar nowadays turned boring like sanskar Maheshwari (she plucked his cheeks )

Sanskar: Ha I love you swara I love you "TU MERI MANNAT HAI SWARA " how can I stay away from you ( he nuzzled her nose by his')

BG SONG CONTINUES

Iss dard-e-dil ki sifaarish

Ab kar de koi yahaan

Ke mil jaaye ise woh baarish

Jo bhiga de poori tarah (x2)

when swara just lend toward him and snake her arms around his neck and hug him tightly ..... sanskar just not able to blink his eyes he just wrap his hand around his back and they remained like that

Tu jo mila to zindagi hai badli

Main poori nayi ho gayi

Hai be-asar duniya ki baatein badi

Ab teri sunu main sadaa

sanskar pulled back from the hug and look at her in her eyes and just shake his head and in a questioning look swara smiled and nodded a yes sanskar smiled and pick her up by grabbing her through waist and swing her up in the air and circled by taking her in his arms while swara smiled and clutched his shirt tightly .

Hmm..

Milne ko tujhse bahaane karun

Tu muskuraye wajah main banun

Roz bitana saath mein tere

Saara din mera

Iss dard-e-dil ki sifaarish

Ab kar de koi yahaan

Ke mil jaaye ise woh baarish

Jo bhiga de poori tarah (x2)

sanskar put her down and looked in her eyes still grabbing her waist and pulling close toward him and give a cute smirk and looked at swara who was just clutching his shirt collar and was looking in his eyes

sanskar : swara... can I kiss you again now ? ( he said raising his eyebrow and pulling her close to him)

swara give a sweet look to her and hit him on his chest lightly

Sanskar leaned towards swara to kiss but at nick of sec swara pushed him back which shocked sanskar

sanskar shouted "swara where your going "

Swara left towards her car sanskar shouted" swara swara "

Swara took a mint from her wallet nd moved towards sanskar with smirk

Sanskar gave a surprised look

Swara :woh promise me that you won't drink again (Sanskar nodded his head in both yes ND no )

"sanskar I won't like alcohol smell nd all promise me you won't drink again "

sanskar; (nodded his head ) ok pakka i won't drink again bcoz my Devdas life ko end and love life ka start Hua nah

Swara " did you remember sanskar on that night you said while doing new think we need to do this so she opened in and placed the mint in his mouth sanskar while chewing it he gave a naughty smile

sanskar pulled swara towards him by waist swara is blushing hard she whispered

"sanskar we are on road and its raining heavily too so let us go home now

sanskar ;(smiles naughtily) no road is not a gud place for romance but rain is the best time for love and romance and anyway (he pulled her more close) its a lonely road only you and me , this clouds for a gud shower of our love

swara blushes hard

BG SONG Salamat song -sarbjit

Chahe main rahoon jahan mein

Chahe tu na rahe

Tere mere pyar ki umar salamat rahe

Chahe yeh zameen, yeh aasmaan

Rahe na rahe

Tere mere pyar ki umar salamat rahe

O... mmm...

sanskar leans towards swara and swara closes her eyes in positive sign about but there nose got hitted to each other and swara opens her eyes and laughs both smiles at this and sanskar is lost in her smile he slowly tucked her wet hair nd kissed her earlobe by caressing her cheeks

Darr hai tujhe main kho na doon

Mile jo Khuda toh bol doon

Main do jahan ka kya karoon

Tu bata... o..

sanskar grabbed swara by her waist nd captured her lips with his while his hands are roaming on swara's back by pulling her close while swara reciprocated it while her hands are roaming in his hair swara was enjoying this its a 1st kiss with lots of love nd pleasure

its a passionate one

Tu jo mere paas hai

Mujhko na koi pyaas hai

Meri muqammal ho gayi har duaa..

Chahe mere jism mein

Yeh jaan rahe na rahe

Tere mere pyar ki umar salamat rahe

after a long kiss swara pushed sanskar out of breath

swara ;(breathing heavily ) arey i cant i need a break

sanskar; (breathing heavily but on control ) you said you can bear me then come on (he again grabbed her into a kiss )

sanskar bitten her lower lip which made swara morn in pain " he sucked the lower lip nd kissed her soft on her lips after a long passionate kiss he left her as he is also out of breath

swasan took a deep breath while swara is blushing hard she pushed him nd left towards her car and meanwhile sanskar got a call it is lucky

lucky ; hello bhai where your it 11.30pm

sanskar; lost in swara kiss ) in heaven

lucky; heaven where is the place in Mumbai

sanskar; (came in sense ) it is my fav place ok i am coming home don't close poolside door nd don't wait too

lucky; ok where is swara her ph is off

sanskar; don't worry we both are together

lucky;(teasingly) ok it means both love birds are roaming or romancing in the rain

sanskar; (blushes) bhai it is not fair u and rags are together 24/7 did I asked you anything about wt ur doing no na

lucky; oh ok ok cool come fast and drive slow (ended the call )

sanskar got into car driving seat while swara sat beside him still shivering due to cold sanskar got done of his car

swara; where you going now let us go home

sanskar; one minute I will (he left towards his car nd got his blazer from his car nd covered swara )

swara; I love you sanskar

sanskar; I love you too

swara; I love you three

sanskar; my love is infinite nd kissed her forehead nd drove her to mm

***to be continued*****

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