TU MERI MANNAT (slow editing...

De Bhanumitra

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a cute romantic love story #183 ranked on 24/6/17 #221 ranked on 6/2/17 #351 ranked on 2/1/17 #415 r... Mai multe

TU MERI MANNAT~ prologue
silence ~episode-1
tit for tat ~ Part 2
TU MERI MANNAT Part 3
TU MERI MANNAT Part 4
confession - Part 5
PARTY FUN ~ Part 6
hangover- Part 7
a prank Part 8
First failure- Part 9
Resignation ~ Part 10
Should I Trust him ? ~ Part 11
what a person ?...Part 12
OUR B'DAY NIGHT~ Part 13
JEALOUS WAR ~ Part 14
My kingdom my rules ~ Part 15
jealous war ~ Part 16
plan back fire ~ Part 17
pay back game... Part 18
Naughty fight's ~Part 19
Hidden love ~ Part 20
A long Drive ~Part 21
kerala trip PART -22
who is jealous ? Part 23
jealous war Part 24
struck b/w two Part 25
poor sanskar Part 26
FIRST KISS ~Part 27
Bachelor party ~ Part 28
A walk in a jungle part-29
Shock 1- Part 30
Shock-2--part-31
shock-3 Part 32
Misunderstandings(shock-4) - Part 33
sudden decision - Part 34
An change over ~Part 36
A New start over Part 37
Tom & jerry war Part 38
A slap Part 39
confession and romance in rain~ Part 40
Silly Bet ~ Part 41
sanskar's prank Part 42
A Perfect Date Part 43
a romantic date ~Part 44
realization ~ Part 45
best plan with fun ~ Part 46
prank on vamp ~ Part 47
a silly mistake ~ Part 48
Sathvik bhaiyya Part 49
twist to change Part 50
funny confession ~ Part 51
a kiss changed everything ~Part 52
pain nd understanding Part 53
caring nd changing ~ Part 54
TRUST ~ Part 55
public confession Part 56
confessions ~ Part 57
Teaser
real vamp ~ 58
Trapped~Part 59
endless love ~ Part 60
saved ~Part 61
Fear ~Part 62
romantic prank ~Part 63
a thrilling day ~ Part 64
a romantic drive ~ Part 65
a grand proposal ~ Part 66
a romantic night ~ Part 67
horror prank ~ Part 68
engagement ~ Part 69
sangeet +mehandi = street run Part 70
a thrilling day ~ Part 71
grand wedding ~ Part 72
funny first night ~Part 73
vamp is back ~Part 74
suhgrat in prison 🙈🙈🙈 ~ 75
poison ~ Part 76
life or death ~ Part 77
Is it a true realization ? ~ Part 78
a romantic night on a boat 😉😉 ~ Part 79
Author note
New cover

Manipulation nd break down - Part 35

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scene 1, 10pm

lucky is searching for sanskar to say about swara sudden London trip
he gets a call from an unknown number

Person; hello a car belong to s nd s group had met with an accident the person in car is seriously injured

Lucky; (shocked ) wt where nd when

Person; said the address (lucky rushed )

scene2, swara room

swara is packing her bag nd ragini came in hurry to stop swara

Ragini; swara plz y ur leaving to London all of sudden

swara; no I had decided earlier only but now I got a huge opportunity now so its urgent to leave

Ragini; (seen her tears ) are u fine swara?

swara; (cleared her tears) ha I am fine plz don't ask any questions let me goo

Ragini; no, answer me swara even from mrg I did not find sanskar too its ur bday but u both are in their own worlds, now this shock

swara; y ur asking me about him I don't know anything, nothing happened b/w as

Ragini; (understood that they had a fight ) am I asked you that "wt happened b/w u nd sanskar ?"

swara; took the bag nd about to leave

Ragini; (stood in middle ) it means you both fought again

swara; see rags I was not interested in stupid conversations it is my flight time so let me go

Ragini; (held her shoulders) look at me swara

swara; (downed her eyes ) rags plz I can't answer you plz let me go plz don't make it more hard to mee

Ragini;(hugged her ) warm u know "ur the best one for sanskar you both are born to be one "

"u never shared ur pain with mee u always hid it
remember one thing I was here to help you nd support you always".

swara;(hugged her back nd cried)( in mind ) I know you love me so much di so I can't show my pain to anyone bcoz it hurts you all too, so I was running away

Ragini; swaraaaa say me na plz

swara; (hid her tears nd broken the hug ) no di ntg like that take care of mom nd dad

Ragini; swara plz come back soon

Swara; gave a smile nd left to hall where sumi,shekhar,dp nd ap are waiting she took blessing from everyone

Dp; swara shall we to come to drop you to the airport

swara; no uncle I will manage

scene3,airport 11.30pm

swara nd Shekhar left to airport swara is restless her heart is saying don't go but her brain had fixed to go, she is hanging in thoughts nd she is feeling the pain of losing sanskar on that second

Another side lucky reached Sankar,

sanskar is full of blood on the road his car had been crushed into pics he had fallen unconscious nd blood is flowing like a river from his head

lucky checked the pulse rate of his heart nd did necessary first aid by stopping blood flow before reaching the hospital

11.45pm, they reached hospital

ICU, lucky is very nervous he did lot of surgeries but now his hands are shivering he called Ragini nd informed the matter nd ragini in shock rushed to raglak hospital

both families too rushed to the hospital

12.00am, airport sathvik arrived to meet swara nd Shekhar

Shekhar is speaking in ph with someone from last 20

sathvik; hi swara do u really wanna goo

swara; hi yes I need to go

Sathvik; ok its late go get ur boarding pass

swara; (shocked to see his hurry ) ha dad is coming I will go

Shekhar; beta I made ur arrangements in London too here is number feed in ur phone

swara; (she broke her phone na in mrg) oh no dad I lost my ph

Shekhar; wt y cant you say before how u will manage without ph u better have my ph

sathvik; uncle its ok I brought new ph for her (he gave a b=gift box to swara)

Shekhar; call me as you reach London ( kissed her on forehead )

swara;(hugged Shekhar ) take care papa love you

sathvik; bye swara comeback soon ( he gave a side hug )

swara; bye sathvik nd I am sorry if I had hurted you from sanskar too
sanskar is really gud but he has short temper plz take care of him too

sathvik; ha ha I know, happy journey (swara left )

sathvik; uncle plz give ur ph i need to do an urgent call (shekhar handled his ph )

sathvik took the phone nd switched it off nd with an evil smile ' bye swara I will meet you soon nd ur sanskar I took more care now so he is in ICU "

other side raglak hospital ,12.20am
sanskar lost in the coma after surgery,ragini is repeatedly calling to swara nd Shekhar but both phones are switched off

Ragini;swara plz stop ur sanskar need you plz Bhagwan Ji plz make swara realize it

12.30am,swara flight

swara is restless flight is gonna take off

swara; (in mind ) y I was feeling that it is my wrong decision?
why was I feeling that something is wrong?
why was I feeling that my life is gonna end?

why swara why?

(cries ) swara how worthless your, you lost ur love,"sanskar don't love you just go away from his life too "

flight taken off swara left to London

shekhar is waiting in the car for sathvik

sathvik switched on ph nd gave to Shekhar innocently

as soon as the ph is on
ragini called him nd informed about sanskar accident

shekhar; (shocked ) wt how, swara had left already

Ragini; wt (Ragini dropped the ph )

Shekhar nd sathvik rushed to the hospital

1.30am,raglak hospital

sanskar in coma raglak are observing him
both the families are crying all are confused by this all things just in one day two shocks

scene 4, London 8 pm

swara flight got landed nd she reached her flat

BG SONG; JUDAII SONG

Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye...
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
Laqeeran vich likh di judaai

(BY REMEMBERING  SANSKAR SHE CRIED BADLY BY SEEING HIS PHOTO )

Kho gaya, gum ho gaya
Waqt se churaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
Ho tera, woh mera
Saath nibhaaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..

(OTHER SIDE SANSKAR IN COMA THE TEARS ARE STILL ALIVE )
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni (x2)

she is tired of crying so fallen asleep without opening the phone

Another side,sathvik in his room

sathvik moved towards sanskar nd swara photo with an evil smile he sat on the bed

sathvik; (took the bracelet from his pocket its sanskar's which is gifted by swara ) sanskar ur everything is mine now, you lost swara

***********flash back ******
8.30pm night

sanskar in the club full on drunken he got a call from unknown

unknown; hello mr. Maheshwari ur love is gonna leave this country

sanskar; wt does it mean

Unknown; come to my place u will know (he said an address )

sanskar rushed to said address he is driving rash he about to reach the address but suddenly a huge truck hit his car his car bounced nd hit a tree nd he fallen out of the car unconscious

a person in red shirt blue jeans got down from another door of truck nd came towards sanskar

sanskar Maheshwari I am sorry to kill you but plz die once for sathvik Varma plz (shock -6)

yes its sathvik who called sanskar nd tried to kill him

sathvik with an evil smile checked his pulse " oh no ur strong ur still alive let me finish you (he dragged his bracelet of swara nd took the revolver to shoot but he heard a sound of the car so he lets him nd run away innocently towards the airport

*******flashback ends *****

sathvik; ( to sanskar photo with an evil smile ) you love swara and I want swara but she loves you,
so she said she gonna leave too London
how can I let her go so, I decided to kill you at least ur death will stop her but ur alive my bad luck
'if she know about ur accident she will forget everything nd come running to you , but I won't let u be one so,i well-planned nd gave a send off to her

now you see sanskar how I will create a rift b/w you nd swara

gud ngt sweetheart I will come to London soon 'u nd me '

screen freezes

************ to be continued ********

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