TU MERI MANNAT (slow editing...

By Bhanumitra

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TU MERI MANNAT~ prologue
silence ~episode-1
tit for tat ~ Part 2
TU MERI MANNAT Part 3
TU MERI MANNAT Part 4
confession - Part 5
PARTY FUN ~ Part 6
hangover- Part 7
a prank Part 8
First failure- Part 9
Resignation ~ Part 10
Should I Trust him ? ~ Part 11
what a person ?...Part 12
OUR B'DAY NIGHT~ Part 13
JEALOUS WAR ~ Part 14
My kingdom my rules ~ Part 15
jealous war ~ Part 16
plan back fire ~ Part 17
pay back game... Part 18
Naughty fight's ~Part 19
Hidden love ~ Part 20
A long Drive ~Part 21
kerala trip PART -22
who is jealous ? Part 23
jealous war Part 24
struck b/w two Part 25
poor sanskar Part 26
FIRST KISS ~Part 27
Bachelor party ~ Part 28
A walk in a jungle part-29
Shock 1- Part 30
Shock-2--part-31
shock-3 Part 32
sudden decision - Part 34
Manipulation nd break down - Part 35
An change over ~Part 36
A New start over Part 37
Tom & jerry war Part 38
A slap Part 39
confession and romance in rain~ Part 40
Silly Bet ~ Part 41
sanskar's prank Part 42
A Perfect Date Part 43
a romantic date ~Part 44
realization ~ Part 45
best plan with fun ~ Part 46
prank on vamp ~ Part 47
a silly mistake ~ Part 48
Sathvik bhaiyya Part 49
twist to change Part 50
funny confession ~ Part 51
a kiss changed everything ~Part 52
pain nd understanding Part 53
caring nd changing ~ Part 54
TRUST ~ Part 55
public confession Part 56
confessions ~ Part 57
Teaser
real vamp ~ 58
Trapped~Part 59
endless love ~ Part 60
saved ~Part 61
Fear ~Part 62
romantic prank ~Part 63
a thrilling day ~ Part 64
a romantic drive ~ Part 65
a grand proposal ~ Part 66
a romantic night ~ Part 67
horror prank ~ Part 68
engagement ~ Part 69
sangeet +mehandi = street run Part 70
a thrilling day ~ Part 71
grand wedding ~ Part 72
funny first night ~Part 73
vamp is back ~Part 74
suhgrat in prison 🙈🙈🙈 ~ 75
poison ~ Part 76
life or death ~ Part 77
Is it a true realization ? ~ Part 78
a romantic night on a boat 😉😉 ~ Part 79
Author note
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Misunderstandings(shock-4) - Part 33

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By Bhanumitra

******EPISODE starts *******

SWARA ROOM,1 AM

Sathvik on ph

swara; sathvik wts this

sathvik; ur so called lv he won't trust you so I proved you he had done this so he slapped me

Swara; wt

Sathvik ; swara trust me he won't trust you think twice before you decide he won't deserve you (SHOCK-3 )

swara slipped the ph on the floor in shock felt on floor composed herself

Swara;(to herself) no swara not again

'he is ur sanskar , he can't do it with you ... u have to talk nd sort out it be strong swara

he is ur lv

Another side,sanskar

ragging in angry he got out from car nd entered Mitra mansion from poolside door walking towards swara room

with a lot of angry he is out of sense he knocked swara door

swara cleared her tears and opened the door nd came out

swara; sanskarrrrr youu

Sanskar; (doesn't listen to anything he dragged her out

swara; sanskar where your taking me stop (totally confused and scared)

sanskar still not responding

swara; (trying to loosen his grip on her hand ) Sankar plz stopp

sanskar dragged her onto the terrace

note; the terrace is of two sides which are separated by small room in middle up to half ------swara made her arrangements on other side unaware to sanskar )

sanskar locked the door of steps and pinned swara to the wall with a huge force he held her wrist her bangles broken sanskar had no feeling of sad he is so angry

swara; (in pain trying to move ) sanskar its paining

sanskar ; (gave an angry look ) u gave more to mee it's paining for mee

swara; sanskar plz listen to me

sanskar( pressed her on the wall ) shuuu u said a lot,u did a lot now it's my turn I will say u listen u know something I love you madly ..  I don't like anyone touching you or even close to you

swara; (scared to see his angry ) sanskar-r-r

sanskar ;(drunken ) wt u will say,u trust that sathvik nahmm.  he is great for you, he is smart, responsible, double rich then mee and highly qualified

swara; (feeling the pain of his grip ) no sanskar

sanskar; chupp not a word I was a fool always kept on listening to you...  I wascdying for you but u don't care

swara; watt ..   I care sanskar (she yelled while pushed him)

Sanskar; (held her shoulders tight ) acha then why u always think I am wrong always

swara; (tried to push him ) no sanskar ur not in the sense we will talk later just go and sleep

sanskar; (dragged her and twisted her hand to her back) I was on the right path now answer me

swara; ( in pain ) sanskar its paining plz leave

sanskar; oh it's paining for you when I hold you, but when that sathvik is close to u, you feel gud and comfortable am I right

swara; (tears roll from her eyes ) no sanskar he is just a frnd

sanskar ; acha really then wt I am to you

swara; (shocked with sudden reaction ) ur my life sanskar

sanskar; (smirk smile ) oh ur life, wow really I think its a joke

swara;(held him ) it's true sanskar ur my life it's not a joking its serious

sanskar; (he is out of sense and unstable ) oh gud it's serious na , now listen shall I kiss you

swara was shocked she couldn't react anything but in a second

sanskar pulled her closer and leaned towards her to kiss but swara felt uncomfortable as he is so drunken not even in sense she pushed him with a force and sanskar fallen on the ground

sanskar; (got up and moved towards her ) ho swara you don't let me kiss you... but u allow that sathvik nah... if he do

swara was shocked tears rolled out of her eyes to hear such thing from him stood blankly)

sanskar; held her towards him ) answer me swara u hugged him in front of everyone and y can't he kiss you in my absence (shock-4)

swara completely broken by this words she felt disgusting by his words

sanskar; answer me swara ur quite it means its right nah

swara; (pushed him gave a tight slap ) how can you speak like this sanskar

sanskar; (held her in angry )u made me speak like that swara

swara; (pushed him back ) how can you talk so cheap sanskar, this is the love you have

do you know wt love is -it's not the romance or gifts and candle light dinners

the love is the trust on each other, the understanding b/w them

sanskar; (laughed out loud like mad ) wah swara wah,

ur talking about trust wt a joke miss.swara Mitra

"do u trusted me when I said about Kavitha, how many days I begged you to trust me but you did not na "

when you didn't trust me then how ur asking me now to trust

swara; yes ur right i haven't trusted you bcoz on that night everything made me blind even Kavitha said it so I had not trusted you

it's a big mistake of my life but later I trusted you blindly still now

even sathvik said me ur the wrong ur a rogue but still, I felt my love is true ur the one for mee

"I don't want to break you so, I always tried to clear our misunderstandings still now but you "

Sanskar; (cupped her face ) ho baby misunderstandings yes I misunderstood you .

you love mee na ..(moved back and shouted ) nooo u won't nah so you never answered me

swara; (felt irritated ) I had not confessed you bcoz I wanted to make it special bcoz I love you more than myself (dragged him to another side of the terrace where she made arrangements )

(she had made everything as per same of as there past bday she decorated everything with flowers and balloons and a table with food sanskar is shocked to see it )

sanskar; (about to fall but swara held him nd made him sit on a chair ) you did this for mee

swara ; about to answer but suddenly ph rings its sathvik ---ph is on the table in front of sanskar .swara about to cut the call but sanskar hit it on the floor (swara has two phones its office ph )

Another side,sathvik room

sathvik ; (evil smile ) wowww my plan worked so u had not attended my call swara 'happy bday swara nooo no happy breakup day swara "

sanskar;(got up in full on angry ) you love mee but this sathvik loves you wt the relation b/w u and sathvik.

in late ngt y, he is calling you

it's the second time I saw his call on ngt, I think you can't speak anything in daytime ah

swara; (thrown water on his face in crying tone she held his collar ) are you in sense you know wt ur asking mee

Sanskar;(angry held her shoulder ) ha I saw u both romancing in the parking lot

swara; (gave a tight slap ) chi sanskar how can you think like this

I accept sathvik love me but he never or ever did anything cheap you think

he always treated me as a good friend

he always supported me in our love

he even know that I love you so he wished to be the best

but ur are disgusting sanskar

sathvik is right u never trusted me or loved me u always wanted me that's it naa 'i hate you sanskar

I loved you its the biggest mistake of my life ' (she left the place while crying )

Sanskar; I hate you too swara one day you will know my value (he is full of frustration broke everything which swara made nd after few mins he fell unconscious )

swara kept on crying the whole ngt

scene3,mrg 7am

swara got up from the floor after losing a lot of tears got ready nd left to office by 8 am not even seen any of family member

9 am, terrace,

sanskar is woken up nd saw everything broken he held his head due to the pain he did not remember anything clearly wt he spoken in ngt he just know that swara slapped him (still in hangover )

got up but and from steps he directly he left to club

scene 4, swara office 10 am,

swara is crying badly by remembering sanskar words trying to get divert but it's hard to her bcoz the one who loved her is the one hurt her . her complete life turned down

sathvik entered in swara cabin

sathvik; swaraaaa gud mrg

swara; (cleared her tears nd tried to smile ) gud mrg sathvik

sathvik; (innocently ) are u fine swara

swara; ha I am we have meeting na preparing for it

sathvik; for a meeting? y ur crying

swara;( cried out badly )

sathvik; (placed his hand on swara cheeks ) swara wt happened y ur crying say me na I was ur friend na say mee

Swara; (hugged him nd cried badly ) u know sathvik wt sanskar said

sathvik; (hugged her back with an evil smile ) ha wt he said

swara; (still crying her words are not getting out of her sadness ) u nd me

sathvik ; swara cool don't cry swara, I was there na I will convince sanskar

swara; (crying badly ) no sathvik, I don't want him

sathvik; arey its small fight you are loving from childhood na u trust him too

swara; I trusted him but he won't have. I think we are not made for each other we don't love each other we just thought soo

sathvik;(smiles to himself) u love each other but I won't let you

screen freezes

*****to be continued********

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