TU MERI MANNAT (slow editing...

By Bhanumitra

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a cute romantic love story #183 ranked on 24/6/17 #221 ranked on 6/2/17 #351 ranked on 2/1/17 #415 r... More

TU MERI MANNAT~ prologue
silence ~episode-1
tit for tat ~ Part 2
TU MERI MANNAT Part 3
TU MERI MANNAT Part 4
confession - Part 5
PARTY FUN ~ Part 6
hangover- Part 7
a prank Part 8
First failure- Part 9
Resignation ~ Part 10
what a person ?...Part 12
OUR B'DAY NIGHT~ Part 13
JEALOUS WAR ~ Part 14
My kingdom my rules ~ Part 15
jealous war ~ Part 16
plan back fire ~ Part 17
pay back game... Part 18
Naughty fight's ~Part 19
Hidden love ~ Part 20
A long Drive ~Part 21
kerala trip PART -22
who is jealous ? Part 23
jealous war Part 24
struck b/w two Part 25
poor sanskar Part 26
FIRST KISS ~Part 27
Bachelor party ~ Part 28
A walk in a jungle part-29
Shock 1- Part 30
Shock-2--part-31
shock-3 Part 32
Misunderstandings(shock-4) - Part 33
sudden decision - Part 34
Manipulation nd break down - Part 35
An change over ~Part 36
A New start over Part 37
Tom & jerry war Part 38
A slap Part 39
confession and romance in rain~ Part 40
Silly Bet ~ Part 41
sanskar's prank Part 42
A Perfect Date Part 43
a romantic date ~Part 44
realization ~ Part 45
best plan with fun ~ Part 46
prank on vamp ~ Part 47
a silly mistake ~ Part 48
Sathvik bhaiyya Part 49
twist to change Part 50
funny confession ~ Part 51
a kiss changed everything ~Part 52
pain nd understanding Part 53
caring nd changing ~ Part 54
TRUST ~ Part 55
public confession Part 56
confessions ~ Part 57
Teaser
real vamp ~ 58
Trapped~Part 59
endless love ~ Part 60
saved ~Part 61
Fear ~Part 62
romantic prank ~Part 63
a thrilling day ~ Part 64
a romantic drive ~ Part 65
a grand proposal ~ Part 66
a romantic night ~ Part 67
horror prank ~ Part 68
engagement ~ Part 69
sangeet +mehandi = street run Part 70
a thrilling day ~ Part 71
grand wedding ~ Part 72
funny first night ~Part 73
vamp is back ~Part 74
suhgrat in prison 🙈🙈🙈 ~ 75
poison ~ Part 76
life or death ~ Part 77
Is it a true realization ? ~ Part 78
a romantic night on a boat 😉😉 ~ Part 79
Author note
New cover

Should I Trust him ? ~ Part 11

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By Bhanumitra

  ************episode starts*****

Sanskar; okay I will see... I challenge u, Miss.Swara I will make u realize my love in this month itself and in this week ...u will be under me ...in my control...mind it and 3days is enough to make u take back ur resignation

Swara; I will see how u will ( she left)

evg 6pm, Swara's room,

Swara went to her room and removed the cover on TV as its not been used from last 2yrs and she started watching tom and jerry cartoon

after an hour Ragini came to Swara's room and shock to see her

Ragini; Swara are u 5n ur watching tv that to cartoons again is it true

Swara; (surprised) y I should not watch tv or cartoon ha

Ragini; not like that u can but now ur 21 u can watch all movies also nah then why ur still left in cartoon it's boring

Swara; this Sanskar is showing all kind of movies to me in office ...I don't want them in home also

Ragini;(laughs)wat Sanskar, wat he did again ha say me, and y u resigned

Swara; he made me loose my tender rags I lost it's my life's 1st failure that too without my mistake and dad shouted on me without understanding so I left the job

Ragini;(shocked) wat u had failed... no way how it's possible and wat Sanskar did

Swara; (about to say but stopped) no rags I can't say it, let it bee but, u know he is so dangerous for girls

Ragini; what he did that much dangerously say me na

Swara; he is always trying to take advantage di I don't know wat he did on that ngt and how can u leave me with him the whole ngt

Ragini; u really want my answer

Swara; ha

Ragini;(she got up )wait a minute

Swara; where ur leaving

Ragini;(brought a pen drive ) this is video of that ngt in ur room

Swara; (shocked) what u kept a camera in that room Why

*******flashback******

party ngt, while Sanskar in washroom lucky had placed a camera in the room and, left later Sanskar came nd raglak left as per our plan they went out to very next room

12am

Lakshya; Ragini u kept a camera in there room don't u trust my brother

Ragini:(cups his face) no lucky I trust him a lot but our target is to prove this to Swara so we did it

Lakshya; really are u sure it will work

Ragini; ha it will u sleep the first 2mmrow we have to wake up 1st and should go to mm and get them clothes

Lakshya;(teasingly) y waste of time we can plan something na

Ragini; acha I had a shoe with me now, so sleep it's better to u

mrg by 8 they left to mm and by 9.40am they returned to farm house innocently

********flashback end*****

Ragini; I trust Sanskar a lot but I wanna prove u so, I had not watched this before only just for u

Swara; I don't want any proof let it be whatever I don't care and (she has thrown the pen drive on floor)

Ragini; as ur wish I don't force u

they both kept on watching Spiderman series meanwhile Ragini got a call it's lucky

lucky; rags come to poolside now

Ragini; are u mad its 10 and ur calling to poolside if anyone sees what they think... I won't

lucky; rags plz come na do one thing... I will bring Sanskar.. u get Swara then no one feels anything and anyway our families are busy in Siva Rathri pooja

Ragini; (thought awhile) ha OK done (cuts the call)

Sanskar's room,

lucky; Bhai will u help me now plz

Sanskar; wat help

lucky; woh actually I wanna meet rags u should come with mee

Sanskar;(hesitatingly) no I had work u goo yar

Lucky; plz come na our family may get doubt if we meet alone if u nd Swara are with as they will think we are just passing time

Sanskar:(excited) Swara is coming haaa ..then I will come let go

lucky:(teasingly) for Swara ur coming but  not for me

Sanskar; no lucky come we will go they may be waiting come fast

(both left to poolside by hiding from family but Annapurna found it but kept quite)

Swara's room,

Ragini; Swara plz come with me na ..I wanna meet lucky

Swara; no yar u go I had work

Ragini; wt work u had just watching spiderman come na plz for ur diii plzzzzzzz

Swaragini went to poolside found Sanlak

lucky took Ragini and sat on the bench and Swara and Sanskar had placed their legs in pool water and sat on the edge there is awkward silence b/w them

Sanskar; wt u decided are u coming to office 2mmrow its ur 1st day as my secretary.. ( he said with a smirk)

Swara; (nervous but confidently) ha..

Sanskar;(gives a chocolate) take it I had brought this for u

Swara; (she grabs it ...and remembers her childhood when she used to kiss him for giving a chocolate) Sanskarrrrrrrr

Sanskar; (surprised to hear his name such lovely) ha Swaraaa

Swara; can I ask u something u should say truth only

Sanskar; I always told truth to u.. but u only not trusting it

Swara; acha Sanskar and in mrg u played a prank with me na...all the things u told at that time are lies only( she questioned) 

Sanskar; noo really its beautiful ngt u did a lot

Swara;(shocked) if means u really saw everything ha

Sanskar; ur asking that ahh, ha I saw

Swara; (shouted)wt u saw Sanskar wt nd when

Sanskar;(smile)I had seen when u born Swara I was 2yrs old and I held ur little hand and kissed u

Swara; (took a breath) why u always make me irritate and shocked

Sanskar; bcoz I love you

Swara;(left quite ) stop the topic ( she murmured)

meanwhile, swasan and Raglak hear a door sound all the 4hides

in a corner, its Annapurna Sanskar Hug's Swara in process of covering her finally she left

Swara; don't take advantage of situation( yelled)

Sanskar;(got angry moved her T-shirt a side and bited her neck)

Swara;(in pain shouts ) ouchhhhh sanskarrrrrrrrrr

raglak sees this and shocked

Ragini;(closes lucky eyes with her hand ) Swara is right Sanskar is dangerous when... she is in sense

lucky; (removes her hand ) his brother is more than him(he kisses her cheeks)

Swara; (pushes him ) wat ur doing its paining

Sanskar; I had warned u not to use word of advantage that result is this

Swara;(got angry and she bitted his shoulder) now u got.. Even I have teeth ... I can bite

Sanskar;(held her both hands and folded back and once again bitten her near her nape by pulling her towards him whereas Swara is trying hard to get free (childish fight turned to romantic)

Swara get the grip and pushes him

Sanskar; now u say what u will do this time I had left ur mouth to shout if u repeat the same word again I will lock ur mouth, in the same way, I did now

Swara;(got angry and pushed him into the pool ) now u got my answer Mr.sanskar

Sanskar;( holds her leg and pulled her into the pool)

Swara; Sanskar plz leave me its soo cold stop it don't u dare to pull me in that cold water

Sanskar; no way (he pulls her in pool Swara had fallen on him)

********** to be continued********  

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