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Ali's POV:
Me hath me controllers pkray sofay pr betha hua tha r dosra controller Iraza k pass tha. Hum dono game khel Raye they r Hoori pass e bethi magazine k pages palat rhi thi. Rida kuch khanay ka intazaam krne k liye kitchen me thi. Ghar walay sb lawn me bethe they. N mera ab zyada tarr waqt yahin guzarta tha.
"Irtaza! Plz dur ho k betho. Muj pta h muj haranay ka tareeka dhoondh rahay ho." Mene usko ek hath se peechay kia. Hoori ek nazar hme dekh kr phir se smash me ghuss gai.
"Yeh dekho sb! Kya yaad kro ge kis sakhi se pala pra h" Rida ne lounge me enter hotay hue kaha. R hum dono ne dekha nhi k wo kya le kr ai. Game is waqt phnsi Hui thi. Concentration ki both zaroorat thi.
"Ohhh wowwww Ria! Chaa gai yar" hoori ki josh bhari awaz.
"Dekho sharafat se aa jao r kha lo warna hum dono kha len ge" Ria ne phir se kaha. "Ria thori der ruko bs do minute" Mene screen pr se nazren hathaye beghair kaha. "Ok! As u wish" Usne kaha r jo b lai thi wo khanay lgi. Abhi tou muj r Irtaza ko yh b nhi pta k wo lai kya h.
"Irtaza Ali hum akhri bar keh rahay" Hoori ne kaha. "Acha kon jeet raha h?" Ria ne poocha r Irtaza ne mun bnaya. Wo sofay pr se uthi. R screen k pass neechay floor cushions pr beth gai. R chup chaap game dekhne lgi. Hmari racing game chal rhi thi. Bs 2 checkpoints rehte they n me jeet jata. Jbkay Irtaza k I think 3 rehte they.
Bs last checkpoint tha. Finish line bilkul samnay thi. Jb achanak se screen black o gai. Yeh kya hua???
Jb achanak hmne Ria k hath me cable Dekhi. Ufffff!!
"Ria me jeetnay lga tha!" Mene controller sofay pr phenkte hue kaha. Irtaza aram se betha smile kr raha tha r Hoori ko pta e nhi tha k hua kya. Meri awaz ki waja se usne dekha. "Hen?? Black car tumhari thi? But jb mene dekha tha tumari blue thi" Wo pareshaan c boli. "New game thi yar!! Pichli wali stop o gai thi so humne new settings kr lin " Mene wazaye ghussay se kaha r wo sharminda o gai r neechay dekhne lgi. "But I thought k tum haar Raye o." Usne hlka sa sir upar kia. "Ku kya hua?" Hoor is duniya me wapis aa chuki thi r shayed use sari bat smjh nai ai thi.
"Ria ne Ali ki help krte krte muj jeeta dia" Irtaza ne hnste hue kaha r hum dono ghussay se use dekha jb k Hoor sofay or uchal pri. "Waqai!???" Usne khush hotay hue kaha r bhaag kr idhr ai n irtaza ko high five dia. "Ria! Hr waqt cheating nhi krni chahiye" hoor ne use kaha r wo floor cushions se uthi. "O shut up Hoori!" Usne kaha r usi sofay pr beth gai jis pr pehle bethi thi.
"Acha choro! Chlo ao yh khatay" Mene kaha r wo dono phir hnsne lge. Ab kya funny bat thi?
Chocolates, cookies, chips, sandwiches yh sb para hua tha. Hum teeno ne khana shuru kr dia jb k Ria abhi tk usi ghussay r sharmindagi se bethi rhi. "Ohooo Ria it was just a game. Idhr ao Jldi se r khao" Mene use bulaya. Usne ek nazar muj dekha r phir kaha "Sorry Ali! Muj nhi pta tha serious....." Abhi wo bol e rhi thi jb Irtaza ne kaha. "Oooooooo the famous jungli Billi is saying sorry!!!!!. Hoori keh do k yh ek dream h." Usne kaha r Ria ne us ki traf cushion uchala jo usne usi waqt catch kr lia. Hoori b hns pri.
"Kaha na Ria. Its ok" mene kaha r usne smile ki.
Wo b khanay k liye aa gai. "Chlo koi movie lgatay. Kesa?" Irtaza ne kaha r humne agree kia.
"Kon c movie?" Usne poocha. "Maze runner?" Ria ne kaha. "Han maze runner best h" Mene b kaha tou Irtaza smirk krtay hue kehne lga. "Hoori tume nhi lgta yh ek dosray ki baten boht jldi maan lete hen?" Oh man!!! "Irtaza had h yar" mene r ria ne akhatay kaha r wo dono hnsne lge. "Ab tou bolti b same o gai dono ki" Usne phir kaha r mene Ria ki traf dekha jo ek eyebrow uthaye un dono ko dekh rai thi.
"I think hum movie dekhne walay they" Ria ne kaha r Irtaza sofay pr se uth gya r USB cable k sath USB attach ki jo wahin pass pri Hui thi. Hum teeno b uthay r neechay floor cushions pr beth Gaye. Movie start o gai.
Movie dekhte hue baqi sb b aa Gaye. Hume betha dekh kr wo khamoshi se chlay Gaye.
Persun pehle roza tha. Ramzan k bad Eid or Eid k forun baad result. N phr..... Mene sir jhatka r movie dekhne lga.
Irtaza's POV:
"Eid Mubarak. Chand nazar aa gya." Me upar Ria k room me gya jahan wo dono thin r unhe Eid Mubarak kaha. "Hen??? Waqai?? Ohh wowww. Eid Mubarak" Un dono ne kaha r me wahin sofay pr beth gya.
"Abhi kahan Jana h hum ne" Hoori ne kaha r meri ankhen phel gain. "Q? Kaha Jana h?" Mene herani se poocha. "Zahir c baat h. Chand raat pr hm ghar tou nhi hun ge na" us ne kaha.
Seriously yh pagal he! "Tum pagal ho Hoori. Kahin nhi Jana" mene kaha r wo ghussay se uthi.
"Acha ab kahan ja rai ho?" Ria jo chup bethi thi bol uthi. "Me Eid pr beghair churiyun r mehndi k rahun GI??? Tume rehna h tou shoq se raho Ria" Usne kafi dukh se kaha. Shayed yh masla pehle ka chira hua tha Ufff!! Yeh lrkiyan b na!
"Tou jao na Raheem chacha k sath" Mene b maslay ka hal btaya. Wo ghussay se muj dekh kr kamray se chli gai. R jatay hue zor se drwaza band kia. Me r Ria ek dosray ko dekhne lge r phr me khamoshi se nechay dekhne lga.
"Ab kya kren?" Kafi der khamoshi k baad Ria ne poocha "Chlo utho chlen" mene b akhir hathyar daal diye. "Hmmm" wo b uthi r dressing table ki traf chli gai. "Tum use dekho, me tayar o jaon" mene sir hilaya r kamray se bahir aa gya.
Bahir Kafi khamoshi thi. Bari chachi kahin nazar na ain. Me chup chaap upar gya. Choti chachi mil gain. "Chachi Hoori kahan h?" Mene poocha r agay jo unho ne kaha usne muj heran kr dia. "Wo tou Noureen bhabhi r Salma bhabhi k sath market gai Hui h" Unho ne kaha r me heran sa unhe dekhne lga. "Abhi thori der pehle tou yahin thi. Han bs abhi abhi nikalay hen." Unho ne btaya r me sir hila kr wapis aa gya.
In lrkiyun ki azmat ko salaam! Do minute me market pohnch jati hen. Ek bechari Ria, neechay tyar o rhi h.
Neechay aa kr ria ka room door knock kia. "Aa jao." Under se usne kaha tou me under aa gya. Wo bilkul tyar samne bethi thi. "Chlen?" Usne poocha. "Zaroorat nhi. Miss hoori ja chuki hen mummy r salma chachi k sath" r us bechari pr tou jese K-2 gir gya. "Hennn?? Wah g wah. Nikal b gai?" Mene sir hilaya r usne sir jhatka. "Acha Chlo choro. Jb ayegi tou pochun GI." Wo bed pr beth gai. "Wese ab hoor naraz o gai. Use razi b krna h" mene kaha r usne hmmm kr dia. "Ali kl ayega na?" Usne laparwai se poocha. "Han yahin o ga. Namaz k baad yahin aa jayega" mene jwab de dia. Rida r ali ki dosti boht pki o gai thi in kuch maheeno me.
"Acha" usne jwab dia r me janay k liye uth gya.
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Eid ki subah uth kr naha kr or tyaar o kr hm Namaz prhne chlay Gaye. Ali wahan pehle se mojood tha. Namaz prhne r khutba sunne k baad hum ghar wapis aye. Ghar me tamaam aunties kitchen me kheer, sawaiyyan r pta nhi kya kya bna rhi thin. Jb b koi family gathering ya occasion hota tou sb hmaray portion me hotay they. Ali dad r chachus k sath bahir lawn me tha r muj abhi sorry bolna tha isliye under aa gya.
Hoori r Rida nazar nhi aa rhi thin. Kl b raat ko us se bat nhi Hui. Qk me jldi so gya tha.
Thori der bad mene use neechay atay hue dekha. Wo boht pyari lg rhi thi. Hmesha ki trah!! White shirt white trouser r purple duppata. Jo usne apnay galay me dala hua tha.
(Hoori's dress)
"Hi hoori! Eid Mubarak!" Muj dekhte e uska para char gya. "Mujhse bat na kro. Bhar me jao" wo ghusay se keh kr kitchen me chli gai. Koi kam nhi krna tha use. Bs samnay kitchen e Nazar aya tou ignore krne k liye wahan chli gai.
"Mummy! Soraj kahan se nikla h?" Mene jb hoori ko kheer me chamach hilatay hue dekha tou kaha. "Ku kya hua??" Unho ne herani se kaha. Shayed unho ne abhi note nhi kia tha. "Nai kuch nhi. Wo miracles ho raye na isliye" Mene hoor ki traf ishara krtay hue kaha. Wo abhi tk muj ignore kr rhi thi. "Hoori beta! Side pr ho jao. Hum kr len ge." Salma chachi ne use kaha r meri hnsi nikal gai jis pr usne ghussay se muj dekha.
"Apko kya lgta h chachi yeh apki help kranay ai h?? Hahahaha" muj phr hnsi aa gai. "Irtaza tang mat kro bechari ko or kitchen se bahir niklo." Mummy ne kaha r me heran o gya. Bechari!! "Ufffff.... Hoor or bechari! Yai sunna reh gya tha." Mene kaha r kitchen se bahir aa gya. Me janta tha k ab tk hoor ul ain ka para infinity cross kr gya o ga. But kuch nhi hota akhtay sorry bol dunga.
Aunties kitchen se bahir aa gain r tyaar honay apnay apnay rooms me b chli gain. Pr hoori bahir na ai. Me kafi der intazar krta raha r phir under kitchen me gya.
Wo kitchen me rkhi chair pr bethi Hui thi r us k samnay table pr cold drink ka glass tha. Me uskay peechay tha isliye use pta nhi chla. Me usi trah khamoshi se sath wali chair pr beth gya. Usne ek nazar muj dekha r phir glass utha lia. Me b khamoshi se betha uski hrkaat dekhta raha. Usne glass table pr wapis rkha r muj dekha. Mene hlka sa smile kia r usne ankhen ghumain r dosri traf mur gai.
"Yeh wali churiyan lain kl"mene uski purple churriyun ko dekh k kaha. akhir bat start kr di pr shayed ghalat bat start kr di. Wo ghussay se uthi. "Acha ruko na!" Wo wapis beth gai. "Eid walay din naraz nhi hotay. R dekho tum chli b tou gai thi na. Me tume dhondne aya tou pta chla k tum pehle e ja chuki ho" Mene kaha r usne ghussay se muj dekha.
"Jo b ho Mr. Irtaza." Usne kaha. "Wese hoori do minute me tum nikal gai. Kamal h. Record bn gya" "Tume pta h Irtaza, tume sb aa gya ek theek se sorry Kenna nhi aya" hoori ne ghussay se kaha r me koun sa peechay rehne wala tha. "Sb mtlb??" Mene b seedha US din ki traf ishara kia. "Mtlb k...... Whatever" wo yh keh kr uthi. Shayed mera mtlb smjh aa gya. "Acha yar sorry... Ainda hmesha tume shopping pr le kr jaonga. Promise..Jb tum kaho GI." Mene b boltay boltay kaha
R wo herani se muj Dekhne lgi. Achanak se ria pohnch ai. "Ooooo control hero!!" Ugghhh. Isko b abhi e Ana tha. "Hmesha shopping pr le jao ge hen!!" Hoori apni hnsi control krne ki koshish krne lgi r Ria mere samnay khari o gai. Hands fold kr k. "Ohooo... Wese tum yh ghar apnay sath kahan le k ja rai ho."
Mene uskay ajeeb o ghareeb ghar walay kapron ko dekh k kaha.
"Ohooo... Ghar nhi h. Inhe digital prints kehte hen" Shukar h bat change o gai thi.
(Ria's ghar walay kapray)
"Chlo bcho.Jldi jldi yh khao" Mummy under ain r seedha sawwaiyun k pass chli gain. Unho ne bowls me dalin r tray me rkh kr bahir chli gain. Hum teeno b bahir aa gaye.
Ria jldi se bahir nikli. Hm abhi peechay they. Ria jb gate se bahir lawn me gai tou Hoori peechay muri. "It's ok! But apna promise yad rkhna" usne kaha r hnsti Hui bahir chli gai. Ok!! That was unexpected. Mene sir jhatka r bahir nikal aya.
Ria's POV:
Ali r Irtaza ka result aa gya. 970 or 972 marks aye they. Ghar me sb khush khush they. Taya abbu ne un dono ko treat di. Sb outing pr Gaye. Boht maza aya.
Ali ek a is a insaan tha jisko meri life ki hr bat pta thi. R usne apnay promise k according unko solve krne ki koshish ki r agr nhi tou us se share krne k bad me apni problem bhool jati thi. Jese jese din guzar rahay they boht bura lg raha tha. Ab tou uskay janay ka time b final o gya. Irtaza ki waja se wo 11 august ja raha tha qk 10 August ko uski birthday thi. R irtaza ne kaha tha wo birthday uskay sath celebrate krega.
Mene uskay birthday k liye boht pehle se gift le rkha tha. Apna eid dress lene se b pehle.
Me bed pr se uthi. R sb se neechay wala locker khola. Us me ek box pack hua pra tha. Pictures thin, n perfume pra tha r ek fold hua paper. Us paper ko khol kr dekha. R phir smile kr k wapis fold kr dia. Locker me dal kr locker lock kr dia.
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8th August.
Me apnay room me thi jb mama ayin. Wo boht pareshaan lg rhi thin. "Kya hua mama?" Mene poocha. "Noureen bhabbi ki ammi ki tabiyat boht khrab h. Wo Balaaj bhai r Irtaza ja raye gaon aj. "Ohooo ALLAH kher e kre." Mene kaha r unho ne sir hilaya.
Hum dono phir neechay aa Gaye. Tayi Ammi r taya abbu se mila.
Irtaza nazar nhi aya. Poochne pr pta chla k wo ali se milne gya hua h. Ali b tou 11 ko ja raha tha.
Hoori b wahin thi. Thori der bad Irtaza wapis aa gya. Ali b us k sath tha. Wo dono Irtaza k room me they. Abhi niklne me time tha tou isliye Irtaza r wo dono last time akhtay they 😔.
Taqreeban 2:30 pr wo log ghar se nikal gaye.
Me b apnay room me wapis aa gai.
Ab mere pass ek boht special task tha. Mene laptop on kia. R Google me Islamabad k aas pass ki jghaen search kin. Ek jgah muj boht pasand ai. Kafi cute si thi. Mene uskay rastay hifz krne shuru kr diye. Ab last kam tha. R wo tha permission lena.
Me uth kr mom k room me ai. "Mama wo muj apsay ek bat krni h" mene sofay pr bethatay hue kaha. "Han bolo beta" unho ne pyar se kaha. "Wo me.. Persun... Perun ali ka birthday h r us se aglay din wo ja raha so uski birthday celebrate krni h" mene ahista ahista btaya. "Han tou persun ghar le Ana na" mene sir jhataka "Nai.. Kahin bahir... Margalla hills tk" mene hichkachatay hue kaha r wo smile krne lgin. "Ooo... Wah g" unho ne Heran hotay hue kaha. "Mama he is my friend" mene kaha tou wo hnsne lgin. "Srf friend?? Wese wo kafi acha lrka h. Soch lo" uggghhh "nai mama he is just friend" mene tng prte hue kaha r wo phir hnsne lgin. "Ok theek h me tumaray papa ko keh dun GI." Unho ne kaha
"Ohhhh Thankew mama you r the best"
Mene unko galay lga lia.
This will be your best birthday Mr.Talha Ali
Assalam o alaikum!
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