Overbooked

By Jeanie_Maines

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Overbooked is a collection of poems, flash fiction, and anything else I deem fit to share. Some poems elude t... More

P1. Portrait
P2. How-To
P3. Abecedarium
P4. Syllabic
P5. Villanelle
P6. Ekphrastic
P7. Ode
P8. Ghazal
P9. Persona
P10. Collaborative
Bonus: Short Story - Just Be Me

P11. Documentary

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By Jeanie_Maines

For the documentary poem, you take an event and document it into a poem. I didn't think I could do justice for anything that was reality so here's my take.

Tick Tock

There it is again.

That incessant ticking.

All night she hears the clock

but there’s nothing here.

Maybe a door.

She just lies there 

on the padded floor.

All the meds in the world

can’t help her.

She’s too far gone

lost in a haze.

Only one soul knows

what happened to her.

Only one and he’s gone too.

The doctors all stand 

overlooking the camera feed.

Judgmental.

Deciding to heal her misery.

The press would be happy 

to hear the verdict. The men nod.

The padded door opens.

One sharp needle

and it’s over.

The case was closed last week.

Found guilty. Murder.

The broken clock was enough.

The hour in hand.

The minute, heart,

The second, eye.

The man’s blood pooled 

On the carpet, blending in.

And there she was.

Hair frazzled, eyes wide.

Sitting, fingers tapping.

Counting. Ticking. 

Here is the REWRITE:

Tick Tock

There it is again.

That incessant ticking.

All night she hears the clock

but there’s nothing here.

Maybe a door.

She just lies there

on the padded surface.

Mind lost in a euphoric haze.

The doctors all stand

overlooking the camera feed.

Judgmental.

The press would be pleased

with the verdict. The men nod.

The padded door opens.

No fight, no fuss.

One sharp needle

it’s over.

The case was finalized.

Found guilty. Murder.

The broken clock was enough.

The hour in hand.

The minute, heart.

The second, eye.

The man’s blood pooled

On the carpet, blending in.

And there she was.

Hair frazzled, eyes wide.

Sitting, fingers tapping.

Counting. Ticking.

ALSO! I attempted an actual documentary:

Twelve Years

7:59 am

People sit aboard

just a normal flight.

Four planes from different

places with one destination:

Destruction.

8:46 am

Just a New York morning

Sipping coffee on the work commute

Flight 11 makes contact

the North Tower up in flames.

9:03 am

New York is in panic.

Flight 175 makes contact

the South Tower a fiery inferno.

America was under attack.

9:31 am

The president makes his address.

People listen in fright.

“Terrorism against our nation

will not stand.”

Flight 77 hits the Pentagon.

9:59 am

Burning for 56 minutes the

South Tower tumbles.

Gusts of ash and smoke

Flood the streets of NYC.

And Flight 93 misses its target

just a field shy of the capitol.

10:28am

The North Tower drops.

People are trapped.

Firefighters lost.

Hope a flimsy card house.

“Our very freedom came under attack.

Thousands of lives suddenly ended

by evil, despicable acts of terror.”

Twelve years later and

America stands strong. 

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