Sang hoon tere..

By bhabs24

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He was lonely breaking all ties with family.. She was lonely within her family... Fate makes them meet and th... More

Tough decision
The revelation
The Revelation. 2
Promises
A new beginning
The pain
Love knots
Love knots 2
Scattered relations
Broken hearts
U & Me
Tangle - untangle
Tangled untangled 2
Best friends forever 1
Best friends forever 2
Peek in
Untitled Part 18
Kisses and Caresse...
Realisations...
AE dil hai mushkil...
Teaser( not an update)
Devil in the heaven

The past

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By bhabs24

manvi sits in da car by resting her head in da back nd closes her eyes..

*****flashback*****

its

da tale of two frnds dat started off nearly 2 years back.. after

passing 12 board xams manvi too like all her frnds dreamt to study in a

clg but she forgot she cums frm a family with loys of restrictions.. at

first everyone sternly refused on her going to a clg but with lots of

tear shed frm her part nd finally with an assurance from mohit,s family

she was allowed to fulfill her dream..althoygh dat included an agreement

dat if only she agrees for her nd mohit's engagement at dat point of

time.. she finds no other option but to accept it...



mohit

is avinash's business partner, although he doesn't hav any interest on

manvi but wants to marry her for business interests, manvi on da other

hand nvr liked mohit never in her night mares to hav to accept it as she

was destined with dis relation only frm da age of 15, she nd da whole

family knew dat she has to tie her knot wit dis man.. mohit's family

were on da other hand liked manvi as a sweet girl nd were eager to bring

as dere bahu...



her schools were always selected by

his family nd so she always was send to girl's schools but in colleges

its not da family its da marks dat decides ur luck nd she was enrolled

toda best coed clg in mumbai.. manvi knew well wat a struggle it was for

her to b here so she decided dat she wont allow any circumstances to

form dat can stop her studies nd so she decided not to make frnds with

anyone neither girls nd forget abt boys.. being da chatter box all

through her life she turned to b da most silent girl in da class, wit

her behaviour nd her traditional outfits she remained unknown to da

whole class, whereas dere was a girl who being da most popular in da

college noticed her everyday nd wanted to b her frnd but it was never

possible as manvi nvr gave any response.. after da 1st internals manvi

came into everyone's knwldge after sscoring da top marks nd popular girl

came 2nd nd dis she took as an oppurtunity to speak to manvi..

o g-- hi manvi.. m nimmi.. tum to bohut studious ho yaar meri madad karogi pls...

m-- hi nimmi(hesitatingly) kaisi madat???

n- aree studies mein yaar..

m- par tumhare marks v to bohut ache aye hai..

n--

par tum jitna nai aaya na??? aur teacher ne v to kaha everyone consult

with manvi as her ans her perfect, toh fir kyun nai karogi meri madat???

m-- ok baba, ask me ..

n-- oh sab bad mei hoga pehle hum frnds to bann jae???

m--frnds??

n- ha.. so frnds??

m-- frnds.. nd both shakes hand..



thus

dere frndshp started witha handsake but little did dey den know dat

dere destinies r tied together ..dey both bcame da bestest of frnd nd

manvi returned to her bubbly self nd bcame equally popular with almost

everyone her frnd.

onceafter cls nimmi took manvi to her home for

lunch, dey reached her home nd manvi luvd da huge mansion at its first

sight. dey entered da mansion nd found virat rushing for da office as he

lft bhnd his presentation back home. he noticed nimmi came to her,

both shared a side hug nd virat kissed her forehead,

v- chutki aj jaldi kaise??

n-- kya bhai atleast mere frnds k samne to is nam se mat bulao..

v-- kyun isme kya kharabi hai?? eklauti to behen hai humari to fir??

n-- ok bhai aapjete mein haari...

manvi

was touched by da sibling's luv as she hardly shares such a healthy

rltn wit her siblings apart frm dabbo, it wud b wrong to say day she

was not luvd, she was indeed da apple of da eyes but was always

authorised upon by dem..

virat chuckles nd both moves towards manvi.

n-- bhai ye meri bst frnd manvi.. aur manvi ye virat bhiya.. both casually shakes hand.

v-- well chutki nd manvi tum dono lunch enjoy karo i hav to leave..

n-- bhai lunch to karlo??

v-- nai. m alredy too late, he bend a bit nd again kisses nimmi's forehead,

v-- take care chutki.. bye..

he leaves, it was da 1st day dey meet each other nd probably da last time before dat night which changed dere life foreever..

it

was now 2 months since nimmi got married nd manvi started to re enter

her cocoon, it was about 4 months dat she 1st nd last saw virat.. nimmi

nd rahul were childhood sweethrts, wih rahul's grandpa getting severely

ill dey hav to get married even b4 nimmi cmpltng her graduation,

although only 4 mnths was lft for xam, but she was vry happy to tie da

knots so noone hav to bang on her to take decision.. manvi cud however

cud not make to her marriage as was not allowed to nd nimmi understd her

problem...

now after 2 mnths of her marriage, clg for manvi was

jst da cls rum nd da library until dat day which brought a new light in

her life...

it was a bright day as usual but sumthing was cooking

in da dark pits of da city... with da evening advancing a gang war broke

in da city with unsocial men gatthering here nd dere nd da roods struck

wit traffic.. manvi's driver missed it out nd she hav to walk back all

to her house, with darkness it started raining nd she was totallt

drenched in da rain.. walking through da empty road for a girl nd dat

too wit wet clothes was da most rishky job to b done, but she has no

other way as she has to b in home b4 8pm





Veegi veegi raato mein aisi barsato mei kaisa lagta hai.....




aj rapat jaye to hume na uthaeoooo..




tip tip barsa paani.. pani me aag lagai..




chu kar bole na chuna mujhe...




chikni kamar mei tera mera dil phisal gaya darling ye jaadoo tera mujh pe chal gaya....



teasing

songs nd whistles were wat surrounded manvi in da silence of da night

nd she got much more terrified nd composed herself more nd covered her

all wet form wit her dupata...



?-- are kaha chali janeman?? raat v nashilii hai aur hum v, aja bas aj raat ki baat hai...



soon she was surrounded by 6 to 7 men who were advancing towards her with wrong intentions. Nd she started walking vry fast..



?--are aise halat mei akeli kaha jaogi hum subah chor denge..



suddenly

dey blocked her way but she sumhow managed to sneak away nd run for her

life nd respect when all of a sudden she crushed with a car.. since da

car was too slow she just fainted without getting much injuries.. as da

man from da car came out he cud recognise her from sumwhere as he cud

not exactly point out who she was.. he started shacking her to bring

back to conciousness but den cud come across da main reason behind her

wild run along da highwayas he saw da men chasing her he pulled her

inside da car nd drove away from dere escaping any sort of fight in such

a period of crisis.. as he reached home he picked her entered da rum nd

called for marium ma( a christian lady, governess of da vadera children

from dere childhood).. she immediately recognised da girl as manvi

nimmi's best frnd nd man remained in shock to know it as he knew so much

abt her as nimmi wud feed him wit manvi's story during meals along with

food but met her only once.. bth virat nd marium chkd on her nd found

out a terribly high temperatue, marium changed her dress from one of

nimmi's dress nd virat shifted her in nimmi's rum, in an hour dr came nd

asked to provide her with a whole night's sound sleep..




every

morning brings new hopes for her, da 1st beams of sun carry da message

of a new beginning everyday leaving behind all sweet nd sour memories...

but for manvi dis morning bought a lot many changes.. it changed her

life for every, her identity, her residence nd her reason to live.. she

opened her life to get da shock of her life as she woke in sumone else's

bedrum , though it seemed quite known but still a strangeness lied

dere, soon she was greeted by marium . Seeing her manvi relaxad a bit nd

heared da whole incidense of night.. just den virat entered nd asked

her well being nd confirms wheather its fine with her to return back

home now, she nods in positive nd virat takes da doctor's prescription

as proof for her family abt she being ill last night nd so she had to

spend da night in his home nd den starts for her journey back home as

its going to be tough to return home after being out for a night..



after

an hours ride finally dey stopped at da huge gate of "chaudhury villa",

da chaudhuries being constructors hav designed a huge mansion for

demselves although it was nothing compared to da vadera's.. dey entered

da main door shocking every worried eyes..



her trail of

thoughts or better to be said her drive in her past got haulted as da

car,s tyres made a sqeezing sound nd raju spoke out..



r-- memsahab aagaya..



manvi

snapped open her eyes to find da gates of chaudhury villa wich probably

she visited 6 months before wen dis same gate closed for her forever

but fixing a determined luk in her face she moved out of da car to enter

da gates of chaudhury villa which was once her resident.. as she walked

along da long driveway with flower gardens on both sides leading to da

main entrance of da mansion,, on da extreme left of da driveway dere

lies her favourite corner a swing in middle of da rose bushes, it was da

place she wud find her peace of mind nd serenity.. she walked a few

steps more nd dere on da rightside lies da iron chairs wit a glass table

in da middle ,it was da place for dere morning tea nd evening snacks.. a

few steps more nd dere was da mandir were radha krishna encraved out of

italian marble stood inside with fresh flowers at their feet nd a mogra

incense stick burnind with a thali filled wit laddu nd da diya still

burning as if da morning puja jst got over.. she entered da mandir nd

joined hands to pray for viren bhaiya nd her family.. but mhich

family???



manvi's pov--



hey radha k

manmohan shyam aap jald hi viren bhaiya ko thik kar do nai to mai is

bhoj ko le kar man hi man khuti rahungi.. hey radha krisna aapne humesha

mujh par kripa banai hai ab v banaye rakhna aur mere paribar ki raksha

karna.. kitni ajeeb baat hai na kanha ji aj se 6 mahine pehle jinko main

janti v nai thi aj unki salamati ki duya kar rai hun, aapne hum ladki

yo ki kismat hi ajeeb likhi hai ek taraf to 2 2 paribar diye par apna

kehne wala ek v na diya.. shadi huyi to maika ka sath chora par sasural v

utna apna na ho saka ki apna paye.. aur meri kismat to apne kuch jyada

hi ajeeb likhi.. bachpan se ab tak mai aapke duar mei apne gharwalo k

liye dua mangti aayi aur aphi ki darwar pe mera sath inse chuta aur

virat se joor gaya.. aj mai aise mukam pe hu ki kya mangu ye nai janti

agar apne sasuralwalo ki salamati chahti hu to apne maike walo k liye

saja mangni padegi aur agar in k liye mafi mangu to o unke liye na in

saafi hoo gi..par aj jo avinash bahiya ne kiya uske baad kya meri zindai

jaisi ab tak thi kya wosi hi rahegi?? in 6 mahino mei kitna kuch

badla.. mera pehchan mera bajood sab kuch.. aapne ek paribar cheena to

dusra de diya, par aj is do rahe par kyun khara kia prabhu?? kyun??

her eyes shifts towards da sindoor box nd she picks a bit nd fills her already filled maang..



yehi

o jagah hai yehi wo sindoor hai jisse pehli baar mera maang saja tha,wo

din jaha ek taraf ek bura sapna jaisa tha wohi mere fairy tale zindagi

ki suruwat thi.. virat ne aur us pariwar ne mujhe sab kuch dia.. pyar,

biswas, bharosha, sahara, atmabiswas, samaan par maine .. maine kya diya

main aj wo bajah ban gayi jis liye viren bhaiya apni zindagi se lad

rahe hai...






With

every step she took she was drowning in her memories, dose shaking

memories dat broked up all relations with dis house ndits members..

every thing seemed to b da same.. everyone is present nd was present

den.. everyeye scanning her now nd she was being scanned den.. past nd

present seemed intermingled in her life now.. once she walked out from

here rejected, helpless, thrown out but today she is determined, strong

nd is warmly accepted by her family, but she never meant dis family to b

"her family" now, now she is part of a different family who accepted

her whole heartedly nd she is here today for her family....



manvi's pov:



zindagi

kitni ajeeb hoti hai khash kar hum ladkiyo ki aj koi apna aur kal

padaya, par meri zindagi to sabse alag, ek pariwar se kya joori mera

pura bajoot hi badal gaya.. kash mai v or ladkio ki tarah mayka aur

sasural dono k pyar ki hakdar hoti... par mai ye sab kyun soch rai hoon ,

mujhe yeha jawab lena hai.. mere pariwar ka liye insaaf lena hai... aj

har takleef sehkar v, apne purane risto ko vulakar v viren bhaiya k liye

insaaf mangna hai.. avinash chaudhury ko uske anzam tak pohchana hai...

aj to ladkhara nai sakti, aj tujhe himmat karni hogi...




on

da other hand virat was finding her in da whole hospital but she was

nowhere to b seen, dis increased virat's tension , he tried her no

several times but no answer, finally he called her driver nd was more

than shock to know da details of her location.. he cudn't even guess wat

is cooking up in her brain.. why is she there??? virat was fighting

with his thoughts wen an idea popped up in his brain nd he decided dat

he himself shud go there to get his answers...




here

manvi finally entered da house shocking da hell out of everyone..

everyone stared at her as if she was an alein object.. neither manvi nor

anyone from da chaudhuries cud dare to speak first .. dey kept guessing

each other wen finally manvi opened her mouth..



m-- Mr. Avinash Chaudhury kya main aapse kuch pooch sakti hoon???



everyone more than shock by her approach, an avinash was a bit scared dat his deed wud b flashed before everyone...



a-- gudiya hum garden mei chalkar baat karte hai...

m--

na na na.. baat to yehi par hogi nd for ur kind information main yeha

Mrs. Manvi Vadera k haisiyaat se aayi hu so waise baat kare..

a-- are tu jitne v badi ho ja humare liye gudiya hi rehigi na..

m--

bah kya baat kehi hai.. jisdin mujhe bina kisi galti k is ghar se nikal

diya tha tab kaha gaya tha ab ka pyar, are ap logo ne to ek bar meri

baat tak nai suni ,chordia sarak par marne k liy, aur tor diye sare

riste mujhse.. sooo maine v tor diye aap se sare riste aj mujhe jawab

chahiye kyun kia aapne aisa?? kyun?? kyun?? kyun?? (she behaves over

excited)

a-- kya keh rai hai tu??

m-- aap ko samajh nai aa raha hai na..

she holds his collar.

Kyun mara viren bhaiya ko apne?? kya bigara tha unhone aap ka?? kyun?? bataiye....(shouts)

everyone

gets shocked at da revelationnd virat who jst entered was more than jst

shocked to see manvi behave all mad nd howling..

he rushes towards her nd shouts-- manvi..

manvi pushes him nd startsbeating avinash hard..

virat pulls her nd slaps ,

v-- hosh mai aao manvi.. kya kar rai ho

nd he hugs her tight, she faints in his arms, he looks back nd says,

v-- m sorry..

nd he moves out with manvi in his arms..



**flashback**



after dat night da next day dey went to da chaudhury house, everyone stared at dem shocked nd avinash moved forward..



a-- kaha thi tu raat var???aur ye kaun hai??



v-- dkhiye, ye mujhe kal raat raste mei behosh mili kuch gunde inke peeche pade the so ..

a-- soooo???

v-- ye behosh thi to mujhe kuch samajh nai aaya to apne ghar le gaya.. ( a cuts him in middle)

a—fir rat var rangraliya manai.. nai??

v-- ji??

a-- aur subah hume lautane aa gaye.. kyun??

v-- dkhiye hum sarif log hai aur aap apne hi ghar ki ladki ki bare mei kaisi baatein kar rahe hai??

a—behen , behen hai meri par tujhe kya tre liye to maja urane ka saman hogi.kyun??

v-- excuse me.. aapki behen ki jaan bachai aur app?? mai chalta hun.

a-- oye hero.. ruko.. jan bachai aur ijat le li aur ab isse humare sir marne aaye hoo??

m-- bhaiya pls...

a--

tu chup rehegi.. dkh khud ki halat yeha tak kapre v khud k nai pehen

rekhe hai..(as she was changed to nimmi's suit as she was all wet)

m-(looks at herself) oo to main puri bheeg gayi thi soo..

a-- chup.. or tum kaha jaa rahe hoo isse yaha chorkar..

v-- dkhiye ijat se baat kijiye hum khandani log hai..

a-- oohhoo ooo acha ..??? to kya pura khandan aisa kam karta hai?? rakhel rakhne ka??

v—hello mr.. apni jawan samhalo..

a-- ani samhalti kya karu.. saach to karbi hoti hai..



virat rushes to him nd hits him hard, everyone gets shocked,



v-- fir ek sabd nikala mai vul jawonga sari sarifiyat..

a--

oye itna sarif hai to tham k dikha iska haath.. humne to tab hi sare

riste tor diye isse jab ye puri raat ghar nai looti.. ab ek aisi ladki

ka haath tham payega..



manvi stood like a statue as she was shocked beyond limits..

virat

goes to her holds her hand nd drags her out towards dat radha krishna

mandir in dere house nd fills her hair partition wit sindoor..

v-- aj se inse v koi rista nai hoga tumhara agar tum mere sath chalna chaho to??

he

walks leaving her, she looks back to her family members pleadingly but

no one looks back at her nd she unwillingly walks away with virat with

her heart filled with anger for her family..

virat drove her back

to his house nd asks her to unboard da car but no reaction, virat leans

forward to find her unconcious.. he taps her face but can't remember her

name so he calls her..



v-- oye suno... (tapping her cheeks) utho.. are suno..



he carries her to da guest room nd calls for da doctor..




d--

dkhiye inhe kissi baat se gehra sadma pohucha hai.. main injection de

diya hai par agar 12 ghanta tak hosh na aaye to hume inhe hospitalise

karna padega..



v-- doctor dhkiye agar matter serious hai to aap ab hi inhe hospitalise kar dijiye I hav no prob..

d-- ani filhal to iski jarurat nai lag rai par as I told agar 12 hours tak hosh na aaye den it cud b serious..



v—ok thnk u doctor.. medicines bagaera??

d—ji ha prescription deti hu, ek min..

nam kya hai inka..



virat luks at marium for help nd she nods..



ma- ji manvi..



d-- manvi kya??

v-- oo.. ooo.. va.. vadera.

d-- mrs. manvi vadera????



virat luks at da doctor in shock..



v—ji ha.. mrs. manvi virat vadera..

he luks at manvi nd sighs..

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