Thedalgal Theerathini

By ParvathiSureshSharma

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It is an story which is an ashaangi version of Bangalore Days. It is not exactly like that film. There are di... More

Chapter 1- Introduction
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47 -- Mature content
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
Chapter 55
Chapter 56
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Chapter 59
Chapter 60
Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 63
Chapter 64
Chapter 65
Chapter 66
Chapter 67
Chapter 69
Chapter 70
Chapter 71
Chapter 72
Chapter 73
Chapter 74
Chapter 75
Chapter 76
Announcement -- Janana Ragasiyam
Chapter 77
Chapter 78

Chapter 68

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After having their own moments, They decided to leave to Rakshan home. 

Athulya- "marupadium athe mathiri full ah bandage podu Siddhu"

Siddhik- "ethuku?'

Athulya- "ethana peru kandu pudikuranganu pakanum.. epadi react panranganu pakanum. please, please.. "

Siddhik- 'Hmm, ithuku munnadi en kita vilayaditu iruntha. ipo enna vachu vilayadura.. sari naan solra mathiri kattu podu"

Athulya nodded and did as per his guidance. They started and within minutes reached Rakshan's home. Everyone panicked when they looked at him. Rakshan furrowed his eyebrows. Karthik is the first person to rush towards him. 

Karthik- "dei kutty, enna da ivlo peria kattu potruka? enna Raksha china kayam nu sonna.. valikutha daa? ", He touched his hand very softly.

Siddhik- "illa, da.. vali ipo illa. nee relax agu", he tried his best to calm him down. 

Karthik- "doctor kita polama?"

Siddhik- "illa vendam. i am fine now". Karthik touched with hand with worry filled face. 

Karthik- " Paathu nikka koodatha kutty. apadi enna phone la mukiamana visayam pathutu iruka? suthi enna nadakuthunu gavanama iruka vendama?"

Rakshan- "dei ithu ethir parama nadanthathu da. nee kavala patta apuram avanum oru mathiri agiduvan"

Karthik nodded his head and moved aside. Siddhik didn't meet his eyes. 

Priyanka- "valiku inum iruka anna?"

Siddhik- "illa ma, ipo illa"

Malar- " sapdareengala? aduthu tablet eppo podanum?"

Siddhik- "konja neram agatum ma. ipo pasikala"

Logan and Vinay entered at that time and was shocked to see Siddhik with bandage. 

Logan- "dei, ennada ithu? epadi aachu?". Rakshan said what happened..

Vinay- "apadi enna pakki unaku phone vendi iruku. road la nikkum pothu suthium enna nadakuthunu paakurathu illaya? nee epavum gavanama thane irupa? thideernu unaku enna aachu?"

Siddhik- "athu vera oru yosanaila irunthaen"

Logan- "unaku yosika idame kidaikalaya? Market la road la ninnu than yosipiah?"

Siddhik- "yen da rendu perum thititae irukeenga?", He pouted a little. 

Vinay- " itha mattum nalla kelu.. vera engaium valikutha unaku? "

Siddhik- "illa..". He answered while looking down. Logan, Vinay and Karthik exchanged glances.

Karthik- "sari konjam ulla vaa. rest edukalam"

Siddhik- "illa enaku tired ah illa". Athulya understood. 

Logan- "paravalla kayam patathuku rest edukanum vaa"

Siddhik- "athu irukatum, naan ingayae.."

Vinay- "ipo neeya variah? illa thookitu pogatuma?", He mumbled in Siddhik' s ear. Siddhik widened his eyes and nodded as yes. 

Siddhik, Vinay, Logan and Karthik went inside the room. Athulya moved away from the hall, walked around the house and stood back near the window of the room where these four men are speaking. 

Karthik- "unna ellam enna panrathunae theriala enaku. irukura problem ah inum yaen perusu aakura?"

Siddhik- "epadi kandupudicha?", He asked with a surprise.

Karthik- "naan thotathum, shoulder ah rotate panna apo than kandupudichaen. ivalo peria kattu potutu epadi avlo asalt ah panna mudium?".

Siddhik- "athu, nee romba lesa thotiah.. koosuchu daa", he smiled sheepishly with a chuckle. 

Siddhik then looked at Logan. He said, "Rakshan casual ah irukuratha vachu doubt vanthathu"

Siddhik then looked at Vinay and said, "intha naaye kanna pathae pesala. atha vachu than kandu pudichaen"

Athulya widened her eyes and raised her eyebrows in amusement. They found it within seconds. 

Karthik- "engala maari maari pathathu pothum.  ipo ethuku intha drama?"

Siddhik- "Yaathu kooda konjam close aga"

Logan- "unaku vera idea vae kidaikalaya?"

Siddhik- "ava en kitayae vara matikura.. naan enna panrathu", he whined. 

Vinay chuckled and said, "ivan solrathum sari thane, rendu perukum private moments ae illala."

Logan- "athukunnu, nalaiku itha papa kandupudicha enna agum? yen da yemathita nu inum kovamagita enna panrathu?"

Karthik- " pesama onnu panidalama? ivan kaila oru vettu potralama? "

Siddhik widened his eyes in shock and said, "dei...". Athulya too widened her eyes there. 

Rakshan who entered at that time said, "seruppu pinchudum da unaku. konjamachum puthiyoda pesu. vetuviah kaiah? ". Athulya smiled. 

Karthik- "vaa daa rasa, vaa. neeum thane jodi potu itha idea panathu. ipo katta piricha unmai therinchudum.. sari konja naal maintain panitu kayam aariduchu nu samalicha kooda thalumbu irukathu ivanuku shoulder la. appo enna panuva?"

Rakshan- "konjam iru daa. yaen da, papa kita unmaiah soliduven nu thane sonna? ippo enna  da apadiyae vanthiruka"

Siddhik- "athu konjam bayamagiduchu.."

All four men slapped their heads. Athulya chuckled silently and enjoyed. 

Karthik- "onnu pannu, un birthday varaikum ipadiaye suthu. birthday annaiku papa kaal la vilunthu unmaiah solidu"

Rakshan- "tension agiduva papa. ivlo naal yemathuniah nu"

Vinay- " vera enna thaan vali? "

Rakshan- "venumna onnu panalam.. blood loss anatha paathu naan perusa kattu potu vituten sariah gavanikama.. Kayam aana chinathu thaan nu nalaiku doctor ta pora mathiri poitu vanthu solidalam"

Karthik- "papa nambuvala?"

Rakshan- "ivan mela enaku irukura anbu thaan papa ku theirumae. oru pathatathula panitaen nu solikalam"

Logan- "enaku enamo logic idikuthu. Athu epadi adi patathum, kayam epadi iruku? evlo aalma iruku? nu kooda pakama nee kattu poduviah? athuvum ivanuku?. konjam yosi da.. papaku mattum poi nu therincha kaila kidaikuratha eduthu parabatcham pakama veesuva.. anubavathula solren nalla yosichuko"

Others chuckled. Athulya too smiled remembering that incident. 

Siddhik- "neenga onum kavalapadatheenga daa. naan samalichukaren. yaathu va pathi enaku therium. neenga just en flow la sync aana pothum"

Others looked at each other. 

Rakshan- "ithe thana nee unaku kattu podum pothum sonna.. unkita finishing sari illaye da". Athulya chuckled silently there.

Siddhik- "pch, naan pathukaren. neenga tension agatheenga. en pondatiah pathuka enaku theiratha?"

Vinay- "ivana nambalama? illa pesama papa ta unmaiah solidalama?"

Karthik- "rendume sari varathu. onnu panalam, avala pathina ninapula thaan ivanuku adipatruchunu solidalam"

Rakshan crocked his eyebrows, gave a thought and said, "hmm, nalla idea"

Logan- "enna nalla idea, itha sonna papa kovam koranchuduma?"

Rakshan- "kandipa, papa voda sera thane ivan drama panrathe. yemathitan nu paatha thaane kovam varum, avaloda sera ethaethetho muyarchi panrannu paatha kovam varathulla"

Logan- "hmm logic konjam okay va thaan iruku.., dei veenaponavanae. ini ipadi kiruku thanama ethavathu plan panatha."

Vinay- "papa va samathana padutha unaku oru vali koodava kidaikala"

Siddhik- "illayae", he pursed his lips. Everyone chuckled again. 

Rakshan- "sari vanga velila polam. papa theditu vanthiduva.."

They all left and Athulya too hurried to the hall. She then sat and watched TV as if nothing happened. Five men came and started to do their chores. Sujan came after some time. He got panicked on witnessing Siddhik with a huge bandage. 

Sujan- "ennachu?", he rushed to him and gently touched his shoulder. 

Siddhik- "onum illa.. ipo naan okay"

Sujan- " epadi adi patuchu?". Rakshan came and explained him the incident. 

Sujan- "gavanikalaya? nijamava?", He furrowed his eyebrows and asked both the men. they just nodded. 

Sujan- "enga kayam iruku?". 

Rakshan showed him the place and said, "inga adi patrukarathunala full ah band aid podura mathiri agiruku"

Sujan- "Neenga poteengala? appo doctor ta pogalaya?", he asked with a shock. 

Siddhik- "illa. enaku ipo valium illa sujju. i am fine." 

Sujan gave him a confused look and then asked Rakshan, "enna injection poteenga? enna tablet kodutheenga? anti-biotic kodutheengala? ivan yaen inum thoongama utkanthirukaan? "

Rakshan- "ellam naan pathu koduthutaen. nee romba tired ah theriura. muthalla nee poi refresh agitu vaa"

Sujan examined the bandage once, widened his eyes, looked at both the men and went. Rakshan and Siddhik exchanged a meaningful look. Athulya just witnessed everything silently. 

After a while, Siddhik with the help of Malar doing paper correction in the dinner table. Priyanka is doings totals for all the papers to help Siddhik. 

Rakshan- "Sanjeev call panirukaaru. namala namaloda plan padi panna solitaru. avar inaiku vara mataram. oru work irukaam. sujju nee ready ah?"

Sujan- "ready anna"

Pragyan came at that time. He looked totally exhausted. he sat on the sofa, leaned on it and closed his eyes. He looked tired and weak. Everyone noticed him. 

Athulya- "enna da ipadi vara romba velaiah?". Pragyan nodded. 

Priyanka- "rendu naala olunga sapda kooda illa. ennachu ragu?"

Pragyan- "vela thaan riya. vera onum illa"

Athulya- "ivlo tired ah vara alavuku enna vela? puthusa show ethuvum allot panirukangala?"

Pragyan- "illa aththu.. antha kaithi id than.", he turned and saw Siddhik, he stood up the next second and rushed to him, "anna, enna aachu ungaluku? kai la enna ivlo peria kattu epadi nadanthathu?"

Siddhik- "ssh, muthalla utkaru". Pragyan sat on the chair next to him the next second. 

Karthik gave him juice and said, "itha kudichutu pesu da. avan nalla thaan iruka.. nee than train yerunavan maari iruka. yenna da kolam ithu? FM la than vela pakuriah, illa ethavathu construction la vela pakuriah ipadi iruka?"

Pragyan- "haan, atha apurma paakalam. muthalla anna ku enna nu sollunga"

Rakshan- "marupadium muthalla iruntha.. ada ponga daa"

Priyanka played a tape which has a recording of Rakshan's explanation. 

Karthik- "itha eppo panna?"

Priyanka- "pavam anna ovorutharuka solitu iruntharu, athaan"

Rakshan- "nalla vela ma, unakachum enna paathu parithabam vanthuchae"

Pragyan- "paathu nikamateengala anna.."

Siddhik- "athu irukatum.. unaku enna thideernu ivlo vela?"

Pragyan- "athu oru id pathi soliruken gnabagam iruka anna 'ratchasiyin kaithi' nu"

Athulya-" athuku enna?"

Pragyan- "antha id ah pathi yerkanave trace panna sonanga aththu. namma technical team try pananga but kandu pudika mudiala.. last three days ah antha id la irunthu reply ae varala. so konjam push panranga. "

Athulya- "ipo thana da, mini-bytes ellam poteenga. antha id la irunthu vanthuchunu"

Praygan- "antha id la irunthu epovo vanthuduchu"

Athulya- "athukum nee ipadi alayurathukum enna samantham?"

Pragyan- "ipo antha id mela semma hype iruku aththu, makkal kita. avanga romba antha id pathi ketute irukanga. antha id yarunu kandu pudika mudiala. So, antha hype ah divert panrathuku naan inoru show pathi pesirukaen. athuku guest slot first 10 filled ah irukanum. athuku thaan alanchukitu iruken. enaku ipo 5 guest than confirm panna mudiuthu", he rubbed his hairs with frustration. 

Athulya- "nethu thane da mini bytes ellam poteenga apuram reply varalanu solra?"

Pragyan- "nee enna namma process ah maranthutiah? avar one week munnadiaye content anupitaru. ellarum approve pani telecast anathu nethu"

Siddhik looked at him with a deep thought. Karthik and Athulya exchanged glances. 

Karthik- "naan venumna id ah trace panni tharava?"

Pragyan- "vendam anna"

Karthik- "yaen ennala mudiathunu ninaikuriah?", he teased.

Pragyan- "illa anna, enga technical team trace panni kandupudikathapove theriuthu avar thannoda adayalatha velipadutha virumbala nu. athanala than naan vera show ku try panren. inum solla pona enaku avaroda identity ah ivanga kandupudichuda koodathe nu thana iruku"

Athulya- " yean da? "

Pragyan- "kandupudichuta, inum romba turture panuvanga. interview kepanga, enna pesinalum kutham solla oru kootam vera irukum, alagana avaroda life ah namma imagine panna mudiatha alavuku mosama mathiduvanga. inga konjam famous agita pothum, apuram namma life namma asai pata mathiri irukaathu. avaru famous agurathukaga mail anupina mathiri theriala.. So, vendam aththu, namala santhosama vachirunthavaru santhosama irukatum"

Everyone smiled at him. Siddhik caressed Pragyan's hair gently. 

Siddhik- "ellam sariah poidum. ". Pragyan nodded his head. 

Priyanka- "naan venumna avaruku mail panni pakatuma?"

Pragyan chuckled and said, " ennanu mail panuva?"

Priyanka- "atha pathi enna unaku? nee thaa. naan antha anna kita pesi pakuren. nee venumna paaru avanga mail panuvanga"

Pragyan- "venam nee angaium poi ragu ragu nu ulari vaipa"

Priyanka- "haan, en kadhal unaku ularala iruka?", She asked him with utmost

Pragyan- "illa riya, naan apadi solala"

Priyanka- "illa nee apdi thaan sonna poo". Pragyan sighed, giggled and went behind her to console her. 

Everyone looked at them with a smile. 

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