Thedalgal Theerathini

By ParvathiSureshSharma

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It is an story which is an ashaangi version of Bangalore Days. It is not exactly like that film. There are di... More

Chapter 1- Introduction
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47 -- Mature content
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
Chapter 55
Chapter 56
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Chapter 59
Chapter 60
Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 63
Chapter 64
Chapter 65
Chapter 67
Chapter 68
Chapter 69
Chapter 70
Chapter 71
Chapter 72
Chapter 73
Chapter 74
Chapter 75
Chapter 76
Announcement -- Janana Ragasiyam
Chapter 77
Chapter 78

Chapter 66

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Once Karthik and Rakshan returned, Siddhik and Athulya returned back to their home after bid bye to them. 

At home, Siddhik and Athulya refreshed and lied in bed to sleep. 

Athulya- "enaku theriathu"

Siddhik- "ethu?"

Athulya- "ithu thaan plan nu theriathu.. naan gavanikala olunga"

Siddhik- "unaku theriathunu enaku theirum, un kanne soliduchu .. athunala thaan sujan ah ketaen."

Athulya smiled at him. She know always he will have an eye on her. They both cuddle each other and slept. Athulya snuggled more into him in sleep. She need his warmth badly and Siddhik too hugged her like hugging a teddy bear. The next day, Everyone assembled on Rakshan's house. 

Sanjeev- "silvandu, en plan ku disturbance illama nee Deepika va paduthiko sariah?"

Durga- "kandipa Jeeva. apadi ethachumna nee plan ah mathidu", She answered him casually. 

Others chuckled. Sanjeev looked at her. 

Durga- "nee back up plan ellam vachirupa.. but engaluku apadi illala.. athaan sonaen"

Sanjeev shook his head and called Karthik. Karthik switched on the Laptop and connected with things. Rakshan too switched on his laptop and connected. 

Karthik is connected with the center and Rakshan's is connected with the Gugan's house. So, yesterday night they placed the camera. In the kitchen, 

Sujan- "Malar, palaya plan ellam illa.. Anna strict ah solitan, deepika kita palaga koodathu nu.. So ellame avaluku theriama thaan panna poren.. bayama iruku di"

Malar hugged him and said, "All the best. ellam sariah paniduveenga. dont worry. Athellam en sujju kalakiduvaan"

Sujan- "unaku inaiku exam duty iruka? illaina neum camera la check panriah? enaku neeum en kooda irukura mathiri irukum..".

Malar- "exam duty ellam illa.. Naan check panren. naan unkooda illamaya?". 

Malar patted his back and he become normal in minutes. Sujan moved away from her and they both looked at each other holding each others hand. 

Sujan- "romba hurt panitena?"

Malar- "illa, but accept panika konjam kastama irunthathu.. But anna unna thadupanganu naan ninaikala.."

Sujan- "aththu kaga thaan ellame naalum, avan thappu pana vida maatan. ipo kooda avan thaan hint koduthurukaan. paapom"

Priyanka- "katti pudi vaithiyam mudinchathunna naan ulla varalama?". Malar and sujan moved away a little and looked at her. 

Priyanka- "all the best. deepika va vachu senjidunga."

Sujan raised one eyebrow, "unaku enna deepika mela gandu?"

Priyanka- "ragu rendu naala romba varuthama thiriuran. Deepika ungalaium Aththu vaium hurt panitalamae.. athaan.. ipo ellam panitu neenga happy agita, apuram ragu vum happy agiduvaan"

Sujan- "prajju kaga thana?"

Priyanka- "apadi nu illa.."

Sujan- "hey unmaiah sollu"

Priyanka- "avan sogama iruntha ennala normal ah iruka mudiala.. manasuku oru mathiri iruku", She blinked while stating. 

Sujan chuckled. Priyanka's love is something different. She loves unconditionally. To her, what happene?, who is correct? which one is right? all these are unwanted questions. She didnt need those. The only thing she need is happiness of Ragu and others as a bonus.

Everyone assembled and after taking their breakfast. Sujan and Athulya hugged each other, He left out a long breathe and left to the center. Durga and Athulya exchanged glances.

Durga-  "vetrivel", She shouted a dialogue from the old cinemas.

Athulya- "Veera vel", She too joined Durga in everything happily.

Durga- "vetri namathe.. poitu vaa sujju". 

Everyone giggled at them, Sujan nodded and went. 

In the center, Sujan started to do his work till Deepika comes. Athulya, Durga, Priyanka and Malar were munching snacks and watching everything via laptop through the hidden camera. 

At the other side at their home, 

Rakshan- " Sir, ithu thaan miss agirukura inventions and athoda scientist oda details.."

Sanjeev got it, took a photo and sent to his team. 

Karthik- "Sir, anga yekanave sila hidden camera's irukura mathiri iruku.. athuvum veetla, inum konjam correct ah check pananum"

Sanjeev- "inaiku Sujan Deepika veetuku poganum.. or else Rakshan neenga poganum.. You should fire the house"

Rakshan- "okay sir.." . Siddhik is doing paper works. 

Sanjeev- " Do you have any idea Siddhik?"

Siddhik- "white phosphorous... correct composition la kalanthu vachu atha anga vacha pothum. Rakshan veetuku vanthathu apuram kooda burn panikalam.. namma istathuku eppo venum nalum burn panikalam"

Sanjeev- "Sounds great. Lets have this plan"

Rakshan- "okay naan appo atha prepare panna start panidaren. Sujan poratha iruntha, avanuku epadi nu soli koduthren"

Siddhik- "Avanuku therium. nee kaila koduthu, 'ithula white phosphorous iruku veeta koluthidu' nu sonna pothum, avan motha veetaium, saambalakitu thaan varuvaan..."

Rakshan and Karthik chuckled. 

Sanjeev smiled and said, "okay appo enoda team ah alert panidaren.."

On the other side, Deepika entered the center. Athulya called Sujan. He is connected with them. Deepika neared Sujan and asked about some file details. Sujan opened the rack and checked for it. Deepika looked down and checked in the files that is there in the desk. 

Priyanka- "Enaku oru idea thonuthu.. sujju anna, apadiyae antha rack door ah inum light ah thallu.. veli pakama..".  Sujan moved a little.. 

Athulya- "pch, 95% da". Sujan moved a little. 

Durga- "haan. fix fix.. ipo File ah paatha mathiriyae deepika vaa koopdu pakalam"

Sujan bite his lips once and then called, "Deepika deepika inga parunga.."

Deepika raised her head and got hit by the door. 

Deepika- "aaaaahhhhhhh, amma", There is a slight bleeding in her head. 

Athulya, Durga, Priyanka and Malar- "hheeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyy". They hi-fied each other. Boys just looked at the girls but didn't budge anything. 

Durga- "ipo enna panra help panra mathiri thirumbavum ava mandailayae door aala adi"

Sujan - "achacho ennaga aachu, cha paathu enthirika koodatha.. Konjam irunga, Naan kerchief tharen.. light ah blood varuthu.  ", he acted like getting tensed and closed the door with full force. Sujan bend down and the door bounced back, hit deepika again in the same place. 

Deepika- "haa, amma.... ayyo...Haa". Girls cheered looking at all these in the camera. 

Sujan- "ayaiyo naan inaiku Kerchief kondu varalanga.", he said in a worrying tone but it is also in a teased tone. Deepika didn't noticed anything.

Deepika- "neenga poi muthalla Rajesh ah koopdunga", She said with irritation in pain.

Sujan called Rajesh, another scientist, and he came there.. Deepika behaved differently with Rajesh. 

Athulya- "sujju, keen ah observe pannu.. ipo antha anna ku thaan iva route vidura pola.. antha Rajesh anna enna kandupudikuraanga nu paaru". Sujan ended the call and started to collect details about Rajesh. Girls watched everything. 

Rajesh treated her gently, cupped her face and kissed her forehead. Deepika leaned on him and shed tears. They hugged each other. 

Durga- "Jeeva, deepika voda current target Rajesh mathiri iruku.."

Sanjeev- "yaaru athu silvandu"

Durga- "antha center la vela pakuravan yaara irupaan? sales man ah va irupaan? ellam scientist than Jeeva"

Siddhik giggled loudly. Other looked at Siddhik once while chuckling. Siddhik, though he observe the environemnt, he never react to anything. But for Durga's comment he reacted. 

Sanjeev- "naaan atha kekala silvandu .. avana pathi vera ethavathu theriuma nu ketaen"

Durga- "camera la ivlo thaan theriuthu.."

Siddhik laughed out loud. Rakshan and Karthik too giggled. Girls closed their mouth to prevent their laugh. 

Sanjeev- "unna..", he started to chase her. Durga started to run. 

Durga- "Jeeva, serious ah avlo thaan therium.. nee thorathunalum use illa. enaku avana theiala"

After 15 mins, Athulya called Sujan, 

Athulya- "dai ava coffee kudika pora.. neum poo". Sujan too went to the pantry. Deepika talked with Rajesh. 

Malar- "sujju, enaku ava mela coffee kotanum.. "

Durga- "semma ithu kooda nalla iruku, done"

Sujan observed the environment and started his plan. He acted like talking in phone and walked straight away without minding anyone. He was about to dash on a man. That man to prevent himself from dashing moved aside and hit a juice which is held by another person. That juice fell on her dress and she bend down to check. A man next to the lady to bend down to check which happened to push Rajesh on the other side. As a result, Rajesh coffee which he is having in his hand poured on Deepika. 

Deepika- "haa, arivu iruka Rajesh, ipadi kothikura coffee ah kotitae..". Rajesh blinked at her unable to do anything. 

lady- "aiyo, juice dress ellam kottidichu.. enga avan?"

On the other side, 

Athulya, Malar and Priyanka- "WOW.. semma planning.". Sujan chuckled. 

Malar- "ithu thaan scientist moolaya? pendulum mathiri inga oruthana idika paathaan, but athu  oruthar maathi oruthar ah vilagi poi kadaisila Deepika mela coffee kottiduchu"

Rakshan- "ithu just chain reaction thaan thangatchi ma. simple concept. "

Priyanka- "enaku ellam coffee ah nera kotavae varathu, en kaila kotitumo nra bayathula maathi kotiruven .. chain podavum pudikaathu,."

Rakshan and Siddhik chuckled at the way Priyanka stated. Sanjeev is talking in phone. Karthik is helping Sanjeev with the details. 

Athulya- " intha scientist ellam ipadi thaan yosipanga pola". Athulya looked at Siddhik via corner of her eyes. Siddhik wink at her, Athulya turned again. 

Malar- "hmm, romba vithayasama.. "

Priyanka- "RJ ellam epadi yosipanga akka"

Athulya and Malar- "unaku un kavala"

Priyanka- "ungaluku mattum illaya?"

Durga- "pch, disturb panama padatha paarunga.. chee chee, camera va paarunga. aduthu enna soalalam Sujju kita?"

Athulya- "enaku oruthar valuki viluratha live ah pakanum nu asaiah iruku.."

Durga- "nalla irukae.. Hello, Sujju.. deepika thala kupura vilugalainalum parava illa.. keela viluntha kooda pothum"

Sujan nodded his head and poured his coffee on the placed where steps are there. He acted like it was spitted there uncertainly. He slapped himself and acted like calling a person who work in the pantry to clean the place. He went after that. It looked natural. Nothing seemed to be suspicious. Everything looked so casual. 

Rajesh somehow calmed Deepika and took her out. That lady is still shouting there. On moving out, Rajesh is pleading Deepika and Deepika is literally scolding Rajesh badly. She is not in a position to listen to him. She scolded him, then cried at him, then leaned on him. She did everything. While placing her leg on the steps, she fell down. Again her head got hit, Not only head, she badly hit on hands and legs too.. Blood started to ooze from Head again. She fell down unconscious. 

Durga- "center ku oru ambulance parcel..", she shouted like a waiter.. 

Athulya -" thalakattu confirm"

Malar- "Kaal kattu koda confirm thaan"

Priyanka- "ipo iva poi hospital la paduthuta apuram namma epadi enjoy panrathu?"

Durga- "athellam amogama panalam.. dont worry pika kutty, be happy..."

Girls laughed. Boys just stared at them with a smile. 

As expected Deepika was admitted in the hospital. Rajesh took care of her. 

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