Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

By niabhatti

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A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... More

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
5| scared
Couple Aesthetics
6| Day 1
7| Coffee
8| Over speeding
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
11|Metro
12|Flashback
13| Exams
14| Dinner
15|Fight
16| warnings
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
23| sick
24|oh no
25| guitar
26| broken
27|Tution
28| Injured
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32| wandering
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
36| birthday
37|Driving
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
43|screwed
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
54|Dictator
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
58| unexpected
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
78|new boys
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

85|wedding bells?

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Harib was just about to leave his room when his mother entered.

"Mama?" Harib asked worried. He just came upstairs after breakfast.

"Harib beta betho mujhe kuch baat krni hai." Rabia replied.

Harib immediately sat on his bed and his mother took a seat in front of him.

"Khaiye mama." He said.

"Harib" Rabia said as she took a deep breath.

"Bole na mama." Harib replied.

"Apko Aiza pasand hai?" She asked.

Her question caught Harib off guard.

"Kia matlab?" He asked.

"Itne masoom nahi ho ap Harib! Apko ache se pata hai me kia bolrahi hu mene raat ko baba se baat ki baba ne kaha agar Harib han bolta ha hum chalenge rishta leke. Is baar me na nahi sunungi I know you like her and I want you to get settled." Rabia replied in firm tone.

"Aise kherahi ha jese koi punishment derahi ho!" Harib replied sulking.

Rabia chuckled and patted his face.

"Please meri jaan!" She requested.

"I have no problem mama! Ap Aiza ki mama se baat krle leken mujhe use phele ek baar Mishi se baat krne de." Harib said.

"Kia matlab?" Rabia replied shocked.

"Matlab kuch nahi mama bas usse poochna ha use Aiza pasand hai ke nahi." Harib replied.

"Mishi kaha se agai beech me? Ye apki life ha Harib." Rabia said in scolding manner.

"Mishi beech me nahi ha mama leken Mishi se baat krna bhi to zaruri ha usko ek second ke liye bhi ye nahi lagna chaiye use pooche begair sab hua." Harib said.

"Agar apko apni life se related koi decision lena agar kisi cheez me apki raza ha to apko use poochna zaruri nahi ha han zahir ha agar hum proposal bhejenge to usko bataenge hi infact wo hi kregi sab leken Han ya na bolne ka ikhtiyar uske pass nahi ha." Rabia said.

"I know mama wo mujhe kia hi mana kregi leken uski rai liye begair me kuch nahi krunga." Harib replied.

"Me krlungi use sham me batt! Me dadi se bhi batt krungi apko Aiza se baat krni haa to krllijega." Rabia said and Harib nodded with a smile.

"Jab tak ap logo ka wahn jane ka plan confirm nahi hojata please us dhol ko mat batiega please mama ailaan krdega har jagah." Harib requested.

"Too latee!" Hammad's voice echoed.

"Tum batein sunrahe the hamari?" Harib asked firmly. Hammad immediately looses his smugness.

"Sirf last ki do." He replied sheepishly.

"Wese bhaijaan agar apki sach me shadi hogai toh ap ye lecture thore kam kardoge?" Hammad put his arm on his shoulder and asked teasingly.

"Mama me marunga isse." Harib said and pushed Hammad away.

"Oww." Hammad said.

"Sudhar jaou dono." Rabia said.

"Aur tum kia karahe ho yahn? Mishi ko college chorne nahi gaye?" Rabia asked.

"Nahi apki dulari ko message aya classes 11 baje ki ha to ab 11 baje use chor kar office jaunga." Hammad replied.

"Mishi ghar pe hai?" Rabia asked.

"Han neeche dadi pass hai." Hammad replied.

"Chalo phir hum bhi neeche chalte hai." Rabia said.

"Ajaye bhaijaan ki shadi fix karakr ate hai." Hammad said.

"Apna dimag fix krlo phele tum." Harib glared at him.

"Allah meri bhabhi iss badlehaaz insaan ki zindagi me kuch tameez leaye." Hammad muttered and walked outside.

"Hammad ke bache!" Harib threw the pillow on him but the boy was already gone.

Rabia laughed at them.

"Chale mama chalta hu!" Harib said and kissed her head as he also left.

Mishi who was very worried about to Rayaan since yesterday was now frustrated. she tried messaging him a couple of times but there was no reply.

She even messaged Rafay to ask about him and Rayyan's wellbeing but Rafay said he have no idea about Rayaan but he was certain that Zayaan have his phone that is why he wasn't able to message back.

Mishi couldn't help but think about the times she has faced angry Zaayan. She was worried about yesterday the guy who was ready to devour his brother for holding a cigarette would have definitely caused a havoc after finding him racing.

Zaira assured her that she will update her today after seeing him in school. Rabia came downstairs and called all the ladies of the family excitedly even Nazia was at home so they all gathered in lounge.

"Harib shadi ke liye mangaya!" Rabia announced happily. Everybody chirped up.

"Aiza baji?" Mishi stood up excitedly.

Rabia's heart burst with joy. She was expecting this reaction only.

"Allah tera shukar ye larkaa mangaya!" Fatima their dadi said.

"Kon larki ha bhabhi? Harib ki pasand ha?" Zeenat asked.

"Harib pe chorte to abhi 2 saal nikal deta! Harib ki business partner ha mujhe bhot pasand agai hai. MashAllah bhot achi suljhi wi bachi hai. Aur to aur bhot bari businesswomen ha bilkul aise larki jese mera Harib deserve krta hai." Rabia said excitedly.

"Ye to bhot achi baat hai! Ap larkie ke ami se baat kre hum sunday chalte rishta ke liye." Dadi said.

"Mere pass number nahi hai." Rabia bit her tongue.

"Mere pass Aiza baji ka number hai." Mishi said.

"Mujhe send krdo mein Aiza se baat krti hu phele phir uski ami ka number leti hu usse." Rabia said.

"Haroon bhai raazi ha?" Nazia asked.

"Han bilkul unhone kaha aba se wo baat krlenge." Rabia said.

"Mishi photo hoto dikhou na." Nazia said.

"Mein dikhati hu leken chachi ap to janti hogi na! Aiza Ali khan? Unki chachi ko apko boutique me dekha tha mene." Mishi said.

"Aiza? Shameem ki bhateeji? Arey MashAllah bhabhi Aiza to waqai bhot piyari hai." Nazia suddenly becomes very excited.

Mishi showed the photo to everyone in the room and they all smiled. She was indeed perfect for their Harib.

After the greeting Mahir allowed all of them to sit down.

"Here! Distribute it" He gave the note books to monitor. Mahir was looking visibly angry.

"I hope you guys enjoyed yesterday because I won't let this happen again! Apne bunk ke khatir aplogo ne ye homework kia ha? I want you all to open your notebooks and see it yourself!" He angrily boomed.

Everyone flinched.

"Ali right? Where is your homework?" Mahir tapped on a boy's desk and asked sternly. The boy was shivering in fear.

"I asked you something!" Mahir yelled.

"I forgot." The boy stammered.

"Well you didn't forget you just prioritised bunk! You think this behaviour will fly with me?!" Mahir announced firmly.

"Keep standing for the rest of the period! Do the same homework five times until tomorrow." Mahir announced.

He scolded few more students and walked towards Zaira's desk. Zaira was only looking at with doe eyes. He has always treated her like a younger sister he certainly has never behaved this harshly with her.

"Open your notebook Zaira!" Mahir commanded. Rafay was sitting and glaring at him.

Zaira quietly does what he asked for.

"How many exercises were assigned to you guys?" Mahir turned and asked the class.

"Three." Nerd replied.

"Where is exercise B Zaira?" Mahir asked harshly.

Zaira's eyes widened in realisation. The exercise Haider repeatedly asked her to complete and she forgot.

"Mah.." Zaira for the first time took his name in school.

"Sir!" Mahir whispered harshly.

"I am sorry sir." Zaira quickly apologised. She has never seen him in this element and to say he was as scary as his best friend won't be an understatement.

Mahir loudly banged the book on table.

"Do it three times until tomorrow." He announced and Zaira nodded. She would do anything he ask in this moment. She can't risk running her mouth and getting her teacher's best friend involved.

Mahir walked back to his desk and gave a long lecture about yesterday. Mrs Sara came into the class and scolded all of them. She announced lunch detention for two weeks and library duty. The students were shocked it have never happened before but apparently their new teacher was not in a mood to budge.

After the lecture ended Zaira hesitantly walked after Mahir.

"Mahir bhai." She called.

Mahir turned and glared at her.

"It's sir Zaira!" Mahir said exasperated.

"Mujhe nahi adat mein kia karu." Zaira pouted.

"Kia baat ha?" Mahir asked rolling his eyes.

"Apko to pata hoga na kal ghar mein kia hua? Please I request you please bhaiya ko nahi bataiyega me kal paka krlungi." Zaira promised.

"Aur batadia toh?" Mahir asked.

"Itne sare students ne nahi kia ap sabke ghar me bataenge nahi na? Please mujhe jane de."Zaira pleaded.

"Tomorrow morning Zaira! If you fail to submit me I promise I wall directly call Haider." He said.

"Thank you so much" Zaira has no expectations from him. He have budged was enough for her.

"Go back to your class." Mahir said and left.

After the day was over Haadi came running to Zaira.

"Iraa!" He rushed to her.

"Kia hai?" She asked.

"Yar wo football practice ha! Meri off 4 baje bad hogi jo bhi lene aye to usko batadena please." He said.

"Nahi!" Zaira denied.

"Kia matlab nahi?" He asked.

"Bhool gaye to thore din pehele kia hua tha? Chachu chachi ko inform kro." Zaira said.

"Well phone nahi ha mere pass." He said.

"Office me se krlo ya Mahir bhai pass jaou." Zaira said.

"Yar tum batadena." Haadi said.

"Haadi please!" Zaira said irritated.

"Office to nahi jaraha! Mahir bhai ko bolta hu." Haadi said and left for Mahir's office.

Haadi knocked on Mahir's door.

"Come in." Haadi said.

"Mahir bhai phone dena apna." He asked.

"Kyu?" Mahir asked bewildered.

"Denaa! Baba ko call krni hai." Haadi said.

Mahir rolled his eyes and took his phone out he gave the phone to Haadi.

"Baba ka number save ha apke pass? Mujhe yaad nahi hai." Haadi replied sheepishly.

Mahir rolled his eyes.

"Hatim chachu se save hai." He said.

"Good good." Haadi said and dialled his father.

"Hello Mahir?" Hatim asked worried.

"Baba mein Haadi." Haadi said.

"Kia hua beta? Kuch kia apne?" Hatim asked.

"Nahi baba! Wo bas apko batana tha football practice hai to meri off 4:00 baje hogi ap 4:00 baje pick krlena ya kisi ko bhi boldena na or please mama ko inform krdiega." Haadi said.

"Acha Haider nikal chuka ha tum logo ko lene usse batadena me mama ko batadunga 4:00 baje tak Hamza pick krlega okay?" Hatim replied.

"Okay baba! Allah Hafiz." Haadi said and Hatim ended the call.

"Thank you Mahir bhai." Haadi gave the phone back.

"Kitni dafa samjhou tum bhen bhaio ko yahn to bhai nahi bolo." Mahir chided.

"Sorry adat nahi hai." Haadi replied.

"Haadi?" Mahir said.

"Ji?" Haadi replied.

"Sherry ki bhi practice ha?" Mahir asked.

"Nahi" Haadi laughed. " wo p.e period attend nahi krta!" He said.

"Kia matlab?" Mahir asked frowning.

"Arey bhai sach me! Wo khabhi PE me nahi ata! Hamesha class me rehta ha ap sir se poocho wo pareshaan ha isee leken ofcourse mam ka beta ha toh kuch bolte nahi." Haadi smirked and told him everything.

Mahir took a deep breath from his nose and nodded.

"Okay!" He said.

"Me chalta hu bye!" Haadi said and ran away.

He went back to Zaira.

"Bhaiya ko batadogi? Mene baba ko batadia ha Mahir bhai ke phone se." Haadi said.

"Kuch kaha Mahir bhai ne kal keliye?" Zaira asked.

"Nahi unhe kuch khena tha kia?" Haadi asked.

"Hamein to itna daanta mam ne bhi punish kia!" Zaira said.

"Ohh! Tumhe Mahir bhai se daant pari?" Haadi asked.

"Han! Leken ajj shayed unpe khas inayat hui wi thi toh inhone kaha me bhaiya ko homework ke bare me nahi bataungi!" Zaira said.

"Kia homework?" Haadi asked.

"Mein homework complete krna bhool gai! Unhone sunai to bhot or punish bhi kia ke kal teen dafa krke ana leken bhaiya ko batane ka mene unhe request ki toh unhhone.....

"Zairaa chup." Haadi whispered.

Zaira looked at his eyes and know something was off. She turned around and found Haider standing right behind them with blazing eyes.

{*}

Rabia called Aiza.

"Asslam alikum beta." Rabia said.

"Walkum salam ji kon?" Aiza replied.

"Beta me Rabia! Harib ki mama." Rabia said.

"Assalam Alikum aunty! Kese ha ap?" Aiza asked sweetly.

"Mein theek hu bacha ap kese ho?" Rabia asked.

Aiza replied and they started chatting. After a while Rabia asked.

"Aiza beta mujhe apki mama ka number chaiye." Rabia said.

"J...i aunty?" Aiza asked not believing her.

"Apki mama se baat krni ha mujhe ap unka number de sakte ho?" She said and Aiza stopped the car she was driving. She was coming back from Zaayan's office to Harib's office.

"Me krti hu apko send aunty." Aiza said and Rabia thanked her.

There were so many questions in Aiza's mind she wants to talk to Harib before things get escalated quickly. She has a lot to talk. She didn't expect Harib to turn out this fast.

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