Thedalgal Theerathini

By ParvathiSureshSharma

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It is an story which is an ashaangi version of Bangalore Days. It is not exactly like that film. There are di... More

Chapter 1- Introduction
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47 -- Mature content
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
Chapter 55
Chapter 56
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Chapter 59
Chapter 60
Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 64
Chapter 65
Chapter 66
Chapter 67
Chapter 68
Chapter 69
Chapter 70
Chapter 71
Chapter 72
Chapter 73
Chapter 74
Chapter 75
Chapter 76
Announcement -- Janana Ragasiyam
Chapter 77
Chapter 78
Epilogue

Chapter 63

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The next day, Athulya wake up a little late. She got up and then slowly remembered what happened yesterday. She noticed that only bed sheet is covering her body. She blushed and smiled. On further checking, she noticed that there are some ointments and creams in her body. 

Athulya mind voice- "Siddhu, enna konjam kovama iruka vidu daa.. please"

She went to refresh herself and once done she came out of the room. She noticed that Siddhik is cooking while talking in phone. The phone is in the speaker. 

Siddhik- "Yaathu thoongitu iruka da.. inum konjam neram agum."

Rakshan- "romba thaan da panra.. Sanjeev sir varum pothu neenga illaina nalla irukaathu"

Siddhik- "avanga vara late agum..", Athulya furrowed her eyebrows and hide herself behind the pillar. 

Rakshan- "unaku epadi theirum?"

Siddhik- "kalaila sir ku message potaen, epo varuveenganu. athuku, 'naan late ah thaan varuven don't worry, enjoy' nu reply paniruntharu.". Athulya bite her lips while blushing.

Rakshan- "avar late ah varathula unaku enna enjoyment iruku?"

Siddhik- "athu ellam peria vanga visayam. nee china paiyan uanku onum theriathu"

Rakshan- "serupu pinchudum daa. naan china paiyana? "

Siddhik- "amam, unaku kalyanam agalala apo nee chinna paiyan thaan"

Rakshan- "Vilangama ethayavathu panni tholachudatha, netthu sorry ketaiah?". 

Athulya widened her eyes and shocked to the core. Are they discussing about that ??? Oh my god!!. Did they know already??

Siddhik- "ketaen, but perusa yaathu react panala..".

Athulya furrowed her eyebrows. She is confused whether she is guessing correctly. 

Athulya mind voice- "sorry nu ipo etha kekuranga.. sorry ah va, illa nethu panna ellathaiuma? Siddhu, unnala enaku ipo ella varthaiukum pala meaning thonuthu daa... Aandava, intha scientist kootathoda kuppa kotta enaku thani ariva kudu paa.."

Karthik- "nee panna velaiku udane mannipangalakum.. nee ellam ennada scientist? ipadiya olaruva? konjamachum paathu pesiruka koodathu"

Athulya started to listen to them keenly.

Siddhik- "naan ellathaium sollanum nu thaan sonaen". Athulya took a long breathe to control herself. 

Rakshan- "papa hurt ava nu therinjum yaen da ipadi panna? pavam da papa"

Siddhik- "enna da neengalae enna purinchukama pesureenga?"

Karthik- "ennatha purinjukanum unna? nee peria arichandrana illainu ipo yaar alutha?"

Siddhik- "apadi illa da. Kandipa Deepika va ini Yaathu meet panra mathiri situations varum.. Deepika epadi nu namaku nallave therium.. naan ipo ethayavathu marachu nalaiku deepika vanthu yaathu kita, 'un purushan enkita epadi ellam kenjina theriuma' nu arambichu naan maraicha ethayavathu solita enna panrathu daa?"

Rakshan and Karthik kept silent. Athulya started to think in his point of view. 

Siddhik- "Yaathu kandipa Deepika va namba maata, enkita vanthu unmaiah nu kepa. sathyam panna solli kepaa..  yaathu ketu naan othukita, apuram yen maracha nu engalukulla sanda varum..  Naan unmaiah illainu avaluku thona arambichudum daa.. engalukula athu peria space ah kondu vanthidum.. "

Rakshan left out a long breathe and said, "athuvum sari thaan, ipo papa va epadi sari panna pora?"

Siddhik- "papa papa nu ava koodave neenga suthikitu alayama engaluku konjam thanimai kodutha nalla irukum. naan sorry soli samathana paduthuvaen"

Athulya bite her lips knowing his plan. 

Karthik- "unaku poramai daa, naanga papa kooda time spend panrathula", he teased.

Siddhik- "time spend panrathu mattumaada panreenga? vara vara ennaya vida ipo ellam neenga avala thaan adhigama care panreenga.. enna vida ipo ungaluku ava thaan close ah iruka. avlo yaen ava kooptu thane enna paka vanthathe.. neengala onum varalayae.."

Rakshan- "summa vaayiruku nu ethyavathu pesatha.. neeum papa kooptanu thanae naayae veetuku vantha.. naanga ellarumae athe address la ana thane irukom. oru thadava vanthu paathirupiah naayae? oru text message panirupiah? oru call panirupiah? oru wrong call aachum panirupiah daa?"

Siddhik remained silent. 

Karthik- "papa enga kooda palagurathu therinju unna neeyae sari panikitu enga kooda serntha.. inum sariah solanumna, nee papakaga thana da enga kooda serntha.. unaku enna thaguthi iruku engala keka? vaya kilaratha savadichuduvaen unna.."

Siddhik remained silent. Athulya widened her eyes. This information is completely new. she rewind all that happened and started to think in their point of view. 

Rakshan-  "enga kooda seranumnu nee ninachalae naanga vanthirupomae daa. una evlo thedirupom.. unmaiah sollu, naanga thedurathu therinchu engala pakama ethana thadava odiruka nee"

Siddhik- "sorry da, Antha sambavathala naan romba udanchu poitaen. Ungala face panna mudiala ennala.. "

Karthik - "unna paathiduvom nu nambi asai asai ah vantha nee anga iruka maata. evlo valikum theriuma engaluku? savidacha daa nee engala.. engala pathu nee odurathu pudikama, oru katathula unna theduratha niruthitom. "

Siddhik with a guilt tone, "ava dress ah kilichutaen nu unga kita solra thairiam enaku varala daa.. romba kevalama irunthathu. enna ninaichu enake aruvarupa irunthathu daa. Unga natpuku naan thaguthi illathavan mathiri irunthathu daa. enaku ithuku mela solla theriala daa"

Karthik- "papa enga kooda palaginathum thairiam vanthuducha? illaina unna pathi nee vachiruntha uyarntha ninaipu ellam mariducha?"

Karthik asked him angrily. Still he is unable to accept everything. Athulya keenly listened. 

Siddhik- "ethuvum marala, ellam apadiyae thaan irunthathu. aana, yaathu mela nambikkai vanthuchu. avala nambi thaan naanga unga kooda sernthaen"

Rakshan- "puriala da .. papa mela enna nambikkai?". Athulya furrowed her eyebrows. 

Siddhik- "namma ennaiku sernthalum kandipa neenga annaiku enna nadanthathunu enna kepeenganu enaku theirum. athuku bayanthu thaan naan unga kita varave illa. Yaathu naan maraikurathuku, enaku support panuvanu ninachaen. 'nadanthu mudinchatha maranthutu ini nadaka poratha papom' nu strong pesi namala sethu vaipa nu nambinaen. "

Athulya shocked with open mouthed. She never thought like this.  

Karthik - " enna da solra?"

Siddhik - "Yaathu ku naan kastapatta thanga mudiathu daa. enaku valicha avalukum valikum. ungala thedi vanthathu kooda naan santhosama irukanum nu thaan. avanga friendship ah paathu naan yenguren nu therinjathum ungala thedi vanthutaa. naan solla vendam nu thayangi ninnapo ava support panuvanu ethir pathaen. itha pathi pesavendam nu solluva nu ethir paathaen. vendam ma nu soli paathaen. aana, nadanthathu vera"

Athulya remembered his pleading red shed eyes. Athulya started to feel bad.

Athulya mind voice- "cha, Sorry Siddhu. naan unna thaniah kooptu pesirukanum. appove ellathaium sollu nu compel paniruka koodathu. Nee ellar munnadium sollum pothu evlo valia anubavicha.. sorry daa.. naan unna support panirukanum. "

Rakshan- "dei, manasukullayae vachu kastapadurathuku pesidalam nu papa ninachurupa daa"

Siddhik- "Raksha, naan avala kutham solala. just, naan ninachathu onnu nadanthathu onnu nu solren avlo thaan. Yaathu va vachikitu neenga keka mateenganu ninachaen. aana, kaeteenga. pasam irunthalum yaaro va nadanthikura Sujan annaiku thaan anna nu kooptaan. aana nu kooptu avan keta muthal visayama nadanthatha solla solli thaan. Pragyan close ah palagura mathiri therinjalum, personal la involve aga maatan. anaiku avanum vanthu enkita kenjinaan. ellathukum mela Yaathuve kenji keta. ava kethathum ennala pidivathama iruka mudiala solitaen"

There is a prevailed silence in the environment. Athulya remembered about that day. 

Karthik-  "solitome nu feel paniriah da kutty?"

Siddhik- "illa, illa. Naan antha alavuku prepare agala avlo thaan. Deepika enna pesinanu yaathu enkita ellame solita.. naan konjam konjam ah yaathu kita ellathaium solanum nu decide panitaen. but thaniah kootitu poi vera mathiri solanum nu ninachaen. aana nadanthathu vera avlo thaan"

Athulya eyes brimmed with tears. 

Athulya mind voice- "Siddhu, naan ketaenu ellar munnadium soniah? un manam pogum nu therinjae soniah? ellar munnadium apadi kenjinuyae enkita.. sorry daa naan thaniah kootitu poi pesirukanum.. una naan than hurt panitaen". She wiped her tears, the next second. 

Rakshan- "sari vidu. nadanthathum nallathuku thaan. mudinchatha pathi yosikama aduthu ennanu paaru.  ipo enga ellarukum therium so deepika naala perusa ethuvum panna mudiathu"

Siddhik- "ava saithan vida mosamanava.. ava epadi nadipa nu ungaluku nallave therium. Sujan ah nalla pathuko Raksha. avanuku self control kammi. kovam vanthuta avlo thaan.". Athulya smiled at his statement. 

Rakshan- "naan pathukaren daa"

Karthik- " dei, papa enga iruka? nee enna ivlo free ah pesura?". Athulya make sure she is hidden.

Siddhik- "ava thoongitu iruka. early morning thaan thoonga arambicha, ava enthirika late agum daa."

Karthik- "avlo neram enna da panna?"

Siddhik- "vera enna panna porom? konjam deep ah pesinom. naan sorry sonaen. ava feel panna avlo thaan"

Athulya smiled at indirect meaning his statement had. Her tears and sorrows are far away and she is blushing now.

Karthik-  "seekram samathana paduthu daa. papa mugame sari illa. manasuku kastama iruku"

Siddhik- "athuku enaku oru help venum daa"

Rakshan- "enna help daa"

Siddhik- "enaku iniake exam duty iruku daa. athunala please, evening mela yaathu va enkooda anupi vachudunga. naan sorry solla apo than vasathiah irukum"

Athulya widened her eyes due to his plan. She blushed to the core. 

Karthik- "dei, Sanjeev sir ah investigation ku vara solitu neenga rendu perum kilmabina epadi daa?"

Siddhik- "apuram naan avala samathana padutha vendama?" He argued with them. Athulya chuckled silently.

Rakshan- "Sir ah en veetuku koopdaren. naanga ellarume anga irukom. nee daily night papa voda un veetuku poo. samathana paduthu"

Siddhik- "night thana?", he whined. Athulya bite her lips to control her giggling. 

Karthik- "thola urichuduven daa. nee samathana paduthuren nu inum konjam aluga vitruva papa va.. muthalla night samathana padutha try pannu. mudialaina apuram paakalam."

Siddhik- "sari daa. naan pathukaren.", he left out a long breathe and said.

Rakshan- "papa kita paathu pesu daa.. ethavathu help venumna kelu"

Siddhik- "hmm"

Karthik- "intha candle night dinner ellam book panalam la daa, engayavathu kootitu poi romnatic ah pesi sorry solalam la.."

Siddhik- "intha problem mudiatum kootitu poren."

Rakshan- "sari, papa enthiruchathum inga vaa. anga samachukitu irukaatha."

Siddhik- "illa da, yaathu ku matum samachikitu irukaen. ava tired ah irupa pasikum"

Rakshan- "vidiya vidiya aluga vachuruka pullaia, ithula daily night vera vitrunga nu kekura.."

Siddhik- "athu nethu first time la athaan aluthuta"

Athulya gasped a little at his statement and thought, "dei, anna enna keta, nee enna pathil solra"

Karthik- "ennathu first time?"

Siddhik- "athu.. athaan daa... naan sorry kekurathu nethu than da first time. ini palagidum avaluku."

Athulya slapped her forehead without making any noise and entered kitchen calling Siddhik loudly. She didn't want their conversation to get continued. 

Siddhik ended the call immediately and turned to her. She yawned and looked at him with a smile. 

Siddhik- "enthrichutiah? coffee tharava?"

Athulya- "hmm, yar kita pesitu iruntha?"

Siddhik- "Rakshan thaan, kilambi vara solli sonaan. ipo pain epadi iruku? okay vaa?"

Athulya- "hmm. epo ponum?"

Siddhik- "nee kilambinathum"

Athulya just nodded at him with a smile. They both got ready to Rakshan's house. When they entered the Rakshan's house everyone are already there except Sanjeev and Durga. 

Athulya- "Neenga epo da vantheenga?"

Pragyan- "apovae vanthachu. Rakshan anna thaan konja naal inga iruka solli ketanga. Sanjeev sir inga thanga porarula athunala"

Athulya- "hmm, appo Malar akka vum Priyanka akka vum?"

Rakshan- "avangaluku separate room koduthutaen ma. Sujan kum Pragyanukum kooda thani room koduthutaen maadila. Sanjeev sir-um avar wife um keela right side room la irupanga. naanum Karthik-um left side room"

Athulya- 'appo naanga.."

Karthik- "un purushanuku unkita sorry kekanumam.. athunala neenga unga veetuku poiruveenga.. but papa lesula manichudatha.. nalla alaya vidu"

Athulya mind voice- "ithu veraya? naan enga avana alaya vida.. avan thaan enna oda viduraan"

Rakshan- "paravalla nu pavam paathu vitratha papa"

Athulya mind voice- " aiyo anna avan thaan vida matikuraan"

Siddhik looked at her with naughtiness  and said with a wink "chumma sonna vitruvena Raksha, athellam ava manasara manikura varaikum naan sorry ketutae irupen daa."

Athulya mind voice- "ivan unmaialaye manasara manikura varaikum nu thaan solrana illa masamagura varaikum nu solrana? ayyo en puthi yaen ipadi yosikuthu"

At the same time Sanjeev and Durga entered the home with a bag. Everyone greeted them and they had breakfast. Vinay and Logan went to office with Priyanka since they scheduled interview today. Malar went to College for inspection. 

Pragyan- "sir naan appo show ku kilambaren.. Yaathu nee ini nalaila irunthu vara mathiri irukum.. apuram unta solal maranthutaen. un show ku etho Kaithi nu oru id la irunthu mail varumae, avanoda content inaiku special program iruku.. neeum ketu paaru"

Athulya- "enna special program?"

Pragyan -"un program ah re-telecast thane panom. athuku reason ketappo mails varathu illa nu report panen.. appo ellathaium check panitu, antha Kaithi mails ku nalla response vanthatha paathu namma manager mail pannaaru"

Athulya- "ennanu mail panaru?"

Pragyan- "thodarthu letters podurathuku.. athuku avan oru condiiton potrukaan"

Athulya looked at Siddhik once and asked, "enna condition?"

Pragyan- "antha aalukum avanga wife kum etho prachanaiyam, antha ponnu avanga amma veetuku poitalam. so sorry solli oru peria essay and verse anupirukaan.. atha advertisement pola appo appo oru kutty bites mathiri pota naan thodarnthu eluthuraen nu sonaanam.. Namma manager um idea nalla iruku, neenga anupunga nalla iruntha panrom nu solirukaaru"

Athulya- "apuram enna aachu?", 

She looked at Siddhik via corner of her eyes and Siddhik winked at her. Athulya jerked and then looked at Pragyan.

Pragyan- "mail manager ku vanthuchu. padichu paatha manager ku romba pudichu pochu. paiya pakava eluthirukan aththu. semmaiah eluthirukaan. Manager udane okay panitaaru. Senthil anna than read panna porathu.. iniaku just trial thaan, makkaluku pudichuruntha ithu continue agalam.. nee venumna ketu paaru unaku pudikum.. "

Athulya just nodded her head. 

Sujan- "ellar veetlaium pondattikum purushanukum prachanai thaan pola..", he mocked.

Pragyan- 'amam sujju. satharanama vaikura show la kooda polambuvanga.. veetuku veedu vsapadi mathiti pola. Sari naan kilambaren", He left.

Karthik- 'avan avan pondatti ta sorry keka enna ellam panran. neum thaan irukiae. ipadi ethavathu different ah yosichu papakita sorry kelaen da"

Siddhik pouted and looked down. Athulya widened her eyes witnessing his act.

Durga- "aduthavana namma yaen follow pannaum.. oorariya keta thaan sorry ah, naalu sevathukulla keta sorry illaya? Nee onum kavalapadatha mini jesus. namma vera idea panalam. naan venumna idea tharatuma? "

Rakshan- "ethuku puthu puthu idea ellam? pesama thaniah kootitu poi kaala vilunthudu kutty.", he teased.

Durga- "ungalauku kalyanam panika thevayana pathu poruthamum pakava iruku boss". Everyone giggled. 

Karthik- "irunthu enna prayojanam. Siddhanuku thane agiruku.. athukkelam oru ithu venumla"

Rakshan- "dei, unna..". Everyone laughed at them. after minutes,

Siddhik- "naan kilambaren. enaku exam duty iruku". He told to everyone and neared Sanjeev.

Siddhik- "varen sir, pathukonga. afternoon vanthiduven"

Sanjeev- "athu enna kaithi? full name enna?", He raised his left eyebrow and asked. 

Siddhik raised his eyebrows and looked at him for a second. He then said in a low voice, "Ratchasiyin kaithi"

Sanjeev- "hmm, nice name. All the best". They both hugged once and Siddhik left blinking at him with amusement.

Durga - "enna rendu perum katti katti pudichukureenga? ethuvum ragasiyama?"

Sanjeev- "ithuku koodava di porama paduva.. sari vaanga plan panalam.."

Rakshan, Karthik, Sujan, Athulya, Durga and Sanjeev started to discuss seriously. 

Sanjeev- "nan Gugan pathi um, Deepika pathuim visarika sonaen.. athula pala unexpected informations vanthathu.. "

Durga clutched Athulya's hand little and blinked her eyes. 

Sujan- "enna Sir athu?"

Sanjeev- "First, Deepika Gugan oda ponnae illa. inum sollapona Gugan ku kalyaname agala"

Rakshan- "WHAT?", he stood up in shock. 

Sanjeev- "Second, Deepika oru prostitute. sila idangalla prostite ah sale panuvanga.. apadi sales la than Gugan Deepika va vangitu vanthirukaaru"

Karthik- "WHAT?", he stood up in shock. 

Sanjeev remained silent to give them time to compose themselves. Sujan started to think deeply. 

Durga- "adutha point ethavathu sollu Jeeva, inum aththu enthirikala". Athulya looked at her and chuckled. She is not affected by the truth. 

Rakshan, Karthik, Athulya and Sujan looked at Durga and Athulya once, composed themselves. They composed themselves easily since Athulya is not much affected. Of course Durga eased the environment. 

Sanjeev looked at Durga and She smiled sheepishly munching her snacks. Sanjeev left out a long breathe. 

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