Thedalgal Theerathini

By ParvathiSureshSharma

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It is an story which is an ashaangi version of Bangalore Days. It is not exactly like that film. There are di... More

Chapter 1- Introduction
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47 -- Mature content
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
Chapter 56
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Chapter 59
Chapter 60
Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 63
Chapter 64
Chapter 65
Chapter 66
Chapter 67
Chapter 68
Chapter 69
Chapter 70
Chapter 71
Chapter 72
Chapter 73
Chapter 74
Chapter 75
Chapter 76
Announcement -- Janana Ragasiyam
Chapter 77
Chapter 78

Chapter 55

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By ParvathiSureshSharma

AN: Due to a reader come follower request, trying a new thing in this flow. 

Hope you all will like this. No Prof read kindly adjust.

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Rakshan served food for both Athulya and Siddhik. Siddhik is still in pouted face. He is drawing pattern in the food and didn't started to eat. Rakshan and Karthik exchanged glances. They chuckled and went out. Athulya started to spoon feed him. Siddhik smiled and started to eat. 

Athulya chuckled and said, "unaku kolupu jasthi Siddhu"

Siddhik- "thitikitae oota koodathu yaathu. sapadu udambula ottathu"

Athulya- "yaar sonna?"

Siddhik winked and said, "naan than solren". Athulya giggled. 

They both had their own time. Siddhik fever got reduced much. He looks very normal now, since he took much rest from yesterday night. They had their food and sat on the sofa. Siddhik pulled her towards him and made her sat on his lap. Athulya wrapped her hands around her shoulder and kissed his head. Siddhik hugged her and rested his face in her neck. They remained in that position for a minute. 

Siddhik- "ellame solitangala?", He slowly started. 

Athulya- "hmm, ellame solitanga.. kadaisiya, deepika va mirati unoda certificates vangi anupunathu varaikum solitanga", She blurred out. 

Siddhik moved away from her and asked, "WHAT? Avala miratinaangala? ennanu? enna certificates?"

Athulya looked at him confused, "unoda ella certificates um, experience apuram clearance certificates ellame unaku mail panathavum post panathavum sonanga"

Siddhik- "mail-um post-um anupinangala?" he furrowed his eyesbrows and gave it a thought, "athu irukatum, avala epadi ivanga miratinaanga? enna solli miratinaanga?". Athulya hesitated to say. 

Siddhik understood her and asked, "Rakshan veetla deepika enna pesina?"

Athulya remained silent. 

Siddhik- "please di sollu. karanama thaan kekuren". 

Athulya told him everything. Siddhik started to think something serious. 

Siddhik kissed her forehead and said, "unkita epadi ellam share pananganu theriala but deepika nalla ponnu thaan yaathu, thappana arthathula solala. enna nambu. Naan unarnthiruken ava nalla ponu thaan"

Athulya looked at him with a shock and confusion. He slowly moved away and sat in the sofa. He didn't asked anything further to her. Athulya too didn't asked anything. His words are the biggest shock to her. 

He started to wait back for Rakshan and Karthik. Sujan and Pragyan too came after their work. They saw Siddhik is sitting in sofa without even sparing a glance at him. They neared Athulya and asked her what. They moved aside and she shared with them everything. All the incidents without much details and emotions. She just said what happened to them. Sujan and Pragyan are shocked to the core. They are unable to digest anything. 

After a while, Rakshan and Karthik arrived. Siddhik is seriously thinking about something still. 

Rakshan- "enna da romba peria yosanaiah iruku?", He sat on the sofa and teased him. 

Karthik- "entha naata pudika ipo ipadi utkanthiruka?", He teased and leaned back. 

Siddhik- "naan anaiku ponathuku apuram enna nadanthathu?", He asked in a stern voice.

Rakshan and Karthik sat straight and looked at him. Then they looked at Athulya. She looked at them worried. 

Rakshan- "papa solalaya?"

Siddhik- "nee sollu Raksha, enna nadanthathu?", he asked him in a stubborn voice. 

Karthik- "ethuku valakkam pola Deepika nalla ponnunu puranam padava. dei ippo unaku kalyanama agiduchu. inum avala pathi yosichukitu iruka?"

Siddhik- "dei, ena veri yethatha. naan onum avala pathi thappa yosikala. topic ah mathama enna nadanthuchunu sollunga.. enna solli mirati deepika ta enoda certificates vangineenga?"

Rakshan left out a long breathe looked down and said, "anaiku avaluku surprise panna ponomae appo record pana video irunthathu. atha vachu mirati thaan.."

Siddhik stood up and clutched Rakshan shirt with at most rage. No one expected this. Athulya, Sujan and Pragyan are shocked to the core. 

Siddhik- "dei... unaku ipadi panna epadi da manasu vanthachu? yen Rakshan ah da nee? antha nilaila, antha nimishatha kaati ya nee ....?". 

Siddhik slapped him hardly unable to control his anger. Rakshan looked down in guilt. Athulya looked at them with confusion. Even Sujan and Pragyan too confused and anger on Siddhik' s act. 

Karthik came in between, pushed Siddhik away and shouted, "ipo athanala enna da ippo? haan.. ava unna ellar munnadium avamana paduthuva.. poruki nu pali poduva. oora kooti adi vanga vaipa. naanga matum onume panna koodatha? gnayayama paatha avala kondrukanum da.. "

Siddhik- "kondruka vendiathu thane", he shouted back at him. he then lowered his voice and said, "konnuruntha kooda parava illa daa.. nee avala konna kooda enaku ipadi valichurukaathu daa."

Karthik- "avala ninachu unaku kastama iruka? una pola oru muttala naan paathathe illa da. ava unna yemathinathu ellam maranthu pocha. satharanama enga kooda palaguratha kooda kevalapaduthi unna evlo peria depression ku thalluna nu maranthuducha unaku?", he clutched his shirt and shouted. 

Siddhik pushed him away and said, "athukaga oru ponnoda antharangatha epadi da use panuva? avala naan en kadhali nu unga ellarukum arumuga paduthinen da. appo ava ungaluku thangatchi daa. ungaluku avala pudikalainalum thangatchi nu thanada pesuveenga. ava mela enna verupu irunthalum kovam irunthalum, epadi daa ipadi paneenga? "

Rakshan with a weak voice told, "naan pannathu thappu nu therium daa. aana unna kaanum, enga thedium kidaikala. un aparment, veedunu ella idamum vanthu paathutom. nee illa. intha certificates illama unnala aduthu oru nalla job ku poga mudiathu. Nee nalla irukanum nu than da ipadi panen. atha paathavathu engaluku un mela kovam illa nu purinchukitu varuva nu than da panen."

Siddhik clutched his hairs and shouted, "aiyo nee anupuna mail, post nu ethuvume enaku varala Raksha. " . Everyone got shocked. 

Karthik- "apuram epadi?"

Siddhik- "naaan anga irunthu muthalla apartment ku thaan odinen. enna ellarum thorathura mathiriye illusion irunthathu. konja nerathula ellathaium pack panitu anga irunthu kilamba paathen. appo oru china paiyan vanthu kaila oru file koduthaan. antha akka unga kita itha koduka sonanga nu solitu oditaan. naan pathapo deepika than iruntha. antha file la ennoda ella certificates um irunthathu da. pesalam nu ponapo, car la yeri poita.."

Rakshan- "Enna da solra? apo una viraturathu thaan ava plan ah?"

Karthik- "poruki nu pali pottu viratinava ethuku unaku ella certificates um kodukanum?. dei unmaiah thaan solriah? illa deepika nalla va thaan naanga ninaikanum nu solriah?"

Siddhik- "Naan unga kita marachurukenae thavira poi sonathu illa. ava thaan kodutha. "

Rakshan neared Siddhik and asked, "please da, nee deepika va kadaisiah paka ponapo, annaiku center la enna nadanthathunu sollu. "

Siddhik looked at Athulya once and looked down, closing his eyes and fisting his hands. Rakshan and Karthik are struggling to say anything understand his actions. Rakshan and Karthik took many deep breathes to compose themselves, but no one asked Athulya to leave. There is a prevailed silence in the room. 

Athulya- "enakaga thayangama pesu Siddhu"

Siddhik- "vendam yaathu, naan pesura ovoru varthaium unaku valikum."

Athulya- "athellam valikathunu naan poi solla maten. valicha nee aruthal sollu Siddhu. Enna sari pana vendiathu un poruppu. athukaga ipo pesama vita, namma oru mudivuku vara mudaithu. enaku enamo peria sathi irukumo nu bayama iruku". Siddhik hesitated a little. 

Sujan neared Siddhik and in a soft tone he said, "ipadiye thayangina kulapam thaan adhigamagum. unaku oru relationship irukunu therinju thaan aththu kalyanathukae othukita. thayangama enna nu sollu anna please. nee ipadi kastama irukuratha paaka mudiala. una suthi etho sathi nadakura mathiri thonuthu. manasukulla aluthuthu"

Pragyan- "please anna, manasu vitu pesunga. naanga ellarume irukom unga kooda. Rakshan anna Karthi anna mathiri ipo unga kooda nangalum irukom. annaiku enna nadanthirunthalum enga anbula matram irukaathu"

Athulya- "please Siddhu, naanga yarum una judge pana porathu illa"

Siddhik left out a long breathe and said, " anaiku Rakshan kooda sanda potutu kovama naan Deepika va paka ponen. ava appo aluthukitu iruntha. patient iranthathula thaan alugura nu ninachu samathanam panna ponaen. 'Intha pavathuku enna thandanai kidaikumo theriala pa' nu aluthaa. manasuku kastama irunthathu.

ava ennoda sign ah fake ah potu thaan inject pannanu therium. fake form ah kilichu potutu original form ah eduthu fill panni sign potu koduthen. intha paliah naan yethukaren nu sonaen. avaluku entha problem um varathunu sonen." 

Rakshan and Karthik looked at each other. 

Rakshan- "ava unna mirati sign vangalaya Sid?"

Siddhik- "illa Raksha, Nane than sign panni koduthen. submit panirukura project, mariduchu nu unmaiah sonen. en kaila irukura  original project oda copy irukura pen drive ah ava kita koduthen ava siricha, romba valiyoda siricha. "

Rakshan, Karthik, Sujan, "ethu?". Athulya widened her eyes in shock.

Karthik- "original project ah ava kita koduthutiah?"

Siddhik- "amam annaike koduthuten."

Sujan- "apuram yen athe project ah complete panna solli enga ellaraium ivlo pressure panranga?"

Siddhik- "neenga athe project ah thaan panreengla? ennoda incomplete project thaan panreenganu therium, but athu sperm cell development ah?"

Rakshan- "amam da, atha complete panni thara solli enna pala thadava ketruka. Naan mudiathunu thitti anupiruken ovoru thadavaium. ithana varushathula ava vanthathu antha project kaga pesa matum thaan."

Siddhik- "aana, naan atha avaluku epavo koduthuten. athu mattum illa Surprise panna porathuku munnadi kooda oru mail avaluku paniten. "

Everyone are shocked by this information. They are unable to understand anything in this. 

Karthik- "antha project ku ava deal pesi vachiruka, velinaatu karan oda. 20,000 kodi ku mela. project kaila kidaichum yen ava onume panala. inum yen ava namma pinnadiye suthitu iruka?"

Siddhik- "unaku epadi therium?"

Karthik- "dei, naan hack pani paathu therinjukiten da"

Siddhik- "kandipa ava deal pesiruka maata."

Athulya- " annaiku apuram enna aachu?". She encouraged him to continue. 

Siddhik left out a long breathe, looked down, closed his eyes and said, "alutha, romba alutha. anaiku night nadantha visayathukaga alugura nu ninachen. naan avala thappa ninaikalanu sonaen. Naan impotent illanu phone la copy paniruntha test results ah kaatinen. Namma ini  santhosama valalam nu koopten.."  A lone tear fell from Siddhik eyes. Tears fell from Athulya eyes. She wiped it quickly. 

Rakshan - "ennathu?", He asked out of a complete shock.

Karthik- "paithiyama daa nee? unaku vetkam manam soodu soranai ethuvume illaya?"

He shouted in peak. Sujan and Pragyan too widened their eyes. Athulya calmly observed everything composing herself. 

Rakshan- "arivu nu onnu unaku iruka? epadi da unnala ipadi ellam nadanthuka mudiuthu. ava unaku panathu pacha throgam.", He shouted with red shed eyes.

Siddhik- "illa da naan thaan avala yemathinaen. avaluku enna pudichurunthathu, avaluku en mela interest irunthathu, ava enkita sariah thaan iruntha arambathula. ennala thaan avala nerungavum mudiala, avala yethukavum mudiala. oru ponnu thane mun vanthu nerungum pothu vilagi pona, avaluku epadi valikum? antha valiah naan adikadi koduthiruken avaluku. appo ava pakura parvai.. ". His whole body shivered.

Rakshan- "Deepika onum pacha kulanthai illa nee puria vaikurathuku. Nee vilagum pothu, suicide panipen nu mirati thaan unna othuka vacha"

Siddhik looked at Athulya once, looked down and said, "En pidivathatha pathi unaku therium Raksha. Naan ninachiruntha setha saagu nu solitu vanthiruka mudium. avala vera mathiri handle paniruka mudium. aana naan ovvoru thadavaium ava miratina udane othukiten. ava naan than venum nu pidivatham pudikurathu enaku .. enaku... ", A lone tear dropped on his hand. 

Karthik - "dei, Sid", he sat near to him and pressed his shoulders. Siddhik turned towards him and hugged him. He shed tears.  Rakshan and Karthik looked at each other and then looked at Athulya with guilty. Athulya just blinked at them. she is in deep thinking. 

Sujan- "aluthathu pothum. thirumba mudiama vanthida poguthu", He gave water to Siddhik. Siddhik had it and composed himself. 

Athulya neared Siddhik, placed her hand on his and asked, "nee kooptathuku ava enna pathil sonna Siddhu?"

Siddhik looked at her with painful tear filled eyes. This situation is torturing him like anything. Even Athulya is experiencing the same. Athulya wiped his tears. Siddhik too wiped her tears which then Athulya realized that she is also tearing up. 

Athulya- "Enakum kastama thaan iruku. aana inaike ellam pesi mudichudalam. please Siddhu"

Siddhik nodded, took some deep breathe, tightly clutched her fingers, looked down and started to say, "naan kooptathuku siricha, oru mathiri vithayasama siricha. apuram thalaila adichukitu alutha. kovama kathina. 'inga irunthu odi poo, intha pakamae varatha' nu alutha. kenjina. naan avala samathana padutha thaan try panen. ava sonnatha kekala. appo thaan naan approve panna Rakshan project ah kaamichu miratina."

He stopped and took deep breathe. Athulya patted his back. Within seconds Siddhik again continued. 

Siddhik- "nee inga irunthu poidanum, inga yaroda contact laium iruka koodathu. illaina, Rakshan name ah delete paniduven nu miratina. Rakshan oda dream antha award vangurathu. avanukae theriama naan approve panen. avanoda birthday gift ah intha visayatha solanum nu ninachukitu irunthen. Matha contestants ah vida Rakshan odathu different ah iruntathu kandipa award kidaikum. Organizer ku detailed mail kooda anupiten.  Rakshan 3 place kulla varuvaan nu enaku reply vanthirunthathu. avan birthday anaiku itha kodukanum nu asaiah kaathirunthen. yenga Rakshan name ah delete paniduvalo nu bayama irunthathu. avan kanavu kalaiya koodathu nu, avala convince panna try panen. ava othukala. oru mathiri, veri pudicha mathiri kathina, 'inga irunthu poidu, yarukum theria koodathu unna pathi' nu"

Athulya patted his back and asked, "apuram enna aachu othukitiya?"

Siddhik rubbed his face and said, "pothum yaathu please.."

Athulya- "sathyama naanga yarum unna judge panala. please Siddhu, manasukullayae vachu kastapadatha. naan iruken unaku. please solidu. manasu vitu pesu"

Siddhik leaned front, clutched his hairs looking down and said, " 'Naan ipo poren. ellaraium vitu poren. aana unakaga epavum kathirupen. nee intha problem ah ninaichu kulambi iruka, ithu ellam solve anathum varen' nu sonen. apo thaan naan konjamum ethir pakathatha senja. unaku puriala daa nu kathina. 'nee sonna keka maata daa, una epadi thirumbi vara mudiatha padi viratanum nu enaku therium' nu kathitu naan ethir paakatha nerathula ava.. ava.. ava...", he shivered a little. 

Athulya pressed his hand on his thigs. He closed his eyes tightly and continued, " avalae thaan kai kitta, kauthu kita dress ah kilicha, kilichu en mela thooki erincha. naan shock agi nikkum pothe door pakama pona, appo thaan ava pannapora thappu enaku purinchathu. anga athana perumae aangal thaan Yaathu, pengal rendu moonu per thaan. athana per munnadi ava ipadi poga koodathu, intha poi ah solla koodathunu naan vegama poi avala pudichen. vendam, nane poidaren nu kathinen. aana ava athukula kathava thoranthuta. avala ulla iluka try panen, ava romba force ah velila odaavum ava dress en kaiyoda.."

Tears flown from Athulya's eyes, Siddhik turned towards her, kneeled down before her and clutched her hands and said, "sathyama ulla iluka thaan try panen yaathu. aana ava chudithar munnadi mulusa kilinchuduchu. rendu perumae ethir pakala yaathu, ava athirchiyila uranche poita.  sathayama naan venumnu panala yaathu. ava koni kurugi Keela utkanthu alutha maraika thuni kooda illama, verum inners oda. ava kita poga vidama ava appa pudichu adika arambichutaru. Kaila irukura kilincha dress ah kuduka vidala...  avaluku yarume help panala yaathu, oru mathiri paathanga...  room ku odavum avaluku vali vidala. Rakshan kooda enna thaan kaapatha vanthaan. ellar munnadium athe nilaila kuni kurugi keela utkanthu alutha yaathu. athana peraium divert panrathukaga ellaraium thalli vitutu odinaen. en pinnadiyae thurathitu vanthanga. avalum room kulla odita. naan venumnu panala yaathu. sathyama theriama nadanthiruchu."

 Athulya - "illa Siddhu un mela thappu illa. enaku puriuthu". She hugged him

Siddhik- "enna nambu yaathu. naan poruki illa. naan therinju ava dress ah kilikala. naan theriama thappu paniten. sathyama venum nu panala di. Naan poruki illa yaathu. enna nambu naan venumnu thappu panala..", he started to cry.

Athulya- "enaku puriuthu Siddhu. relax. sonna kelu realx.. " She patted him. 

Siddhik- " Dress ah naan than kilichaen. aana naan poruki illa Yaathu. ellarum avala apadi paathanga, orutharum vali vidala. enna vedika paka nikura mathiri avaluku vali vidama marachutanga.. ellam ennala thaan yaathu. naan thaan pudichu iluthaen. Naan thapu paniruka maten thaan rakshan ninaikuraan aana naan paniten yaathu. athana per munandi avala naan antha nilaila nikka vachuten... ava enna appo paartha parvai.. ", he slapped his forehead forcefully. 

Athulya tightly gripped his hands and stopped him. She wiped his tears and started to kiss his lips. Others turned around with tear filled eyes. Their kiss lasted for minutes. They separated when there is a need for air. 

Siddhik composed himself a little. Athulya moved a little away looking at Rakshan and Karthik. Rakshan and Karthik neared Siddhik and hugged him. Pragyan and Sujan neared Athulya. Athulya leaned on Pragyan's shoulder and clutched Sujan's hand. 

Karthik- "nee thappu panala daa. nadanthathula yaar thappum illa daa. "

Rakshan - "sorry da. un mela pali pota kovathula naan avala gavanikala. en lab coat ah naan koduthurukanum.. sorry da"

 After a while, slowly crying sound got reduced. They all composed themselves. There is a prevailed silence in the room. 

Athulya- "okay, ipo enaku konjam pesanum". Siddhik looked at her with painful eyes. Rakshan and Karthik too looked at her with guilt. 

Athulya -"Deepika voda behaviour romba vithayasama iruku. avaluku nee than venumna, Un test reports pathathum unna yethukitu irukanum Siddhu. avaluku project thaan venumna, nee kodutha pen drive ah vachu ineram ava kaasu sambathichurukanum. annaiku nadantha sambavathula Siddhu mela kovam na, ava Rakshan anna name ah delete panirukanum but ava ethuvume panala.. "

Sujan- "appo avaluku enna than venumam"

Pragyan- "project ku pesina dealing ellam vachu yosichu paatha, deepika pinnadi yaravathu irupangalo?"

Athulya- "Enakum antha doubt thaan. Deepika va irukaathunu Siddhu solratha paatha. Deepika va vachu vera yaro plan panra mathiri iruku"

Siddhik, Rakshan and Karthik looked at each other. 

Athulya- "un project ku reason enna Siddhu, enna karanathukaga intha project ah develop panna"

Siddhik- " Namma naatu makalukagavum, military service panravungalukagavum thaan. pothuva oru chinna adi patruntha kooda war time la reject paniduvanga. War la udal urupugala ilanthavangala military la irunthu anupiduvanga. ellarukum second chance kidaikanum nu thaan."

Athulya- " Siddhu, ithuku pinnadi peria visayam irukalam nu enaku thonuthu.. naan onnu sonna kepiah? ". Siddhik nodded his head. 

Athulya- "oru CBI officer irukaru, peru Sanjeeva Rudhran, CBI wing la DIG avaru. show panum pothu pesiruken avar kita help kekalama."

Pragyan- "othukonga anna, semma talented person. summa naalu nalula psycho va yae pudichuruvaru. Legal complaint thaan venum nu avasiyam illa. "

Sujan - "amam, antha center la etho thappa iruku. sila peroda patent right original paper kooda miss agiruku. pesi pakalam"

Athulya- "enaku enamo deepika va black mail panni ithellam panrangalo nu thonuthu., oru vela apadi ethavatha iruntha kaapathidalam"

Siddhik, Rakshan and Karthik looked at each other and nodded their head. Pragyan went to invite Sanjeeva Rudhran.

Athulya extended her hand and Siddhik rushed to her. They both hugged each other. 

Athulya- "i like you Siddhu. like you so so so much"

Siddhik smiled with teary eyes and said, "I love you Yaathu, I badly want to love you a lot Yaathu"

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How is it?

Based on a follower request i involved Sanjeev from Kalla Kaamugane. He is having a guest role here along with Durga. Hope you like this flow.

A long long update and next update will be on Monday. 

Please do vote and comment. 

Parvathi Suresh Sharma.

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