Thedalgal Theerathini

By ParvathiSureshSharma

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It is an story which is an ashaangi version of Bangalore Days. It is not exactly like that film. There are di... More

Chapter 1- Introduction
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47 -- Mature content
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53
Chapter 55
Chapter 56
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Chapter 59
Chapter 60
Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 63
Chapter 64
Chapter 65
Chapter 66
Chapter 67
Chapter 68
Chapter 69
Chapter 70
Chapter 71
Chapter 72
Chapter 73
Chapter 74
Chapter 75
Chapter 76
Announcement -- Janana Ragasiyam
Chapter 77
Chapter 78

Chapter 54

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By ParvathiSureshSharma

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Athulya started to cry. Tears are flowing from his eyes. Now she completely understood why Siddhik is unable to explain his past. She completely understood his pain. She cant able to bear that he has gone through this much. She can feel Siddhik's trust towards Deepika. Siddhik started to doubt his sexual interest believing her. Always Siddhik will talk about the trust and belief. Now only she understood why he is behaving like that. 

Rakshan sat near to her and gave her water. Athulya with tear flowing eyes looked at him. 

Rakshan- "inum mudiala.. nee ithuke ipadi alutha epadi? inum paaki iruku papa"

Athulya wiped his tears and tried hard to compose herself. 

Karthik- "unnala mudialaina inoru naal pesikalam paapa"

Athulya- "illa anna, inaike solidunga. ipove Siddhu ku ellam therinjathum naan epadi react panuven nra ennam irukum. ithula pathi thaan enaku therium nu therinja marupadium Siddhu ellam theriathukaga wait panuvaan. vendam anna."

Rakshan- "sari coffee potu kondu varen. kudichutu pesuvom.."

Karthik- "nee avana ethuvum.."

Athulya- "oru vela Deepika voda varthaia nambi Siddhu unga mela asai patruntha kooda naan thapa eduthuka maten anna. enaku ennoda Siddhu thaan venum. Siddhu va ipadi kolapi unarvugaloda vialyadina avala enna panren nu mattum paarunga."

Karthik chuckled and said, "engalukulla irukurathu anbu matum thaan papa. Avan ilantha ella anbaium anubavika ninachaan. athanala enga kita mattum avanoda kulanthai thanam velila varum. athu avanoda yetkam asai. night thoogum pothu pesuvom, appo sila samayam avanaium ariyama neraiah pesuvaan.  apo avan manasulla yetkam ellam share panirukaan. muthal muthalla avan keta kelviyae amma kati pudicha epadi irukum? appa adicha epadi irukum nu thaan. avanuku apadi ellam avan life la nadantha mathiri gnabagame illa. kanavu kooda hostel la irukura mahtiri thaan varum nu solluvan.."

Rakshan came there with a coffee. He gave it to Athulya and she had it. After a while, 

Athulya- "sollunga anna"

Rakshan- " annaiku siddhan rombave mosamana mana nialaila irunthaan. oru ponna paaka kooda kolathula, paaka koodatha nerathula, athuvum paakave koodatha seyal la avan paathirukaan. antha ponu avan kadhali vera. ithuve avanuku romba pathippa koduthurukum. pothathuku naangalum kooda irunthirukom. Nanbargal than kadhaliya intha kolathula paathutangale nu oru pakkam oru mathiri irunthathu avanuku. ini ava thaan en valkai nu enga kita avan pidivathama sonnan. aana antha ponno ivana vendam nu vera oruthan kooda iruka.. Enga munnadi avan kooni kurugi ninnan. Deepika ta yen enna yemathina nu kooda kekala. avanukae pathil therium. unaku girls mela interest illa nu thaan solluva nu mudive panitaan. "

Karthik- "avana enga kooda kootitu varum pothu kallu mathiri irunthaan. veetuku ponathum thaniah oru moolaila poi utkanthutaan. mulusa oru vaaram aachu avana konjam sari panrathuku. avanuku enga munnadi varathukae avamanama asingama irunthathu. Romba kastapattu avana normal akinom. aana, thaan oru ambalaye illa. yarkitaiume interest varala nu mudive panitaan. avana kootitu poi test eduthom, vera epadi avana namba vaikurathunu engaluku theriala. "

Athulya just stared at them. 

Rakshan- "test results ellam normal ah irunthathu. but avan manasu atha nambala. appo en mama ponnu Pavithra va kooptu pesa vachaen. Pogum pothe , 'thanna thedi vara anba uthasina padutha koodathu naan sonathu unmaia thaan, aana athukaga intha alavuku kanmoodi thanama oruthara nambavum koodathu. anba ellarukum kodukalam aana nambikkaiah thaguthiyanavanga mela thaan vaikanum. yemathina ava mela vaikura nambikkaiah enmelaium konjam vai. oru scientist ah yosi' nu solli anupinen."

Karthik- "pavi papa thaan voda pesina naal naalulaye avan full ah clear agitaan. oruthara mentalla epadi epadi ellam mould panni impotent akalam nu theliva sonna. Pasangala mattum illa, ponungalaium ithu pola lesbians aaka mudium. Food moolamavum panalam, mentalla affect panium panalam nu ellame explain panna. Deepika plan pani thaan avana impotent aka try panirukanu theliva purinjuduchu. But deepika enna panalum ava mela entha oru interest um varalayae nra oru visayam avanuku uruthite irunthiruku. appo thaan, pavi oru idea kodutha. athuku apuram thaan avanuku thelivu vanthuchu."

Athulya furrowed his eyebrows and looked at them. 

Rakshan- "athu onum illa papa, sila A grade movies um, konjam depth ah kaama visayangal katura movies um paaka vachen. He is having feelings, but avanuku deepika mela thaan feelings varala. appo than avan complete ah thelivanaan. ithu ellam mudiurathuke 10 days agiduchu.. athuku apuram centre poi paatha, Deepika engaloda project ah ava panna mathiri solitu iruntha."

Karthik- "Deepika voda intension ennanu apuram thaan purinjathu. ava kuri antha science project thaan. engaluku siddhan-oda ulaipa ava thirudurathu pudikala. so naan system ah hack pani ava submit panna siddhan-oda project ah eduthaen. Rakshan atha mothama mathitaan. intha project create panum pothu siddhan -uku sila failure concept irunthathula athula onna fill panni vachutan"

Rakshan- "Deepika avamana paduva nu mattum thaan naanga ninachom. aana nadanthathe vera. Engaloda project head siddhan thaan. athu hundred percent success nu avan thaan approve pananum. avan approve pani, athuku apuram chief head approve panna piragu thaan, oruthangaluku kodukave mudium. Siddhan oda sign ah Deepika ve potu, project ah ava panna mathirium Siddhan approval panna mathirium maathita. Chief head oda sign illamalaeyae, naan mathi vacha project ah paathu prepare panni,  atha oru patient ku inject um panita yarukum theirama"

Athulya- "aiyaiyo apurma enna aachu?"

Karthik- "avan iranthu poitan. romba mosama, avanoda udambu ellam kopulam vanthu veengi mosama thudichu sethupoitaan. intha visayam peria news agiduchu center la. intha visayam siddhan ku therinchathu. avan oru mathiri tention agitaan. avanala intha thangikave mudiala. Leave ah cancel panitu center vanthan antha paiyana paaka. iranthu pona paiyanuku kalyanam kooda agala. avan appa amma aluguratha paatha siddhan romba odanchu poitaan. antha paiyanoda irappuku avan thaan karanam nu ninachaan."

Rakshan- "Thannoda project naala thaan sethu poitaan nu odanchu poi aluthutu irunthavankita naan poi ella unmaium soliten. enkooda romba sanda potaan. athuku apuram Deepika va thedi ponaan, naan evlavo thaduthen ava kita pogathanu but avan kekala.. rendu perukulla adithadi sandai kooda vanthathu but avan en petcha kekama avala paaka ponaan.. appo, appo..."

Rakshan stopped after that. He is struggling to continue. Athulya went and took some water for him. Karthik too leaned backward and closed his eyes. A lone tear flown from his eyes. 

Rakshan drank water, cleared his throat and started to say.

Rakshan- "avan kilambina konja nerathula naanum pinnadiyae vanthaen. manasuku etho thappa patuchu. avana thaniah anupiruka koodathu nu thonuchu. aana naan anga poi nikkum pothu... Deepika room la irunthu odi vantha anga anga kilincha dress oda, Siddhan avaluku pinnadi odi vanthaan, avan kaila kilincha avaloda chudithar tops irunthathu, avan onnume puriama ninnan. enaku etho thappa nadakuthunu purinchathu. Athula Chief head vanthu avana aranchu, 'pombala poruki naayae, en ponnayae abuse panriah' nu adika arambbichutaru. niraia peru sethu adichanga. naan ulla poi thaduka paathen. enmelaium adi vilunthathu.. avan anga irunthu enga ellaraium thali vitutu oditaan. athu thaan naan avana last ah paathathu"

Tears flown from his eyes. 

Karthik- " athuku apuram avan address ah kandu pudichu poi paathom. avana kandu pudika mudiala.  force panni Siddhan than patient ku inject panna sonnan nu Deepika poi solita, patient iranthathum paliya avala yethuka solli compel panathagavum, athuku mudiathunu sonnapo thaan abuse pannathagavum ellathaium avan pakkam thirupi vituta. oru kolaikaran num, pombala poruki num ellarum avana pesinanga. engaluku romba kastama irunthathu. " 

Rakshan- " avan bayathoda, asingathoda, avamanathoda odinathu ipo varaikum en kannukulla iruku. enaku antha center pogave pudikala. deepika la signature forgery panita nu prove panna try panen. but signature kooda avlo clear ah irunthathu. ennala ethuvum panna mudiala. Ava room kulla CCTV illa, Velila irukura CCTV la ava odi varum pothu ivan pudicha mathiri pathivagi irunthathu. ellame avanuku ethira irunthathu. avanthaan abuse pannan nu satchi solla kooda aatkal irunthanga ellame Deepika oda vela. iruka pudikama, transfer kaetaen, appo thaan chief kooptu pesinaaru. enoda previous project select agirukunum enaku award kidaika chance irukunnnum sonnaru, ennaku award kidaicha athu intha center ku perumai nu sonaru. naan poi list ellam check panen. 4 masathuku munnadi ulla contest ku en project ah approve panathe siddhan thaan. enake theriama koduthirukaan. "

Karthik- "athuku apuram Siddhan epadium vara maatan nu purinchathu. so, avan life nalla irukanum nu naan record panna intha video va kaati miratti Deepika kita Siddhan-uku proper experience certificate, reliving certificate ellam vaangi athula oru digital copy ah avanoda home town address ku anupinom. ellathaium copy panni mail um anupinom. epadiyavathu avan vera oru nalla velaiku poganum nu ninachom"

Rakshan- "Mirattum pothu, Siddhan kaiyalutha avalaye poda sollum pothu thaan Deepika olaruruna. anaiku approval sign potathu Siddhan than nu sonna. net la kitathita video va leak panna pora mathiri black mail panna pothu thaan sonna, Siddhan kaiyaluthu potatha poi soliruka, ava signature forgery panala. athuku pathila gnayam keka vantha Siddhan ah miratti kaiyaluthu poda vachuruka. avan sign panna  thaan contest la en pera saepaanu. illaina delete paniduven nu. enaka thaan ethuvum sollama poirukaan. "

Karthik- "Avana kaiyaluthu poda vachu, avan konjamum ethir pakatha nerathula nadakam aadi, avana mothama athirchi aaki avamana paduthi, kooni kuruka vachu thorathi vitruka.. ivvalavum kevalam oru project kaga paniruka"

Athulya- "apadi enna project na athu? "

Rakshan- "Stem cells development. Stem cell, thoppul kodi. Thayoda thoppul kodi aala oru uyira entha nilailaium kaapatha mudium, oru uyira uruvakavum mudium. avanoda araichiyae oonamutravangaluku stem cell moolama udal pagatha valara vaikurathu thaan. porakkum potho, marabanu naalaio, illa accident layo, entha urupu ponalum thirumbi atha valara vaikura araichi thaan avan panaan"

Athulya widened her eyes. 

Karthik- "munnadi ellam oru thayatha porantha kulanthaiku katti viduvanga theriuma? atha epavume avuka vida matanga, valanthathum kaluthula sivapu kayirula kattuvanga illaina aruna kodila kattuvanga. antha thayathula thoppul kodiya thaan cut panni vachirupanga. entha marunthalaium kapatha mudiama porappo, thoppul kodiya thayathula irunthu eduthu, kallula urasi maruntha kodupanga. atha kudichu uyir polachavangalum irukanga. ithu munnorgal maruthuvam."

Rakshan- "Pothuvave oru project failure aana, atha apuram disturb panna matom perusa. but Deepika itha pala peruku assign panna, yaravathu itha success aakanum nu romba pressure poda arambicha. Enkita video irunthathala enna perusa ithula ilukala, but mathavangala romba torture panna."

Karthik- "Marupadium hack panum pothu thaan therinjathu, Deepika intha project ah velinatuku vilai pesirukaanu. namma nattoda oru kandupudipa panathuku asai pattu deal pesitu vanthiruka. athu matum avanga kaiku pochuna apuram namma makkal romba kastapaduvanga. intha treatment process ku apuram avanga thaan amount fix panuvanga. namma naatu makkala ithoda payana mulusa adaiya mudiathu"

Rakshan- "Intha project Sujan kaiku varum nu naan ninaika ve illa."

Athulya- "correct ah thaan vanthiruku. neenga perusa worry pannatheenga anna. ipo thaan nangalum irukomla pathukalam"

Rakshan and Karthik looked at each other with a meaningful look. 

Rakshan- "Nee than Siddhanoda wife nu therinja piragu unaku engala pudikanum. athe pola, avan mela nee unmaiana anbu vachirukanum nu asai paatom. athuku thaan annaiku antha fever drama."

Karthik- "avana pathi pesinathuku nee kovam aanapo engaluku evlo santhosama irunthathu theiruma?"

Athulya- "hmm, ellam mudinchatha illa inum iruka anna?"

Rakshan- "ellam soliten ma. ini nee than Siddhana handle pannanum"

Athulya- "athellam enaku chappa mater, salt water, naan pathukaren anna. Siddhu enthiruchurupannu ninaikuren naan ulla poi paakatuma?"

Athulya asked the last line with a sheepish smile. Rakshan and Karthik giggled and nodded. Athulya flew to her room. 

Rakshan- "etho oru peria baram iranginathu pola iruku"

Karthik- "Enaku oru inam puriatha nimathi iruku daa. thookam varuthu "

They both leaned on the sofa and closed their eyes peacefully with smiling lips. They believe Athulya to the core. 

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In Siddhik's room, Athulya lied near to Siddhik and hugged him. 

Siddhik rolled a little towards her and asked, "enna flash back session mudinchatha?"

Athulya shockingly asked him,  "nee mulichu thana irukiah?"

Siddhik- "less dosage anti-biotic thaan koduthaan. seekrama mulipu vanthiduchu. ipo than marupadium refresh agitu vanthu paduthen"

Athulya- " oh, velila varanum nu thonalya?"

Siddhik- "illa, unakaga kathiruka thonuchu"

Athulya- "naan intha visayathula ethavathu mudivu edutha nee enna support panuviah"

Siddhik- "Nee enna panalum athu en mela ulla anbu naala thaan. Nan support panama epadi di ratchasi?"

Athulya- "nee tension ah irupa nu ninachen"

Siddhik chuckled and said, "I trust you more than my self. I like you Yaathu ma.". Athulya hugged him tightly and kissed his forehead lovingly. 

Siddhik- "fever unnakum otira poguthu di.."

Athulya- "ottitu poguthu."

Siddhik- "kasakasa nu iruken di"

Athulya hugged tightly and said, " irukatum "

Siddhik chuckled and said, "velila un annanunga irukanga"

Athulya put legs on him and said, "irukartum. door lock agi thaan iruku"

Siddhik too hugged her. Athulya pressed his head in her chest. Siddhik rubbed his face once and then started to kiss it. Siddhik put his legs on her waist and wrapped her. 

He is hot and she believed that is not only due to fever. She could feel his manhood. Athulya smiled automatically. 

Siddhik- "enaku unkita matum thaan mood varuthunu perumaiah iruka?", he mumbled in her ears with his base voice. 

Athulya widened her eyes and looked at him with a shock. He is right. He said exactly the words, she is having in her mind. Siddhik smiled kissed her cheeks. 

Siddhik- " Enakanava kita matum thaan enaku asai varum nu appo theriala di", he said with a pain. 

Athulya- "hmmkmm, intha therinchukura saakula live show paathiruka, bit-uh padam pathiruka."

Siddhik chuckled at her reply. Athulya casually eased the situation. 

Athulya- "enna arivu unaku? evlo naeka nee permission oda palana padam paathiruppa. amam ethana padam pathirupa?"

Siddhik- "kanaku vachukalayae.. maranthupoitenae..", Siddhik rubbed his face in her neck and said in a teasing tone. 

Athulya- "ethey?? etho rendu naal paathanu anna sonannga.. nee enna ipadi solra?"

Siddhik- "rendu naal illa, one week. ella link laium pathuten. pala positions therium. try panalama?", He neared her ears and mumbled in a low base voice. 

She felt goosebumps all over her body. Siddhik could feel her changes too. 

Siddhik- "enna ninachathum, un udambu fulla poo poothu vetka paduthu di. enake enakana matrangal", He kissed her neck and she moaned a little.

They heard a door knocking sound at that time. They both composed themselves and moved away. Athulya opened he door without adjusting herself. 

Karthik looked at her and noticed her hair, her blush, her shock, then peeked inside and said, "dei, sapda vaa neram aachu."

Siddhik raised his hand alone and gave him a thumps up symbol without moving his body. 

Karthik chuckled and said, "vaa papa eduthu vaikalam"

Siddhik sat up from the bed abruptly and said, "avala yenda koopdara? nee poi eduthu vai"

Karthik- "katchala vachukiru kalavani thanam panatha. thoalchiruven . nee vaa papa polam". 

Karthik caught Athulya wrist and went with her. Athulya giggled. Siddhik pouted and followed them.

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