Thedalgal Theerathini

By ParvathiSureshSharma

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It is an story which is an ashaangi version of Bangalore Days. It is not exactly like that film. There are di... More

Chapter 1- Introduction
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 47 -- Mature content
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
Chapter 55
Chapter 56
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Chapter 59
Chapter 60
Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 63
Chapter 64
Chapter 65
Chapter 66
Chapter 67
Chapter 68
Chapter 69
Chapter 70
Chapter 71
Chapter 72
Chapter 73
Chapter 74
Chapter 75
Chapter 76
Announcement -- Janana Ragasiyam
Chapter 77
Chapter 78

Chapter 46

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By ParvathiSureshSharma

An: A long update for friday

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Days passed and each day Athulya will go to college in the morning and then to the FM in the afternoon. Rakshan will come there to pick her up and then she will go with him to his house. She had a good siblings bond with the four men. Pragyan spend quality time with Priyanka in between. In the evening, Sujan will come and pick Athulya back to their home. Sujan will started to prepare dinner with Malar. At night she will have a night walk with Siddhik or they will together enjoy her Diary show. 

On a fine day, In Rakshan's home, Rakshan hanged the marriage photo of Athulya and Siddhik. Karthik, Logan and Vinay looked at it with a longing eyes. 

Athulya- "en antha photo va ipadi sogama paakureenga? avlo mosamava irukom"

Vinay- "inum konjam better ah comment panirukalam"

Logan- "enga kitaye potu vanga pakuriayae papa"

Athulya- "sari sari sollunga, kannula kaveri part time ah vanthutu poga karanam enna?"

Karthik- "vera enna papa, kalyanatha kannala paaka mudialayaenra yetkam thaan"

Athulya looked at them pitifully. Four men is still staring at the photo. Athulya left out a long breathe and turned aside. 

Rakshan- "nadanthu mudinchatha epadi matha mudiatho athe mathiri athoda pathipaium maatha mudiathu.. intha yetkam engaluku epavum irukum papa" 

Suddenly she turned to them and said,

Athulya- "unga yetkatha naan theethuvachuta?", The four men looked at her with shock the next second. 

Vinay chuckled and said, " thirupi unnala epadi kalyanam panika mudium? marupadium epadi avan thaali katuvaan?"

Athulya- "panita?", She again asked them with curiosity.

Logan- "ithuku thaan sonen ivan pota coffee ah kudikatha nu.. paru, moolai lesa jerk aguthu".

Athulya- "pch, intha kadhai ellam vendam. oru velai thirumbi unga kannu minnadi Siddhu en kaluthula thaali katita?"

Karthik- "ithellam risk papa, avana ellam unnala samalika mudiathu. athu epadi thirupi kalyanam panna avan samathipaan?"

Athulya- "naan othuka vachuta?". The four men looked at each other with confusion. 

Rakshan- " avan unaku thali katuratha nerla paaka naanga enna seiyanum? "

Athulya- "sathayam pananum.. kandipa naan past pathi keka maten. atha thavira naan enna sonalum seiven nu sathyam papanum neenga, Siddhu mela."

They looked at each other. 

Logan- "avanoda past therinjuka thane enga kooda nee palaga vanthathe, atha thavira unaku enna venum enga kita? "

Vinay- "sathiyam panni kekurana, aapo naanga vendam nu ninaikura visayatha thaan keka pora. apuram epadi naanga sathyam panrathu?"

Athulya- "vendam na panatheenga. Siddhu marriage ah vida ungaluku unga bayam perusa pochu", She tried to trap them.

Karthik- "engaluku avan kalyanatha pakurathu thaan mukiam, aanalum nee enna kepionu.. ", he stopped in the middle. 

Rakshan- "nee kandipa engala kaya paduthura mathiri ethuvum keka porathu illa. enaku athula nambikkai iruku. Naaanga sathyam panrom. nee matum enga kannu munnadi Siddhu va un kaluthula thaali kata vachuta nee solratha seiyurom, en Siddhan mela sathiyam ", he looked at others. 

Logan- "sathyam"

Karthik- "sathyam"

Vinay- "sathyam". Athulya jumped and clapped her hands in joy. 

Karthik- "aana, epadi nee itha panna mudium?"

Athulya- "enaku inum thaali pirichu koorkala.. antha function ah persa vachidalam". The four men stood up widened their eyes. 

Rakshan- "sariana aalu than nee, theriama sathyam panitenae.."

Karthik- "naan apove ninachen plan vachirupanu.. aana, epadi unaku takkunu thonuthu"

Athulya- "thirumbi paaru anna, TV la antha scene thaan oduthu"

Four men turned around and saw that in which hero is tying Mangal sutra again to heroine in front of all the ladies. 

Rakshan chuckled and said, "engaluku avan kalyanatha pakanum nu asai irukura mathiri, avan kalyanatha yerpaadu pananum nu asaium, yetkamum iruku papa"

Athulya- "ponnu veetu karanga thaan yerpadu pananum. Sujju, Prajju kooda senthukonga. Siddhu ku perusa theriama maintain panalam"

Karthik- "hmm, ithukum sathyam venuma.."

Athulya- "athellam sathyam illamale ungala seiya vachuduven.. amam, ungaluku intha muthiyor illam ellam pogura palakkam iruka?"

Logan- "iruku naan athula oru committee la member"

Athulya- "super. appo avangala audience ah kooptralam. Neengalum athula vesham potutu vanthu utkanthukonga"

Vinay- "avlo thana? illa inum ethavathu iruka"

Athulya- "unga yetkatha poruthu plan marupadum.. vara friday vachukalam. konjam simple ah irukatum."

Sujan came at that time, "hi seniors?". Everyone smiled and nodded at him. 

Sujan- "enna aththu face jolikuthu, enna visayam"

Athulya- "enaku thali pirichu korkura function inum nadakalaila"

Sujan- "amam athula santhosa pada enna iruku"

Athulya- "atha inga kondadalam"

Sujan- "adutha plan ah? un aaluku theriuma?"

Athulya- "samalichukalam"

Sujan- "Sari vaa polam"

Athulya- "vara friday vachukalam"

Sujan turned around and said, "yei mudive panitiah nee? nalla naal ellam paka vendama?"

Athulya- "athu thaan amma pona varam pesum pothe sonangale, Raji akka ku friday thaali pirichu korka poranganu, enakum pananaum thaan ketanga.. naan than exam start aga poguthu, ipo vara mudiathu nu soliten"

Sujan- "evlo naal la exam unaku?"

Athulya- "inum 10 days la exam vanthidum. Two days munnadi than confirmed time table vanthuchu.. athukulla Siddhu oru thani time table potu koduthutan, padikurathuku"

Sujan- "ipo frunction vacha nee padipiah?"

Athulya- 'athellam mudium. ellame naan already prepare panathu thaan. notes kooda anna koduthutanga"

Sujan nodded his head. 

Athulya- "Bye anna. Solla maranthuten. exam vanthiduchu. ini naan vara maten. holidays mudichutu varen"

Karthik- " appo FM"

Athulya -"athu bulk ah pesi koduthuduven. mudiatha patchathala, retelecast panikurnagalam. already pesitaen. ellame Siddhu plan thaan. strict ah solitaan only studies nu"

Rakshan- "eppo la irunthu vara matta?"

Athulya- "two days than varuven anna. apuram vara maten. College laye than irupen nu ninaikuren. theriala, Siddhu ku than therium"

Karthik- "appo function plan ellam"

Athulya- "phone panunga anna"

Sujan- "athaan nanga irukome pathukalam". Karthik and Rakshan looked at each other. 

The four men then bid bye to them and they started to leave. 

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At night, In Siddhik' s room, Siddhik lied and Athulya too lied in his arms. Siddhik is facing the ceiling. 

Athulya- "Siddhu, enaku oru asai", she played with his shirt button and started. 

Siddhik- "sollu yaathu, panidalam", he casually said.

Athulya- "thaali pirichu korkanum enaku.. enga akka Raji ku ellam panna porangalam"

Siddhik- "exam mudinchathum vachudalam", he furrowed his eyebrows and said. 

Athulya- "pch, naan amma ta vendam nu soliten.. namma inga panikalam please"

Siddhik- "ingaya?", He was shocked a little by her request. 

Athulya- "amam Siddhu. anga panna enna potu uluki eduthuvanga.. inga namma jolly ah panikalam pa"

Siddhik rolled a little and looked at her eyes for a moment. There is a longing and expectation in her eyes. 

Siddhik- " ipo enna thideernu ", He neared her face and asked. 

Athulya- "Marupadium thalli katikanum pola iruku un kaiyala". She moved her eyeballs down.

Siddhik- "ithaium naan thane di ratchasi katinen", he intentionally said to tease her. 

Athulya- "appo nereiah kulapam irunthathu Siddhu, bayama irunthathu, perusa enjoy pana mudiala, unaku enna pudikanum nra ennam epoparu mandaila odite irukum Siddhu. Oru visayatha kooda enjoy panala.. manasu epopaaru kuthirai mathiri oditu irunthathu. Tension ah irunthathu, so ipo panikalam. jolly ah panikalam. oruthara oruthar feel panni panikalam.", She said with her unique way of expression.

Siddhik left out a long breathe and said, " athaan mudivu panitiyae apuram enna? "

Athulya- "enna aluthukitu solra? unaku vendama?", She turned a little.

Siddhik- "enaku enna di thirupi thirupi ethana thadava venalum katuren, but ellam sambarathayathaium correct ah follow pananum.. athuku okay na enakum okay", He hugged her like consoling her. 

Athulya- "haan, ellame correct ah follow panidalam, athukenna", She is still facing the ceiling.

Siddhik- "ellame pananum", He stressed each word pulling her towards him more closer. 

Athulya- "ellame than Siddhu", She still didn't understood and said casually. 

Siddhik- "next day varaikum ellame follow pananum", He rubbed his nose in her cheeks.

Athulya - "athaan solliyache inn..", then only it got strike for her that he is talking about the night. 

She looked at him via corner of her eyes. Siddhik looked at her intensely. 

Athulya- " leave vita apuram than nu soneenga ", she said in a mild tone..

Siddhik- "athuvum leave thane? thirumbu di", He said seductively to her. 

Athulya- "aana, athu exam kaga kodutha holiday, paravallaya?",She slowly turned towards to him drawing pattern in his chest.

Siddhik- " yen unaku padikanuma? vendama? ", He cupped her face and asked. Athulya bite her lips to control her blush. 

Siddhik - "nee mattum kadicha pothuma, appo nanu..", Athulya looked at him with confusion. 

Siddhik started to bite her lips and kiss her clearing her confusion. They had their own intense moments and slept cuddling with each other. 

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A week passed very soon. Sujan and Pragyan started to take care of the organizing the function. When Siddhik was about to involve in it, Pragyan strictly stopped him stating that they should do that. Rakshan, Karthik, Logan and Vinay involved in the process without Siddhik' s knowledge. They took dress not only for Athulya and Siddhik, but also for everyone. 

Vinay took care of the arrangements in the small Mandap near the temple. Logan took care of arrangements for the old people to assemble there. Karthik took care of priest and other needed things for the spiritual process. Rakshan took care for purchasing everything for this function. He also bought gold coin with Maga Lakshmi image, red carpel gem stone to add along with Mangal sutra. Rakshan took care of the photographer and the video arrangements.

The big day came, Siddhik, Sujan and Pragyan got ready in silk veshti and shirts. Malar, Priyanka and Athulya are in Shining sarees. They all are glowing due to the teasing by the boys. They all reached the small Mandap. Many old people assembled there. 

Siddhik- "yaar ivanga ellam? Yaar koopta? yaroda plan?"

Pragyan- "naan than anna, enga director moolama oru orphanage la irunthu kootitu vanthen, aseervatham panna"

Siddhik- "ellam semma plan pola", He started to observe everyone. In that Karthik, Rakshan, Vinay and Logan are also present in the old person costume. 

Pragyan- "light ah anna"

Siddhi near the priest and told something in his ears. He nodded his head. Siddhik then went to Pragyan and told something in his ears. He widened his eyes and looked at Siddhik with shock. 

Siddhik- "emotional ellam apuram agikalam. ipo poo. seekram vangitu vaa". Pragyan nodded his head and went. 

After a while, 

Siddhik- "Sujju inga vaa". Sujan neared him. 

Siddhik- "inga utkaru", he showed the stage.

Sujan- "naana?", He was shocked to the core. Even the four men in the crowd too got confused.

Siddhik- "amam nee than utkaru.. Malar neeum inga vanthu utkaru"

Athulya- "poi utkaru sujju, yosikama. congratulations. semma surprise Siddhu", she jumped in happiness and hugged Malar. 

Sujan- "ipove epadi? enaku ippo kalyanam vendam"

Siddhik- "unaku avlo seekram ellam kalyanam kidaiyathu", Sujan and Athulya looked at him with shock and confusion. Pragyan chuckled. 

Athulya- "appo utkara sonna". She asked in doubt 

Siddhik- "engagement ku thaan". Priyanka and Malar giggled.

Athulya- " oh, athuva? okay okay", her volume reduced a little. Sujan blinked not knowing how to react. 

Athulya- "irunthalum nee proper ah solirukalam Siddhu, ipadi enaku bulb kodukama". Others giggled loudly.

Sujan and Malar sat. Pragyan gave them the garland. They exchanged the garland by looking directly into their eyes. Siddhik started to serve Atchathai to all the elders present. he also gave it to Rakshan, Karthik, Vinay and Logan

Priest- "Siddhik in thambi Thiru Sujan enbavarukkum, Pragyan in thangiyai selvi, Malar enbavarukum, intha subayoga suba thinathil iru veetar sammathathudan. anaivarin aseerthangaludan nichayika padugirathu.."

Athulya and Pragyan stood behind Malar whereas Siddhik and Priyanka stood behind Sujan. Siddhik gave ring to Sujan and he slide it on Malar's finger. Siddhik gave another ring to Malar and she slid it on Sujan' s finger. Everyone poured their blessings. Siddhik then stood near to Athulya and poured his blessings. They all took some candid photos. 

And then after a while,  Athulya sat on the stage followed by Siddhik. They were given garlands to exchange. Siddhik smiled muttered, 'I like you' and put the garland on her shoulder. Athulya blushed muttered, 'I like you' and put garland on his shoulder. 

Priest did some rituals and they involved in that. Often they exchanged glances with cute blushes. For the whole process Athulya is smiling. Malar, Priyanka, Sujan and Pragyan everyone teased Athulya often.

Priest first gave a yellow thread to tie for Athulya. Siddhik tied Yellow thread for Athulya. Priyanka started to serve Atchathai to everyone. Then the priest took another yellow thread and tied Mangalyam, gold coin with Maga Lakshmi image, red carpel gem stone and tied everything in the thalli kodi muttering some Mantras. 

Once everything is done, Priest asked Siddhik to put the gold Thalli kodi for Athulya. Siddhik got it from him, and put it for Athulya. Everyone stood up a little and showered their blessings. Rakshan, Karthik hugged each other while Logan and Vinay hugged each other. They shed happy tears too. They saw both the things. Tying the yellow thread and also putting the thaali kodi. 

Siddhik again placed Sinthoor on Mangalyam and then at her forehead. Their eyes sparked. She enjoyed every second in it. Siddhik unable to control himself and kissed her forehead too. 

Sujan, Pragyan, Priyanka and Malar shouted in joy. The four men chuckled at witnessing it. Siddhik distracted by the noise and rubbed his nape. Athulya looked down bite her lips to control her blush. Se turned to the perfect pink. Her whole body to a slight baby pink. She shined in joy. Siddhik glowed in love. Then they all took photographs with elders.

Rakshan entered the stage and placed his hands on Siddhik' s head. He fell on his foot automatically. Till now he didn't fell on anyone's foot but for Rakshan he did. Athulya too joined him. Rakshan blessed both with the perfect old man mimicry voice. Siddhik smiled and hugged him. Rakshan lifted Siddhik up and kissed his forehead. Rakshan smiled with tear filled eyes. Siddhik hugged him once. He left the stage with complete happiness after taking photograph. Siddhik too had tears when he left. 

Athulya- 'ennachu Siddhu?"

Siddhu- "avar avlo santhosama aseervatham panum pothu enaiyum ariyama aluga vanthuruchu". Athulya wiped it and composed him. 

Then Karthik came. Siddhik was about to fell on his feet. But he stopped and hugged him. Tears flown from his eyes. Siddhik wiped his tears. Karthik lips trembled. Siddhik patted him gently a little with a smile. His eyes too had tears. 

Athulya- "pavam thatha ku avanga paiyan gnabagam vanthirukum pola", She tried to reason the situation. 

Siddhik- "irukalam, palaya gnabagamavum irukalam. nadakalaye nra yetkamavum irukalam.. Nee konjam thanni eduthutu vaa yaathu". Karthik nodded as no. 

Siddhik- "ippo paravallaya?", There is a concern in his voice. 

Karthik smiled a little painfully, hugged him once, kissed his forehead and left after blessing them. They took photographs. Siddhik gently patted his chest to calm down. 

Athulya- "ennachu?"

Siddhik- "theriala, manasukulla enamo pola iruku."

Athulya- 'athu antha thatha va ninachu oru mathiria iruku pola unaku". Athulya patted him once to compose him.

Siddhik- "irukalam..". he rubbed his chest slowly.

Vinay came after taking deep breathe. Siddhik smiled at him and hugged him. Vinay too hugged him. He slowly touched his face. Siddhik smiled and didn't stopped him. Tears are flowing from Siddhik's eyes too. Vinay touched his shoulder, chest and again hugged him. Siddhik patted him gently. Vinay then blessed the couple and went after they took photographs..

Logan came there with tear brimming eyes. Siddhik hugged him. Logan didn't left easily. he hugged him for minutes and then started to cry loudly unable to control it. Athulya, Pragyan and Sujan got panicked. They didn't expect this but Siddhik handled him in a easy way. 

Siddhik- "onum illanga ayya. alatheenga.. onum illa.. naan iruken". Logan looked at him with longing eyes. 

Siddhik- "nadanthu mudinchatha vitrunga. naanga irukom ippa. engala yethukonga. yaathu ma, vaa"

Athulya came near to him and they fell on his feet. Logan kept his hands on both their heads and blessed them. They they took photographs and he left. Sujan and Pragyan left out a long breathe. 

Sujan- "oru nimisham enaku thalaye suthiduchu"

Pragyan- 'enaku ithayamae ninuduchu"

Meanwhile on the stage, without bothering about anyone, Siddhik hugged Athulya tightly. Athulya patted him gently. 

Siddhik- "Thanks yaathu, thanks a lot. Enaku ipo thaan real blessing kidaicha mathiri iruku. ellam unnala thaan. Namma kalyanathula kooda ipadi illa. feeling blissful"

Athulya -"konjam konjam ah ellam real agidum Siddhu, Naan iruken."

Siddhik- "enathu?"

Athulya- "blessings, avanga blessing ellam real agidum."

Siddhik and Athulya looked at each other with shining eyes. Siddhik wrapped his hand around her shoulder with a smile. Four men looked at them with content heart. 

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