Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

By niabhatti

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A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... More

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
5| scared
Couple Aesthetics
6| Day 1
7| Coffee
8| Over speeding
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
11|Metro
12|Flashback
13| Exams
14| Dinner
15|Fight
16| warnings
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
23| sick
24|oh no
25| guitar
26| broken
27|Tution
28| Injured
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32| wandering
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
36| birthday
37|Driving
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
43|screwed
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
54|Dictator
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
58| unexpected
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
85|wedding bells?
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

78|new boys

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By niabhatti

"Test me fail hoh puri raat ghar se bhar?" Zaayan gasped as heard Raayan's words.

"Bhaiya me jhoot nhi bolraha Zaira pura din bolti phele to bhot bolti thi ab itna nahi bolti mene Rafay se bhi suna ha uska bhai waqai me acha bhot bossy khadoos kisam ka ha." Raayan said.

"Toh Aiza ko toh Harib bhai pasand haina! Unki ek hi bhen ha uncle aunty sab se mil kar araha hu sab bhot ache ha Raayan!" Zaayan said.

"Hosakta ha tumhari class fellow jhoot bolrahi ho?" He added.

"I know Mishi ke do bhai ha or Zaira uski cousin ha leken cousins bhi toh same hote haina! Ap api ko bolo ache se check kare phele." Raayan said.

"Harib bhai waqai me ache ha unka chota bhai Hammad se bhi mila mein ajj wo bhi ache ek toh itne sare ha mujhe naam nahi yaad rehta tum kis wale ki baat karahe ho?" Zaayan asked.

"Bhaiya bolti ha Zaira naam nahi pata leken saach me mene suna ha wo bhot strict ha ghar me sab unse darte hai mujhe toh thore pagal lagte ha." Raayan said.

"Aise nahi khete Raayan!" Zaayan glared at him.

"Ek second!" Zaayan thought for a second and said.

"Ji?" Raayan said.

"Ye larki bunk pe arahi ha?" He asked.

"Han bilkul arahi hai! Infact bhot excited ha yeh ap kyu poochrahe ho?" Raayan asked.

"Khud soochlo itni strictness me rehne wala insaan aye?" Zaayan said.

"Point!" Raayan eyes popped out as he said.

"Me Rafay se poochunga! Harib naam bataya na apne Rafay inka neighbour hai use pata hoga." Raayan said.

"Arey mere bhai! Aiza maregi tumhe bhi mujhe bhi wo koi normal larki nahi ha wo apne liye best hi choose kregi humne involvement ki toh dono pitenge choro tum! Kisi ko kuch bolna mat samjhe." Zaayan said.

"Wo marenge to apko hi marengi mujhe thori!" Raayan smirked mischievously.

"Aur mein tumhe!" Zaayan glared at him.

"Wo to do din bad wese hi maroge." Raayan muttered under his breath.

"Huh?" Zaayan asked.

"Kuch nahi room me jaraha hu good night." He said and walked upstairs.

"Late nahi jagana Aan!" Zaayan said but the boy vanished in thin air.

Zaayan rolled his eyes as he went to his room to freshen up after freshen up he walked towards his mother's room. She was sleeping peacefully so Zaayan gently pecked her feet and left the room.

Next he entered in Ayaan's room and found his little brother using his i.pad. As soon as he saw Zaayan he dropped the ipad and gave his brother a charming nervous smile.

"Sone ka bola thana mene?" Zaayan asked strictly glaring.

"Woh me apka wait karaha tha." He said cutely.

"Ayaan!" Zaayan used the full name making the boy immediately blurt out the truth.

"Wo ek ke bad ke exciting level arahe the." He said slowly.

Zaayan held his hand forward asking for ipad the little boy very obediently gave him because he knew better than arguing and the looks his brother was giving him right now he can never stand a chance against it.

"Exciting wali pitai hogi na tab pata chalega." Zaayan said as he put the iPad on the table and jumped in bed.

"Sorry." Ayaan said as he hid his face in his abdomen.

"Chalo sojou ab! Sab sone ki dua parho phir sojaou." Zaayan kissed his head and started playing with his hair. The brother drifted to sleep soon after.

After icecream date with her family Mishi was feeling all better. Hammad successfully managed to make her mood good by irritating her to no extent. As soon as they reached home she decided to rush upstairs to tell Zaira and Hamza about Harib's date but much to her surprise Zaira was already asleep.

Mishi sat on her bed and shook her.

"Iraa!" She gently shake her.

"Hmm?" Zaira muttered in sleep.

"Kia hua? Itna jaldi kyu sogai?" Mishi asked.

"Tum agai?" Zaira asked sleepily.

"Han! Tumhe kia hua Mahir bhai aye the kia?" Mishi asked.

"Nahi! Bhaiya ne plan cancel krdia." Zaira replied as she sat up on the bed rubbing her sleep.

"Kyu?" Mishi asked.

"Bhaiya ne kaha Hammad royega!" Zaira smirked.

"Choro in dono ko tum batou? Tabiyat sahi ha off lagrahi ho thori?" Mishi asked.

"Sahi hu mein bas cramps!" Zaira muttered.

"Ohh!" Mishi gently tucked her hair behind her ears.

"Kuch chaiye?" She asked.

"Nahi! Kuch nahi tum bataou maza ayi?" Zaira asked.

"Han! Leken.." Mishi narrated the scene.

"What the hell?" All the sleep flew away as Zaira sat up straight in anger.

"Tumne uska muh nahi tordia? Ek lagati kaas ke as*****!" Zaira said with fury.

"Bas Zairaa!" Mishi stopped her blabbering.

"Bhaiya ya chachu ne sunlia toh?" Mishi glared at her.

"Sune ne do! Aise admi ko to jail me nahi balke zindaan (close dark cage) me band krdena chaiye." Zaira said angrily.

"Bas na Iru bas! Aiza baji ne bhot mara use or I am sure bhaijaan ne bhi mara hoga." Mishi said.

"Very good! Me hoti na heel utar kar marti lafanga chichora!" Zaira said.

"Allah na kare tum khabhi ho aise situation me faltu baatein mat karo." Mishi glared at her an she scoffed in return.

"Hamza or Haadi kaha ha?" Mishi asked.

"Patanhi!" Zaira said.

"Chalo sona ha tumne wapis?" She asked.

"Nahi! Tum change krke aou apne chocolates leke ayo phir film dekhte hai." Zaira said.

Mishi smiled at her as she stood up.

"Ati hu! Five minutes." She said and left the room.

Harib entered the house a little after midnight as he dropped Aiza back to her place. Their little date turned out to be the best moment of Harib's life however they didn't talk much because Harib was still not over with happened with Mishi Aiza understood his feelings they had a icecream on a river bank and enjoyed each other's comfortable silence.

Aiza surprised him by being this understanding he have never met a person whose silence will give him this much strength. The little ice cream date under gazing stars made his day.

He entered his room with little hesitation as he expecting his siblings there but much to his relief no one was there. He sighed in relief as much as he enjoys his siblings company right now he needed a moment alone. He said wants to make few calls he wants to make sure the guy who tried harassing his sister serves his sentence. The image of Mishi crying with disheveled condition was leaving his mind.

The thought of it could ending into something super bad made him restless throughout the night. He finally concluded the night as he did the much needed work. A smile blossomed his face when he read the message on his phone.

"Are you okay now?" She asked.

"Thank you." He replied.

Aiza squealed in her bed like a little girl as she changed the name on her phone from:-
"Mr Ahmedaani to Harib with a black heart"

Harib smiled to himself as he put the phone back on the table. His sister was safe his mother was happy and she! She was 'his'.

The next evening came soon after a busy day at office the boys of the house came back from work. It was a lazy day so Hamza was chilling on the couch.

"Bacho fresh hojaou! Me snacks lagwadeti hu." Rabia said to boys who just came back. The elderly men were still not there.

Zaira's mood have gotten worse overnight she was now a crankier than ever she have snapped on several people this morning actually only two Haadi and Mishi the rest can get her in trouble.

"Nahi! Matlab Nahi!" The brother's jumped as they heard Zaira's loud voice.

Hammad rolled his eyes and Haider and Hamza turned around to see what is happening.

"Zaira please!" Mishi said.

"Samjh me kyu nahi ati Mishi! Mujhe nahi jana." Zaira yelled as they made their way downstairs her eyes met with her older brother's and she rolled her eyes.

"Great." She muttered.

"Kia hua tumhe?" Hamza asked darkly.

"Kuch nahi!" She snapped.

Haider's glare intensified as he looked at her with a warning glare.

Hamza rolled her eyes and turned his attention towards Mishi.

"Kia hua isse?" He asked her.

"Kuch nahi!" Mishi smiled at him.

"Baba khah ha?" Mishi asked Harib.

"Office me hai arahe hai! Me ata hu fresh hokar." Harib said as he stood up.

Haider turned his attention back to his sister.

"Homework kia tumne?" He asked.

"Nahi bhaiya! Abhi ek din aur haina karlungi!" Zaira replied with tight lipped smile she held back a retort knowing Haider. She was done with his behaviour as she was doing homework yesterday night to with severe cramps and now he also wants her to do it.

"You better do it!" Haider warned.

"Krlegi na bhaiya woh!" Mishi said to Haider before Zaira can dig his grave.

Haider nodded as he stood up.

"Kahah jarahe ho?" Rabia asked coming from kitchen with sandwiches in her hand.

"Ata hu bari mama fresh hokar!" Haider said.

"Hammad jaou tum bhi fresh hojaou." Rabia said.

Hammad rolled his eyes.

"Me bad mein!" He said.

"Tum khai gaye the ajj?" Mishi asked Hamza.

"Han! Dosto se milne gaya tha." Hamza replied.

"Ye Haadi kaha ha?" Hamza asked.

"Chachi sath gaya hai!" Mishi replied and Hamza nodded.

"Ye lo bacho! Tum log start kro wo dono bhi ate honge abhi." Rabia said as she served sandwiches and bakery goods.

"Zaira plate dena." Hamza asked her.

She sighed irritated and Hamza glared at her. She took the plate and gave it to him.

After few minutes Hamza was out of ketchup and it was right next to Zaira so he asked her again very casually.

"Zaira ketchup please." He asked smiling he thought smile would help her but Zaira thought he is doing it on purpose.

She picked up the dispenser and hardly threw it on his face. The bottle hit him on hard on forehead.

Mishi and Hammad gasped loudly. Hamza's eyes turned dark as anger rushed in his veins.

"Zaira!" Hammad chided.

"Me uper jarahi hu!" She said loudly and started walking towards stairs.

Hamza grabber her hand by his wrist as he stood up glaring at her.

"Hamza!" Mishi said but he just showed her his palm.

Zaira was getting scared as she was not able to look into these eyes anymore they were burning with rage.

"APOLOGISE!" He ordered Zaira in such a tone that she haven't heard in year.

"I said apologise!" He yelled making Zaira flinch.

"Sor..ry." She whispered as tears gathered in her eyes.

"Jitni zor se mara ha unti zor se bolo!" Hamza said harshly.

"Sorry Hamza." Zaira said quietly.

"Its bhai to you!" He said strictly.

"Sorry." Zaira said again.

"Apne kamre me jaou or tab tak wapis nahi ana jab tak baat krne ki tameez na ajaye!" Hamza ordered.

Zaira gulped he was looking so much like Haider that he felt scared.

"Nahi!" Mishi overruled him.

"Excuse me." Hamza asked his voice dropping.

"Room me nahi jayegi woh!" Mishi ordered.

"Chalo Zaira!" Mishi dragged her.

"Kahan jarahi ho tum dono?" Hammad asked strictly.

"Hum thori arahe hai! Mama ko batadena." Mishi said and dragged her outside the house.

"Ye Hamza ko kia hogaya hai!" Mishi asked as soon as they were out.

"Pagal hogaye hai! Ane do baba ko mein itni daant khilwangi har waqt daante rehte ha Mishi har waqt." Zaira said.

"Aur jo tumne kia uska kia?" Mishi glared at her.

"Shukar karo bhaiya nahi they!" Mishi said.

"Han wo to ajj mar hi dete." Zaira replied.

"Tumhe race ka stress haina?" Mishi asked.

"Zahir hai!" Zaira replied in small voice.

"Mujhe daar lagraha hai." She said.

"Toh mat jaou na!" Mishi said as they started walking towards mart.

"Daar lagraha ha Mishi iska ye matlab nahi ha! Sab jarahe ha mujhe bhi jana ha." Zaira replied.

"Jaou! Leken koi garabr nahi krna bas." Mishi said.

Zaira badly wants her to tell about Haadi but she couldn't. They were walking when Suddenly a sport's car entered their lane.

"Woah!" Zaira said excited nobody in her family likes these cars except her.

The car got parked right outside their next door house and a very young boy exited the car. Zaira's breath hitched as the handsome guy turned around.

He was the most handsome man ever! The most stunning boy she have ever seen he looked no more than a day above 22. He was hot stunning and very attractive the sports car was adding more to his personality.

His gaze locked with her but his immediately went to Mishi who looked away in irritation.

Zaira frowned at her behaviour.

"Ahaad!" The boy called and another boy same as Haadi's age exited the passenger seat. He come out of the car and threw his cigarette right outside Ahmedaani house.

"Bro! Please!" He whined.

"Truck araha ha 5 minutes me unload karane me help karo!" The older boy said to younger one.

The younger one nodded as he took another cigarette out of his pocket.

"Ye kesa bacha hai?" Mishi asked Zaira but seems like she was too busy swooning over the handsome adult boy.

Their presence their vibe didn't settle well with Mishi something flicked in her heart she have a hunch that these boys will bring trouble. Only if she knew.

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Hi guys! I hope you guys liked the chapter.

•Happy Holi to everyone celebrating🌸🟡

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Next chapter is racing I had to cut it today as it will all go in one chapter.

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