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Not My Little Sister [Saya]

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Book: Not My Little Sister
Author: lostlovefairy
Reviewer: sayahnika
Chapters read:

Title and Cover: 5/5
I like it. Though the font does not match the background much, it's alright.

Blurb/Description: 5/5
It was pretty elaborated, with tropes as well hinted, so I'd give a whole 5.

Plot: 10
Oh my god, the tropes are just *chefs kiss* plus I loved Vinaya's rebellious character as an Indian woman! Every paragraph is neatly explained and also matches the era. You also executed the plot very well, with little or no plotholes. neat.

Grammar/Punctuation: 10
No issues there!

Writing style: 10
I don't think there's much needed to say here. It was great. I love your writing style as much as other amateur writers here.

Overall Enjoyment: 10
I've added this book to my reading list after reviewing! Overall it was pretty good, and I hope you keep up the good work there. :)

Total: 50/50
It was a fun book to read and I will definitely put some time aside to read the entire book. Really loved it, honestly.

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