Relationships & Partners and...

By Lumna10

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Here I give my opinion on my favorite characters and their relationship with others both as friends and some... More

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Desmond's Appearances in the Sofia the First Series
Favorite Sofia The First Episode Record
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Favorite Sofia The First Episode Record P5
How I Fell In Love With Aunt Tilly
A Couple Disney Reasons To Live
Higgledly Piggledy
Bloom's Döppleganger on Andros and Meditation Lessons
Buttercups Episode Sofia The First
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Hildegarde A Princess Butterfly
Enchancia Top Language is British
Bad Backdrop Lightning Affects
An Opinion That Doesn't Agree with Wikki Fandom Of Sofia The First
Sofia The First Once Upon A Royal Knight
James and Jade Ship The Double J Couple & Some Major Edit Specials
More Edits of Sofia The First Princess Butterfly
Hocus Crocus Not A Made Up Flower
Praline's Male Voice Actor isn't A GOOF and Not GENDER BENDING AT ALL
Love and Respect Go Hand In Hand
Winx Club Season 4: Episode 10 Analysis On Aisha, Bloom, and Stella.
Stella & Brandon Couple Weakness
Musa & Riven Couple Romance Weakness
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Aisha & Nabu Romance Weaknesses
Bloom's and Sky's Couple Weakness
Flora's and Helia's Couple Weakness
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Star Wars Luke and Winx Club Musa Are Similar Characters
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SW Luke and WC Musa Musa Are Similar Characters Finale P23
Barbie As Rapunzel's Wrongly Claimed Goof Mistakes
Please Go To Fandom Central Wiki FandomWebsite and Report This Barbie Mod
Chantal Strand's Voice Acting in Barbie Movies.
I'm Never Ever Returning To The Fandom Website Again.
On A More Positive Note: How To Correct A Poorly Written Antagonist
My Eldest Brother's Favorite Barbie Movie as A Child
On A More Positive Note: How To Correct A Poorly Written Antagonist P2
On A More Positive Note: How To Correct A Poorly Written Antagonist P2
Quotev. Com is Now Available for Iphone As an App Yippee!
Plus One At An Amish Wedding
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Stella's Romantic Moment with Brandon and Why It Works
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Stella's Romantic Moment with Brandon and Why It Works P3
Stella's Romantic Moment with Brandon and Why It Works P4
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Fixing Musa's Flaw of Miscommunication and Passive Agressive Character Attitude
What Are The Character Arcs?
Character Arcs In Famous Trilogies
Character Arcs In Famous Trilogies P2
Character Arcs In Famous Trilogies P3
Writing Villian Arcs
Plot Holes To Watch Out For: The Obvious Solution Is Ignored
Plot Holes To Watch Out For: Off-Screen Solution That's Ignored
Plot Holes To Watch Out For: Continuity Issues Plot Hole
Plot Holes To Watch Out For: Inconsistent Magics, Tech
Plot Holes To Watch Out For: Characters Acting Out of Character
Plot Holes To Watch Out For: Abandoned Subplots
What Is Plagiarism?!
Defining What Is "Girly?"
Best & Worst Story Twists Discussions
5 Worst Villain Cliches
5 Best Villain Cliches
Good Vs. Bad Dialogue Issues & How To Fix Them
Good Vs. Bad Dialogue Issues & How To Fix Them P2
Good Vs Bad Dialogue Round 2
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Letting Characters Learn To Spell
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Character Flaws 66- 76 out of 100 Character Flaws
Character Flaws 77- 87 out of 100 Character Flaws
Character Flaws 88- 100 out of 100 Character Flaws
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Flash-Forwards And Flashbacks
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Lecture 7 The Mechanics of Dialogue
Lecture 7: The Mechanics of Dialogue P2
Punctating Dialogue Editing
Clash About Point Of Views From Two Writing Guides
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Word Choices: Adjectives & Adverbs
Word Choice: Verbs
Dialect And Slang
Onomatopoeia & Alliteration
Prepositions & Prepositional Phrases
Transition Words Lesson
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Punctuation: Parentheses & Dashes
Fragmente & Run-ons
Parallel Construction
Misplaced & Dangling Modifiers
Repetition Vs Repetitious
Sentence Combining
Sentence Variety
Stream of Consciousness: Medicine For Writers
Simile Vs Metaphors
Clichés
Tone
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Lecture 2: Building Fictional Worlds Through Evocation
Lecture 20: Building Scenes
Lecture 13: How To Start A Plot
Lecture 14: How To End A Plot
Lecture 12: Narrative Without A Plot
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Thirty Minute Essay & Beginning Drafts-Gabriel
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Writing A Sonnet -Gabriel
Writing A Limerick -Gabriel
Writing Song Lyrics -Gabriel
The Art of Imagery-Writing Haiku -Gabriel
Writing A Blank Verse -Gabriel
Lesson On Line Breaks -Gabriel
Writing A Sestina The Final Challenge -Gabriel
Things To Decide Before Your Writing Hobby Begins
This Book Is Closed

Good Vs Bad Dialogue Round 3 P2

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By Lumna10

The Third type of Bad Dialogue is Cartoonishly Evil Dialogue.

The only other toon person aside from maybe Cruella or Jafar (strictly classic cartoons) that should get a pass for this Cartoonishly Evil Dialogue of theirs is The Judge from Who Framed Roger Rabbit all of those were done intentionally to be seen as Cartoonishly Evil because the movies were using a good chunk of comedy alongside the cheesy dialogue rantings within.

1st problem villains say Cheesy things, discuss silly plans, and maybe label themselves directly out loud as evil.
2nd issue makes a villain look incredibly shallow and brainless and absolutely unrealistic.
3rd point it comes as Darn unnatural for most villains of any story to act this way.
4th point often lacks subtext.

Number 1 thing your villain should not see themselves as evil! That's the big problem, I have with Descendants Wicked World concerning Mal's character with the excessiveness lengths that CJ or Zevon go to keep reminding us Mal's suppose to evil and the "I'm Evil" song is not that cool either . Yes I said it's a stupid song on a large scale sung by Mal that she should never had to even recorded honestly, Skylights.
A villain should believe they are the hero of their story alone.

4th type of Bad Dialogue of Round 3 is a jarring change of subjects.

View The Room clip for this example in the video top of the page for this.

And 5th Bad type of Bad Dialogue is Rushed Emotional Reactions explained below.

"'Strong emotions'" the video guy emphasizes as he brings the last point that makes it poor dialogue. "'NEED Time to develop.'"

Only Stella's and Musa's emotional reactions are rushed in the entirety of Winx Club show that is cartoon. Bye, my precious sweetly dearest Skylights.

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