Anakin Prequel Trilogy Attack of The Clones'
Movie Anakin's speech when directed towards Padme are not only on the nose compliments but also very abrasive too.
The couple is from back to the future and honestly I wish more people would build romances like this one where neither side has to say I love you. Nobody needs to say "L" for people to figure out they are a couple and here is why just listen to this pastor analysis of Encanto movie I mean the very purpose of subtext is saying wasn't even showing there it is hidden in plain sight to be validated later honestly.
SO PLEASE IDIOTS Who say, "Oh, my Goodness?! Why can't they say they're in love with each other?" Go ahead face palm yourself if you want because it is a better rule of writing out romance. "The Characters Don't Have To Say It!" (Barbie & Ken in their real lives includes Dreamhouse Adventures A Touch of Magic Series excluding A Fashion Fairytale and A Fairy Secret movies this applies only to the most modern tv shows not anything else guys! Barbie in her real life world not once every time we get close it goes back to being oh he's just a friend a neighbor even.)
2. Example of Bad Dialogue: Melodrama
Musa from Winx Club falls into this bad dialogue problem because she is always angry yet never realizes she's ever angry period. And none of this anger from Season 3's not so midpoint all the way to Season 4's one sided conversations with Riven throughout the whole Season and her angry emotion is not earned because Riven's done nothing but be more of a gentlemanly gentleman than she is as an actual understanding girlfriend, Skylights. The example I believe the guy up above here at the top of the page is using a pure masculine dialogue problem from within a video game!
Notice the author calls out the use of too many exclamation points not the all CAPS letters as he is right to call that out because the CAPS Already tell us oh this character is possibly already yelling or super exuberant or even delighted.
Here it is that stupid unrealistic phrase statement popular kids use in school just to look cool and something that instantly gives them either bad boy knows it all vibes or instant Mean Girl vibes. Thankfully and Ironic Mean Girls actually Mean Girls don't fall into this messy dialogue and neither does Sharpay Evans from the Highschool Musical. This is the pure reason I hate Hildegard because throughout the Sofia The First tv show she constantly drops the. "Oh, I know you," bomb whenever she is on scene for a most important time and listening to characters brag and add an info dump is just a waste of time and animator creativity, honestly, Skylights. I will be honest every time I heard Hildegard say that I got an instant headache. This is why big blockbuster movies try not to do Narrative dumping it also why Star Wars instead of making us feel like we were attending a lecturing class where 55% of the class is more likely ready to have their heads on their desks because teachers like math professors, certain scientist teachers, history teachers and gym teachers have no idea how to make their classes funner to learn about: you get the point a boring teacher's class makes a bored learning space: hence the reason George Lucas went with scrolling the text without a voice for both original and prequel trilogy and it was reused for the sequel trilogy. It was a less abrasive way of engaging and intriguing the audience.
The Bad Example is in Lord of The Rings Fellowship of The Rings Biblo and Frodo have a random conversation about Frodo's parents and it has no significant impact on the plot at all.
Now this Frodo exists purely because it is a references to the passages in one of J. R. R. Tolkien's books where we do get more information about Frodo's parents and Merry's and Pippin's lineage too those two aren't just as common hobbits. Nope!
But the point in the video critique is saying is that in the movie sense it could have been left out and we'd still care about Frodo's journey and he's absolutely right.
I do agree that Anakin should never have been using flowery language around Padme in Attack of the Clones Movie when we have gotten used to him being so abrasive his abrasiveness should show up in the poetry he is using staying true to the current state of his voice, dear Skylights.
You'll have to watch the video for the proper good example that comes from Game of Thrones the F word is not a curse world until you combined it with something sacred that goes for any word said in anger that is proudly used in media these days and I am talking about the f word that rhymes with muck I'd prefer muck, crap or practical science terms to describe something that is slightly stupid or jerk behavior the other option this f word comes off often as too ugly and harsh. There are better ways to say you're disappointed or many than to say the most ugly harsh sounding word out there. I mean really people?! All it is doing is teaching really bad manners. So please do not use the f word that rhymes with muck because it is just giving me a headache when you comment it and I do want some day to be able to share my work on here with my parents because they encourage and inspire me every day to keep writing despite what someone tells me. And this is one thing about pop culture I will not teach the next generation I am unwilling too it is the same reason I will not teach the supposed "modernly defined term of gay) because it is ugly and ridiculous. Gay in my books means happy, jubilant and joyful merry and so on and nothing outside of those things. And it is still the number 1 definition on some dictionary websites. And nobody will tell me any different, Skylights. So if you have a problem with this opinion suck it up and deal with it in your own life and don't come complaining to me. I'm allowed to have my own rules and opinions and you are allowed to have yours. We can always agree to disagree this is the start of tolerance, friends. This part one of Good versus bad dialogue, sweet Skylights.