The Heart of Shadow and Gold

Authors note

This is going to be a fantasy novel that will take place in a completely different universe than ours that we live in, there will be love, pain, regret, and drama. There may be mentions of gore, some language, and definitely grammar mistakes. I love critique and tips to improve my writing so any corrections will be appreciated as well as helping me construct better sentences that aren't so cliche. And predictions or ideas for what i could do are much appreciated, I would love to hear your ideas and it would give me motivation to write. Characters, plot, universe, all of that stuff is mine, may have references to other fandoms as i am in a few so be on the lookout. Now, on with the story!