Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

By niabhatti

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A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... More

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
5| scared
Couple Aesthetics
6| Day 1
7| Coffee
8| Over speeding
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
11|Metro
12|Flashback
13| Exams
14| Dinner
15|Fight
16| warnings
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
23| sick
24|oh no
25| guitar
26| broken
27|Tution
28| Injured
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32| wandering
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
36| birthday
37|Driving
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
43|screwed
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
54|Dictator
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
78|new boys
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
85|wedding bells?
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

58| unexpected

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By niabhatti

Raayan quickly schooled his face and made it as innocent as he can before turning around.

He turned around but didn't move from his spot.

"Idhar aou." Zaayan said loudly and Raayan walked faster.

"Bhaiya dekho ise phele ap mujhe maro ye bhi to dekho na mene kia galti ki ha? Ab me bara bhai ho usko me nhi usko bachunga to kon krega besides mene usko daant lagai thi leken mujhe pata tha ap krdoge uska dimag set." Raayan said very quickly.

"Shutup Rayyan!" Zaayan snapped.

"Wo bacha ha samjh ata hai leken tum to bare hona? Jante ho mujhe or mere gusse ko ghar pe batadete no but you decided to lie to me." Zaayan scolded.

"Sorry bhaiya." Raayan apologised.

"Kitne din se pata ha tumhe?" Zaayan asked.

"Allah ki kasm subha subha pata chala ha Aiza api ka phone aya tha bola me jarahi hu Ayaan ko bachalena." Raayan said honestly.

"Aiza knew?" Zaayan asked baffled.

"I guess Ayu ne unhe raat me bataya he was very scared." Raayan replied.

"He should be." Zaayan replied.

"Ab hogaya na bhaiya ab jane dena bechare ko pheli maar inti maar pari ha." Raayan said.

Zaayan nodded.

"Uska me dekhlunga but you stop lying to me Raayan I am done with you both lying last chance deraha hu." Zaayan glared at him dangerously.

"Ji bhaiya." Raayan looked down.

"Me office jaraha hu stay with him ask him to write a apology card for his mam sham me jab uski tutor aye usse khena uska sst ka test le I need to see how much he knows I will personally check it just let her know okay?" Zaayan asked.

"Ayu ko bataou test ha?" Raayan asked.

"Just 30 minutes phele take wo revise krle leken usse ziyada time nhi dena mujhe seriously monitor krna agar usse subject me trouble arahi ha to me Friday baat krunga school me." Zaayan replied.

"Ji bhaiya." Raayan said.

"Ap late aouge?" He added.

"Nahi I will be back around 5 ayu upset hoga isliye dinner bhar se managleenge." Zaayan replied.

"Ok phir me jata hu sone." Raayan yawned.

"Don't let mama know about all of this wo pareshan hojaygi bilawajah." Zaayan said and turned around to leave.

Raayan ran upstairs in Ayaan's room and found him tucked under his blanket hugging his doremon tight.

Raayan joined him on the bed and took him in his embrace the brother didn't share a word but they hold each other as they slept peacefully.

Aiza and Harib were engrossed in conversation when an announcement happened.

The weather in Lahore was very rainy so the pilot alerted them about turbulence.

Aiza closed her eyes and when she opened it again a tear escaped from her eyes.

"Are you okay?" Harib noticed the panic on her face.

Before Aiza can reply a loud banging voice of cloud shook her. Aiza closed her eyes panicked.

"Aiza Aiza relax! Its just rain." Harib gently took her hand trying to comfort him.

"I am sorry." Aiza said.

"Calm down please." Harib said.

Aiza was panicking as the turbulence continued.

"You scared of turbulence?" Harib asked gently.

Aiza nodded with tears in her eyes.

"I just hate taking flights alone my baba always joins me." She replied still holding Harib's hand tightly.

Harib called air hostess and asked for a water she got him one and Harib gently made Aiza drink it.

"I promise it's nothing but rain do you want to look at the sky?" Harib asked before opening the blinds of windows.

"Please nahi!" Aiza said loudly.

"Relax Aiza kuch nhi hoga me huna apke sath! Calm down we are only 25 minutes away." Harib said gently.

"Mujhe daar lagraha crash hogaya toh?" She asked scared.

Harib would have never thought he will see Aiza at her lowest she has always been very confident boss women her scaring flights wasn't something Harib was able to understand.

"We are going to Lahore the chances are very low trust me! Besides flight is alright we are just in clouds badal ki awaz ha yeh or kuch nhi." Harib assured her in soft gentle voice.

Aiza flinched again when relatively loud thunder voice came.

Harib removed the headphone from compartment.

"Just wear it and keep holding my hand." Harib offered.

"Isse kia hoga? Plane hilna band hojaega?" Aiza snapped.

Harib looked a little taken aback.

"I am sorry!" Aiza said on the verge of crying.

"Its fine just wear it please trust me! You are scared of voice and it will calm you down. I have been on very turbulent flights and it's okay to be scared please." Harib requested again.

Aiza nodded and wore the head phones.

Aiza kept holding his hand and leaned back on the seat.

After 15 minutes the announcement came that they were about to be safely land.

Harib removed Aiza's headphones.

"Better?" He asked.

Aiza nodded shyly.

Harib smiled and pointed at his hand.

Aiza got embarrassed and left it.

"I am sorry." She said quickly.

"Its fine just gather your things we are just about to land." Harib popped his fingers as they were sore.

Aiza looked away embarrassed as she started gathering her things.

As soon as the flight landed they both made their way out and Aiza was embarrassed throughout.

"Its fine." Harib almost whispered near her ear.

"I am sorry for being a freak." Aiza apologised.

"Dont say that! Its absolutely fine please." Harib said little firmly.

Aiza raised her brows and his tone and he looked away embarrassed making Aiza laugh out loud.

"Call your cousin please I want to know agey kia hua?" Harib quickly changed the topic.

"Arey Han!" Aiza replied and started calling Zaayan.

After four rings Aiza sighed angrily.

"He isn't picking up." She huffed.

As soon as they exited the airport Harib's man was standing there with his car.

"Here sir." He gave the keys to Harib.

"Hotel booking's?" Harib asked him.

"Everything is done sir you and Mam just needs to check In." He replied.

Harib nodded.

"I think hame direct factory jana chaiye." Aiza said.

"Ofcourse I just got it reserved incase we had to stay back weather kahrab ha flights cancel hoskati hai." Harib replied.

"I am not going by air until weather gets clear me Islamabad se gari managlungi I will go by road." She replied.

Harib nodded in understanding. The man gave them umbrellas as it was raining heavily. Harib took the driving seat and drove straight towards the factory.

Haadi was laying on his bed lazily and using his phone when Nazia barged in.

"Haadi mere sath shop pe chalo I need help." She ordered.

"Mama please mujhe nhi ana me thak jata hu wahn." Haadi replied unfazed as he continued using his phone.

"Haadi mene poocha nahi ha! I said lets go matlab lets go!" Nazia said angrily.

Haadi threw the phone on bed and stood up.

"And I said no! Mujhe nahi ana zabardasti ha kia?" He said angrily.

"Haadi! Mera dimag nhi ghumou chalo." Nazia snapped.

"I said No mama!" Haadi yelled.

"Haadi!" A loud voice came in.

"Ye kia tareeqa ha apni Mama se baat krne ka?" Hammad entered the room and scolded.

"Please bhai me apni mama se baat karaha hu!" Haadi snapped at Hammad.

"Ye tum kis tone me baat karahe ho?" Hammad walked closer to him and asked.

"Arey jau na please me or mama karahe haina baat apko ki.." His words dissolved inside his mouth only.

Haad looked up shocked when he felt a sharp sting on his cheek. Hammad was never the person to raise his hands infact today is officially the first time he have slapped someone.

"Awaz neeche rakh ke baat kro! Himmat nahi hoti tum logo ki Haider se aise baat krne ki! Just because I am lenient doesn't give you a right to yell at my face! Jitni aram se baat kro utna sar charahe ho? Karoge khabhi Haider se aise baat Han? Pata haina ek second me band bajadega wo! Sahi kheta wo tum logo ko piyar ki zuban samjh nhi nahi ati." Hammad scolded with raised voice.

Haadi was just looking at him with big eyes full on anger.

"Ankhein neeche kro!" Hammad snapped and Haadi averted his gaze.

"Ap chachu se kyu nahi kheti ye itni apse batameezi karta ha toh?" Hammad asked Nazia.

"Unhone to banaya ha isse aisa! Na unko meri fikar ha na isee." Nazia seethed in anger.

"Change karke aou forran chachi sath jarahe ho tum jab tak unhe zarurt ha tab tak rohegi wohi samjhe?" Hammad asked sternly.

Haadi nodded. Hammad was never this scary so he obliged.

"Me apko krdeta hu drop." Hammad said to Nazia.

"Tumhari to meeting haina Neha sath?" Nazia asked.

"Ji ha to leken me apko drop krke unke studio chala janga its not very far from your boutique." Hammad replied.

"Chachi ap kahaye to me bhaijaan ya baba se baat karu wo kre chachu baat? He can not treat you like this!" Hammad said when Haadi left for the washroom.

"Me khud krungi baat if not than me khud bhaiya pass jaungi I am done Hammad din ba din iska attitude aisa horaha ha Haider or Harib ke alawa kisi ka daar nhi ha I am so glad you did what you did today. Mere do workers vacation pe ha new collection ani ha I just wanted someone to help leken ye larka meri sunta nhi hai." Nazia shook her head.

"Apko help chaiye to me apni meeting cancel krdeta hu shall I come with you?" Hammad asked.

"Nahi Nahi we will manage." Nazia replied.

"Sure?" He asked and she nodded.

Haadi came back from washroom.

"Phone do apna." Hammad ordered.

"Bhai jane dena yar." Haadi whined.

"Phone!" Hammad ordered.

Haadi picked up his phone and gave to Hammad.

"Ye le chachi jab tak apke sare kaam na krde tab tak na diega or agar zara si bhi batameezi kre to me pass me hi hong give me a call." Hammad gave his phone to Nazia and glared at Haadi who shrink back under his gaze.

"Chale." He asked Haadi and Nazia.

Nazia ignored Haadi and left the room. Haadi also stayed quite and made his way to the car silently.

Hammad dropped them at her store.

"Pick krwana hoto mujhe batadena okay?" He said to Nazia.

Nazia nodded and thanked him.

"Chachi ap jaou ye araha hai." Hammad said and Nazia left.

"Be on your best behaviour Haadi I am warning you! Maa ha wo tumhari respect her puri zindagi wo hamari help krte ha agar khabhi hum krdenge to kuch ho nhi jayega change your attitude with her wrna bhaijaan chachu Haider sab to bad ki baat ha I will personally deal with you." Hammad warned.

"Ji bhai." Haadi said.

"Khud Hafiz." Hammad said and Haadi left the car without replying.

Zaayan called back Aiza as soon as he was out of the meeting.

Aiza picked up and before he can even greet she made his ears ring.

"Arey arey bas kro!" Zaayan put the phone away from his phone and yelled.

"Me bas karu? Sharam nhi ayi tumhe bache ko marte hue?" She yelled.

Harib was right next to her and he was amused she was scary.

"Bache ki harkat nhi dekhi tumne?" Zaayan replied.

"Wese ye reportein de kon raha ha tumhe?" He asked.

"Shutup!" Aiza snapped and Harib tried hard to control his laughter.

"10 saal ka ha woh Zaayan! Is baar to me baba se khaungi he will deal with you abhi ghar jaou order him some food paper him and make it upto him." Aiza ordered in strict older sister voice.

"Acha meri maa jata hu." Zaayan was wise enough to obey.

"Aur agar dono ko daanta haina Zaayan mujhse bura koi nahi hoga!" Aiza sounded firm.

Zaayan was actually startled she managed to scare him.

"Ji baji." He replied.

Aiza sighed angrily and hang up.

"Itna gussa?" Harib asked.

Aiza huffed and Harib chuckled.

Zaayan came back early because he was actually scared.

"Ayu kaha ha?" He asked Raayan.

"Test deraha ha andar! He was angry bhaiya jab mene usko bataya test ke bare me! good luck." Raayan replied.

Zaayan sighed grovelling Ayaan was never easy he will whine and cry until Zaayan literally wants to bang his own head but since he have behaved like a moron in morning he will just have to deal with it.

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