Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

By niabhatti

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A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... More

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
5| scared
Couple Aesthetics
6| Day 1
7| Coffee
8| Over speeding
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
11|Metro
12|Flashback
13| Exams
14| Dinner
15|Fight
16| warnings
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
23| sick
24|oh no
25| guitar
26| broken
27|Tution
28| Injured
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32| wandering
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
36| birthday
37|Driving
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
43|screwed
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
58| unexpected
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
78|new boys
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
85|wedding bells?
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

54|Dictator

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By niabhatti

"Mujhe yahn baat krni hi nahi ha! Na mujhe apna tamasha banana haina na tumhara! Ghar chal kr hogi ab baat! Its high time I make you both realise how important studies are. Mene apni life me khabhi imagine nahi kia tha me kisi ke agey aise zaleel honga!" Mishi heard Zayaan growling at Raayan.

Zaayan was first one from the parents who confronted Mr Kaamil and all he replied was it was Raayan's doing. He also listed Raayan's troubles and lots of complaints.Raayan also scored an C in accounts.

"Bhaiya I have literally above 90% in every subject! Meri second position ayi hai! Hosakta ha accounting me kuch hua ho?" Raayan replied.

"Mera hath uth jayega agar ek aur baar ye bakwass ki! 4 saar ke bache nhi ho jo apni naqibiliyat (inability) teacher me daal rahe hai! And as much as I appreciate your other grades this doesn't fly with me!" Zaayan snapped.

Mishi wanted to continue walking but she just couldn't.

Zaayan noticed someone walking and he shut his mouth. He turned his head and sighed irritated.

"Not you again!" He muttered.

"Congratulations!" Mishi said to Raayan.

Raayan gave a her confusing look.

"Mujhe abhi pata chala you got three A*." Mishi replied.

"Thank you!" Raayan glanced at his brother and replied to Mishi.

"Aur ap!" Mishi turned her attention to Zaayan.

Zaayan sharply looked at her silently asking her to mind her own business.

"Uper jaiye or check kriye naqabil kon ha kon nahi!" She was about to turn and leave.

"I don't take orders from you! I would appreciate you minding your own business this one time." Zaayan replied.

"Well Mr perfect yahn pe agar kisi orders lene ki zarurt ha to wo hai ap! Mujhe shoq nhi ha kisi ke ghar ke mamle me bolna ke leken bumping into you again and again while you are busy showing narcissism is beyond me!" Mishi replied.

"I was talking to my brother! I am his older brother I do have a right to question him." Zaayan eyes blazed.

"Well apko pata ha bare bhai kese hote ha let me tell you! Mere chote bhai ka accounts me bhot bura grade aya and you know what my older brother did? Everything in his control to get the answer sheets because he trust his brother and turns out questions are wrong the teacher is wrong! That is what brothers do unlike you. Whatever you are doing is dictatorship!" Mishi snapped.

"Mishaaal!" Raayan yelled.

"Do not cross your limits!" He scowled at Mishi.

Zaayan felt immediate hurt. He once again did that.

"I am sorry! I I..just I don't know I am sorry!" Mishi said quickly she didn't know why she got so aggravated.

"Lets go bhaiya!" Raayan glared at Mishi. He hates how she talked to him.

"Its okay! Were you serious about this all?" Zaayan asked Mishi.

"I am! Mere bhaiya uper ha principal mam bhi uper hi hai ap milsakte ha unse." Mishi replied.

Zaayan nodded and started walking towards elevators.

"Raayan!" Mishi called.

"What?" Raayana asked with attitude.

"Raayan I am sorry! Mera woh matlab nahi tha." She apologised.

"Don't say anything about stuff you don't know! Wo sirf bhai nahi ha mere he is my father in every sense mujhe marne ka daante ka har cheez ka haq ha unka wo sirf concerned the. I used to be a worst student a student you can not even imagine he was just afraid for me I don't and will not resent him please refrain from insulting him. If you can not respect him than we can not be friends sorry." Raayan replied followed Zaayan.

Shah Alam and his family walked out from classroom after collecting Rafay's result.

Rafay scored third position making his parents proud. Well Alia wasn't able to believe. Rafay only have a B grade in accounts paper rest of them were straight As.

Shah Alam met Hatim in corridor and asked him about whatever is happening. Hatim filled him in.

Haider stopped Rafay by his forearm.

"Kia bana?" He asked.

Rafay gave him his file with a grin. Haider beamed with happiness as he hugged Rafay on the spot.

Rafay felt overjoyed when he looked up and found pride in Haider's eyes.

"Congratulations Rafay." Haider smiled at him.

"Thank you sir." Rafay replied.

"Bhai!" Haider reminded.

Rafay smirked.

Rafay noticed Zaayan and Raayan coming and immediately hugged Raayan.

"Congratulations bhai!!" He hugged him tightly.

Raayan was still in sour mood he just smiled at him.

"Kia hua?" Rafay asked.

Zaayan felt bad for destroying his brother's happy day.

Zaayan walked towards Mrs Sara and found the whole situation.

"Chalo yar bachagaya!" Haadi said to Zaira while munching on chips.

"Well! Tumhara paper me sirf ek question me garbar thi agar tum usse solve kr bi lete tab bhi you would have scored D and if not D than C you are still in trouble." Zaira replied.

"Shutup!" Haadi said to her.

"Haadi Raayan and Rafay! Mujhe yaqeen kyu nahi araha!" Zaira stomped her feet.

"Choro na hame kia! Haadi replied.

After almost one hour Mrs Sara managed to solve the entire issue. She immediately provided the new grades and apologised to parents. Mr kamil also apologised.

Haadi's grade was upgraded to C grade while Zaira's grade remained the same.Raayan also got a upgrade and his grade was now B.

Haadi walked to Haider with a proud grin.

"Dekha mera grade D nahi hai!" Haadi said.

"Ghar chalo tum toh batata hu mein! I went through your paper Haadi koi unparh bhi aise kaam nhi krta hai." Haider snapped.

Haadi's immediately losses hi smile and went to his father.

Mahir was livid on teacher his brother was on the verge of panic attack when he found his A grade instead of A*. Mahir fired the teacher because he was just not able to allow him to do this again.

The whole situation took more than three hours and the rest of teachers left. Zaira sighed in relief when Haider forgot to meet her urdu teacher.

Raayan and Zaayan were on their way back home and Zaayan was genuinely upset. Mishi's words struck him like a light the word dictator opened his eyes he regretted his behaviour.

Zaayan stopped the car abruptly and looked at Raayan.

"I am very sorry Raayan." He said in low voice.

Raayan was also upset at his brother his brother wasn't ready to listen to him and as soon as professor Kaamil listed his crimes he was far to gone in anger to reason with his brother.

"Its okay." Raayan replied.

"Aan! Please maaf kro I know messed up and I don't even have a logical explanation behind it just excuse me. I was just stressed and I took it out on you please." Zaayan apologised whole heartedly.

"Don't say bhaiya! Kal to apko phir gussa ayega phir stress hoga phas me jaunga." Raayan said in controlled voice he was seconds away from crying.

Zaayan closed his eyes in hurt he have officially messed up his brother. He was so grateful for Mishaal if not her than he would have done much more.

"Sorry bhaiya mene ziyada boldia." Raayan immediately hugged him.

Zaayan pulled apart and wiped his tears he left a kiss on his forehead.

"Don't apologise for saying right things. I am the one who is sorry." He said.

"Its okay bhaiya! Ap nhi galti sudharoge to kon sudharega I am sorry mene ziyada bakwass krdi ab sab choro or bhool jau. Khai chalte ha mujhe bhook lagi ha." Raayan wiped his tears and kissed his brother's cheeks couple of times.

Zaayan smiled at his antics but he was still very much sad.

"I am sorry for Mishaal too she crossed her limits." Raayan said.

"I needed that don't worry." Zaayan replied with a smile.

"Chale ab kal wapis krna ha apko ye sab!" Raayan laughed.

Zaayan playfully sighed and wiped his sweat from his forehead.

"Kal to alag hi khania sune ko milnge!" He joked.

The mood was immediately better this is how it always happen just a mere conversation about Ayaan makes them happy he was the light of their lives.

Later at evening Zaira meekly knocked on Haider's door as he asked them to come see him before dinner.

Zaira entered the room and crackled loud when she found Haadi doing situps and Haider standing in front of him with a big ruler.

"Aye Zaira madam." Haider allowed her to come.

"Ji bhaiya?" Zaira answered respectfully.

"Bhaiya mere pau dukhrahe ha ab! Sirf teen Cs to aye hai!" Haadi stood up.

"Ouchh!" Haider whacked him hard with ruler.

"Teen Cs?" Haider asked in disbelief.

"Teen As bhi to aye hai!" Haadi replied rubbing the sting.

"Agley saal boards ha Haadi! Kab serious hoge?" Haider asked.

"Agley saal!" Haadi replied as he shrugged his shoulders.

"Thaapar marunga!" Haider raised his hand and Haadi immediately took shield as he moved Zaira in front of him.

Haider lowered his hand and gripped Zaira's ear in a tight grip giving it a painful twist.

"Ouch bhaiya!" Zaira cried out in pain.

"Kia uoth patang krti ho tum? Class me? Har teacher pareshan ha Zaira!" Haider left the ear and scolded.

"Ab is age to sab krte ha masti!" Zaira replied.

"Rafay ko dekho! Kitna improve kia ha usne leken tumhe to koi parwah hi nahi hai!" Haider scolded.

"Toh mujhe bhar jakr parhna nahi ha uski taraha!" Zaira replied.

"Bhot zuban chalti ha Zaira tumhari!" Haider scolded.

"Dono ke dono ne naak me dum krke rakhna ha na dono ko parhan na dono ko insaan banna hai!" Haider added.

"Insaan hi to hai!" Haadi replied.

Haider whacked him again with ruler and this time harshly. Haadi jumped out of his skin.

"Samne zubaan chalwalo batameezi karwlo bas!" Haider said harshly.

"Bas na bhaiya kitna datenge! Zaira showed him puppy eyes.

"Shutup!" Haider snapped.

"5 minute deraha hu dono ke dono betho or homework kro apna 2 mahine se homework delay karahe ho." He said in angry tone.

Zaira and Haadi gulped and was just about to run outside when Hamza barged in.

"Bhaiya mama kherahi ha nani se milne hospital aou! Wo bhot upset sound karahi thi kaha hai teeno ana." Hamza reported.

Haider looked at Zaira and she shook her head scared.

"Zaira ka ana zaruri ha?" Haider asked.

"Bhaiya mama bhot upset thi hum dono honge na sath kisi ki himmat nahi hogi kuch krne ki." Hamza replied.

"Zaira please ajaou I promise I will be with you." Haider said to Zaira.

Zaira nodded and left the room.

Aiza and her family went to Zaayan's house because they were escalated when they heard about Raayan's results.

"Congratulations Aan!" Aiza hugged Raayan.

"Thank you apii!" Raayan hugged her back.

"Aur Zaayan leai tumhari mehanat rang?" Aiza's father joked with Zaayan.

Zaayan smiled.

Raayan walked towards his brother and kissed his cheek.

"Jo ha inki wajah se to hai." He said to his uncle.

"MashAllah bhabhi Allah in bacho ko khabhi kisi ki nazar na lage." Aiza's mother said to Shameem who just smiled in return.

"Chote mia kahan ha?" Ali khan asked.

"Ayuuu!" Zaayan shouted but Ayaan didn't respond.

"Mein dekh ke ata hu shayed video game khel raha hoga!" Zaayan said while walking towards stairs.

"Zai! Tum betho me dekhti hu." Aiza said and went upstairs.

"Ayu?" Aiza barged in Ayaan's room and found him sitting on bean bag hiding his face in his palms.

"Ayu baby kia hua?" Aiza asked after crouching down in front of him.

Ayaan looked up and smiled seeing Aiza.

"Mein sad hu!" He replied.

"Aur wo kyu? Hamra prince sad kyu hai?" Aiza asked.

"Mene bhot bari garbar krdi hai." He replied.

"Aisa kia krdia apne?" Aiza asked.

"Ap kal ghar ajaougi?" Ayaan asked with hopeful eyes.

"Kyu Ayu?" Aiza asked settling on the floor in Indian style.

"Take jab bhaiya mujhe mare to ap bacha sakoo." Ayaan replied.

Aiza's eyes popped out.

"Kia krdia apne?" She asked.

As Ayaan begin Aiza's heart sank in fear.

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