Hey guys!!! As always, thank you all for the love and support on Addicting Sins!
I was going through my drafts and thought it may be nice to share with you all how certain scenes in chapters originally started/evolved. I didn't go through with most of these scenes because I wasn't really feeling it or found better ways/events I wanted to take place! Anyways, enjoy!
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From Chapter 3: That Weird Word
Angel's POV
𝐂𝐨𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐱𝐭: 𝐖𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐃𝐨𝐦 𝐠𝐨𝐭 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐟𝐮𝐜𝐤𝐞𝐝 𝐮𝐩 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐀𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐥 𝐡𝐚𝐝 𝐭𝐨 𝐭𝐚𝐤𝐞 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐡𝐨𝐦𝐞, 𝐰𝐡𝐢𝐜𝐡 𝐥𝐞𝐝 𝐭𝐨 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐤𝐢𝐬𝐬.
"Woah, okay Dom. You've had enough." I said, taking the bottle out of her hand. I started to walk away but Dominique pulled me back by my shirt.
"Angel, stop." she chuckled, trying to take the bottle from my hands. "No, you stop." I laughed, holding the bottle over our heads, as if we weren't basically the same height. "Come on." Dominique groaned.
I noticed Mya in the corner watching us with a smile that was hard to read.
Suddenly Dominique snatched the bottle from my hand. "Dom!" I shouted, running after her. Dominique downed the last bit of alcohol in the bottle. There was at least a shot or two of alcohol in that bottle.
"You're an alcoholic." I laughed, taking the bottle from her. "Mm, no I'm not." Dominique groaned with slightly low eyes. "You are." I smiled, walking back towards the others.
"Unt un." Dominique pulled me back by my shirt again. "Stop doing that." I said, turning towards her.
"Why? I just want a hug." she sighed, wrapping her arms around my waist and pulling me close.
"Why are you grabbing me like that?" I questioned, wrapping both of my hands around her arms, trying to get her off of me. Dominique slowly pulled away from the hug.
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From Chapter 4: Unexpected Turn of Events
Angel's POV
𝐂𝐨𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐱𝐭: 𝐌𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭𝐬 𝐛𝐞𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐫𝐞𝐞𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞.
As I walked down the hall I heard the sound of a door opening. "Yo." I heard Dominique's voice from down the hall. "What?" I sighed while turning back around.
"Come here real quick." Dominique gestured me over. I walked back over, uninterested.
"Question." Dominique announced. I nodded, waiting for her question. "You tryna have a threesome?" she randomly asked.
"Uh, what? W-Why would I have a threesome with you?" I was beyond caught off guard by her question. "Not me. Toni." Dominique pointed towards the room door.
"She thinks you're sexy and wants to know if you'd be down to...fuck her...together. So, you trying to slut her out or what?" Dominique wondered.
"I thought that was you..." I expressed. "I mean, she's alright. I'm just trying to fuck though. Hit it and quit it. She's a little too easy for me to take her serious." Dominique quietly answered.
"But she's bad as fuck." Dominique smirked.
The room door then opened. "Did she answer yet?" Toni sighed. She then walked out more and saw me.
Toni stepped up to me. "I really want you to fuck me." she whispered in a seductive tone, running her hand up my stomach. "Both of you...please." Toni's hand ran up my arm to my shoulder.
She stood on her tippy toes, trying to whisper in my ear.
"I just know your stroke game is...mm." she practically moaned in my ear. I slightly bit my lip at the sound of her voice.
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From Chapter 12: And The Plot Thickens...
Angel's POV
𝐂𝐨𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐱𝐭: 𝐖𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐀𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐥 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐃𝐨𝐦 𝐟𝐮𝐜𝐤𝐞𝐝 𝐢𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐢𝐫 𝐡𝐨𝐭𝐞𝐥 𝐫𝐨𝐨𝐦 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐧𝐢𝐠𝐡𝐭 𝐛𝐞𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐢𝐫 𝐦𝐞𝐞𝐭 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐠𝐫𝐞𝐞𝐭. (𝐓𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐭 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐥𝐨𝐰𝐤𝐞𝐲 𝐜𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐞 𝐬𝐨 𝐈 𝐝𝐞𝐥𝐞𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐢𝐭 𝐥𝐦𝐚𝐨)
"Por qué no?" I smiled a little, lightly pressing my lips against her neck.
"...slut." Dominique's sentence sounded inaudible, like she was melting.
"Qué?" I questioned, kissing on her neck.
"...turns me into a slut." Dominique managed to get out.
"Oh? Sí, that's what I want." I smirked. "I want to see just how much of a slut you can be. Tú no?" I continued. Dominique slowly shook her head no.
I continued, speaking very freaky in spanish. Dominique turned to look at me. "I don't even know what that means but yes, because you sound sexy as fuck." she spoke.
I laughed to myself.
"Mm sí." I smirked.
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From Chapter 20: Permission
Angel's POV
𝐂𝐨𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐱𝐭: 𝐖𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐃𝐨𝐦 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐲𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐟𝐚𝐭 𝐦𝐚 𝐨𝐧 𝐟𝐚𝐜𝐞𝐭𝐢𝐦𝐞 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐀𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐥 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐜𝐚𝐦𝐞 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐩𝐞𝐫𝐦𝐢𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐨𝐧; 𝐀𝐧𝐝 𝐀𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐥 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐩𝐮𝐥𝐥𝐞𝐝 𝐮𝐩 𝐭𝐨 𝐃𝐨𝐦'𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐩𝐮𝐧𝐢𝐬𝐡 𝐡𝐞𝐫 :)
"You want some head?" I suddenly asked.
"Mm yea but, I literally just got out of the shower. I don't know..." Dominique shrugged.
I walked over to her and grabbed her neck then smashed my lips on hers. I slipped my tongue in her mouth and rediscovered it. Dominique let out a small moan.
When I finally pulled away from the kiss, I noticed that Dominique's hands were on her shorts.
"Welp, I've changed my mind." Dominique smiled while taking off her clothes.
I laughed a little at her response.
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From Chapter 21: Spoiled Baby
Angel's POV
𝐂𝐨𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐱𝐭: 𝐖𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐀𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐥 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐬𝐥𝐞𝐞𝐩 𝐮𝐧𝐝𝐞𝐫𝐧𝐞𝐚𝐭𝐡 𝐃𝐨𝐦'𝐬 𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐫𝐭 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐰𝐨𝐤𝐞 𝐮𝐩 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐞𝐚𝐯𝐞𝐬𝐝𝐫𝐨𝐩𝐩𝐢𝐧𝐠.
"I miss my girlfriend." I heard Dominique say as I slowly woke up. "What the fuck you mean you miss your girlfriend? Where is she? I thought you guys were together." I heard another voice over the phone say. A younger woman.
"We are but, she's sleep right now." Dominique sighed. "Then wake her up." I heard the other woman chuckle.
"She looks peaceful though." Dominique chuckled.
"Anytime one of my hoes sleeping and I'm bored or miss them, I wake them up." the woman spoke. "The fact that you're saying hoes is blowing me." Dominique expressed.
"Oh please. Like you ain't used to have hoes before your girlfriend, who I still have yet to meet." the woman voiced.
"I don't want you to meet her honestly." Dominique laughed.
"Why not bruh? You let my sister meet her. What, you scared Ima steal your girl?" the woman spoke. "That's not gonna happen." Dominique sighed.
"It's not. I'm on my baby real bad." I mumbled.
"Angel-" Dominique chuckled. "When did you wake up?" she then asked, laughing.
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From Chapter 25: A Christmas to Remember (2)
Angel's POV
𝐂𝐨𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐱𝐭: 𝐖𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐌𝐲𝐚 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐀𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐥 𝐰𝐞𝐫𝐞 𝐨𝐧 𝐟𝐚𝐜𝐞𝐭𝐢𝐦𝐞 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐌𝐲𝐚 𝐟𝐢𝐧𝐝𝐬 𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐚𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐃𝐨𝐦𝐱𝐀𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐥.
Dominique placed her hand on my mouth. "Shh!" she roughly whispered. I happened to look at my phone and noticed her tatted arm in the camera.
"Hey, wait a minute-" Mya tilted her head while squinting her eyes. I quickly turned the camera and audio off.
"I'm on the phone with Mya." I whispered to Dominique. Just as I said that, I heard Mya think to herself in the background. "I know those tattoos..." she thought to herself.
Dominique looked a bit too out of it to understand.
"I'm on FaceTime with Mya." I told Dominique a little more loudly. "Mhm, just be quiet." she mumbled while rolling back over.
I then turned my camera and audio back on.
"Who are you in the bed with Angel?" Mya immediately asked, smiling at the camera knowingly.
"What were you saying about the snow globe?" I quickly changed the topic. "Baby." Dominique groaned.
I quickly turned off the camera, struggling to turn off the audio.
Dominique rolled back over, cuddling up to me. "I just said be quiet. Can you please be quiet?" Dominique sighed, grabbing my jaw. "Shh, okay? You had me up all night." Dominique continued.
"Dominique!" Mya suddenly called.
"What?" Dominique answered in an annoyed tone.
My eyes immediately widened. Did Dominique just really answer Mya? Did she mean to?
Mya gasped loudly.
"Wait a damn minute!" Mya chuckled loudly. "Now hold on, hold on..." she started to say in the voice of Nicki Minaj.
I quickly hung up the call.
"Dom, that was Mya on the phone..." I said, a bit in shock. "Mhm." Dominique nodded with her eyes closed. "You just basically told her we-" I started to speak.
"I know." Dominique sighed. "You don't care anymore?" I questioned.
"I'm tired of not telling people you're my girlfriend. You get to tell your whole family. I want somebody else to know you're mine." Dominique mumbled, closing her eyes.
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From Chapter 28: Boo Thang
Dom's POV
𝐂𝐨𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐱𝐭: 𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐦𝐨𝐫𝐧𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐓𝐚𝐲𝐦𝐚𝐫 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐰𝐚𝐥𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐚𝐫𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐝 𝐃𝐨𝐦 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐍𝐢𝐲𝐚'𝐬 𝐚𝐩𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐚 𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐫𝐭 𝐨𝐧; 𝐀𝐧𝐝 𝐬𝐡𝐨𝐰𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐥𝐝 𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐛𝐮𝐬𝐢𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐬.
"Please, don't even." I held my hand up. "This literally has nothing to do with Angel and I. You got this man walking around my kitchen free balling, then you damn near giving him an erection in my face." I went off.
"Okay one, this is my kitchen too. Two, he's wearing sweats. Three, I wasn't giving him an erection. And four, I expressed to you that he be over here a lot now." Niya explained.
"If that makes you uncomfortable then express that and we can move from there, but don't be talking to him like that." she continued.
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From Chapter 31: Pre-Birthday Blues
Angel's POV
𝐂𝐨𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐱𝐭: 𝐖𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐀𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐥 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐃𝐨𝐦 𝐰𝐞𝐫𝐞 𝐦𝐚𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐝𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐤𝐬 𝐢𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐢𝐫 𝐡𝐨𝐭𝐞𝐥 𝐫𝐨𝐨𝐦, 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐝𝐚𝐲 𝐛𝐞𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐞 𝐃𝐨𝐦'𝐬 𝐛𝐢𝐫𝐭𝐡𝐝𝐚𝐲.
"This shit so good. Good job ma." Dominique smiled. I smiled a little at her words. "Now make me another cup." she said, handing me her cup.
"Who the fuck- woman I ain't your slave." I slapped the cup out of Dominique's hand.
She watched the cup fall down to the floor.
Dominique's hand suddenly went across my face. I quickly and roughly pushed her. Dominique then slapped the back of my head. I then slapped her upside her head.
Dominique attempted to kick me but I caught her leg, dragging her off the counter.
The both of us started going at it, our hits getting more aggressive and rough by the second.
Dominique and I ended up on the bed in a very odd position. We both had each other pinned down in some way.
"Why are you grabbing my hair?" I asked, slightly moving. "Why are you grabbing my hair?" Dominique calmly asked, not moving at all.
"Dominique let go." I smiled a little. "You let go first." she chuckled.
"No, bae I don't trust you. You finna grip my shit harder if I let go." I spoke. Dominique immediately started laughing, proving me right without saying anything.
"See, you're evil ass." I sighed.
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From Chapter 35: A Chill Valentines
Angel's POV
𝐂𝐨𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐱𝐭: 𝐀 𝐟𝐞𝐰 𝐝𝐚𝐲𝐬 𝐚𝐟𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐀𝐧g𝐞𝐥'𝐬 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐃𝐨𝐦'𝐬 𝐛𝐢𝐠, 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐩𝐞𝐭𝐭𝐲 𝐚𝐫𝐠𝐮𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭.
"Um, you know Dominique's gonna kill you if you post that on your story, right?" Mya questioned, looking at the photo I just took in the gym.
It was a picture of me slightly flexing in the mirror by some equipment. I held my shirt up a bit, showing off my toned stomach, soon to be abs. My body was a little shiny from my sweat.
"She hasn't even spoken to me in two days." I shrugged before hitting the post button.
"In loving memory of one of my dearest friends, Angel Mylah Pearce-Ford..." Mya started to ramble on with nonsense.
I laughed a little. "I'm good bruh, she's probably gonna just skip past it like she's been doing. Ain't nothing gonna happen, I doubt she'll even see it." I mockingly chuckled.
Just then my phone dinged three times back to back. I looked down and read the notifications.
𝐃𝐨𝐦: You got a death wish or sum??
𝐃𝐨𝐦: Posting your body? For who?
𝐃𝐨𝐦: I already know what you look like.
"...or maybe she will." I mumbled. "Oh my gosh that was her, wasn't it?!" Mya covered her mouth. I tilted the phone towards her. "Ooo you're in trouble." Mya walked away.
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From Chapter 37: Also
Angel's POV
𝐂𝐨𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐱𝐭: 𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐩𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝟑𝟕 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐨𝐫𝐢𝐠𝐢𝐧𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐰𝐫𝐢𝐭𝐭𝐞𝐧 𝐭𝐨 𝐞𝐧𝐝 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐬.
Suddenly my phone blew up with texts from the group chat Dominique and I were in with Alia and Mya.
Dominique's phone then began to ring. "Can you see who that is?" Dominique asked me, focusing on the road. "It's Mya." I told her. "Answer it please." Dominique sighed.
As soon as I answered the phone...
"Bro, bro bro! Did you see my text? Where's Angel. It's important!" Mya spoke with a sense of urgency. "This is Angel." I stated.
"Oh, of course it is." Mya said.
"What's the problem?" Dominique asked while pulling over. "Oh my gosh, okay so, remember how you guys blew up for fucking that girl? It was a big thing." Mya started.
"Mhm." both Dominique and I nodded.
"Okay so basically, you guys are trending again right now as we speak. The public is suspecting you two are dating on the DL or something. There's a video trending everywhere of y'all coming out of the bathroom together at my party." Mya explained.
Dominique and I started to speak but were cut off. "It gets worse!" Alia spoke. "Some shadow paparazzi decided to release a picture they took, since the suspicions of you two dating are up in the air." she continued.
"Yea and it's a picture of you two holding hands, walking out of a hotel? When y'all were in LA." Mya expressed.
Who the hell would want to waste their time, watching Dominique and I in order to get a picture?!? We're not even celebrities.
Dominique and I both sat the quiet, obviously not knowing what to say.
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From Chapter 45: My Ex, My Ex, My Ex
Angel's POV
𝐂𝐨𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐱𝐭: 𝐌𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐚𝐠𝐞𝐬 𝐛𝐞𝐭𝐰𝐞𝐞𝐧 𝐀𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐥 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐃𝐨𝐦 𝐰𝐡𝐢𝐥𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐲 𝐰𝐞𝐫𝐞 𝐛𝐫𝐨𝐤𝐞𝐧 𝐮𝐩. 𝐖𝐀𝐑𝐍𝐈𝐍𝐆: 𝐓𝐡𝐞𝐬𝐞 𝐦𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐚𝐠𝐞𝐬 𝐚𝐫𝐞 𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐨𝐟 𝐩𝐨𝐜𝐤𝐞𝐭, 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐈 𝐝𝐨𝐧'𝐭 𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐧 𝐤𝐧𝐨𝐰 𝐰𝐡𝐲 𝐈 𝐰𝐫𝐨𝐭𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐭 𝐥𝐦𝐚𝐨.
𝐃𝐨𝐦: Bruh it's so hard having a WAP, pussy be wet 24/7. I always have to change my clothes and shit cause she be that wet :(
𝐌𝐞: Omg face moisturizer purr
𝐃𝐨𝐦: LMAOO STOP
𝐌𝐞: Lmaoo I want some
𝐃𝐨𝐦: What kind?
𝐌𝐞: I love them all I can't choose :(
𝐃𝐨𝐦: I got fresh creamy nut
𝐌𝐞: Yesss Ima rub it on my face
𝐌𝐞: And slurp it
𝐌𝐞: Gurgle it like mouthwash
𝐌𝐞: Use it as lube for when I masturbate
𝐃𝐨𝐦: ANGEL!
𝐃𝐨𝐦: Stop being nasty.
𝐌𝐞: This is who I am, I can't help it :(
𝐌𝐞: Let me see how fresh it is?
𝐃𝐨𝐦: I didn't take a picture. Ima have to play with this wet fat pussy again first...
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𝐖𝐞𝐥𝐥...𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐭'𝐬 𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐈 𝐡𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐭𝐨𝐝𝐚𝐲 𝐟𝐨𝐥𝐤𝐬. 𝐈'𝐦 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐚𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐫𝐞𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐬𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐚 𝐭𝐞𝐚𝐬𝐞𝐫 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐀𝐝𝐝𝐢𝐜𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐒𝐢𝐧𝐬 𝐬𝐞𝐪𝐮𝐞𝐥 (𝐃𝐨𝐦𝐱𝐀𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐥)! 𝐖𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐝𝐨 𝐲'𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐤?
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