Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

By niabhatti

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A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... More

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
5| scared
Couple Aesthetics
6| Day 1
7| Coffee
8| Over speeding
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
11|Metro
12|Flashback
13| Exams
14| Dinner
15|Fight
16| warnings
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
23| sick
24|oh no
25| guitar
26| broken
27|Tution
28| Injured
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32| wandering
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
36| birthday
37|Driving
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
54|Dictator
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
58| unexpected
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
78|new boys
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
85|wedding bells?
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

43|screwed

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"Phasadia tune mene kha tha Haider hum bura phasenge bhaijaan ka gussa dekha nhi ha tune?" Hammad whined for the 56th time in 2 minutes.

Haider was no better he was also very scared gone was the Haider punishing his younger siblings this morning this Haider was just a scared little brother.

"Ye paka Hamza ka kaam ha wohi chata hoga hum maree!" Haider replied

"Jese wo bachhjayga ye sab bhaijaan ki nayi dost ka kaam ha!" Hammad stomped in foot in irritation.

They were in the lift right now. As soon as the lift stopped and Haider came outside Hammad stayed there only.

"Kia ha chalna!" Haider said.

"Nahi mujhe dar lagraha ha! Me bathroom se ata hu!" Haamad replied.

"Abey chal!" Haider dragged him.

They both entered after Harib allowed and found Hamza standing beside Harib's chair while holding his ears.

Haider was about to sit when Harib stood up.

"Mene kha bethne ka?" Harib asked walking closer.

"Sorry." Haider replied scared.

Hammad took two steps back but Harib's pointed glare made him stand next to Haider.

Harib folded his hands and glared them down both if only they were couple of years younger he would have kicked Hamza and slapped their faces hard but he can't he so wants to but seeing them in their all business attire made him stop.

"Kia hua tha raat ko?" Harib asked in cold tone.

"Batana!" Hammad pinched Haider.

"Ow!" Haider rubbed his arm!

"Start talking!" Harib said loudly this time.

"Ye charo Rafay ki birthday party me gaye the! Sneak out krke!" Haider replied.

"Phir?" Harib asked him to continue.

"Kareeb 2:30 baje ke kareeb jab mene check kia tab mujhe chala pata me itna gusse me agaya tha isliye mene Hammad ko utaya or inko lene chala gaya!" Haider continued.

"Hammad ko uthana yaad raha mujhe nhi? Aisa kyu Haider?" Harib asked firmly.

"Aisa nahi ha bhaijaan hame laga ap already itna kuch deal karahe ha ye sab to me deal kar hi lunga!" Haider replied

"Nahi tumhe aisa laga ke bhaijaan us style deal nhi krnge jisme tum kroge nahi? You thought you can do it better no?" Harib yelled at Haider.

Hamza flinched this was the first time he was seeing Harib like this. Harib's eyes have never turned this dark when he reprimands them.

"Bhaijaan aisa nhi ha!" Haider tried to defend himself.

"To kaisa ha Haider exactly? You think I am fool? Ghar ke bache adhi raat gayab hojange or tum dono deal krloge? Hamara koi right nhi ha ya tum kisi bare ko is qabil nhi samjhte? No one is better than you isn't it?" Harib yelled again.

Haider bowed his head down he never wanted to make Harib feel like he is feeling.

"How did you deal with them? Kia kaha tumne unse?" Harib asked sternly.

Hammad took the lead this time.

"3 weeks ke liye ground kia ha! Or situps kie the subha!" He replied

"That's it? Unko unki galti realise karai did you atleast tell them the consequences of their action? Ya paglo ki taraha cheek o pukar krke jane dia?" Harib asked loudly.

"Bhaijaan!" Hamza came forward.

Harib turned his attention to him.

"Bhaiya ne sirf daanta tha aur promise bhot khatarnaak danta tha uske bad sab samjhaya bhi I promise hum ainda aisa kuch nhi krnge galti meri ha me sabo ko legaya tha please bhaiya ko bat daante I promise unhone ap ko isliye nhi bataya kyu ke ap is deal ko leakr busy ho. Ye dono ap ko batadete leken hamne hi force kia ke na bataye." Hamza said quietly.

"Kyu mana kia? Me aur kia krta tum logo ko sudhar to me sakta nhi hu sudharne wale bache ho tum log?" Harib asked furiously.

"Aise baat nhi ha bhaijaan hum nhi chathe to apko disappoint kre no offence leken bhai or bhaiya ki baat alag ha apki alag ha I don't how to explain this leken jese hum nahi chahte kisi bare ko pata chale wese hi hum nhi chahte apko pata chale." Hamza replied

Harib sighed frustrated.

"You seriously think baro ko nhi pata? I am 100% sure chachu ko pata ha subha se unka mood kuch off lagraha ha mujhe leken mujhe nhi pata tha! Ye batein chupane ki jo adat ha tum logo ki kisi din ham sabko bura phasegi!" Harib replied in much softer tone than he was using.

"Chachu ko pata ha?" Hammad asked scared.

"Ji han!" Hatim came inside right at that moment.

"Ch.achu!" Hamza shielded himself by shrinking in Harib's side.

"What do you guys think tum log sab khud krloge baro ko nahi chalega pata?" He asked them all firmly.

"Mujhe nhi pata tha!" Harib raised his hands in surrender.

"Me last time warning deraha hu next time me bhaiya ko aur abu ko sab batadunga you boys aren't to old to be caned clear?" He glared at them all.

They all gulped Hatim was a scary guy.

"Apko kab pata chala?" Haider asked after gulping.

"I don't think I need to tell you this! Tumse hi seekha ha batein chuapana!" Hatim snapped at Haider.

Haider sighed sadly his uncle was his best friend he can't have him mad.

"Mene Haadi ko mara isliye gussa ho?" Haider asked cutely.

"Tumne Haadi ko mara?" Hatim and Harib asked at the same time.

"Ji!" Haider nodded sadly he was regretting it.

"Good he deserved it!
"Kyu?"

Hatim and Harib asked at the same time.

"Mujhe nhi marna tha bhaijaan I promise apko pata ha me nhi marta usse especially jab me same galti ke liye Mishi or Zaira ko punish nhi krsata leken samne se jawab deraha tha mera hath uth gaya!" Haider replied.

Hatim's eyes darkened.

"He sneaked out uske bad he was giving you attitude?" Hatim asked in bone crashing tone. They all flinched hearing his sharp voice.

"Aisa kuch nhi ha chachu! Haider us waqt ziyda gusse me tha ye Hamza ko bhi lagadeta Haadi was just in his usual mood apko pata ha wo kesa ha! Shaitaan ha leken batameez nhi ha!" Hammad spoked in between.

Harib's glare intensified on Haider after hearing Hamza's name.

"Mene Hamza ko nhi mara poochlo isse! Are mene to isko ground tak nhi kia!" Haider promised.

"Wo kyu isne galti nhi ki?" Hatim asked

"Nahi mene soocha tha ise apna files ka cabinet clean karwanga bhot dino se bhikar gaya ha!" Haider replied.

"Great mera bhi please!" Hammad said!

Hamza pouted but stayed silent.

"Bacho!" Hatim called.

"Haadi ko nahi pata chalna chaiye mujhe pata ha I want to see how long he can lie to me!" Hatim said.

"And Mind you agar kisi ek ne bhi usko bataya to mein tum charo ko nhi chorunga!" Hatim promised dangerously.

"Ji chachu." The boys replied.

"Aur Hammad Haider, next time tum dono apni umar se bare bane ki try bhi ki haina to me bhaiya se khe kr tum dono ka bura hashar karadunga samjhe?" Hatim asked sternly.

"Ji chachu." The replied again.

"Hamza jau jo Haider bolraha ha wo karo!" Harib ordered when Hatim left.

"Ji bhaijaan!" Hamza replied

"Bhaijaan?" Haider waled closer to Harib.

Harib was still mad but he hummed.

"Please gussa mat kro!" Haider said and hugged him.

"Thappar maru?" Harib asked

"Uske baad maff krdoge?" Haider asked

Harib just glared at him.

"Gusse me control krna seekho Haider." Hatim patted his face.

"Samjhaye inhe kuch dadi ki cane se jo meri kamar pe waar ki haina inhone ne!" Hamza said loudly.

"Tumne cane se mara isse?" Harib asked dangerously.

"Nahi!" Haider took a step back.

"Jhoot bolrahe ha!" Hamza added fire

"You hit him with a cane Haider?" Harib asked strictly!

"Bas mazak mazak me bhaijaan.!" Haider replied scared.

"Is hi mazak mazak me hath tordunga me tumhare!" Harib said angrily.

Harib was about to walk closer to him but his phone ringed at the exact same time.

"Bhaijaan Miss Aiza ki call ha!" Hammad said

Harib immediately took the call!

The three siblings left quietly without making a peep.

"Phasati bhi yahi ha aur bachati bhi yahi hai!" Hamza said referring to Aiza.

"Shukar bach gaya!" Haider sighed in relief

On the other hand Mishi and Shammem's eyes widened when they saw Ayaan trying to cross a big road full of cars coming in full speed.

"Ayaaan!" Shammed yelled loud. The road was wide he wasn't able to hear.

"Aunty relax kuch nhi hoga." Mishi tried calming her down when she felt he trembling.

"Mera beta roko issee!" Shammem hyperventilated.

Nazia heard the yells and rushed outside. She immediately saw the situation and saw little Ayaan standing in front of a busy road the driver was trying to reach to him from other side.

"Shit!" Haadi followed his mother outside and saw the kid without even thinking of anything he rushed.

"Haadi!" Nazia yelled loudly.

A car was coming in full speed and Ayaan stood frozen to his spot Shammem started yelling loudly and her breathing got hitched.

The driver just stopped the car last minute and Haadi took the boy in his embrace.

They all sighed in relief except Shameem she was long gone in panic attack.

Haadi carefully crossed the rest of the road and took the boy to his mother.

"Mama!" Ayaan cried out when he saw this condition of his mother.

"Inhaler dena parega!" He yelled and stared searching her mother's bag.

Nazia gently took the inhaler from little boy's hand and gently made Shammem to have it. She took two pumps and her breathing got better Mishi got her a glass of water.

"Ayaan?" She cried out.

"Ji Mama?" Little boy hugged his mother.

Shameem was an asthma patient after her husband's death it got worse she had to carry inhalers with her all the time. The brothers were strictly ordered by their older brothers if something like that happens they quickly have to leave a SOS to Zaayan.

Ayaan send a SOS to Zaayan from his apple watch the second she took the inhaler without even realising him coming could end worse for him.

"Kyu gaye the road pe?" Shammem cried and hugged her son.

The Ahmedaani siblings frowned if they were instead of him the next thing they would have got would be a slap she was one gentle mother because she was talking so gently.

"Ap marti na mujhe?" Haadi whispered in Nazia's ear.

Nazia was very emotional the minute Haadi ran on streets her mind stopped working but when she saw her son coming back with Ayaan in his hands her heart bursted with pride.

She hugged him and kissed his cheek.

"Bhot!" She replied sniffing. Haadi rolled his eyes and put his hand on her shoulder bringing her more close.

"Ap theek hona Mama? Bhaiya arahe ha bas!" Ayaan said.

"Bhot achi baat ha ab wohi apko batega aise krte ha koi aise Mama ki jaan nikalata ha? Road cross kyu ki apne?" Shameem asked hiccuping.

"Mama mein big boy hogaya hu! I can do it!" Ayaan countered.

"Aane do Zaayan ko!" Shammem replied angrily.

Few minutes later Zaayan came in bursting the door he ran to his mother.

"Ap theek ho Mama? Kese attack aya?" He asked his mother panicked.

Mishi closed her eyes as soon as the realisation drawn upon her. The little boy was gone she have no doubts and this time she was team zaayan she herself wanted to smack that boy.

"Kia lagta ha ye bacha yahn pitega ghar pe? Me hota iski jagah or bhaiya hote to me to yah bhi pitta or ghar pe bhi!" Haadi whispered in Mishi and Zaira's ears.

"Jahn bhi pite leken Allah kre zor ka pite!" Mishi throw the book in her hands down and went inside.

Haadi and Zaira frowned looking at her anger.

"He did what?" A loud voice boomed in flagship store.

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