Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

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A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... Más

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
5| scared
Couple Aesthetics
6| Day 1
7| Coffee
8| Over speeding
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
11|Metro
12|Flashback
13| Exams
14| Dinner
15|Fight
16| warnings
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
23| sick
24|oh no
25| guitar
26| broken
27|Tution
28| Injured
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32| wandering
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
36| birthday
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
43|screwed
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
54|Dictator
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
58| unexpected
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
78|new boys
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
85|wedding bells?
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

37|Driving

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It was around 6:30 in the morning when Mishi felt someone shaking her up!

"Mishii uthoo!" Harib's loud voice reached her ears!

"Nahi!" She murmured and slept again!

"Mishaal!" Harib's tone was now firmer!

"Bhaijaan please!" She whined

"2 second me utho!" Harib ordered!

Mishi sat on the bed and rubbed her eyes!

"Kia hua ha?" She asked yawning!

"5 minutes deraha hu change krke aou jaldi!" Harib sat on her bed and ordered!

Mishi looked at the wall clock and shook her head!

"6:30 horahe ha? Me nhi arahi jahn bhi jana ha mujhe sone de!" She was about to pull the covers up but Harib snatched them from her!

"Washroom NoW!" He glared at her!

"Leken kyu?" Mishi asked

"4 minute bache ha agar ready nahi hui toh me aise hi utha kr lejanga!" Harib warned!

Mishi glared at him but stood up and scurried to get dressed!

She was out exactly after 6 minutes and found herself on the receiving end of Harib's infamous glare!

"Chalo wese hi bhot late karadia ha!" He gently pulled her downstairs!

"Hum ja kaha rahe ha? Dekhe to sahi birds bhi nahi uthi sahi se!" Mishi whined again!

Harib rolled his eyes and pulled her to sit at dinning table!

"6 bajrahe ha subha 4 baje hojati ha!" He chided!

"Whatever!" Mishi rolled her eyes!

Harib whacked her head and she glared at him in return!

"Don't 'whatever' me samjhi?" He asked and Mishi nodded

"Yelo jaldi finish karo!" He made her Nutella sandwich and filler one glass of orange juice!

"Bhaijaan bataye to hum kha jarahe ha?" Mishi asked

"Start eating Mishaal!" Harib ordered!

After she was done Harib dragged her to garage and took Hamza's car keys!

"Ye Hamza ki gari ha!" Mishi accused

"I know!" Harib replied

"Sit!" He ordered and she sat on passenger seat!

Harib took her to a empty ground and Mishi frowned when Harib stopped the car there!

"Bhaijaan ye kha leaye?" Mishi asked!

"Driving seekogi ab tum bhot hogaya!" Harib announced!

"Mene apse kab kaha mujhe driving krni ha?" Mishi frowned

"You are 18 now Mishi you should learn driving it's necessity!" Harib replied

"I have been 18 since past four months what makes you take decision so suddenly! Mishi asked with attitude!

"Change your attitude mishoo!" Harib said in pleasant mood but the warning was evident!

"Bhaijaan mujhe abcd bhi nahi ati driving ki!"! Mishi whined

"To me sikhaunga na beta!" Harib answered patiently!

"Aplog mujhe akele gari chalne to denge nhi? What the point?" Mishi asked

"Kyu nahi chalne denge? Bilkul chalne denge! Wese bhi you are 18 now next year se internship krogi driving to aani chaiye haina!" Harib replied

Mishi moved forward to check his temperature! Harib raised his brows at her!

"Abhi 1 hafte phele apne mujhe akele pani puri khane pe itna daanta tha abhi ye sab tabiyat teek ha apki?" Mishi asked and frowned!

"Mishaal! Mene isliye daanta tha because kisi ko pata nahi tha ap log kha ha wo anjaan sheher tha ap dono akeli thi guards bhi nhi the samjhi?" He asked

"I guess!" She replied

"Chalo ab focus we will start from basics okay!Harib asked

"Hum ye kaam thori deair bad bhi krsakte the itni subha uthne ki zarurt nhi thi weese!" Mishi rolled her eyes!

"Mujhe 9:00 clock office jana ha Mishi! Isliye hum daily subha ke time seekhnge or sham ke time you will show me what you have learned!" Harib flicked her forehead!

"Ow!" Mishi rubbed her head!

Harib started telling her the basics!

"Me khai note down karlu?" She asked

"Nopes itna bara khali dimag haina uska use kro! Gari chalate chalte notes khol ke dekhoge?"

"Mera dimag khali nhi ha!" Mishi punched his arm!

"Focus Mishaal!" Harib started again and this time Mishi started paying attention!

Harib questioned after explaining and she managed to answer!

"Good now switch the spots!" Harib parker the car!

"Kia hogaya ha? Phele din thori gari chalane shuru krdete ha! Hamza ki gari thok di to mene? Pagal hojagea woh!" Mishi shook her head!

"Phele din hi chalte ha Mishi! Come out Hamza ki gari li hi mene isliye ha bhale thoko!" Harib winked

"Bhaijaan dar lagraha ha!" Mishi said

"Samne dekho! Koi jagah ha jahan gari marsakti ho? Darakht bhi nhi ha Mishi! Come!" Harib assured her!

Mishi came and settled on the driving seat!

"Seat belt!" Harib chided!

Mishi started reciting duas!

"Start the car Mishaal!" Harib glared and she started it!

"Good gear change kro!" Harib asked and she slowly did!

"Press clutch!!" Harib gently told and she did!

The car started zooming but she panicked and removed her feet making the car stop abruptly! She sacredly looke at Harib who smiled in assurance!

"Good job! Start again chalo!" He pressed!

And Mishi did after few more blunders she finally learned how to get the car in motion!

"Very good! Proud of you Misho!" Harib patted her shoulder!

"Sachi?" Mishi's eyes shined

Harib nodded and smiled at her!

"Chalo wapis aou we will continue at night!" Harib came out of his seat!

"Apki Aiza baji wali meeting ha?" Mishi asked when they were on their way back!

Harib chuckled!

"Baji!" He laughed

"Sorry sorry bhabhi na?" Mishi teased

"Mishaal!" Harib glared and Mishi looked away and smiled!

"Chalo!" Harib parked the car when they reached their home!

"Mein sone jarahi hu!" Mishi yawned!

Harib just shook his head!

"Hamza ko uthadena office ana ha usne aj jaldi!" Harib reminded!

"Bhaiya se khede mujhe neend arahi ha!" Mishi replied and ran upstairs!

Harib shook his head their routine in holidays were beyond his understanding! He decided to do something about it!

Harib walked in kitchen and found his Mama making breakfast! They have so many workers but she always like to cook for the family!

Harib hugged her from back! She didn't even turn around she knew it was Harib!

"Kuch chaiye?" She asked while whisking eggs!

"Ap aram kyu nhi krti Mama? Subha subha uth jati ha!" Harib murmured!

Rabia turned around and pulled his cheek!

"Oww!" Harib rubbed it!

"Mujhe acha lagta ha khana banana!" She replied!

"De mujhe ye me krta hu!" Harib took eggs from her and started whisking!

"Itni subha kha gaye the?" Rabia asked

"Mishi Madam sath gaya tha!" Harib replied

"Mishi ke sath itni subha?" Rabia asked

"Driving sikhani ha mama mujhe usse! She needs some confidence!" Harib replied while working on breakfast!

"Bhot achi baat ha meri jaan!" She patted her face!

"Pata ha khabhi khabar tum bhen bhaio ki muhaabat dekhti hu to itni khushi hoti ha mujhe proud feel hota ha! Bas khabhi kisi ki nazar na lage!" She said

"Mama un saro me jaan basti ha meri! Hamein khabhi koi alag nhi krsakta ap fikar na kre!" Harib kissed her cheek!

"InshAllah!" Rabia replied and started toasting the breads!

"Salam bhabhi!" Zeenat walked in!

"Salam Zeenat!" Rabia replied

"Salam choti Mama!" Harib greeted while flipping his omelet!

"Inti subha subha kitchen me kia karahe ho?" Zeenat asked

"Masti! Ap please Hamza ko uthade me nhi chata wo late aye!" Harib asked

"Ajj se tumhare under hoga na woh?" She asked

"Ji isliye me nhi chata office me daantu me usko ap uthade bas!" Harib replied

"Me uthati hu!" She replied and left the kitchen!

"Bare baba!" Zaira came downstairs and hugged Haroon tightly!

"Kia hogaya Iraa!" Haroon asked concerned!

"Dekhe!" She sniffed and showed him her hands with a slight red bump on her fingers!

"Ye kese hogaya?" Haroon asked

"Hammad bhai se pooche!" She replied

Haadi slapped his head Zaira forgot that she can get herself in trouble!

"Hamamd!" Haroon called!

"Iraa!" Haadi walked towards her!

Zaira frowned at his extra sweet voice!

"Bhaiya bula rahe ha! Chaloo!" He dragged her away!

"Kia ha tumhe boots!" Zaira pushed him after he successfully dragged her away!

"Pagal ho tum? Screw dheela ha?" Haadi asked

"Mene kia krdia?" Zaira asked confused

"Abhi bhai batate bare baba ko humne lines kyu likhi ha to kia krti?" He whacked her!

"Oh shoot! Leken kia hua bhai batate thori!" Zaira replied

"Aur agar batadete toh? Hammad bhai ajakal pagal hogaye ha itni sari lines likhwai ek to aj se phele kia ha khabhi unhone aisa?" Haadi replied

"Han kuch to hua ha! Suna parega!" Zaira smirked

"Mishi khaa ha?" Zaira asked

"Mujhe kia pata?" Haadi replied

"Bari Mama Mishi kha ha?" Zaira ran to Rabia!

"Sorahi ha utha kr aou jaou!" Rabia replied

"Mama sone de usse!" Harib added

"Nahi raat ko late soyegi phir!" Rabia replied

The word Raat struck in Zaira and Haadi's head they forgot about the party for a moment but now that they remembered they are gonna do something about it!

Hamza descended down the stairs crying!

"Agar ajke baad aplogo ne is inssan ko mujhe utahne bheja to me gahr se bhag jauga!" He yelled

The family ignored him and rolled their eyes!

"Mama jug!" Haider came downstairs fully ready and gave the empty jug to his mother the jug which was full few minutes earlier!

"Paani pheka tumne uspe?" Zeenat asked

Haider nodded obediently!

Zeenat whacked his shoulder!

"Sudharna mat Haider!" Zeenat said and went towards the kitchen!

Zaira came downstairs with sleeping Mishi with her!

"Dadu!" She hugged her grandfather!

"Subha se koi sone nhi deraha!" She whined

"Kha kr sojana mera bacha!" Dadu patted her head!

"Tum subha kab uthi?" Zaira asked

Mishi threw a accusatory glare towards Harib! Who just rolled his eyes in return!

"Bacho nashta kro!" Dadi called out and they all scurried towards dining hall!

"Bhai?" Zaira whispered in Hamza's ear!

Hamza hummed in return!

"Raat ko chalnge na?" She whispered!

Hamza glared at her and she made a cute puppy face!

"Please!" She pleaded and Hamza nodded

"Thank you!" She whispered!

"Kia chalraha ha?" Hatim asked

"Kuch nhi chachu!" Zaira smiled at him!

Haider looked at them trying to search for something but he couldn't!

Hamza entered the office and for the first time he went towards on the 20th floor! The whole floor was under Harib!

"My office!" Harib ordered and left towards his cabin!

Hamza was very scared the vibe was very scary even scarier than Haider's department!

Hamza entered his cabin and stood their quietly! Harib was very intimidating here! It was like a very different person the guys who walked him towards the car few minutes earlier was completely gone!

Harib looked at him and decided to play hard with him!

"Hamza three weeks you have three weeks to completely this internship ek mistake ya blunder hua I will cancel your certificate! I don't like tardiness jo kaam jis time me dia jaye us time pe complete hona chaiye clear?" Harib asked sternly

"Ji bhaijaan!" Hamza replied

"Sir!" Harib replied

"Huh!" Hamza frowned

"Sir Hamza!" Harib glared

"Oh yes sir!" Hamza replied respectfully!

"Go to My PA! He will tell you your work!" Harib ordered!

"Okay!" Hamza quickly scurried out!

He sighed in relive after coming out Harib was very scary!

The whole day of work went smoothly Harib's pA was actually a nice boy he made him understand everything and supported him unlike Rafiq Sahab!

Later at night Zaira winked at Hamza on dining table and without them noticing it Haider noticed the wink he got alert!

He waited for them to do something but much to his surprise all of them were quietly watching the movie in basement!

Around 11:00 Zaira and Mishi went to their room to get dressed up and Haadi and Hamza made a plan to sneak out!

The younger clan successfully exited the main door and zoomed Ahead to Raafay's 17th bash!

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