Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

By niabhatti

355K 26.4K 15.3K

A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... More

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
5| scared
Couple Aesthetics
6| Day 1
7| Coffee
8| Over speeding
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
11|Metro
12|Flashback
13| Exams
14| Dinner
15|Fight
16| warnings
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
23| sick
24|oh no
25| guitar
26| broken
27|Tution
28| Injured
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32| wandering
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
37|Driving
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
43|screwed
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
54|Dictator
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
58| unexpected
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
78|new boys
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
85|wedding bells?
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

36| birthday

2.7K 210 126
By niabhatti

Haider rushed to Zaira's room and found Hamza and Haadi there aswell goofing with girls!

"Kia hua bhaiya?" Haadi stood up and asked worried after seeing Haider's face!

"Zaira baba ki call arahi ha batt kro boldo bhaiya sogaaye!" He gave his ringing phone to Zaira!

Zaira jumped away!

"Me nahi karahi hu baat bilkul nhi!" She straight away rejected Haider's order!

Haider looked at Hamza with stoic face! Hamza was shaking his head continuously but suddenly jumped out of the bed when his phone started ringing inside his pocket!

"Bhaiya kia krneg ab?" Zaira asked

"Zaira talk to him NOW!" Haider glared at her sternly!

Zaira pouted and shook her head but Haider snatched Hamza's phone and gave it to her with not to disobey look!

"Salam baba!" Zaira picked up the video call and smiled at her father!

"Ira meri jaaan! Theek ho? Dadi ne bataya ke ap gir gayi ho ziyada chot lagi ha? Me ata hu apke pass!" Hassan started!

Hamza rolled his eyes annoyed!

"Baba me bilkul theek hu Dadi ki thori umar hogai haina unko misunderstanding hogai ha ap fikar na kre dekhe mujhe!" She smiled like a fool!

"Zaira!" Hassan just gave her a look and she looked down!

"Bhai kaha ha dono? Camera ke peeche chupe haina?" Hassan asked fully knowing his sons!

"Ji baba ye rahe!" Zaira flipped the camera and smiled evilly!

"Salam baba!" Haider grinned

"Kese giri bhen? Khayal rakhne bheja thana mene dono ko? Kitni chot lagi ha?" Hassan scolded them both!

Zaira started pleading silently to not tell him that she wore heels!

"Baba kuch nhi hua ha ap bilawajah tension lerahe ha theek ha ye patanhi kese gir gai bus pou shayed slip hogaya ap adhi raat ko ye sab fikar nhi kre hum do din me arahe ha ap sojaye abhi!" Hamza replied

"Bhot irresponsible ho tum dono bhai! Ek ki to bolti hi band hogai ha dusra bole jaraha ha! Haider kal Zaira ko lekar Islamabad aou I don't want to hear anything else!" Hassan firmly ordered!

"Ji baba!" Haider replied!

"Baba nahi na please me paka theek hu!" Zaira promised

"I am glad to hear that! Leken I know mere mana krne ke bad bhi apne heels pheni ha and as a punishment you are coming back!" Hassan replied

"Baba bhaiya se pooch kr pheni thii promise!" Zaira threw Haider under the bus!

"Haider!" Hassan glared at Haider!

Haider snatched the phone and went outside getting scolded in front of his siblings was not something he would allow himself!

"Dadi ko kisne bataya?" Zaira complained!

"Probably bare baba!" Haadi shrugged!

Haider came after few minutes and glared at Zaira so furiously that she shrink herself into the bed!

"Ka..kal jana ha?" She asked timidly!

"Nahi sabke sath jange!" Haider replied angrily!

"Daant pari?" Haadi asked maintaining a safety distance!

"Batou me tumhe abhi!" Haider growled at him!

"Definitely pari!" Haadi muttered and raised his hands in surrender!

"Bhot hogai film wilm so ab forran!" He scolded them all!

All of them saw the dangerous glint in his eyes so they quickly nodded!

Alam house!

"Mama leken kyu???" Raafay asked his mother loudly!

"Mene khedia isliye don't argue Rafay!" Alia snapped

"Mama jab birthday meri ha toh me kyu unlogo ko bulaou?" Rafay asked angrily

"Change your tone Rafay!" Alia glared at him

"Me Mishaal ko bula lunga even Haadi or Hamza ko bhi bula lunga leken me Zaira ko nhi bulnga that is it!" Rafay replied

"Then I will cancel the party! Un charo ko dawat doge wrna koi party nhi hogi!" She firmly said!

"Mama bhai ko jab Zaira nhi pasand toh kya zabardasti ha?" Raaha who was sitting right there asked!

The mother and son turned and glared her for her lack of respect!

"Bari ha woh Raaha! Api kha karo!" Alia chided

"Whatever!" She rolled her eyes!

Before Alia can whack some sense in her Rafay interrupted!

"Rahaa!" He firmly took her name and she sat down!

"Wese bhai ap dedena na invite mujhe nhi lagta wo ayenge!" Raahil entered the room and said!

"Well Raahil mujhe isko bulana hi nahi ha!" He snapped

"Me kese face karungi Zeenat bhabhi ko? Sab ko party doge sirf Zaira ko chor kr? Grow up Rafaay!" Alia harshly scolded!

"I don't want her Mama!" Rafay yelled

"Rafay!" Alam's loud voice came in!

"Aise baat krte ha apni Mama se?" He askd furiously!

Alia was too angry to save him she just allowed her husband to take over!

"Sorry!" Rafay flinched and replied

"Stop disrespecting My wife Rafay! Ek minute nahi lagega mujhe to throw this disrespect out of you! Start behaving!" Alam was to angry to reason!

"Baat kya hui ha?" He asked his wife!

"Batou apne baba ko!" Alia snapped at Rafay!

"Mama kherahi ha bhaiya apni birthday party me Zaira api ko invite kre or bhai mana karahe ha!" Raahil replied

ShahAlam looked at Rafay who was standing there fuming!

"Rafay meet me in study please!" He ordered softly and left!

Rafay sighed angrily and looked at her mother!

"Thank you Mama!" He said and left for his baba's study!

He knocked and entered after being allowed to!

"Ji baba?" He asked

"Betho!" Shah Alam said

"Kia problem ha Zaira se Rafay?" He asked his son after he settled on chair!

"Baba I just don't like her I don't want her meri birthday he to choice bhi meri honi chaiye haina!" Rafay replied

"I can understand where you are coming from!" Shah Alam replier much to his son's shock!

"You do?" Rafay asked surprised!

Alam nodded his head!

"But Rafay! I am your father I know you don't hate hate her! Agar tumhe aisa lagraha ha ke tum usse invite kroge and this will make you feel like a loser than you are wrong khud invite mat kro mama se khedo wo krdegi but don't cut her okay?" Shah Alam explained!

"Baba leken!" Rafay tried arguing but couldn't he doesn't have a argument Zaira's presence will bug him but he would not mind it just that he doesn't know how to invite her!

"Okay mama krde usko Invite! Mujhe lagta nhi ha wo ayegei!" Raafay replied

"That's her problem!" His father replied

"One more thing Rafay!" Shah Alam called with strict voice!

"Next time agar mama se batameezi ki haina I won't spare you! Ma ha wo tumhari respect her clear?" He asked firmly

"Ji baba!" Rafay replied

"Good! You can leave!" Shah stared working on his laptop and Rafay scurried out!

Two days later the wedding was done and Ahmedaani's were back in Islamabad!

"Aur kia kia ulti harketin ki?" Hatim asked when they all settled on the couch! Haadi was tucked under his arm!

As soon as Haadi heard his father asking about their troubles his face lost its colour he was hoping for his siblings to stay shut!

Mishaal and Zaira's mind went to their trouble they were also silently hoping to get away with it!

"Kisi ne kuch nhi kia Hatim mia!" Bare baba replied!

"Sachi?" He asked Haadi with raised brows!

Haadi sweetly nodded his head!

"Good boy!" Hatim kissed his head and pulled him more closer!

Hamza rolled his eyes at his youngest brother! Hatim would eat him alive if he got to know about what he did!

"Zaira ne bhi kuch nhi kia?" Zeenat asked

"Mama!" Zaira whined

"Haider ne kia haina is bar sab!" Hassan snapped at Haider!

"For god sake Baba bas krde ab mene thori usko giraya ha!" Haider replied

"You should have been more careful Haider!" Hassan replied

"Baba bhaiya ne mana kia tha!" Zaira replied

Hassan glared at her but didn't say anything!

Haider stood up and walked towards the kitchen!

"Ye kia ha Mama?" Haider asked opening the invitation card

"Arey Han kal Rafay ki birthday ha farm house pe toh invite dia ha!" Zeenat replied

"Rafay ki birthday ka invite hame?" Zaira stood up and snatched the card!

"Han tum charo bacho ko!" Zeenat replied

"Wah bahe!" Zaira laughed

Haider snatched it back from her to read the details!

"Its sundowner party start hi late tak hogi koi zarurt nhi ha jane ki!" Haider replied

"Bhaiya kyu maza ayegi!!" Haadi whined

"Since when do you enjoy Rafay's company Haadi?" Haider asked firmly

"Sahi kheraha h Haider aisi parties late khatam hogi farm ha bhi dur koi zarurt nhi ha jane ki!" Hatim intervened

Mishi looked at her father hoping for a yes but much to her dismay he shook his head!

"Bhot dur ha bachoo!" Bari mama added

"Han or bare bhi nhi honge sirf bache bache I don't want you guys to go!" Hassan added

"Baba I am an adult!" Hamza scoffed

"Jise choti bhen na sambhali gai!" Hassan replied

Zaira and Haadi looked at each other and something clicked in their mind! Having Hamza on their team will benefit them!

"Wese Harib kha rehgaya?" Dadu asked

"Bhaijaan kisi dost se milne gaye ha!" Haider replied

"Me sone jaraha hu!" Hammad stood up and starched!

"Hammad! Dinner kro phele!" Rabia chided

He sat down on the couch with pout!

"Baba?" Haadi pocked Hatim

Hatim hummed in response!

"Ap bhi nahi lekar jasakte?" He whispered!

"Close it Haadi!" Hatim replied little firmly

Haadi was to stupid to catch his tone!

"Please?" He pleaded

Before Hatim can reply Haider came and asked

"Kia hua?" He asked when he saw Hatim's eyes

"Kuch nahi!" Haadi was quick to reply

"Sure?" Haider pressed

Haadi nodded slightly and Haider settled next to him!

After dinner Haadi sneaked in Mishi's room and found Zaira there!

"Bhai manenge?" He asked Zaira!

"Yar Haadi mujhe jana ha yar! Rafay ko lage ga me uski wajah se nahi ayi I want to go please kuch kro!" Zaira replied

"Me kia karu?" Haadi replied

"Han Zaira wo kia krlega?" Mishi asked

"Drive tum krlo toh?" Zaira suggested

"Pagal ho kia? Hospital jana parega itni mar khaunga mein!" Haadi was quick to deny

"Yar please kuch kroo Mishi tum bhai ko mana logi please!" Zaira turned to Mishaal!

Mishi was skeptical for a while but nodded after few seconds!

"Me krti hu baat!" She replied

"Leken jange kese?" She added

"Dinner bad jange naa sab ke room me jane ke bad!" Haadi suggested!

"Han leken bhaijaan bhaiya bhai? Inka kia krnge?" Mishi asked

"Yar soochlenge kuch na kuch! Me minha se poochti hu party start kitne baje hogi!" Zaira quickly messaged Rafay's close friend!

"After 12!" Minha replied immediately!

"Aram se 12 baje bad shuru hogi! Dinner bad kitchen ke darwaze se sneak out krlenge bas bhai manjaye!" Zaira said!

"Me jati hu usse baat krti hu bas dua kro pakrey na jaye!" Mishi stood up!

"Arey don't worry kuch nhi hoga!" Zaira grinned

"Mishi pagal hogai ho? Abhi Hyderabad me itna bara scene hua ha tum log darte nhi ho kia?" Hamza was quick to say noo!

"Hamza please! Hum teeno ko jana ha!" Mishi pleaded!

"Phas gaye toh?" He asked sceptical!

"Kuch nhi hogaa!" Mishi replied

"Sooch ke batata hu!" Hamza said

"Okay!" Mishi smiled and left!

"Bhai bhi na bhot darte ha!" Zaira shook her head!

"Wo kuch soochlenge don't worry!" Haadi assured his sister!

"Kia batein horahi ha?" Hammad barged in!

"Kuch nahi bas asie hi!" Zaira replied

"Kal sham tak ka time deraha hu I want 1000 lines clear? Haadi you too!" Hammad was here to remind them about their punishment!

"Bhai please!!" Mishi whined

"Don't even dare to start Mishaal! Exactly at 6pm understood?" He glared at them three!

When the nodded he left satisfied!

"Kal phase na to puri 5000 lines likhni paregi!" Mishi stood up and gave them a rough book and got one for herself and settled down to start on it!

"Hamre sare bhai jaalad ha!" Haadi muttered

____________________________________
Hi guys!! Hope you guys liked the chapter!

How was it?

Any favourite moment?

Any expectations?

What do you think will they execute the plan?

Please vote and do inline comments!

Next update after 90+votes and 90+comments❤️

Thank you all!
..Nia!

Continue Reading

You'll Also Like

122K 5.6K 29
She was his from the start ✨. She was an angel protected by a devil 🌼. No one can harm her not even him πŸ‘€. His love, obsession, strength, weakness...
59K 3.1K 19
This is a story of twins and their strict and possessive father🀍
127K 7.8K 46
A beautiful tale of Mehra Siblings. Dive in to know more.
707K 31K 41
β™•οΈŽπ‚π¨π₯π₯𝐞𝐜𝐭𝐒𝐨𝐧 𝐎𝐟 𝐒𝐑𝐨𝐫𝐭 π’π­π¨π«π’πžπ¬β™•οΈŽ