Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

By niabhatti

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A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... More

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
5| scared
Couple Aesthetics
6| Day 1
7| Coffee
8| Over speeding
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
11|Metro
12|Flashback
13| Exams
14| Dinner
15|Fight
16| warnings
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
23| sick
24|oh no
25| guitar
26| broken
27|Tution
28| Injured
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
36| birthday
37|Driving
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
43|screwed
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
54|Dictator
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
58| unexpected
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
78|new boys
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
85|wedding bells?
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

32| wandering

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Rabia and her ladies of her family were sitting in mother's room discussing about jewellery and stuff!

"Rabia beta apki sass ne kha tha wo aj ajayegi kitne baje ka ane ka unka?" Halima Rabia's mother asked!

"Ammi wo aj ane wale hain? Mujhe laga wo Harib or Haider ke sath baraat wale din aynge!" Rabia replied!

"Mujhe to paka kha tha nikkah se phele ajange!" Halima replied!

"Me Harib se poochti hu!" Rabia picked up her phone and dialled Harib but before Harib can pick little boy came rushing to the room!

"Bari Phupo Harib bhaijaan or unke dadu dadi aye ha!" Little boy said and rushed out!

Rabia stood up panicked she was not aware of their arrival she would have never allowed Mishi and Zaira to leave alone!

"Mehereen jaldi Mishi or Zaira ko bolo wapis aye!" Rabia ordered her younger sister!

"Apa wo to androon chale gaye honge sham se phele nhi aynge!" Her sister replied!

"Rabia jau betaa!" Her mother nudged and stood up to greet the Ahmedaani's!

"Assalam Alikum!" Harib hugged her!

"Apne kha tha ap kal aynge!" Rabia asked!

"Nanu ne apparently dadu ko convince kia tha ke nikah attend kre isliye hum sab sath agaye!" Harib replied!

"Haider bhi aya ha?" She asked hoping to hear no!

"Ji bhar saman nikal wa raha ha araha hoga bas!" Harib replied!

And just on cue Haider entered!

"Salam bari Mama!" He came closer and took her blessings!

Rabia patted his head!

"Safar sahi tha?" Rabia asked!

"Ji sab kheriyat thi!" Haider replied!

"Sab kaha ha Mama?" Harib asked!

"Wo wo!" Rabia was getting nervous to answer!

"Sab sahi haina bari mama?" Haider asked!

"Han sab sahi ha bas Hammad or Hamza apke bare baba sath zameeno pe gaye ha or Haadi yahi dosto sath ha!" She replied!

"Konse dost Mama? Ap ko pata yahn ke mohal!" Harib asked!

"Harib Haadi bacha nhi ha bas unke sath ha!" She replied!

"Or Mishi or Zaira?" Haider asked!

"Wo dono toh! Gai ha!" She nervously replied!

"Aur baba ko nhi pata? Isliye itna ghabrai wi haina ap?" Harib asked!

"Harib sab bachiya jarahi thi me kese mana krti unko Haroon ka to bus chale to bachiyo ko wrap krke rakhe!" Rabia scoffed!

"Apko pata ha mama baba ko yahn ka mohal nhi pasand dadu dadi poochnge kia jawab dengi ap? Aur bachio ko akela bhejdia ha apne apko pata ha kitna unsafe ha!" Harib replied!

"Beta unke sath guards hote ha!" She told them!

Haider was standing there quietly breathing through his nose he was angry but he can not say a word to his Bari Mama!

"Guards hote ha leken mama ye sab larkia hamri dono se bhot alag ha! Mishi ko janti ha ap daar jati ha!" Harib replied!

"Aur dosri wali ko har hushyari krni hoti ha jahn uski zarurt nhi bhi hoti wahan jakr shuru hojati ha!" Haider put his two cents in!

"Mene bhot samjha kr behja koi aisa kaam nhi krnge!" Rabia replied!

"Bari Mama Zaira ko kisi ki batt aj tk samjh ayi ha? Adventure ke naam pe kia kia krleti ha wo larki hamri majodgi (presence) me toh abhi to akeli ha!" Haider added!

"Me address deti hu tum dono jakr leou! Isee phele Haroon ajaye!" Bari mama suggested!

"Sahi kherahi ha baba bilawajah gussa krnge dadu dadi se khede dono aram karahi ha inko bhi sulade me forran lekar ata hu!" Harib replied!

"Me bhi ata hu apke sath!" Haider intervened!

Harib and Haider quickly took their leave they were about to exit when they saw a bunch of young boy sitting in garden having cigarettes and stuff Harib rolled his eyes he was now used to of it!

Haider panicked as soon as he saw Haadi sitting with them but he was not having anythings!

"Bhaijaan!" Haider yelled!

"Kia hua Haider?" Harib asked!

"Haadi dekhe kin logo sath betha!" Haider replied!

"Wo sab iski age ka ha Haider he won't do anything I trust him!" Harib told him!

"Well I don't trust his age and especially him koi do bar provoke krega teesri bar hamra bhai inke sath laga hoga!" Haider replied!

"Haider mama ne khana wo jabse aya ha tabse inke sath hi ha! Kuch krta toh Hammad batata na!" Harib replied!

"Well I don't trust Hammad also! Horn de or bulaye isee!" Haider was glaring at them!

Harib rolled his eyes he know that Haider won't relax until he lectures Haadi sternly!

Harib decided to greet his younger cousin aswell so he came out and Haider followed him!

"Bhai..jaan!" Haadi stood up and stuttered!

"Arey Harib bhai kese ha?" Faizi asked!

Several other boys greeted him to and nodded!

"Haadi sath ana zara!" Haider ordered!

"Bhaiya mene kuch nhi kia!" Haadi replied scared making all the boy chuckle loudly!

"Are you sure dude?" One boy shouted making Haider snap his attention to Haadi!

Haadi sacredly shook his head!

Harib sharply glared at that boy making him flinch back Harib's glare was intimating enough!

"Haadi gaari me betho!" Harib ordered!

"Hum..ghar jarahe ha?" Haadi asked scared!

"Nahi chlo ab!" Haider replied and took him to car!

Harib remained there! He walked closer to Faizi and took cigarette out of his hands! He threw it on ground and crushed it with his feet!

"Don't even offer to my brother Faizi! None of you will like consequences if he even touches the thing clear?" Harib gently patted his face and left!

Faizi stood there stunned he have never heard Harib talking in such bone crushing tone! He was scared of him now! He have never messed with Harib's siblings and he have no plans to do it either!

He thanked god Last night Haadi didn't actually have it and Mishi saved him on time or else god knows what would Harib would have done!

He was not sure but the way Haider was glaring at him and his cigarettes he wanted nothing more than to rush from there! It would be better for him and his buddies to stay away from Ahmedaani's siblings!

"Mishi in sab ke boyfriend's bhi ane wale they?" Zaira asked after seeing multiple boys coming!

"Mujhe inhone nhi bataya tha!" Mishi replied!

"Ab hum dono kia krnge?" Zaira asked!

"Mujhe pata hota me bhi kisi ko leati hu!" Zaira scoffed!

"Kisko?" Mishi gasped!

"Mazak karahi hu Mishi!" Zaira rolled her eyes!

"Hi girls!" A handsome young man settled next to her girlfriend!

They were at open haveli restaurant having fun! Girls were openly vaping and hukkas were settled beside their chairs!

"Ye Islambad wali cousins ha?" Young boy asked her girlfriend!

"Han ye meri bari phupoo ki beti Mishaal or uski cousin Zaira!" Mishi's cousin Safa introduced!

"Hi guys!" He greeted!

Mishi and Zaira gave him a reluctant nod!

Zaira overheard Mishi's cousin whispering in her boyfriends ear!

"Don't mind them ye aisi ha they are from very conservative family!" She whispered and her boyfriend nodded!

They were in engrossed in their conversation the smoke was making Mishi cough loudly!

"Chalo Mishi bahar chalte ha!" Zaira stood up!

The girls were to busy to focus on them!

"Me bhai se kheti hu hame pick krle!" Zaira took Mishi outside and gave her water and took her phone out to call Hammad!

"I am fine Zaira bhai gussa krnge ye sab dekh kr in sab ke sath nikal jaynge!" Mishi stopped her!

"Chalo phir khai aur ghoomte ha!" Zaira offered!

Mishi and Zaira left the restaurant to wander on narrow streets of Hyderabad!

On the other hand in Car! Haider started his verbal bashing on Haadi!

"Kia karahe they tum unke sath? Aise logo sath bethna chaiye ha tumhe?" He harshly scolded!

"Bhaiya me sirf betha tha!" Haadi replied!

"Aur me yahi poochraha hu kyu bethe the?" Haider asked firmly!

"Wo meri age ke ha bhaiya me bore horaha tha they offered me to sit with them and I did!" Haadi replied!

"You did something you shouldn't?" Haider asked!

"Mene kuch nhi bhaiya!" Haadi replied!

"Are you sure Haadi?" Haider asked harshly!

"Jab apko mujhe pe bharosa hi nhi ha to don't ask na! Koi nashai nhi hu me!" Haadi snapped loudly!

His tone startled the brothers!

"Change your tone Haadi! Awaz neeche rakh kr baat kro!" Haider angrily yelled!

"Haadi ye kia tareeqa tha batt krne ka?" Harib looked at him in rear view mirror!

"Sorry bhaiya! Sorry bhaijaan!" Haadi whispered slowly!

"Do din me ziyada dimag kharab hogaya haina? Ek second Haadi I am telling ek second nhi lagega mujhe to straighten the brat out of you!" Haider snapped!

"Mene sachi kuch nhi kia bhaiya! We were just talking why can't you guys trust me?" Haadi asked sadly!

"I do trust you Haadi!" Harib assured!

"I don't! I don't trust this age of yours Haadi! I know how easily you gets provoke and this reaction of yours tells me that there is more to this story but I am letting it go because I don't know what is it but you pray that whatever it is mujhe na hi pata chale! I swear if someone tells you touched any of the thing you shouldn't than you will not like me!" Haider promised dangerously!

"Haider relax!" Harib warned him!

Haadi ignored Haider!

"Bhaijaan hum kha jarahe ha?" He asked Harib!

"Mishi or Zaira ko pick krne!" Harib replied!

"Bhaijaan apko pata ha kal Aiza baji mili hame! Wo itni achi ha!" Haadi chirped happily!

"Kon Aiza Haadi?" Harib asked!

"Wohi jinke sath ap ki deal sign huu ha! Unhone ne kha me unka fav bhai hu!" Haadi replied!

"What was she doing here? And how are you so comfortable with her?" Harib asked!

"Hame bhai ne introduce karaya phir wo aklei thi to I kept her company she is very nice sweet smart kind!" Haadi replied and emphasised last three words at certain someone!

Haider sharply tilted his head and Haadi moved to hid behind his seat!

Harib rolled his eyes at their dynamics they always fight like this!

"Zaira golgappey khaye?" Mishi excitedly asked Zaira!

"Ya kha ha golgappey?" Zaira asked confused!

They were stuck in Main Hyderabad's duppata market! They were wandering and doing window shopping!

It was the first time Mishi and Zaira have been to shopping all alone!

"Arey mujhe pata haina pichli gali me mashoor golgappey milte ha!" Mishi told Zaira!

"Are you sure hum ghum to nhi jange na?" Zaira asked!

"Arey nhi ghumenge! Pichli me nhi hua to agli me hoga leken yahi khai ha!" Mishi replied!

Harib and Haider reached at the location but since the streets were very narrow they couldn't park the car!

"Haadi andar jaou bula kr lou dono ko!" Harib ordered!

"Ji bhaijaan!" Haadi came out and went inside!

Haadi reached inside upon not finding Mishi and Zaira he asked Safa but she replied that she doesn't know making Haadi pale! He started searching here and there!

"Bhaijaan Haadi ko itni dear lag gai me dhoond kr ata hu!" Haider suggested!

"Han jaou me tab tk parking dhoondta agey peeche khai!" Harib replied!

Haider came out of car and Harib drove ahead! Haadi was searching in entire restaurant he was trying to call them but their phone's were unreachable!

"Haadi?" Haider's voice came!

"Kaha ha dono?" Haider ask!

"Pa..tanhi!" Haadi replied!

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