Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

By niabhatti

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A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... More

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
5| scared
Couple Aesthetics
6| Day 1
7| Coffee
8| Over speeding
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
11|Metro
12|Flashback
13| Exams
14| Dinner
15|Fight
16| warnings
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
23| sick
24|oh no
25| guitar
26| broken
27|Tution
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32| wandering
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
36| birthday
37|Driving
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
43|screwed
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
54|Dictator
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
58| unexpected
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
78|new boys
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
85|wedding bells?
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

28| Injured

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By niabhatti

By the time meeting ended Harib was impressed he always likes confident girls according to him girls should be allowed to learn everything he even pushes his sisters to become confident!

Aiza was super talented  she wasn't just fooling around she was clear with her demands she knew which capacity there company allows to work on the way she made her points were commendable!

One thing Aiza liked about Ahmedaani's were that how respectful they were to each other never for once she have seen younger ones cutting their elders and making a point she noticed how respectful Haider was to Harib or how respectful Harib was to his uncles! They were one strong unit and she loved this thing!

Hamza on the other hand was two seconds away from getting Haider's flying slipper on his face only Harib's glare kept him quiet throughout! He was looking at Aiza with Awe he was absolutely not interested in meeting infact he was just not able to understand anything they were talking about!

The meeting ended with a positive note both of the companies agreed on this deal! Harib was over the moon next up coming months would be very busy for them but he was happy to start something on his own!

After Aiza leaves the elderly men congratulated Harib and took their leave leaving younger brother alone in big conference room!

Haider looked around to find something good after not being able to find anything he picked up his pen and threw it direct Hamza's face!

"Ouchhh!" Hamza cried dramatically!

"Pagal khai ke bari meeting me sorahe the tum! Aqal nhi ha tumhe!" He glared at him!

"Me so nhi raha tha mein to bas Ceo madam ko dekh raha thaa!" Hamza winked!

"Behave Hamza!" A harsh warning from Harib startled them all!

"Sorry bhaijaan!" He replied slowly!

"Hamza please get me coffee!" Hammad put his head down on table!

"Beta mere liye bhi!" Harib requested politely!

"Apko chaiye ha?" He asked Haider with tight lipped smile!

"Agar girou nhi to zarur!" Haider replied!

Hamza rolled his eyes and left the room!

"Congratulations bhaijaan!" Haider congratulated him!

"Ji bhaijaan congratulations!" Hammad added!

"Thank you!" Harib gently smiled at boys!

"Haider me Hamza ko apne under karaha hu I need another personal assistant he will be useful for once!" Harib told Haider!

"For once!! Bhot bure ha ap sab!" Hamza came in with four cups of coffee in his hand!

"Bache coffee nhi peete do idhar!" Hammad snatched cups from him!

"Hamza from next monday you will be working under me don't even think ke tum apni ye faltu ki haraketein mere pass bhi karsakte ho I want you sharp at 9:00 am clear!!" Harib stated sternly!

"Ji bhaijaan!" Hamza replied anything to get away from Haider and Rafiq sahab!

"Inse to jaan chuti meri!" Hamza murmured slowly but Haider listened him!

"Thank god mere department ka discipline to wapis ayega!" He scoffed at him!

On the other hand ladies and girls were sitting in lounge talking about random things!

"Rabia beta apka Hyderabad jane ka kab ka hai?" Dadi asked Rabia!

Mishi and Zaira looked up from their ipad screen!

"Bas ama isi hafte jaungi!" She replied!

"Ap kyu Hyderabad jarahi ha?" Mishi asked!

"Tum khabhi meri batt sunti ho dihyan se? 1 mahine se kherahi hu tumbari mamu ki beti ki shadi ha nani ghar jana ha!" Rabia glared at her daughter!

Rabia's parents and her whole family lives in Hyderabad!!

"Mama mujhe nhi ana!" Mishi whined!

"Kyu yar me bhi chalungi maza ayegi bari mama me asakti hu?" Zaira asked!

"Han beta zarur ye bhi ayegi or iske dono bhai bhi aynge krle jitni zid krni haa!" Bari mama glared at Mishi!

"Tumhe chote baba ane denge na jese!" Mishi asked Zaira!

"Mama manalenge haina Mama?" Zaira gave her mother a pleading look!

"Tumhare baba manjayega tumhara bhai nhi sambhalta mujhse!" Zeenat replied

"Usko me dekhlungii!" Dadi replied!

"Haadi ko bhi lejana bore hoga wrnaa!" Dadi added!

"Hatim ko bhi ap manayegi?" Rabia asked her mother in law! She nodded!

At dinner table when Rabia touched the topic of this Harib immediately started saying No!

"Mama me busy hu pleaseee!" Harib whined in front of his mother!

"Harib nanu nani bhot miss karahe it has been a year since you have met them sab wait krahe ha me ye nhi kherahi pura hafta aou bas shadi se ek din pehele please Harib beta!" Rabia requested!

"Okay Mama!" Harib sighed defeatedly

"Hassan or Hatim dono sunlo me Zaira or Haadi ko bhi lekar jaungi!" Rabia declared in front of her brother in laws!

"Kyu?"
"Kyu bhabi?"
"Mujhe kyu nhi?"
"Zaira kia karegi?"

Four voices came together!!

"Kia matlab kyu? Bache ha shadi ka mahol sab enjoy krnge!" Rabia answered the older two and ignored younger two!

"Bari mama mujhe bhi lejaye pleasee!" Hamza requested!

"Mera naniyal ha zoo nhi tumhara kaam nhi ha wahn!" Hammad glared at Hamza!

"Bari mama Zaira or Haadi ka kia kaam haa?" Haider asked again!

"Haider tum bhi ajana leken Zaira or Haadi to aynge no arguments! Or Hamza beta apko mene kab mana kia ha?" She answered!

"Bari mama jab sab jaynge to me bhi ajaunga!" Haider replied after knowing that no one will budge!

"Okay bhabhi!" Hassan and Hatim replied!

Later at night when Haider was out with his friends he noticed a car coming in he was not sure but he thought it was Rafay that too injured!

"Me ata hu!" He excused himself and started walking towards his home!

"Mujhe nhi jana dr pass me theek hu just leave me alone!" Haider heard Rafay yelling!

His friends sighed and left!

When Haider took a closer look Rafay was limping his face was bruised!

"Rafay kia hua?" Haider got worried!

"Me theek hu ap fikar na kre please!" Rafay replied and started walking towards his home!

"Stay right there" Haider firmed his voice!

Rafay wanted to bang his head! He got in fight and he was all set to get whopped by his father he wasn't ready to do any kind of dressing because he was sure his father would spare him when he will see the bruises but these particular Ahmedaani sibling being the bane of existence were permanent!

Rafay reluctantly turned around that is when Haider noticed his face his busted lips his black eyes were a sign that he have gotten into a fight!

"You need help Rafay chalo dispensary chalte ha!" Haider suggested!

"I am fine please!" Rafay replied tired!

Zaira was in her balcony when she noticed Haider and Rafay talking she frowned and panicked Rafay have too many of her secrets he knows about everything that she does which can get her in trouble!

Zaira panicked she immediately went to Hamza!

"Bhai pleas neeche chale naa mere sath!" She asked Hamza!

"Bhai?" Hamza raised his brows!
"Kia chaiye ha madam koo?" He asked!

"Hamza please!" She whined!

"Hua kia ha ira?" Hamza asked!

"Bhaiya or Rafay bahar kuch batt karahe ha wo kuch bolde ise phele chale na!" She pleaded!

"Kia bolde?" Hamza asked seriously!

"Mera Matlab kuch bhi na please bhai!" She requested!

"Kuch kia ha tumne jo tumhe nhi krna chaiye?" Hamza asked sternly!

"Sachi aisa kuch yadd nhi araha bas yahn wahn ki school ki batein!" She averted her gaze! She hates this thing about herself and she is to prideful to accept it but Hamza manages to scare her when he chooses to be!

"Chaloo!" Hamza replied!

"Rafay uncle bhot hyper hojange it is clear that you fought with someone he won't like it beta!" Haider gentled his tone something he doesn't usually do!

"Gayab to nhi hosakta na mein jo hoga I will face it!" Rafay almost snapped but controlled himself!

"Sit right here!" Haider pointed at chair!

Rafay did he can not disobey Haider when he uses this tone!

"Bhaiyaa?!" Hamza called from behind!

Rafay and Haider looked only to find Hamza and Zaira coming closer!

"Kia karahe ho tum dono yahn?" Haider asked his siblings!

"Hum to bas aise hii!" Zaira replied!

"Isee kia hua?" She laughed!

"Zairaa!" Haider growled!

"Kia hua Rafay theek ho?" Hamza asked!

"Me theek hu bhai!" Rafay replied!

"You need first aid Rafay call your mother!" Hamza pestered!

Zaira rolled her eyes but suddenly her phone pinged she opens it and it was a video of Rafay and some bullies of school fighting it was all over school WhatsApp group!

"Rafay yar!!" Zaira shouted!

"Zaira pleasee!" Rafay snapped!

"Tum shani logo se lar kr aye hoo? Kia zaurut thi unke mu lagne ki?" She asked!

"Tumhe kese pata?" Rafay asked shocked!

"Ye dekhooo!" She showed him her phone!

"Baba!!" Rafay muttered scared!

"Uncle kha ha?" Zaira looked around!

"Kisi ne video unhe bhejdi too! Ab me kia karu me to gaya mene soocha tha boldunga accident hogaya ha! Baba band bajadenge nhi yar!!" Rafay panicked!

"Jab itna dar ha to lare kyu?" Haider asked firmly!

Before Rafay can reply Zaira intervened surprisingly in his favor for the first time!

"Bhaiya wo log bhot bure ha they must have done something horrible!" She replied!

Rafay looked at her in shock Zaira taking his side was a very very rare sight!

"Don't worry Rafay ye videos school ke groups se bahr nhi jati since school is closed management won't take action against it uncle ko nhi chalega pata dont worry!" Hamza replied!

"Bhai pata chal gaya toh?" Rafay asked!

"You won't lie to him Rafay go ahead sach batado unhe!" Haider told him!

"He will kill me!" He replied in low voice!

"Don't worry he wont!" Hamza assured him!

"Ghar jau aunty se khaou give you some medicines dressing karwou apni and catch some sleep you look dead!" Haider patted his shoulder and he nodded!

"Hamza Zaira tum dono bhi chalo andar raat late hogai ha!" Haider asked his siblings!

"Ji bhaiya!" They replied and left!

"Common I will help you!" Haider held his hand and took him inside his house!

Haider ringed the bell and Alia came running!

"Kaha the tum? Tumhare baba ko chal jata pata toh?" She shouted but immediately looses her stance when she saw her son!

"Kia hua tumhe??" She asked panicked!

"Me chalta hu okay?" Haider asked!

"Thank you Sir!" Rafay replied!

"You don't have to call me that Rafay! Bhai is fine!" Haider ruffled his hairs and left!

"Mama dard horaha haaa!" Rafay shouted when her mother was cleaning his wounds!

"You shouldn't have fought Rafay!! Baba bhot gusaa krngeee!" Ali cleaned his wounds!

"Mama they were crossing their limits mujse nhi bardasht hua!" He replied!

"Aise kia batt hui thii?" She asked!

"Rehne de please!" He decided not to tell anybody what happened even that video was mute no one can know what made Rafay so hyper!

"Kia horaha ha yahn?" A loud voice came in and startled the mother son duo!!

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Raafay's family ^^
Dr Shah Alam (41)
Dr Alia Alam (39)
Raahil Alam (13)
Raaha Alam (13)

I Have tried my best to choose a very scary looking father for Rafay hope you guys liked it!!❤️
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..Nia!!

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