Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

By niabhatti

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A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... More

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
5| scared
Couple Aesthetics
6| Day 1
7| Coffee
8| Over speeding
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
11|Metro
12|Flashback
13| Exams
14| Dinner
15|Fight
16| warnings
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
23| sick
24|oh no
25| guitar
27|Tution
28| Injured
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32| wandering
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
36| birthday
37|Driving
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
43|screwed
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
54|Dictator
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
58| unexpected
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
78|new boys
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
85|wedding bells?
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

26| broken

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The younger clan was sitting in Hamza's room as it was at quite distance from Harib's room! Surprisingly Haider and Hammad were also sitting with them!

"Bhaijaan ki koi girlfriend bhag gai ha kia?" Zaira whispered slowly so that Haider who was sitting on chair little far from bed wont be able to listen!

Meanwhile Hammad noticed them whispering so he silently went towards Haadi and sat beside him! Zaira stopped after seeing him but he gestured to continue!

"Apko pata ha kisi ke bare me?" Hamza asked!

"Nahi yar! Wo aise batein mujse kha krenge!" Hammad answered back slowly!

"Mujhe lagta ha kisi ne unko bhot bara dhoka dia haa!" Zaira whispered but shouted next minute because of the whack she got on her head!

Haider was sitting on chair quietly using his phone but the sudden silence caught his attention 4 monkeys sitting silently didn't settle well with him when he turned to look around he found not 4 but 5 monkeys whispering silently! He silently walked closer only to find his little sister in her own element!

"Yar bhaiyaa!" Zaira rubbed the spot!

"Bare bhai ke bare me aise batein krte we sharam nhi ati?" Haider glared at all four!

"Tujhe kia ha?" Hammad spoked irritate!

"Tujhe nhi arahi sharam? Sare mil kr pitenge bhai jaan se!!" Haider replied Hammad!

"Tujhe pata ha wo shadi kyu nhi krna chahte?" Hammad asked!

"Hammad! Mujhe kesa pata hoga? Unki marzi tum logo ko kia masla horaha ha!" Haider asked glaring at them!

"Bhaiya ap Bhot boring haa! Bhaijaan ki hogi phir apki bari aygi phir ate ate humari aeygi!" Haadi replied not really knowing what he just said!

"Kia bakwass ki tumne abhi?" Haider turned him around and glared!

"Me..meine kuch nhi bola!" Haadi shook his head!

Haider being Haider caught his ear in tight grip and gave it a painful twist!

"You are 15 Haadi! Act your age!" He scolded!

"Ahh choreee Api bachayee!" He shouted!

"Bhaiya chorde na!" Mishal asked Haider and Haider dropped it!

"Me jaraha hu bahar araha ha?" He asked Hammad he was done with these stupid baboons!

"Bhaiya hum bhi thori deair bhar bethe?" Zaira asked!

"Araha ha?" Haider again asked Hammad ignoring Zaira!

"Bhaiya?" Zaira gave his her famous puppy eyes!

"Jau leken gate ke aas pass rehna jahan mama or sab bethe ha ok?" Haider asked politely!

"Bhaiya me dosto pass jau?" Hamza asked!

"Jau!" Haider was surprisingly answering in their favour!

"Ok bhaiya!" Zaira replied grinning!

"Chalo chaloo!" All five of them left!

Haider and Hammad went little away while Hamza went outside the society!

Their mothers and few more ladies of society have their weekly gathering outiside in society's garden!

Zaira looked at Aliya and her mind suddenly went to Raahil!

"Shit guys!!" She whispered!

Mishi raised her brows!

"Zara side me ana!" She gestured and took them little away!

"Kia hua?" Mishi asked!

"Yar ek masla hogaya ha? Help chaiye mujhe!" She asked!

"Ab krdia tumne?" Haadi asked!

"Adhi raat ko gari chalai aur dhang se wo kaam bhi nhi hua mujhse!" Zaira scoffed at him!

"Zeher lagti ho tum!" Haadi replied embarrassed!

"Hogaya dono ka? Bataou Zaira kia hua ha?" Mishi asked!

Zaira sat down on grass and explained them both!

"Bichara bhot dar gaya ha! Kuch suggest kro kuch aisa acha ke rafay ko pata tk na chale!" She asked!

"Tumhe kia itni tension horahi ha?" Haadi asked!

"Koi bahana nhi krna message krke bulao usko me samjhati hu usse!" Mishaal replied!

Zaira quickly messaged Raahil and he came outside!

"Asslam alikum!" He came and greeted them!

"Betho Raahil!" Mishi smiled at him and he sat down!

Haadi rolled his eyes at his both sisters if it was him instead of Raahil they would have thrown him to face lion alone!

"Kia soocha tumne? Raah ko to nhi batadia?" Zaira asked!

"Mene soochlia me Sab honestly batadunga!" Raahil replied!

Before Zaira can feed nonsense in his head Mishi interrupted!

"Exactly Raahil! Aj chupoge kal phasoge roz sach samne ane ka dar rahega own up your actions wo dantega ziyada se ziyada marega but you won't feel heavy after it!" Mishi explained!

"Pagal ho Mishi? Wo insaan thori ha daant kr chordega janti nhi ho tum usse! Bhootnath ha woo!" Zaira replied!

"Zaira!"
"Api please!" Two voice of disappointment came together!

"Jau khalo Maar!" She roller her eyes!

"Wo marte nhi ha!" Raahil replied!

"Raahil you are to young to be lying okay! Apni mama ko sach boldo wo tumhare bhai se krlnge batt if not then khud jakar batado leken dont lie okay? Lying will get you in more trouble!" Mishi told him!

"Ji api me subha batadunga!" He looked down!

"Raahil don't let him bully you! Mujhe batana me uska dimag sahi krdungi!" Zaira couldn't control herself and intervened!

"I don't know wo ki krnge!" Boy replied!

"Arey mere bhai! Kuch nhi krenge faltu ki tension mat le or jaa bhae boldena galti hogai!" Haadi was done with this boy!

"Haadi!" Mishi glared!

"Batein sune api iski! Itna sa bhai ha iska! Bhaiya se to wo khud itna darta ha hum bhaiya sath rehte ha hum to nhi krte itni overacting" Haadi rolled his eyes!

"Behave Haadi!" Mishi scolded!

"Me chalta hu api!" Raahil stood up!

"Bhot batameez ho tum dono!" Mishi scolded them both!

"Pakaraha tha yarr!" Haadi whined!

Mishi glared at him until he averted his gaze and murmured a small sorry!

Next morning around 10 am Rafay entered in his beautiful modern home! He entered the house and it was unusually quiet!

"Mama baba?" He shouted!

The maid came in!

"Sahab or baaji to dono hospital chale gaye ha!" She came in and replied!

Rafay nodded in understanding his parents leave at 9 but he hoping to see his mother!

"Bache?" He asked about his siblings?

"Dono sorahe ha!" She told him!

"Ji theek ha!" He replid and ran of to his room!

Rafay entered inside his and directly took his clothes and out and went for change! After changing he jumped to bed he was tired he was back home after two days he needed to rest!

Around 12 when he woke up! He went to plug his phone in his charger he walked towards the table right below the Tv and that when he noticed his guitar looking disheveled!

He frowned and picked it up only to find the upper body was complete broken! He was in shock for few seconds until he shouted so loudly that everyone in the house flinches!

"RAAHIL RAHAA!" He called his siblings!

Raaha was in shower so she didn't quite catched his voice but Raahil stopped dead in his tracks! He was gone and gone was good!

Unwilling he started walking towards his elder brother's room! He knocked on the door and when he entered Raafay knew it from his face that he is the one behind it!

He was too angry to foam words he called his brother closer by gesturing him with his finger! Raahil reluctantly walked closer!

"You did it?" Raafay asked in such scary tone!

Raahil found him nodding! Rafay's nostrils flared! He raised his hand but not slapped him on his face but he harshly whacked him right under his ear on his neck!

"How dare you?" He asked shouting!

Raahil flinched back! He held his neck and tears started pouring!

"Ga..galti se!" He replied!

"Galti se tum mere room me aye? Galti se mera guitar tordia tumne? You are not allowed to touch it why did you do it?" Raafay was angry he shouted loudly!

"Guitar lounge me bhool gaye the ap! Me khel raha tha ball se and without realising I kicked it mujhe nhi pata couch ke peeche guitar ha!" He spoked fastly!

Oh yes two days ago Raafay forgot his guitar in lounge!

"You shouldn't be playing in home Raahil! Bhot galat kia ha tum ne bhot galt" Raafay scolded harshly!

"Sorry bhaiya!" The teen found his voice and murmured and apology!

"Leave! Leave before I do something I shouldn't out NOW!" He shouted again and Raahil ran to his room!

Raafay was to angry he wanted to run! He quickly went to society's garden and started jogging!

Zaira and Haadi were buying groceries in utility store right in front of the garden the second they saw Rafay running in broad daylight they only assumed that Raahil has already been murdered!

"Raahil zinda ha ya margaya?" Haadi asked Zaira!

"Isko shakal se to lagraha ha gaya!" Zaira replied!

"Kaha tha mene usee jhoot bole! Nhi sachi savitri banna tha na usee!" Zaira rolled her eyes!

"Chalein hame kia!" Haadi shrugged! And both of them started walking towards their home!

Zaira was walking silently with bags of tomatoes in her hand! Suddenly a bike was coming but she was to engrossed in keeping her tomatoes save the paper bag was shielding her face that she couldn't notice it!

" Zaira side hojau pavement pe ajaou!" Haadi told her and Zaira noticed it she hurriedly climbed the pavement only to bump into angry bull running around!

"Dekh ke nhi chal sakti tum?" Rafay shouted!

"Apna gussa apne kabu me rakho bandar khai ke! Raahil ka gussa mujhe me utara haina to dekhna!" Zaira shouted while picking up her now fallen tomatoes!

"Tumhe kisne bataya? You stalk my house?" He growled!

Haadi was about to retort when Zaira beat him to it!

"Stalk? Rafay Alam soo low of you! Tumhara bhai rota wa mila mujje itna khoof ha use tumhe arey lakri ke tukre se itna attach ho tum?" She shouted back!

"Mere ghar ke mamle me nhi bolo Zaira!" He gritted!

"Ek guitar me tum apne bhai ke sath aisa kroge? Tumhe lagta ha tum me talent ha? Tumhe talent ba ya us lakri ke tukre mee? Dosra leloo!" Her words were rude but they were sinking in!

"Shut up! And mind your own business!" He growled!

"Dur Rafay!" Haadi came in front!

"Mujhe bolti ho tum apne bhai se to sambhal lo adhi raat me ghar se nhi bhagte hum! Ek jallad do creeps ajeeb log ha!" Rafay scoffed!

"Jis ko tum jaalad bolrahe ho uske dekh kr hosh urr jate ha tumhare! Kone me beth kr I am sorry likhte the and trust me you deserved it!" Zaira countered back!

" Get lost!" Rafay yelled and ran off!

Rafay sat in his house' garden remembering the time his mother made him go to Haider Ahmedaani's den!

Flashback!
12 year old Rafay was sitting in passenger seat of his mother's car his gaze casted on floor! He was silently listening to the scoldings!

"56 marks Rafay! 6 marks se pass hue to tum? Tumhare baba waha England me bethe itne gusse me haa you have disappointed us both badly! I will arrange tution for you and you will go!" Alia scolded her son harshly!

"Sorry mama me school me parhlunga please!" Little Rafay pleaded!

Two days ago Haider's result came and the family distributed sweets in entire society as he topped his university!

"Zaira ke kitne marks aye?" She asked his son wanting to know about Haider's tution skills!

"I don't know!" Rafay murmured!

"We are going home and you are grounded until baba comes back I will do something about tuitions today only!" She said and Rafay nodded!

In the evening Alia walked towards Ahmedaani haveli maybe they can help her!

"Asslam alikum bhabhi kesi ha?" She greeted Zeenat!

"Walikum salam!Alia kesi ho?" Zeenat replied back!

"Bas theek hu bhabhi bas kuch kam tha apse!" She started!

"Han han bolo!" Zeenat asked!

"Bhabhi Rafay ka maths ka result bhot bura aya ha! Haider agr uski thori help krde tuition parhade bas kuch arsa! Zaira ke kitne aye ha?" She asked!

"Alia hamare ghar ke bache Haider se dur bhagte ha! Wo usse nhi parhte Haider bhot sakht (strict) ha Rafay dar jayega me Harib se khedti leken wo abhi zara masroof (busy) ha!" Zeenat replied!

"Nhi bhabhi chalega! Haider ki sakhti se shayed wo parhle hum dono pass time nhi ha ap to Janti ha shah wo kitne gusse wale ha Rafay ko unki batt ka asar nhi ha shayed Haider se hi parhle!" She pleaded!

"Haider se pooch kr batou?" Zeenat replied!

"Asslam alikum!" Haider's voice came in!

"Me poochlo?" Alia asked!

Zeenat nodded and stood up!

"Salam beta!" She greeted Haider!

"Salam aunty!" Haider greeted respectfully!

"Haider beta ek favour chaiye agar tum Han bolo to!" She asked!

"Ji ji aunty Zarur!" Haider asked!

"Beta Rafay ko kuch time ke liye parha doo! Wo fail horaha or tum se ziyada hushyar larka aur khai nhi me fees tak dedunga thora sakti krke parha do use please!" She pleaded!

"Aunty fees ki batt na kare please! Me apni puri khoshis krunga meri university kuch time ke liye band ha ap usse 5 baje ke around bhejdiyega me parhadunga!" Haider was to soft to say no! The 22 year old Haider with lesser facial Hair replied softly!

"Bhot bhot shukria beta! Me roz Rafay ko bhej dungi Haider wo bhot naughty ha kisi ki nhi sunta will you handle him?" She asked!

"I know how to handle them! Ap fikar na kre!" Haider replied and she left grateful!

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