Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

By niabhatti

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A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... More

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
5| scared
Couple Aesthetics
6| Day 1
7| Coffee
8| Over speeding
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
11|Metro
12|Flashback
13| Exams
14| Dinner
15|Fight
16| warnings
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
23| sick
24|oh no
26| broken
27|Tution
28| Injured
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32| wandering
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
36| birthday
37|Driving
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
43|screwed
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
54|Dictator
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
58| unexpected
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
78|new boys
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
85|wedding bells?
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

25| guitar

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"Ap bhi dantoge?" Haadi asked cutely!

"Mene khabhi apko daanta ha?" Hatim asked softly!

Haadi shook his head!

"Leken bhaijaan ne kha tha ap datenge or bhai ne kha ap ko gussa krna bhi ata ha!" Haadi replied!

Hatim laughed softly he just can not scold this boy!

"Haadi beta me apko daantne nhi aya baat krne aya hu lets talk okay?" Hatim asked and Haadi nodded!

"Bilkul honestly baba ko bataou you ever planned to take vehicle alone or the sole reason you wanted to learn was because of your cousin?" Hatim asked softly!

"Promise baba paka promise mera chalane ka koi mood nhi thaa ab ap ye daantna band krde please bhaijaan ne bhot daant dia ha mara bhi ha!" He whined!

"Mene kab daanta Haadi?" Hatim asked with unamused tone!

"Matlab chorde na ye topic ap to mere ache wale baba haina!" He hugged him!

"Drama ho pure ke pure! Bhot acha kia Harib ne!" Hatim scoffed!

"Bhaijaan baba bhot bare khadoos haa patanhi kis pe chale gaye ha!" He complained like a 5 year old!

Hatim laughed!

"Bilkul apne baba pe gaya ha woh!" He smiled remembering the times he have to face Haroon!

"Bare baba to itne ache ha unko kha ata ha gussa!" Haadi replied confused!

"He changed after Mishi use phele wo bhot bare hitler the Harib Haider kuch nhi ha unke samne!" Hatim told his son

"Phir to hum sabko Mishi api ko thank you bolna chaiye!" Haadi replied!

"Choro ye sab and listen to me!" His tone was firm!

"Ji baba!" Haadi pouted!

"There should be no next time Haadi I am giving you my trust don't throw it back on face okay! Dont make me enforce rules that you won't like! Mujhe nhi pasand me apko dantu punish kru but the main reason why I haven't done it ever before is you never gave me a chance chote mote troubles I can ignore them apki mama ha for that but things like these will make me put my foot down so I request you don't make me because I don't want too!" Hatim's tone was stern!

Haadi first time in his life listened this tone of his baba! His tone was so different from always but it held the same warmth he wasn't able to answer any thing else other than :-

"Ji baba!" He nodded respectfully!

Hatim gave him his always gentle smile!

"Ye bataou chot kesi ha?" He asked

"Ab theek ha no pain!" Haadi smiled and settled on his lap until Hatim spoke again!

"Bhot sare chocolates laye ha baba chaiye ha?" He asked playfully!

And just like that Haadi's smile grew wide!

"Ofcourse dee!" He stood up!

Mishi opened her eyes groggily after feeling someone's presence she looked up only to find Hammad sleeping in sitting position!

"Bhai!" She shook him!

"Han han? Mishi theek ho? Kuch chaiye?" He panicked!

"Mein theek hu bhai ap yahn kia karahe ha?" She asked!

Hammad checked her temperature and it was normal he glanced at Mishi and looked away embarrassed he can't tell her that he was very scared that she might need him so keep on coming to check on her until he finally slept on her bed only!

Also he was feeling sad to because he did a fine impersonation of Haider last night he shouldn't have scolded her that bad especially when she was not okay!

He settled beside her and gently kissed her forehead!

"Paka theek hona?" He asked!

"Guilt horaha haina daante ka? Phone de batt khatm hojaegi!" She winked at him!

"Breakfast bad dedunga ye sab bhaijaan or Haider ke kam ha mujhse nhi hote!" He softly caressed her head!

"Tab hi to ap Hamare favourite wale bhai haa!" She hugged his midriff!

"I am sorry Mishi mene bhot sara daant dia na? I think you deserved it but I shouldn't have behaved like Haider na matlab meri personality kharab hoagi puri!" He joked!

Mishi laughed!

"Ap bhot cute ho bhai!" She told him!

"Shut up! I am handsome!" He raised his imaginary collars as he wearing a basic tee!

"Khush fehemi ha apki?" She scoffed!

"Mishi ki bachi!" Hammad whined!

Before Mishi could reply Harib walked in!

"Good morning!" He greeted!

"Good morning bhaijaan!" Both of them replied at same time!

"Kese tabiyat ha Mishi?" He asked!

"Ab theek hu!" She replied!

"Good freshen up hojau then lets go for breakfast!" He asked!

"Han kal se sahi se kuch nhi kahaya isne omelette khilayenge aj to isee!" Hammad intervened and teased!

"Me andaa nhi khati dont even start!" She glared at him!

"Me anda nhi khatii ayi bari 'brer Rabbit!" He mocked!

"Ohh kia bola apne?" She gasped dramatically!

"Brer Rabbit jiske bare bare daant hote ha tumhari tarah!" He showed his teeth!

Mishal ran to find to some pillow so that she can hit him but Harib's loud voice stopped her!

"Hammad Mishaal! Grow up!" Harib boomed!

"Hitler!" Both Muttered!

"10 mins come down in 10 mins clear?" Harib stated and left!

Hammad scoffed at her and left her room! He wasn't guilty anymore the brat deserved it!

"Chachuuuuu!" Zaira ran to her uncle when she saw him right after coming downstairs!

Hatim hugged her and patted her head!

"Kesi ho?" He asked after ruffling her hairs!

"Me to theek hu ap bataye? London walo ne deport krdia na apko?" She asked!

"Tumhare bare baba ne bula lia yar!" Hatim whined!

" 4 meetings chor ke chale gaye ap? Kon professional insaan aise kaam krta ha?" Haider came!

Hatim rolled his eyes!

"Tum log sab sambhal sakte they leken nhi sab jealous hogaye chachu kese chale gaye!" He replied!

"Ab tum is umer me honeymoon pe jaoge to hum to jalenge na!" Hassan spoked from behind!

"Baba!" Haider spoked shocked and embarrassed Zaira was standing right in front!

"Zaira apne bhai se khedo don't talk to me!" Hasan didn't even glanced at his son!

"Bhaiya baba se batt nhi kre!" She told Haider!

"Mene kia kia ab?" Haider asked!

"Kahana apse batt nhi kre!" Zaira glared at him!

Haider glared back and she immediately ran to kitchen!

"Baba?" He called but his father left him!

"Kia krdia ab tumne?" Hatim asked his nephew!

"Patanhi bhae!" Haider replied still not getting why his baba was Mad!

After breakfast when all the men left! Zaira went to terrace to have some fresh air!

Mishi was asleep because she had her medicines! Zaira was walking around the terrace while listening to some music until her gaze fell outside!

Raahil was sitting outside his house porch crying he had his face hidden in between his palms and his body was shaking!

Zaira got alert she have never seen his boy crying he have always been a very fun goofy respectful boy!

She immediately descended the stairs and ran to him!

She walked closer to him and sat beside him on the step!

"Raahil?" She spoked and Raahil got alert he immediately stood up scared but caught his breath after seeing it was Zaira!

He wiped his tears and smiled at her!

"Ji api?" He tried for smile!

Zaira was not used to calming someone down but she can totally see when someone isn't feeling okay!

"Rahil bethoo!" She asked gently!

The 13 year old boy hesitantly sat down!

"Kia hogaya ha? Why are you sad?" She asked

"Me theek hu api!" He smiled!

"Raahil trust me mein dunya ka har ulta kam kar chuki hu koi hogaya to mujhe batado! Uncle ne daanta kia?" She asked!

The little boy's lips quivered!

"Mujhse bhot bari galti hogai ha!" He sniffed!

"Batou na kia hua ha!" Zaira asked!

"I broke Bhaiya's guitar!" He choked up saying!

Zaira gasped! Rafay's guitar was his baby! Even in school he flaunts it every day in lunch break he sits with his guitar and sing songs making him one of the most popular guy of school! No one was allowed to touch his guitar and this little boy just broke it Zaira wasn't able to believe it!

"Tell me you are joking!" She asked!

Raahil cried more and shook his head!

"Raahil ab? Wo wese hi pura din churail bana ghumta ha ab to wo dracula banjayega!" She was now worried for this boy!

"Mujhe kuch nhi araha samjh! Me kia kru he will kill me!" He sobbed more!

"Please ro mat yar! Hua kese yeh? Tum ne jaan kr thori tora hoga aunty will save you!" She told him!

"She won't wo hamesha mana krti ha ghar me football mat khelo aj koi nhi tha ghar pe so I started playing with ball and mistakenly I kicked it hard breaking his guitar! Wo mujhe guitar ko hath bhi nhi lagane dete! Wo bhot gussa hoajnge!" He cried!

"Shit yar! Acha na ab itna mat roo wo jitna bhi scary hojaye he can not beat my bhaiya me nhi roti itna tumhe dekho kia krega ziyada se ziyada?" She asked!

"Apne unka gusaa nhi dekha!" Young boy replied!

"I bet usko duniya me sab se ziyada gussa mujhe pe ata ha we both loath each other Raahil hum roz larte ha I know how mad he can get leken tum bhai ko uske!" She explained!

"Baba gifted him this guitar at his 7 birthday tab se he uses this! Wo mujhe nhi chornge!" His cries were increasing!

"Usko bolo bili ne tordia!" She suggested!

"He is not a fool api!" He replied!

"I beg to differ! Ek guitar ko lekar itna possessive god he is so dumb!" She scoffed!

"Wo apni sab cheezo ko lekar itne hi possessive ha!" Raahil replied!

"Hai kha wo abhi?" She asked!

"Wo murree gye ha he will be back tomorrow!" He replied!

"Okay then take some chill tonight me kuch maze ka plan krti hu okay?" She replied!

"I won't lie to him! Me jhoot nhi bolsakta!" He said!

"Ek to tum itne neik jitna wo fake mat bolna jhoot but relax me Haadi mishi sath krti hu kuch plan I will save you paka!" She promised!

"Sachi?" He asked hopefully!

"I will try my best just don't give it away to Raaha! Wo phele batadegi bhai ki chamchi!" Zaira rolled her eyes!

"Nhi batunga!" He promised!

"I will text you okay?" She asked and he nodded!

Zaira was about to enter inside the house when the saw a car making its way inside!

"Phupoo!! (Father's sister)" zaira ran to hug her!

Zaira's grand parents adopted a daughter not adopted but raised her as their own! She was a orphan her parents died when she 3 years old! Fatima their dadi got to know about her when she visited an orphanage when the girl was around 14 she took her home and raised her!

She was 39 now happily married she was a great aunt to children they all love her! She got no children of her own yet!

"Kesi ho Zaira!" She hugged her back!

"Mein theek hu ap kesi ha?" Zaira asked!

"Bilkul theek hu!" They made their way inside!

The family greeted her and welcomed her! Maham and her husband Fakhir lives in dubai so whenever she is in town the family gets so excited!

The elder group of brother came in and greeted her with all love and warmth!

After dinner the family was chilling in living room having their khewas (sort of green tea) when Maham spoked something making family excited except one!

"Bhabi!" She nudged Rabia!

"Bolo?" Rabia asked!

"Ap Harib ki shadi kab karahi ha?" She asked making everyone stop!

"Phupo please!" Harib spoked!

"Kyu nhi bahe 29 ke hogaye ho get married yar!" She pestered!

"Meri to kab se khuwaish ha manta hi nhi ha ye larka!" Bari mama scoffed!

"Mujje abhi shadi nhi krni and that is final don't force me!" Harib tone was angry! He stood up and left the room making everyone loose their smile!

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