Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

By niabhatti

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A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... More

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
5| scared
Couple Aesthetics
6| Day 1
7| Coffee
8| Over speeding
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
11|Metro
12|Flashback
13| Exams
14| Dinner
15|Fight
16| warnings
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
24|oh no
25| guitar
26| broken
27|Tution
28| Injured
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32| wandering
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
36| birthday
37|Driving
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
43|screwed
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
54|Dictator
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
58| unexpected
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
78|new boys
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
85|wedding bells?
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

23| sick

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Hamza changed in his pjs and got ready for bed! He was walking towards his bed when his gaze fell upon the mirror he walked and closed took a look at his face his cheek was red indicating that someone slapped him hard!

Hamza was now done by this behaviour of his brother he will do something to get him in trouble he got enough undeserving beatings he needs to do something about this Haider Ahmedaani!

He made a mental note to himself that he will get his bhaiya in some trouble something not too serious but something which can teach him a lesson!

Hamza sneakily went into Zaira's room Zaira was very much asleep he walked towards her dresser and searched for something useful for him and just by luck he found the perfect thing he quickly pocketed her round Mac blush!

Next morning Rabia went to Mishaal's room to wake her up for breakfast as she was not present!

"Mishii!" She gently nudged her daughter!

"Ji Mama?" She replied groggily!

"Beta nashte ka time horaha ha uth jau!" She shook her softly!

"Mama aj sone de bhot neend arahi ha!" She was speaking from inside the covers!

"Tabiyat theek ha?" Rabia asked

"Ji jii!" Mishi was quick to reply!

Rabia didn't pay too much head to her and left allowing her to sleep for some more time!

The family was all set for breakfast when Hamza entered the room with absolutely red cheek! He woke up early to search and watch video teaching how to make perfect slap mark!

He made a very sad face and went to sit in between his father and dadi!

Hassan didn't notice it for few minutes but the second he looked at it he boomed!

"Hamzaa! Ye kisne kia? Kisne Mara tumhe itni buri taraha?" He exclaimed loudly catching every one's attention!

Haider looked up only to find his brother looking absolutely beaten! He was sure he didn't do it that harsh!

Hamza stayed quite but purposely made his lips quiver indicating that he is about to cry!

Harib glared at Haider so furiously that if looks could kill Haider would have been under ground!

"Hamza kisne mara beta?" Bare baba asked!

"Bare baba chore jo hogaya so hogaya!" Hamza was nailing his performance!

"Didn't I tell you to stay away from him?" Harib stood up and walked towards Haider!

"Haider ne mara?" The family gasped!

Haider too stood up clearly not getting the situation!

"Bhaijaan mene.." Haider started but Harib cut him off rather harshly!

"Bas Haider! Galti ki thi na bache na yar is tareqee se marte ha kia? Especially mere mana krne ke bad?" Harib growled!

"Mene toh.." Haider wasn't able to form words he did slapped him but it was not that harsh and he definitely didn't disobey Harib!

"Bhot galt batt ha Haider! Akhir aisa hua kia tha?" Zeenat asked!

Hamza looked up immediately he doesn't want Harib to spill the beans that can get him in lots of trouble!

"Wo bhaiya mujjse naraz they!" He quickly spoked!

Harib shook his head at Hamza's effort to save Haadi!

"You shouldn't have done it Haider bacha ha wo!" Hassan scolded his son!

Haider was genuinely confused now did he actually hit his brother hard enough to leave an ugly bruise!

"Baba galti se.." Bare baba cut him off!

"Galti se hath uth gaya tumhara Haider?" He asked firmly making Haider gulp!

"Nahi Nahi ap galt samjhrahe hai!" Haider was quick to clear the air!

"To theek samjhou Haider?" Hassan asked!

Haider looked around only to find his little sister glaring at him like a Lioness he maybe scared of everyone but he was definitely not scared of her he glared back so furiously that she immediately averted her gaze and looked down!

Hammad was giving him disappointed looks meanwhile Haadi was looking at Hamza sadly he thought it was because of him!

"Bas kro sab! Bhai bhai ke apas ki batt ha Hadier koi bewakoof nhi ha nashta kro sab!" Dadu shut them all up!

Hamza looked at his dadu annoyed but immediately schooled his face before anybody catch on him!

"Library me ana!" Harib ordered Haider making Haider shrink back in his seat!

Zaira and Haadi tried hard to control their laughter their big scary brother was in trouble it was fun sight to see!

Hamza smirked finally Haider Ahmedaani will know what it feels like to be on the other hand of raging bull!

"Bhaijaan!" Haider entered library after getting done with his breakfast!

"Why did you disobey me Haider?" Harib asked calmly!

"Mene apko disobey nhi ki bhaijaan!" Haider replied maintaining a safety distance!

"He is an adult Haider batt batt pe mar nhi sakte hum usse I scolded him he promised he won't repeat it leken tum har cheez me bare bante ho? He absolutely didn't deserve that slap Haadi ko mara tumne? Nhi na? Why always Hamza Haider?" Harib scolded!

The last sentence hurted Haider's feeling he might pamper Haadi a little more but he loves all his siblings in same way!

"Mene nhi kia kuch!" He countered back!

"Did you hit or did you not?" Harib asked folding his hands on his chest!

"I..i" Haider was lost at words!

"Han ya nah Haider?" Harib asked very firmly!

"I did but!" Harib again cut him off!

"See you did!" Harib rolled his eyes!

Haider had enough!

"2 minutes batt sunle please bhaijaan!" Haider taunted with gritted teeth!

"Change your tone Haider!" Harib was not having it!

"Sorry!" Haider muttered!

"Bolo jo bhi bacha ha ab!" Harib asked!

"Mene mara usko leken misunderstanding hogai thi isliye!" Haider started!

"Kese misunderstanding Haider sahab?" Harib asked sarcastically!

"Bhaijaan yar..!" Haider explained the entire situation to Harib and looked at him with a smile which wasn't sweet at all!

"You didn't slap because he took Haadi?" Harib asked loosing his tone!

"Ji nhi!" Haider gave him another tight lipped smile!

"Toh learn to control your anger aise hi marna achi batt nhi hoti!" Harib told and left embarrassed!

Haider was about to step out when Haadi came in!

Haadi decided to deal with his brother because he have just got scolded maybe he will feel like what it feels to get scolded and he maybe forgive him!

"Bhaiyaa!" He cutely took step towards!

"Farmou!" Haider replied switching to older strict brother mode fast!

"Maff krde please!" He pestered!

"Haadi!" Haider glared at him!

"Apne bhai ko bhi mara meri wajah se acha mujhe marle leken please itne zor se nhi!" Haadi took few safety steps back!

"Nhi mara mene tumhare bhai koo!" Haider yelled frustrated!

Haadi flinched back at sudden outbursts but dared to ask!

"Apne nhi mara to ye sab kia tha?" He asked!

"Mujhe nhi pata!" Haider scoffed!

"Acha chore sab mujhe krde maaf!" He went closer and hugged him!

Haider was no mood to continue with this!

"Theek ha!" He hugged him back!

"Thank you bhaiya love you!" He kissed his cheek and ran off

Hamza was in full fun mood today he quietly went to bare baba!

"Bare baba?" He asked politely

"Ji beta?" Haroon asked!

"Me ajj office na aou? Mujhe embarrassment hogi!" He looked down for the extra effect!

"Han beta koi batt nhi!" Haroon said lovingly and left!

Hamza did a little happy dance and ran to his room only to find Haider sitting on his bed!

"Bhai..ya? Ap..ap gaye nhi?" He managed to say!

Haider stood up and walked to him!

Hamza took two step back!

"I am sorry!" Haider muttered making him stop!

"Kia bola apne?" Hamza asked!

"I am sorry Hamza I shouldn't have raised my hand me bas dar gaya the I thought.. I thought kuch nhi never mind but I am sorry!" Haider couldn't form words!

Hamza noticed how genuinely sorry he was! He walked closer to him and hugged him!

"Koi batt nhi bhaiya its okay!" He patted his back!

Haider pulled away and before Hamza can know he gently caressed his face! Haider looked at his hand and the blush was evident on his hand!

Hamza looked at Haider looking at his hand and his eyes turning dark!

Hamza without thinking of anything ran fast!

Haider tried chasing him!
"Hamza ke bachee!! Jhooteeee!" He ran behind him and threw his slipper on him!

"Ahh Ahh!" Hamza ran on death speed and finally locked himself in dadi's room!

Haider wanted to bang the door but he couldn't their dadi have hearing issues she can absolutely go bonkers if she hears loud banging!

"Office me dekhta hu tumhee!" Haider yelled and left for work he was already enough late!

Later in evening Zaira went to Mishi's room because she was getting bored!

"Yar Mishi kuch krte haa!" She barged in and found Mishi sitting on her bed coughing!

"Theek ho tum!" Zaira went to her asked worriedly!

Mishi got scared looking at her she doesn't want anybody to know that she is running fever since morning because she had one whole bucket of ice cream late in night!

"Theek hu Ira fikar nhi kroo!" She replied weekly!

Mishi have always been obsessed with chocolates and Icecream she can literally eats buckets of ice cream if no one stop her and she also have low immunity she catches cold very fast!

"Theek dikh to nhi rahi tum bimar hoo!" Zaira exclaimed!

"Kon bimar ha?" Hamza came in!

"Yar Zaira yarr!" Mishi whined!

Her heavy voice made Hamza alert!

"Mishi? Kia hua yar?" He came closer and tried to check her temperature but she pushed his hand away!

"Theek hu me bilkul!" She managed to say while coughing!

"Mishaal!" Hamza glared at her and Mishi was to tired to fight him back!

"Please mat batana tum dono kisi ko me dawai leleti hu!" She tried convincing them!

"Ek second Mishi!! Tumne phir ice cream khai akele?" Hamza raised his brows!

"Nah..i too!" She averted her gaze!

"Zaira jau bari mama ko bula kr lou!" Hamza ordered zaira!

"Pagal hogaye ho? Mama doctor pass lejange bhaijaan ko pata chal jayega wo bhot daantege wo hamesha mana krte ha or bhai wo to draculaa ban jayege please nhii! Baba bhi gussa krnge mujhe ek dawai dedo me theek hojaungi!" She cried!

Mishaal's brother were absolutely strict about her being careless regarding her health the only reason Mishi get scolded for is her neglecting her health!

Surprisingly Hammad was more scary in this matter even more than Harib he can never see his sister confined to bed so he behave more strict with her regarding her health!

"Mishi hum sabko pata ha tum dawai se theek nhi hoti please bari mama ko batadena wo Alia aunty ko bula denge atleast dawai to leloo yar!" Hamza asked!

Zaira rolled her eyes listening to Rafay's mother name!

"Mama kuch secret nhi rakhti wo baba ko batadenge or unke beto ko phele chal jayega pata!" Mishi coughed more!

Hamza walked closer and touched her forehead she was burning high!

"Achi batt ha tumhari icecream koi to band kraye!" Hamza countered back!

"Sab ne try krke dekhlia ha infact Hammad bhai ne last time kha tha agr isne next time ice cream khai to unse bura koi nhi hoga wo khabhi aise nhi bolte ye sab bhaiya ke kaam ha!" Zaira intervened!

"Zaira chup hojaou!" Mishi pretty much yelled at her for jinxing!

"Nhi pata chalna chaiye mere bhaio ko! Me bimar hu bhool jau is batt koo!" Mishi glared at both of them!

"Is that so Mishal?" A voice came in as Hamza left the room door open!

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