Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

By niabhatti

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A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... More

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
5| scared
Couple Aesthetics
6| Day 1
7| Coffee
8| Over speeding
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
11|Metro
12|Flashback
13| Exams
14| Dinner
15|Fight
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
23| sick
24|oh no
25| guitar
26| broken
27|Tution
28| Injured
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32| wandering
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
36| birthday
37|Driving
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
43|screwed
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
54|Dictator
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
58| unexpected
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
78|new boys
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
85|wedding bells?
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

16| warnings

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By niabhatti

Haider and Hammad were standing in terrace when they saw Mishi and Zaira going to Hamza's room! They thought of checking up on them!

As soon as Haider listened Zaira's word his eyes turned dark! It was third time Haadi have started a fight! Him starting a fight with older boys could have gotten him seriously hurt! Haider have warned him before aswell to stop using his fists to answer but its seems that he just doesn't understand!

Hamza paled too he covered up for Haadi in that moment because he knew how Haider reacted last time when Haadi punched a boy in school and this time he decked a guy who was older than him!

Haider furiously walked towards Haadi and pulled him out of the bed by his uper arm!

"Tum ne jakar larai shuru kii?" Haider asked furiously!

Haadi bowed his head down too afraid to answer!

Haider was running thin on patience if not his busted lips or black eye Haider would have smacked him right across his face but somehow he controlled himself!

"Jawab dooo!" His voice boomed!

"Haider please batt to sunle!" Hammad came in!

Haider sharply tilted his head and looked at poor Hammad with his blazing eyes!

"Batt krnee dee!" He spoked with authority!

"Mana kia thana last time bhi logo ki batt pasand na aye to jakar unko marna nhi shuru krdete? Janwar krte ha maar peet! Aur kitni dafa mana krna parega Haadi? Hamza bara haina tumse wo bhi tha wahan usne uthyaa jakr hath? Nahi naa! Kyu gaye tum use marnee?" Haider growled

Haadi took a step back scared but Haider was gripping forearm tight!

"Haider dekh usse chot ayi wi haa!" Hammad quickly interrupted before Haider can slap him because Haadi's silence was adding fuel to the fire!

Haider loosens his grip but didn't let him free!

"Jawab doo Haadi!" He asked furiously!

"Sorry bhaiyaaa!" Haadi muttered

"Mere sawal ka jawab doo Haadi! Mara kyu?" Haider stretched!

"Patanhi bhaiyaa! Api ekdum sad hogai thi mujhse nhi dekha gayaa!" Haadi replied scared!

Mishaal and Zaira were sitting scared while holding hands! Haider's anger always manage to scare them both!

As soon as Haadi said those words Mishaal looked at Haider with teary eyes!

"Haadi wo roegi to tum maar peet shuru krdgoge? Wo sare tumhe marte ziyada lag jati kia krte ha hum bolo? Choti choti khotaia (mistakes) khabi kabar hamara hi bara nuqsan(damage) krwadeti haaa!" Haider scolded!

"Bhaiya rehene dena please next time nhi krega!" Mishaal stood up and gathered her courage!

Haider looked around and all of them were looking at him with puppy eyes silently pleading to leave their youngest brother!

Haider sighed and left his hand!
"Phone doo!" He forwarded his hand!

"Bhaiyaa!" Haadi whined!

"Haadi phone doo! I need to make sure agli dafa kisi ka mu torne se phele tumhe consequences pata hoo!" Haider asked in no nonsense tone!

Before Haadi can whine more and push Haider's button Hammad intervened!

"Haadi phone doo!" He stated sternly!

Hammad very rarely uses this tone but whenever he does it expects complete obedience!

Haadi sighed and took his phone out he quietly forwarded it Haider!

"Haadi I am warning you next time agar tumne aisi Maar peet ki na toh I promise mujhse bura koi nhi hogaa!" Haider promised dangerously!

"Aur tum jhoot bolne me mahir (expert) hogaye hona? Sare jhoot nikal dunga me tumhare Hamza!" Haider turned his attention to Hamza!

"Sorry" Hamza muttered quietly!

Before Haider can do anything else Hammad dragged him away!

"Chal mere bahii!" He dragged him away!

"Bhaiya kaha chupate ha phone?" Haadi asked

"Band kro bakwass apni!" Mishaal scowled at him!

"Pagal ho kia tum? Bhai ne bachalia wrna Maar khate aj!" Zaira asked!

"Wese Hammad bhai na hote to humara kia hotaa jan ha bhai too!" Hamza added!

"Waqai (true that) bhai is best!" Mishal spoked!

"Chalo ab tum dono painkiller lekar sojaou!" She added!

"Jau Haadi hatooo mere bed se!" Hamza mocked kicked him!

"Me bhaiya pass jaraha hu!" Haadi huffed at left!

"Pura din unse daant khane ke bad end me isse unke pass hi jana hota psycho inssan!" Zaira rolled her eyes!

Haadi walked to Haider's room with his pillow in his hand!

Haider was just about to turn the lamp off! When Haadi barged in! His sibling would never learn manners and ethics of entering someone's else's room he miss the time when they use to fear coming inside his room except Zaira off course because she never hesitated!

"Gussa hoo?" Haadi asked after settling closer to him!

Haider ignored him and pulled his sheets up! Haadi hugged him from back!

"Chordo na gussa! Ainda nhi krungaa!" Haadi promised!

"Please please pleasee!!!" He shouted

Haider turned around and whacked him hard on his shoulders!

"Ouch bhaiyaa chot ayi haaa!" He cried dramatically!

"Nikloo mere room se!" Haider didn't pay any heed to his drama!

"Nopes ye mera bhi room haa!" Haadi settled more comfortably!

"Acha? Kabse?" Haider asked!

"Jane dena ab sab neend arahi ha dard bhi horaha haa!" Haadi hugged him!

"Dawai lee?" Haider asked!

Haadi smiled sheepishly and shook his head! Haider refrained from whacking him again and opened his side drawer took a paracetamol and gave to him!

"Pakroo!" He threw on his face!

"Ye bhi gusse se deni ha khadoos khai kee!" He murmured!

Haider looked at him confused!

"Paani!" He asked politely

Haider gave him bottle of water and turned the lamp off after making sure he have had the medicine!

Haadi silently hugged him and he hugged him back! The boy will never not pull his heart strings!

Next morning Haider purposely chooses another park to do his morning jog because he knew he will find Rafay there and he wants to have a chat no one can mess with his siblings and go Scott free!

Rafay entered the park all set to jog but he turned around as soon as he saw Haider!

"Rafay!" But to his luck Haider called him!

Rafay turned around reluctantly he wanted to leave but he can not ignore Haider! His body refuses to cooperate!

"Good morning sir!" He turned and greeted as respectfully as he can!

Haider was Rafay's scariest nightmare! He was a failure at maths but Haider made him score B grade! His mother was so happy that for 3 years she used to send him to Haider before his final exams!

Rafay was so done with Haider that he started studying on his own! His results improved magically making Zaira way more jealous!

Haider as a teacher was no joke he was very strict! He fears him till date!

"Raat ko kia hua tha?" Haider directly came to point ignoring his greeting!

"Woh..woh Haadi ne shuru kia tha akar mere dost saim ko marna shuru krdia koi batt nhi hui thi!" He tried throwing it on Haadi!

"Are you sure?" Haider asked sternly!

"Kuch hua hoga patanhi mene realise nhi kia ap Haadi or Hamza bhai se pooche shayed unko koi galat fehemi hui thii!" He changed his words immediately!

"Mere bhaiyo ki side of story me sun kr aya hu! Tum apni batou Rafay!" Haider glared at him and he gulped

"Patanhi sir I promise mene kuch nhi kia!" Rafay stated scared!

Haider smirked looking at the impact he have on him! He asked him to call him sir when this boy was 12 almost 5 years ago and that too when he was in trouble because he forgot do the equations at home!

"Kal raat wale charo ko phone krke bulaou!" Haider ordered!

"Wo.wo toh sorahe honge!" Rafay replied!

"Uth jaynge Rafay call them and ask them to come here right now and dont tell them that I am calling them!" He ordered and sat on a bench!

Rafay wanted to protest he wanted to say no to this guy he was a grown up now he shouldn't fear him anymore but his mind and body refuses to cooperate! Haider's fair was engraved inside his chest! He pity Zaira as much as he hates her living with a brother like him must be so dangerous!

"Jii!" He muttered and picked up the phone! He group called all of them and ask them to meet soon!

Since all the boys use to live in the same society they were able to come within 10 minutes!

Haider looked up shocked when 4 bruised boys entered! His younger brothers did a fine job! He shouldn't be afraid for them they have got the bullies good!

The boys paled after looking at Haider Ahmedaani standing there in all its glory and their bad boy friend standing next to him looking like a scared kitten!

One of them was looking absolutely wrecked!

"Kisne kia tumhare sath yeh?" He asked

"Haadi!" The boy muttered!

Haider wanted to laugh he was feeling scared for his little brother but his little brother just destroyed his face Haider was feeling proud but ofcourse he would never show it!

"Kyu?" Haider asked!

"Patanhi bhai!" He replied

"Sach me nhi pata? Kyuke mujhe to bataya gaya ke tum charo meri bhen ka mazak urahae they?" Haider asked in dangerous tone!

The boys gulped and took two step back!

At their utmost silence Haider chooses to warn them!

"Next time mere bhen bhai ke aass pass nazar bhi na aou tum sab! You do not want to mess me with me! Agli dafa aisa kuch hua to you guys will regret it badly! Rafay samjho do inko!" He warned!

"Jii!" Rafay replied!

Haider casually picked up his water bottle and left! The boy looked terrified enough for their lifetime!

In the evening the elders were all set to leave for a relative wedding!

"Wese bore bore krte ho abhi jab hum kherahe chalo to chalo na!" Bari mama asked to Mishi and Zaira!

"Shaadi me ane se boriyat nhi khatam hoti bari mama! Ap jaye phupo ke devar ki shadi me hum kia krnge ap bataye?" Zaira replied

"Kia kroge tum teeno akele ghar me? Wo teeno bhi late ayngee!" Zeenat asked

"Arey choti Mama chill kre ap kuch na kuch krlngee!" Mishi replied!

"Rehene de bhabhi ye hamre sath bore honge!" Nazia their youngest aunty intervened!

"Ghar mat jaladena Hamara!" Zeenat glared at the girls!

"Mama ap faltu ki tension na le hum bhar se khana mangalenge!" Zaira shrugged!

"Kal bhar ka khaya ha khana ghar pe tayar ha!" Bari mama replied!

"Wese ye Hamza or Haadi konsi swimming class me gaye ha? Sham hogai subha se shakal nhi dikhai dono nee!" Naziya asked suspiciously

"Chachi chale gaye honge khai ajange thori deair me! Ap fikar na kree!" Mishi covered up quickly!

"Arey jab bachiya kherahi ha wo theek ha to ap teeno fikar na kre chale late hojaegaa!" Chachu came downstairs!

"Koi masti nhi okay bachoo?" Hassan asked!

"Okay babaa!" Zaira went to him and kissed his cheek melting him immediately!

The elders left and after some time Mishi started getting bored!

"Ira me apni book complete krahi hu tum krlo kuch! Haadi ka message aya wo aur Hamza film dekhne chale gaye ha 6 baje tk aynge!" Mishaal stood up!

Zaira rolled her eyes after listening book!

"Jau bahe tumhar jane austin udass hojaegi tum nhi gai to uske pass!" Zaira replied while watching reels!

After watching continuous reels of food! She decided to cook something!

Zaira loved her idea so she happily stood up and walked towards the kitchen!

"Time for some pizaa!" She chirped and wore the apron!

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