Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

By niabhatti

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A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... More

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
5| scared
Couple Aesthetics
6| Day 1
7| Coffee
8| Over speeding
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
11|Metro
12|Flashback
13| Exams
15|Fight
16| warnings
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
23| sick
24|oh no
25| guitar
26| broken
27|Tution
28| Injured
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32| wandering
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
36| birthday
37|Driving
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
43|screwed
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
54|Dictator
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
58| unexpected
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
78|new boys
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
85|wedding bells?
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

14| Dinner

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Zaira was frustrated because it was almost 7 in the evening and Haider wasn't back from office she badly wants her phone back but she can not gather courage to go inside his room and snoop around!

"Ajange na bhaiya kyu mu phula kr beth gai hoo?" Mishiii asked after settling beside her near their swimming pool lounge!

"Wo jaan kar nhi arahe Mishi unko bhot shoq hai mujhe satane kaa mujhe tang krnee ka!" Zaira huffed!

"Kisko shoq ha tumhe satane ka?" Hamza asked entering!

"Bhaiya ko aur kiskoo!" Zaira replied

"Ab kia krdia unhone ne?" Hamza asked!

"Mera phone lekar gayab hogaye haa kha tha last exam wale din dedunga ab tk nhi dia paper khatam hue pure 6 ghante hogaye!" Zaira pouted!

"Toh jau mang lonaa!" Hamza replied

"Ghar agaye woh?" Zaira asked!

"Han kabkee!"

"Kia matlab kabke?" Zaira asked confused!

"Zaira me or bhaiya 6 baje se aye we haa tum hi yahn bethi hooo!" Hamza told her!

Zaira stood up angry!

"Tum pagal hoo? Bhaiya kabke agaye or mujhe bataya bhi nhi! Mishi tumne ne bhi nhi haa hadd haa!"

"Bhae mujhe nhi pata tha me to apne room se direct ayi huu!" Mishi replied!

"Abhi apna phone lekar ati huuu!" Zaira huffed and walked outside!

"Kia kha kr mama ne isko paida kia ha patanhii!" Hamza told Mishi!

"Pagal ha purii yeh ek ghante se yahn bethi ha bhaiya mere sath jan kr aisa krte ha Haadi ka phone hota to khud ghar akr dete ye woh!" Mishi replied!

"Bas dua kro phone lekar hi aye daant kha kr na agayee!" Hamza held Mishi's hand and walked outside!

"Bhaiyaaaa!" Zaira barged in!

"Insaano wali tameez khabhi ayegi tumhe?" Haider asked glaring!

"Chore tameez wameez sab phone dede mera 15 din se rakha huwa ha cupboard me akela becharaa!"

"Mein to nhi derahaa!" Haider replied while combing his hairs!

"Kyuu bahee?" Zaira yelled

"Awaz halki kro Zairaa!" Haider scolded

"Bhaiya pleaseee dede na!" Zaira pleaded!

"Tumhara phone to mene isliye lelia haina ke baba ke paise se ayaa tumhara to koi haq nhi haa! Ab to me nhi derahaa!" Haider replied

Zaira's eyes popped out! She slapped her forehead why can't she control her mouth! She was clearly not expecting her grand mother to snitch must be Hamza she thought!

"Apse ye sab bhai ne kha na? Unko adat ha bhaiya jhoot bolne ek number ke jhoote ha woh unki na suna nee please dedee!" Zaira literally begged!

Haider was enjoying it alot!

"Nhi kha tumne aisa kuch?" Haider raised his brows!

"Woh..woh!" Zaira stammered

"Boliye Zaira jii!" Haider taunted!

"Usdin jazbat me nikal gaya thana abhi dede pleaseee!" She tried melting me!

Haider rolled his eyes and opened his drawer took out her phone and Ipad!

"Result acha nhi aaya na Zaira to lambe time ke liye mera hogaa yeh samjhi?" Haider asked firmly!

Zaira quickly snatched it!

"Bad ki bad me dekhngeeee!" She yelled and ran off!

Zaira was busy catching up with the latest gossip on instagram meanwhile Mishi was getting extremely bored!

"Yar rakhoo iseee!" She snatched her phone and dropped it on bed!

"Kia ha tumhee? Itne dino bad milaa ha mujhe yeh!" Zaira glared at her!

"Ira aj first day ha vacations ka yar aur me already itni bore horahi huu! Chaloo kuch karee!" Mishiii suggested!

"Jese ke? Kia kare? Hamre teen piyare bare bhai hame is waqt bahar to jane denge nhi! Chup chap phone use kroo!" Zaira scoffed and picked her phone again!

"Ek ideaa haa!"

"Wo kia?"

"Dinner krne chalte ha bahar!

"Mishi kon janee degaa yar tumhe aj kia hoagya haa? Bhaiya ko neend ki golia deni paregi!" Zaira replied

"Yar Hamza ko lekar jange! Bhaiya ko Haadi manalega me bhai jaan ko manati huu!" She stood up!

"Jau krlo try!" Zaira was absolutely sure she would come back sulking!

Mishi walked towards Harib's room and knocked it! Harib allowed and she entered!

"Arey Mishi aou!" Harib welcomed her with a smile!

"Bhaijaaan!" She looked at him with cute puppy eyes!

"Kia chaiye ha?" Harib raised his eyebrows!

"Permission!" Mishi asked slowly!

"Kis cheez ki permission?" Harib asked!

"Dinner pe jane kii! Bhai jaan please hum charo ko jane dee!" Mishi tried to convince him!

"Mishaal! You know 8 baje ke bad ap bacho ko ghar se nikalne ki permission nhi haa!" Harib stated firmly!

"Please Bhai jaan! Mera bhot dil karaha ha monal (famous restaurant in Islamabad) janee kaa pleasee" Mishi pestered him!

"Theek ha me le chalta huu!" Hairb offered

"Ap hum charo ke sath bore hojange!" She definitely didn't want him to tag along! She wants to have fun and Hairb being there means they will have to behave something none of the younger clan member knows!

"Mishi its either me or you guys are not going! Me is waqt akele nhi jane dunga na hi baba allow krengee!" Harib replied firmly!

"Baba man jayenge ap man jaye naa!" She again tried!

"I said no! Chalna ha to get ready in 20 minutes! Me Haider or Hammad se bhi poochleta huu!" Harib replied!

"Bhaiya sath? Hame fun krne jana thaa!" Mishi muttered slowly!

"Mishaal!" Harib used a little firm tone and she immediately losses her stance!

"Theek ha bhai jaan hum ready hokar ate haa!" She pouted and left!

She came outside and burst into laughter!

Haider just threw Haadi out of his room and shut the door on his face!

Haadi turned around after listening Mishi laughing!

"Kiaa ha apkoo?" Haadi asked embarrassed!

"Kuch nhi bhaiya ne nikal diaa?" Mishi asked laughing again!

"Ye Zaira ki bachi haina isne mujhe kha ap ne bhai jaan se batt krli ha bhaiya man jaynge leken unhone to adhi batt sun kr kaan pakar room se nikal dia jallad ban gaye ha woh ab!" Haadi huffed

"Kia hua mili permission?" Hamza and Zaira came in!

"Han leken wo teeno bhi sath aynge!" Mishi replied!

"Loo bahe agaya maza hamein!" Zaira scoffed

"Arey achi batt haina bhai jaan bill denge mastt!" Hamza was the only happy person!

"Ek to ye gareeb admi!" Haadi scoffed at Hamza!

"Tumhari taraha rihswat lena nhi ati na mujhee!" Hamza rolled his eyes at him!

"Bhaiya piyar se dete ha paise! Me hu hi itna piyara kia kia jasakta ha ab!" Haadi raised his collars!

Zaira have had enough she kicked his back hard!

"Ahhhh!" Haadi fell down!

The three siblings ignored him and left for their room to get readyy!

"Zaira ki bachi rukoo zaraa batata hu tumhee!" Haadi stood up!

Hamza's car was full before the elder brother could come downstairs! Hamza was on driving seat while Haadi was on passenger seat and Zaira and Mishi were at the back!

Hammad Harib and Haider came in together and saw the younger one's already planning troubles!

Harib just gave Haider a look and he got it! He walked towards Hamza's seat and opened the door abruptly!

"Peeche jauu! Haider ordered and dragged him out!

"Bhaiya meri gariii haaa!" Hamza started but shut his mouth almost immediately after seeing Haider's eyes!

Instead of moving back he walked towards Haadi's door and did the same thing!

"Peeche betaa!" He pulled him out!

"Bhaiyaa dekheenaa!" Haadi started!

Haider chooses to ignore them all! Zaira was sitting behind Haider and she was continuously throwing kicks towards his seat but ofcourse she stops a second away from his seat!

Haadi pouted but came to settle in back!

Zaira accidentally kicked Haider's seat a little to hard while he was driving!

"Zaira apne Pau ko kaboo kroo isse phele me utha kar tumhe dikky me dalduu!" Haider warned!

"Sorry bhaiya galti se lag gai!" Zaira replied while rolling her eyes!

After a minute or soo Haadi accidentally touched Zaira's hand and she pushed him hard!

"Ahhh!"
"Ouch yar!"

Mishi and Haadi shouted at the same time! Her push was hard enough to shake both of them!

"Kia hoyaa?" Hamza beat Haider in asking!

"Ye Zaira pagal maar rahi haa!" Haadi elbowed her!

"Ouchh me nhi ye boots marahaa haa!" Zaira pinched him!

"Me boots to tum doraa chipkali khai kii!" Haadi pulled her hairs!

"Ulle ke pathe (son of a fool)!" Zaira yelled and started pulling his hairs too!

"Bas krooo" Haider yelled dangerously!

"Insaanoo se koi wasta ha tum sabka? Pagalo ki tarah gari me larahe hooo!" Haider scolded angrily!

"Bhaiya!" Zaira and Haadi started at same time!

"Chup bas dono ke Muh se awaz na aye wrna Marr khoge dono infact charoo chup rahoge ab pura rastaa!" Haider warned!

"Ye hum fun krne aye the choti mama ne puri mirch ki ek theli khaa kr inko paidaa kiaa haa!" Mishi scoffed whispering

"Theli nhi boriiii!" Zaira replied whispering!

"Zaira aur Mishaal last chance deraha hu chup matlab chup! Finger on your lips now!" Haider scowled!

Both the girls shut up but didn't do what he asked for!

"I said Noww!" Haider scolded again!

Both the girls looked at him with wide eyes but did follow what he said! Both put their fingers on their lips like a 3rd grader!

Haadi started laughing out!

"Haadi you to beta join them!" Haider turned at him when the Car stopped at signal!

After 15 minutes they finally reached to their destination!

The car stopped and Mishi and Zaira both ran to Harib!

"Bhai jaan!" They hugged him!

"Ab kia hogayaa?" Harib asked!

"Kia kara tune ab?" Hammad asked Haider!

"Wohi jo ye deserve krti haa!" Haider replied smirking!

"Bhai jaan dekhe na inhee!" Zaira complained!

"Haider bas kroo! Chalo sab andar!" Harib spoked with authority!

The dinner went smooth atleast for the elder ones! Meanwhile the youngest three were glaring at them especially Haider planning to get back on him!

Hamza was switching side He was talking to both the groups suddenly he behave like a grown up and the very next moment he behaves like a child!

Harib was talking about a new tender and Hammad and Haider were fully engrossed!

Zaira's eyes suddenly sparked with mischief! She looked at Haadi who was hugging Haider from his side and Haider too kept him in under his shoulder protectively!

Zaira was sitting right next to Haadi! She opened her chilled can of pepsi and threw it on Haadi's jeans! The liquid scattered pretty quickly turning Haider's black pants wet too!

"Ahhh!" Both Haider and Haadi stood up because of the cold impact!

"I am soo sorryy!" Zaira stood up too and apologised quickly!

Haider quickly took some paper tissues and tried drying his pants Haadi too followed his lead!

"Jaan kar kia haina tumnee yeh?" Haider asked glaring!

Zaira made the most innocent face anyone could!

"Bhaiya me kyu jan kr karungi wo bhi ap pe?" She asked with innocent face!

Haider was about to say something when Harib intervened!

"Haider bs kroo kyu karegi wo jan kr! Jau dono sahi se clean krke aou!" Harib ordered and both of them left!

Zaira wiggled her brows and sat with a satisfactory grin!

"Aye bare dono ke donoo! Abhi to shurwat ha Haider Ahmedaani and Haadi Ahmedaani!" She laughed and smirked internally!

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Hi guyss! Hope you liked the chapter!

According to me it was the shittiest chapter I have ever written but still posted because I am way to tired!

Only updated because alot of you were waiting! Hope you guys like itt!

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..Nia!

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