Dastaan-e-Ahmedaani

By niabhatti

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A beautiful tale of Ahmedani family! A siblings saga with lots of family drama and love served as a side dish... More

Prologue
Characters
Characters Aesthetics
Note
1| Chaand raat
Character Aesthetic 2
2| Eid
3| scary
4| Internship
5| scared
Couple Aesthetics
6| Day 1
7| Coffee
8| Over speeding
9|Forgivness
Note
10|Grounded
12|Flashback
13| Exams
14| Dinner
15|Fight
16| warnings
17|Pizza
18| Injured
Characters 2
19|Birth story
20| Never again
Imp Note
21| Gian
22| Worried
Note
23| sick
24|oh no
25| guitar
26| broken
27|Tution
28| Injured
Note
29|Dr shah Alam
30| chaos
31| Mini Haider
32| wandering
32! Furious
33|Regret
34| great fall
35| crazy clan
36| birthday
37|Driving
38| Zaayan Kamal khan
39|sneak out
40|caught
41|punishment
42|Trouble Trouble
Note
43|screwed
44|pain
45| lesson
46| caller
47| Best friend
Imp Announcement
48|Fire
49|fury
50|punch
51|cake
52| night before
53| not right
54|Dictator
55|blunder
56|fail
57| consequences
58| unexpected
New story
59| love is in air
60| road trip
61|Crash
62| Unfriendly Friend
63| Harsh
64|Too much
65|what?
66|sneakily
67| heart slipping
Note
68|Heroes
69|Back to school
70|Shock
71|Brat
72|Number one
73| spell
74|Done
75|Better
76|Dinner
77|Family
78|new boys
New characters
79|Race
80|Enraged
81|misery
82|Anger
83|First time
84|Next morning
85|wedding bells?
86|you and I
87|Big Family
88|Baat paaki
89|Mean
90|suspend
91|terminated
92|regret
93|field
94| jealousy

11|Metro

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Next morning both Hammad and Hamza were standing on metro station waiting for their bus at 7:30 Am!

Hamza was standing with a safety distance from Hammad as his neck was paining because of the whacks he have gotten until now! Hammad face was looking absolutely furious! May god save the sub ordinates under him today!

The bus arrived and Hamza gently approached him!
"Bhai chale?" He asked hesitantly

Hammad glared at him for the 74th time today and he took a step back! Hammad chooses to not grace him and he went inside!

The office was on 13 minutes drive from their home but the metro station was 25 minutes away and the duration to reach office from metro was 20 minutes that is why they left at 7:00 am and for that Hammad have to wake up at 5:30! He was sleepy he was grumpy and he was furious!

Both of them were sitting on their seats! When Hamza decided to talk!

"Bhai?

Hammad only looked at him!

"Bhai mujhse kyu gussa ha mene kia kia ha?"

"Kia kia ha? Tumhari wajah se mujhe is bus me ana parhaa ha!" Hammad whisper yelled!

"Kia burai ha bus me? Takubar (proud) nhi krna chaiye baba bolte ha galt batt hoti ha!"

"Chote baba aur cheeze bhi bolte ha wo khabi suni ha?" Hammad scoffed at him!

"Aur baat takubar ki nhi ha bs mujhe ye bus achi nhi lagtii!" Hammad added!

"Kyu?

"Meri marzi Hamza chup hojana ab wrna me hashar bura krdunga tumhara!" Hammad warned in a dangerously low voice!

Hamza gulped and shut his mouth entire ride!

Both reached the office and Hammad walked into a cafe right in front of office so that nobody can see him! He was already embarrassed enough!

Hamza reached his floor and the floor was quiet as staff comes around 9:00 and it was only 8:00 am! He decided to take a nap on his desk!

"Uthoooo!" Rafiq sahab's loud voice boomed!

"Tum yahn akr sogaye? Ghar nhi tumhare pass? Ye koi jagah sone uthne ki?" Hamza was still in haze!

"Bhaiya please 5 minutes" His mind was too tired to recognise the difference between Haider and Rafiq sahab and Haider is the only person who wakes him by yelling at him so he assumed its Haider only!

It was still 10 minutes to 9:00 so the staff was not here but Haider entered exactly at the moment Hamza called Rafiq sahab bhaiya!

Haider wanted to laugh his younger was way to funny! Three days of him working and everybody had more fun and than their entire time of working in this office!

Rafiq sahab was not allowed to touch him he was looking was some water when he noticed Haider standing behind them!

Haider immediately controlled his face and maintained his stern boss face!

"I am so sorry sir ye larka jab se aya kuch na kuch karaha ha me uth raha to kheraha ha bhaiya sone dee!" Rafiq sahab quickly snitched!

"Ap rehnde dijiye ap jakr COO ke assistant se files pick krle aj Ali ka off ha to ye mujhe assist karega!" He pointed towards sleeping Hamza!

"Sir me kisi aur se khedeta hu apko assist krne ke liye ye larka koi kam nhi janta ap please iski internship cancel krde!" Rafiq sahab glared at poor boy sleeping peacefully!

"Me dekhlunga ap apna kam kre!" Haider glared but maintained a polite tone!

Rafiq sahab entered inside the lift and Haider turned towards Hamza!

He wanted to yell but was he reminded himself that they are in office! He walked towards him and whacked his back Hard!

"Ahh" Hamza stood up startled! He looked around and realised his surroundings! He stood up straight!

"Sorry bhaiya" He murmured while rubbing his eyes!

Haider looked around and found no one he hold Hamza's ear in a tight grip and all of Hamza's sleep vanished in seconds!

"Ahh bhaiyaa choree!" He yelled!

"Apna phone or laptop uthou forran" Haider told him still holding his ear in a tight grip!

Hamza quickly followed his orders and Haider dragged him towards his cabin!

"Kia ha apkooo?" Hamza pretty much yelled after Haider freed him!

"Sone bhejte ha hum tumhe subha? Sone ka hi hota to ghar pe sojate pagal khai ke" Haider scolded!

"Insaan hu me lag gai ankh do din se bularahe jaldi kam bhi to dein! Kal bhi ek ghanta candy crush kheli ha mene aj sogyaa!" Hamza scoffed!

Harib strictly ordered Haider not to give Hamza any kind of extra work they were just trying to get into his head but Hamza being Hamza have problems with that too!

"Band kro apna Muh! Ali 2 hafto ki paternity leave pe hain tab tk tum mujhe assist kroge or Ali ka cabin nhi milega tumhe pura din yahi mere cabin me se kamm kroge samjhe?" Haider quickly diverted his attention!

"Apne kia khaya tha nashte me jo aise bheki bheki batein karahe hain? Me apka PA? me phanke se na latak nhi jaou?" Hamza immediately denied the position!

"You are in no position to say No to me you are an intern behave like one!" Haider sternly ordered!

"Mein kyu? Apke pass itne ache ache log ha please na bhaiya!" Hamza whined

"Because dadu ne mujhe kha unke stupid pote ko kam sikhou! Teen din dekhlia tumhe kam ka k bhi nhi seekha tumne ab you will work directly under me! Chup chap samne wali choti desk pe betho!" Haider ordered strictly!

Hamza obeyed because he knows arguing will only get him in more trouble!

Haider gave few files to Hamza for rechecking! Around 3 pm Hamza ordered him to go collect some important documents from Hammad!

"Jau COO ke office aur bolo bhaiya ne jo mangya ha wo dee!" Haider told him!

"Kon ha Coo?" Hamza asked

"Tumhe nhi pata?" Haider asked

"Nhi tab hi to poochraha hu mujhe nhi pata kon Ceo ha kon kia ha bataye na please" Hamza asked

"Hammad COO or mein CFO bhaijaan CEO or bare baba chairman baba vice chairman or chachu MD! Khush ya or kuch jana ha?" Haider asked!

"Han bs ek batt ye big boss kisko bolte ha?"

"Tumhee! Ab bakwass band kroo or jau!" Haider scolded!

"Sorry bhool gaya kiske pass jana ha bhai jaan pass?"

"Hammad pass jau bhae 12th floor pe!" Haider told him clearly done by him!

"Nhii baheeee Me nhi jaunga!" Hamza stood up!

"Pagal hogaye ho? Har cheez ka Mana krne ka right dia kisne tumhe?" Haider scolded

"Bhaiya please bhai pass nhi aj Nhi please"

"Kyu Hammad ne kia krdia ab?"

"Subha se gussa mein ha marahe ha daant rahe haa!" Hamza cried

"Hammad? Pagal hogaye ha wo kyu marne laga?" Haider replied!

"Bhaiya subha bus me ana para unko meri wajah se kal bhi khud hi aye the ke me lift dedeta hu bhai jaan ne pakarlia or bola aj wo mere sath metro me aynge bs isliye bhot gussa hogaye ha bhai!" Hamza explained his sorrows

"Tum dono bhi pagal ho mujhe khedete me leata krlete kuch bhaijaan se chup kr aur fikr nhi kro ab wo sahi hoga subha bs kuch purani buri yaddon ki wajah se pareshan hogya hoga!" Haider laughed!

"Konsi yadddein? Kia baat krahe ha?" Hamza asked interested!

"Pheli dafa metro kii!" Haider again chuckled!

"Mujhe bhi bataye!"

"Over nhi ho zara bhi kamm kro apna forran" Haider glared!

"Bhaiya please please! Mujhe nhi pata pleasee!" Hamza started pleading!

Haider went back into memories!

Flashback!

Hammad and Haider both were 14 years old and Harib was 18! The family went to a driver's son's wedding which was happening in a nearby village 4hr away from the city!

They decided to come back until night! The three young boys weren't able to go as they have their exam next day so the elder one left Harib in charge and left for almost 12 hours!

Hammad football buddy had a birthday party he tried everything to convince his parents but since he had exams they denied! Them not being home came as a opportunity for Hammad!

"Aidu chalna pleaseee!" He tried convincing Haider for the umpteenth time!

"Kitna dafa kha ha aidu aidu nhi bola kr? Or mana karana bare baba ne kese jaeng bhaijaan ke Alevels ke exams wo room me prhahe ha kabse wo nhi lejangee!" Haider denied yet again!

"Bhai jaan ko nhi pata chalega usdin jese akshay kumar film me peeche gate se gaya tha wese chalenge bhaijaan room se niklnge bhi nhi pleasee!"

"Jaynge kese driver to ha nhi!!"

"Yar taxi se chalnge chal naa!"

"Tu pagal hogaya ha? Bare baba tangein tordengee!"

"Kon bataega unhe? Wo to raat me aynge hamre sone ke bad!"

After alot of convincing the two fourteen year old boys left their home! Haider only agreed because they have an art exam tomorrow!

Around 6 in the evening when Harib came out of his room and went to check on the boys he got scared not to find them!

He searched entire house the worry was increasing each passing second! Until he called one of their friend who told him about the possibility of them being at a friends house!

Harib quickly drove towards the house! The boys got late to the party because their taxi driver dropped them in mid way and they had to take a metro!

Both Hammad and Haider were having fun until Hammad's eyes caught a sight of Harib standing at the door glaring at them!

Harib quickly marched towards them! He was furious he never felt that kind of anger before he wanted nothing more to beat all kind of braveness in them!

That day he was determined to teach them a lesson they will never forget!

He grabbed both of them by their uper arms and dragged them towards the car without even thinking about anybody looking!

Haider was worried as he was not the person to get into trouble often and this was his first big crime!

Hammad on the otherhand was shivering with fear he saw the look in his brother's eyes he knew he was done and done for good!

Very quickly they reached home and Harib very sternly ordered them!

"Go to Library right NOW" Harib yelled!

Both the boys scarily walked downstairs unaware of the storm incoming!!
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